IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 16

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution.

These days a growing number of children are becoming obese, especially in western world. Which has sparked a debate among people that what are the possible causes and effects of this trend. Therefore, this essay will try to delve into reasons, possible outcomes and will offer a few solutions as well.

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One of the consequence of improved medical care is that people are living longer life and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There has been an ongoing debate abouth whether revolutinized health care served individuals which increase life expectancy. Some argue that it has a positive effect, becuase it will lead to exchange of experince between generations in differnet aspects of life, and obuviously help younger genration learn wisely from elderly, while others believe that, it put more strain on pension sector, for this reason new regulatoins has been legislated, to put down some heavy pressure on these department. While I agree that the advantges of live longer are outwighted the disadvantages. I believe other factors, such as an experince, and wise, also play a significant role for my agreement.

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People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past, what do you think that is the reason for this? What are tha consequences for the people and people around them?

Recently, if we compare to now to past, majority not sleep too much. I think it has some logical reasons. For example, work terms and stress. Also these are impacting something in our lifes. İnitally, less energy and health problems.

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Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion?

In recent years, climate change is a big interest in topic that people like debating. critics insist that traditional energy such as oill, gas and coal play a crucial role in economic growth. However, I personally completely disagree with this assertion since the alternative energy is the best way to solve problems.

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Some people think adults should learn practical skills by themselves, while others believe that learning from a teacher in a classroom is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The question of whether adults’ acquiring knowledge by themselves or by teachers has sparked widespread debate. On one hand, some argue that learning by teachers is better, asserting that makes them gain more proficiency in subjects. On the other hand, critics contend content that enlightening by yourself is more effective, highlighting development of investigation ability. This essay will delve into both perspectives and provide a reasoned analysis, cultivating my own approach.

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Many people think that increasing business and cultural contacts between countries is a positive development. However, others believe that these are leading to the loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The effect of the soaring trade and cultural relations between different countries has sparked widespread debate. On one hand, some believe that increasing the size of the business and cultural exchange positively contributes by accelerating the development of the country. On the other hand, critics contend that it causes cultural homogenization. This essay will delve into both perspectives and provide analysis cultivating my own approach.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that saving environment is crucial to maintain sustainability. While it is a commonly held belief that government and institutions are responsible on having a green planet, there is also an argument that opposes it.

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Some people believe that teenagers should focus on all school subjects while others think that they should concentrate on the subjects where they do the best or find the most interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no dennying the fact that education is the pillar of developed societies. While it is a commonly held belief that students must give a full attention to all school subjects, there is also an argument that opposes it. In this esssay I will discuss both views and express my own opinion.

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in many countries nowadays consumers can go to supermarket ad buy foof produced all over the world is this positive or negative

There is no denying the fact that supermarket eases the way for customers to get a variety types of food. While it is a commonly held belief that supermarket is the place that offers you your needs and save your efforts, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that development in commercial sector is beneficial for communities as a whole.

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Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice

In today’s society, everyone have freedom to do work according to their wills . However, there are still some people whose thinking are old fashion and who think that, women should be limited to taking care of the house and the children. I completely oppose this belief. I will elaborate on it and give my opinions in further paragraphs.

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Nowadays there is a trend that media focuses on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think that it is harmful to individual and societies. To what extent do you agree ?

Nowadays, it is a common trend that news agencies most of the times focus on negative events rather than focusing on positive happenings in the society, which ultimately is not fruitful for the masses and country. In my viewpoint, I completely agree with this notion that media houses should not broadcast too many negative reports and reasons to support my stance are elaborated in the following paragraphs.

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It is difficult for many people to create a balance between their professional and their personal life. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Many individuals find it hard to differentiate their lives personally & professionally in the same amount. Since human is an emotional well-being, it is only obvious that sometimes we act according to our feelings & ambitions. Furthermore, people might have responsibilities that they can not just abandon. In my opinion, this problem could be prevented with the policies that companies have.

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Some people believe that individuals should be allowed to own a gun as a means to protect themselves and their families. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is thought that individuals should possess firearms to ensure safety for their families and themselves. This essay completely disagrees with this statement because possession of weapons increase risks and accidents in communities along with difficulty in regulating them.

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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Peopla have different kinds of way on how they can learn effectively. In my own opinion, I strongly agree that studying with friends in a classroom is better than studying online at home.

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Full-time university students spend a lot of time studying. Some say they should do other activities too. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, it is believed by some folks that pupils of educational institute utilize most of their time in reading; few of them say that thay should have to do other activities such as recreational activities. If questioned, I bolster with this notion to a major extent. My justification is explained further.

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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

I strongly agree that studying with friends in a classrom is better than studying online at home.

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A noticeable lack of students opting for science subjects at universities is observed in various countries. What are the reasons and what are the effects on society?

In recent years, learners have been denied to choice of science subjects rather than other majors in many countries. It is due to the high level of burden of studies and increment in the cost of Universities. This essay will elicit both the reasons and effects on society in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only. others however feel cell phone should be used mostly for work. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Using portable phones have kept some people believe it is better for them to utilize it for personal use, while others think that people should use it mostly for work. However in my opinion the innovation of smartphones facilitated everything to the humans whether the usage should be personally or for work, and in this essay I will show both views with my opinion.

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Some argue that public health services should focus on treating the sick, while others think they should focus more on preventive measures. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There are some debats around the comunity medicine people who is concerned only about treating the diseases. On the other hand, some seeing that focusing on prevention of the illnesses is most important. In this essay I will talk about both views in details.

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Some people say that the main enviromental problems of our is loss of particular species of plants and animals .Others say that their are more important environmental problems.discuss both views and give your oinion

Environment problems are loss of particular species of plants and animals,on the other hand there are more environmental problems.These problems need to be fixed at any causes because, it may cause big damage to the earth.

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