IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 16

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent times, saving money has become crucial for everyone, including teenagers, for a bright future. I largely agree with this notion because if people save money for the future, they can fulfil their dreams and make their families happy.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety.

Traffic related accidents have risen dramatically during recent decades. Some individuals believe that more strict punishments should be considered for driving crimes, in order to fix these issues. This is while other groups of people, with whom I side, claim that other methods such as education are the key.

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IELTS Writing Tsk 2 In poor families, teenagers may have to work part-time as well as study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this for these teenagers. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In recent years , there has been a tremendous increase in the number of individuals questioning the merits and demerits of teenagers from poor families having to work part-time as well as obtain an education.On one hand , the benefit of teenagers working is that they can help support their families by sharing the financial stress of paying for school.However , a significant drawback is that by spending their time working students lose valuable time from their studies.

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many elderly people are no long looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Old pensioners no longer taken care of by their family members, instead, they are sent to geriatric care homes. While nursing homes are more advanced in taking care of an elderly individual, there are certain negative points of this action. Both sides will be discussed in this essay.

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Experts say older people were happier and healthier in past because they did exercise and spent more time with their family and friends , whereas many now suffer from lonliness and health problems . What are the causes of this and reasons

There is no doubt that mental and physical issues are increasing day by day. Professionals believe that people in old age had a prosperous life because of their healthy lifestyle, while today's generation is facing severe health issues and suffering from stressful lives. The root cause behind this phenomenon is excessive use of the mobile phone, and this issue can be mitigated by arranging diverse counselling sessions by institutes.

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One of the consequence of improved medical care is that people are living longer life and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to cutting edge technology and quality medical care individuals are living longer and their life expectancy is gradually increasing. Moreover, people are enjoying their life without diseases with good healthcare. In contrast, the major outcome of better medical service leads to overpopulation and environmental degradation. In my opinion the benefits of improved medical care outweighs the downsides.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather the roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

In the modern era, vehicles play a vitol role in the world in economic growth, and in social connectivity. That is, to use of transportation is very relevant today. Therefore, the debate causes over whether governments should allocate more funds to railways or roads. Although, both modes of transport have various advantages, in my opinion, the construction of railway lines should be preferred for several main reasons, in particular environmental cleanliness, long-time sustainability, and reduction of traffic density.

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Today, more and more full-time university students focus on other activities rather than spend a lot of time studying. Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, most learners started to focus on their extra tasks rather than learning their main subjects at university. So, the community argue that is necessary for learners to spend their time on new activities. In my point of view, both of them should be involved in student life.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

The problem of whether or not government institutions should charge higher fees on junk food has sparked a heated debate. While some argue that it is a cheap source of calories, I contend that implementation of such measures would positively affect people’s health.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The increasing number of sophisticated people who opt to immigrate abroad has become a pressing issue in contemporary society. Although some argue that they should stay and work in their home country, others believe that it is their personal right to immigrate to other countries. In this essay, we will discuss both points of view and provide a logical conclusion.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some family think that younger students should participate in the volunteering in the society in their leisure era. This can help teenagers also the community.This essay will discuss both the point of view that why some people will agree with this and also the reason behind disagreeing. This argues why it is helpful for teenagers to do unpaid community work.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

Work takes up a predominant part of adult life, making job satisfaction a critical factor of personal well-being. Plenty of dimensions contribute to job satisfaction, and yet, it is sometimes a impractical requirement to bargain.

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When choosing a job, while some people think that the salary is the most important thing to be taken into consideration, others have a diverse view. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an opinion that people should choose their jobs based on salaries, and another believes that people should consider their happiness when they take the jobs, which is very contrary to the first statement. This essay will explain both opinions, and in the end, I will present my view on this issue.

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In many countries, recently young single people have been living far from their parents, from the time they began studies or work and until they married. Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages to this trend?

Nowadays, many young people leave their parents' house when starting to study at university or getting a job. I believe there are significant benefits for living alone when you become an adult with only one drawback.

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In some countries, not only are young people richer but also safe and healthier than ever before, yet they are less happy. What are the reasons for this? And what can be done to help them?

In many developed countries, young people enjoy better financial stability, better healthcare, and improved safety. Despite this, they are experiencing low lever of happiness. This trend can be attributed to several factors, and solutions must be implemented to address it.

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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

These days, researchers are discussing that some people love to try new things while others prefer to keep doing things they are familiarwith. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the topic and I will explain my views.

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Apologizing for accidentally breaking your friend's belonging.

I am writing this letter to apologize for accidentally breaking your mobile contact. I went to Marina's birthday party three days ago. Since I was in a hurry, I accidentally left my phone at home. That's why I borrowed your phone for two hours. I took your phone to take a selfie. Suddenly, I dropped your iPhone while I was taking a photo at the birthday photo backdrop and your phone's screen and corners cracked. I am really sorry for breaking your phone.

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The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future.

In the contemporary world, the question of what can be the possible causes and solutions of a quick change in the world of work has sparked considerable heated debates and discussions in different communities. In the following paragraph, I will comprehensively shed light on the root causes of this trend, such as the development of technology, fast-paced environment and strong purpose of becoming wealth, and make suggestions to employees in order to survive in cut-throat competitive workplace, such as development of certain skills.

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Nowadays, more and more people choose to go to university. One of the main reasons for this is to secure better job opportunities.

Nowadays, more and more people choose to go to university. One of the main reasons for this is to secure better job opportunities. However, some argue that university education offers much broader benefits, not only for individuals but also for society.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign laguage at the primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage?

Some professionals argued that learning a second language at the elementary school has advantages for children rather than secondary school. Although this action has some drawbacks like limited practise and extra academic pressure, it also has cognitive benefits and several future opputunities.

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