IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 16

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Since parents never had the possibility to attend higher education and do not want their children to worry about finances, they pressure them into succeeding. This is a negative development because they project their failed dreams on their children and therefore put a strain on the children’s mental health.

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Some believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish

As we know, developing countries are producing increasing numbers of working professionals in many areas and among them, doctors and engineers are considered some of the most valuable assets to the country. Some people have views that these workers should remain and contribute their work in the country where they were trained, while others argue that the collectives should be given the freedom to choose to work in different parts of the world. In my opinion, these people have the rights to decide where they want to work.

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT HEALTHCARE SHOULD BE FREE FOR EVERYONE, WHILE OTHER THINK THAT PEOPLE SHOULD PAY FOR THEIR MEDICAL COST THEMSELVES. DISCUSS BOTH VIEW AND GIVE YOUR OPINION

The World Health organization ranks the healthcare system in Spain among the top ten in the world. It is universal and free and offers comprehensive services that cover a wide range of interventions, from routine check-ups to specialised attention. However, the limited budget results in huge waiting times and crowded clinics. Therefore, it is crucial to increase the resource to guarantee this essential area.

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Most societies has its homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree?make an essay more with at least 260 words make this essay to partial agree

Nearly all societies have homeless individuals. Wihle some believe that providing them with cash is the most effective way to assist, I partially agree with that approach, as there are plenty of alternatives such as providing with long-term labour skills and improving self- worth, well-being , that can be crucial for those who are struggling with homelessness Whilst financial assistance can provide immediate relief, it must be combined with other support systems to avoid prolonged issues.

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online education is as effective as traditional classroom learning. do you agree or disagree?

Whether or not learning by using online or traditional education is a widely debated point. This writer agrees that online education provides the convenience and personal lessons despite causing distractions.

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Nowadays, young people communicate with friends and family mostly through social networking sites, rather than other ways of communication like talking on the phone or face to face. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is true that in the present era instead of meeting personally or talking on the phone, the younger generation likes to communicate through the social networking sites. In my opinion, this development has some positive aspects for the society.

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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The university provides a wider range of perspectives for both students and graduates for their future careers. There are some debates over whether the university's main aim is to support its students to get a better job after graduation, while others think that there are many more crucial positive views in terms of both individual characteristics and for society.

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‏Some people think that interview is not reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Opinions are divided on whether interviews are a valid method to shortlist candidates for employment by large companies. This essay strongly opposes with the view of interview being an unreliable method of choosing employees since this approach not only evaluates how suitable they are to workforce environment but also ensure finding potiential ones.

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Some people think that children should learn how to cook at school. Others believe that cooking is a waste of school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that cooking should be taught in schools because it is a useful skill for children. Others think that it is not necessary and takes time from more important subjects. This essay will look at both sides and give my opinion.

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In the past people liked to store knowledge in books. However, in the present, we prefer to store knowledge on the Internet. Do you think the advantages outweight the disantages?

There has been a notable change in the storage of data as compared to the past. Previously, people were using books, but now with the development of technology, they prefer the Internet. There are various arguments on its advantages and disadvantages. However, I believe that, benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. What is good and bad advantage

Taking a gap year after high school is an increasingly popular tradition in many countries. It allows students to take a break from academic life before attempting university studies. During this time, they may choose to travel, volunteer, or work in different environments, society, and culture. While this idea might seem unconventional to some, it has gained wide support for the unique benefits we can approach.

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Interviews form the basic selection criteria for most large companies. However, some poeple think that interviews is not a reliable mthod of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate about whether interviews are a valid method to recruit interviewees for employment by large companies. The writer of this essay disagrees with the aforementioned statement due to the interviewers' personal judgement and overall competence.

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Some people think that ambition is essential for success. To what extend do you agree?

There are different factors that affect to become successful, and some individuals think ambition is one of the main elements. This essay agrees with this statement because passion is the feeling that drives humans' actions in spite of the physical challenges along the way towards a set goal. In addition, the sense of willingness is a fuel on this path, which feeds the brain like a food.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the tomorrow eras, all transportation such as cars, buses and trucks will not be driven by humans, and there will be only passengers on these vehicles. The driverless transportation has more advantageous or disadvantageous, which is a crucial topic.

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With the increased global demand for oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

These days, public debate has been going on over whether people should stick to oil and gas usage or should try to find different resources to use for their needs. The demand for gas and oil is growing and it looks that we will need it more and more, however, it could cost more damage than benefit. That is why there are some discussions about undiscovered areas. I tend to believe that if there is a possibility to find more renewable resources then it should be found.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few people believe that youngsters need to show more preference towards volunteer jobs during extra hours. It can be helpful for the young people and the society. I partially agree with the given statement which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think if students are afraid of teacher it is better. Others say that having a friendly relationship is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

People have different opinions about the best model of education: while some believe teachers should be strict, others reckon that only trusting relationships can be effective. In fact, although the concept of a tight discipline in a school historically widely occurs, positive education can be more valid. This essay will discuss why teaching based on fear is not as effective as commonly believed.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an aging population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an aging population outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, people can live for more years compared to their ancestors. A group of people consider aging as a big problem for societies, while others believe it could benefit the communities in some cases. In this essay, the demerits in terms of the cost and productivity, and merits in terms of having a happier family and a safer society will be explored.

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Some people believe that online education is better than traditional classroom learning. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The topic of whether online education is more effective than the conventional one is a ongoing debate. This essay totally agrees with this statement since learning online not only offers flexibility but also equality to students.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that individuals should save money from the young age to build a sustainable future. Meanwhile, others claim that it is better to spend it on things which can bring enjoyment of life and create unforgettable memories. Personally, I partially agree with this idea and think that it is should be balance between saving and spending.

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