IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 16

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that both physical and mental appearance are crucial for long-term journey success. While it is a commonly held belief that the presence of physical health is essential in all fields to achieve success. There is also an argument that mental stability is vital to managing your psychological condition. This essay will analyse this critical topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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some people say that governments should spend money on building theatres and sport station. Instead, they should spend money on medical care and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some argue that authorities ought to invest money in creating theatres and sports facilities, while others think that money should be allocated to medical care and education. This essay agrees with the latter idea. Both perspectives will be examined in this text.

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many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. to what extent do you agree or disagree

It is argued that university courses can guarantee an equal job position. This essay provides reasons against this argument, which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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In modern times, children are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

Nowadays, children spend more time with their friends than with their families. This change has occurred because children do not want to feel left out amongst their peers , and parents should not force children to stay home because they will resent their parents for it.

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With the rise of artificial intelligence, some believe creative fields like writing and music composition will become largely automated. To what extent do you think that AI's increasing role in creative endeavors will enhance or diminish human artistic expression?

In the contemporary world, it is believed that in the future in many creative fields, such as art, music, and literature, artificial intelligence will be used for composition and idea generation. I believe that this trend will not affect the expressions and emotions of the artists.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage if money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Describe both these views and give your own openion.

Nowadays, job hopping has become common among youngsters. A group of people believes that it is better to be in the same job despite low pay or stress. While others think that job hopping is fine to get better pay and satisfactory work. I am in support of the latter view. Reasons behind both the views and my opinion are discussed further in this essay.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

It is often said that living in a country where a foreign language is used on a daily basis, can led to practical and social problems. This essay completely disagrees with this opinion, as there are many resources available to learn languages nowadays, and also technological advancements are lessening the barriers of language exchange.

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Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The general public has a multitude of views about the funding of creative artists. While some people think that the government should not financially support artists as they do not directly contribute to society, I believe that there are strong and significant reasons why funding of art projects should come from both the government and the artists themselves.

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Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

To begin with, some people think developing the technology for space exploration is a waste of time and money. And suggest that there are more efficient ways to spend this money. In this essay, I'll elaborate and explain both points and give my opinion at the end.

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Some people believe that university education should be free for everyone, while others think students should pay for their own education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that education is the cornerstone of development. While some individuals believe that students should pay for their own education, others argue that schools and universities should be free for everyone. However, from my perspective, students should contribute to the cost of their education.

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“The use of mobile phones and computers for communication has affected our reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

Nowadays, with the widespread usage of digital devices such as smartphones and computers, people's reading and writing have been affected to a great extent. I strongly support this fact but they can influence our skill both in a beneficial or detrimental way.

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In many countries, students are encouraged to choose a university major based on future job prospects rather than their personal interests. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples.

Students are encouraged to select a field of study, by considering career prospects instead of personal interests. This essay acknowledges that it is a positive development. The arguments supporting the view that this tendency is a positive development will be presented in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some say that students should not be exposed to teachers' opinions on social and political issues in the classroom. Others, however, think that it is helpful for students to hear various perspectives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that teachers have a big influence on their students, and some students believe everything. While it is commonly held belief that students should distinguish between right and wrong, there is also an argument that it is better for teachers to focus only on their subject. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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In many western countries, an increasing number of couples are choosing to have no children.What are the advantages and disadvantages to the couples who decide to have no children.

The world is very different today. This has impacted on society, especially on the family unit. Many couples today choose not to have children. This is happening in many Western countries. This essay will examine what are the advantages and disadvantages of couples not having children.

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It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?

It is claimed that changes are more crucial to people than tending to avoid them and holding everything the same. Although there are some drawbacks, I believe that the benefits outweigh them.

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“Many people think that studying abroad is better than studying in their own country. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?”

There is no denying the fact that learning abroad is worth considering, and plays a vital role in enhancing scholars' traits. While it is a commonly held belief that it has many drawbacks, and it fails to take effect in some nations. There is also an argument that it can bring greater success in different fields. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of this trend.

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Nowadays, more people communicate through social networking sites rather than face-to-face. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In recent years, communication media has evolved significantly. Many people prefer to interact through social media over face-to-face dialogue. While this change has improved global networking and trade, it also comes with several drawbacks, such as emotional detachment. This essay outlines both the advantages and disadvantages of social networking sites as a reliable means of communication.

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Many people think that the internet has created big problems for both society and the individual. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The internet has created massive changes in society. Many people think that the internet is a negative influence on both society and the individual. I partially agree with this statement. This essay will provide information to support my opinion.

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Childhood obesity has become a serious problem in recent years. What are the primary causes of this? What measures should be taken to reduce childhood obesity?

In recent decades, the number of overweight children in Western countries has been steadily increasing, and this has become a major public concern. In this essay, I will discuss the main causes of this trend and describe its possible effects.

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Some people think learning history in school is important. Others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The ongoing debate surrounding school subjects has given rise to two distinct perspectives. One side argues that studying history is better, while the other side insists that subjects directly linked to life offer a more viable solution. This essay will carefully analyse both positions before presenting a well-reasoned personal opinion.

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