IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 21

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, government should focus on reducing environment pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environmental pollution and housing problems are undenieably huge contributors to the public health issues. I wholly agree with the ideas the government should focus on addressing those factors as part of their efforts to prevent illness and disease. However, I also believe that other holistic approach, education and healthacare access, plays vital role as well.

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In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend a large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities others believe that money should be spent on improving existing public transport

Most people around the world think is essential to use the money to build high-speed Railways to have an efficient way between cities .However, others believe having high-level transport is more important, than improving more lines, because of safety .

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The planets population is reaching unsustainable levels and people are facing shortage of respurces like water and food. To what consequences may over population lead? In your opinion what measures can be taken to fight over population

The earth’s rapid population growth is alarmingly reached into unreasonable levels and may results in inadequate essential resources for lives such as water and food. This essay will discuss on the consequences of uncontrolled population’s growth and initiatives to combat this serious phenomenon.

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Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school .other , however , say that cooperation and team working skills are more important .discuss both side of this argument and give your own opinion.

School playing a significant role to build student, stodent apply different methods of teaching, in someeducational system some skills excel others, so that is why people believe that student must be focus and be competitive. However, on the other hand, others think that work colaboration skills are more crucial. This essay will examine some key points of two different views and outline my view.

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In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote

There is no doubt that teenager are neglecting the most crucial things in community such as votes to their right . In this essay I will discuss some causes associated with juveniles and suggest some solution .

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The best way to make roads safer is to make vehicle drivers take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era, every individual have their own private vehicle to ease their daily routine. Driving test is required to get eligibility for license.To improve driving skills among people, driving test should be taken annually.I partially agree with the above statement, which will be discuss in the subsequent paragraphs.

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In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

In some countries, it is ever-increasingly common for individuals to maintain a vegetarian diet. While because of maitaining a vegerarian diet, people suffer from nutritional deficiency, the benefits of consuming a vegetarian diet outweigh the drawbacks because it allows people to stay away from diseases.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Many people experiences the alternative medicines in the present. They beleives that it could help them to get over health problem in typical ways, while other individuals believe in the conventional healthcare system. In my opinion, choiced medicines are the negative approach because many of them consist inappropriate substance, which can harm people health in some ways.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Maintaining a healthy lifestyle is important for preventing chronic diseases and long-term illness. However, I agree that it is very concerning that somehow in the future, the quality of people’s wellbeing will probably decrease due to today’s unhealthy food culture and rising of sedentary lifestyles.

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C.Children who are brought in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents.

It is believed that children who are born in poor families need to prepare themselves for incoming adult life compared to those who are from financially equipped families. I believe that no matter how family’s condition is, does not pre-determined how hard they are going to face once they become adults.

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Fewer students are studying science at school and university, favouring more computer-based subjects instead. Is this a positive or negative development? What are the reasons for this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In the modern world, a lesser number of pupils are learning science in academic fraternity, while, a huge amount of students are choosing course, which is connected to computer. These have both optimistic and pessimistic impact. Both the sides will be elaborated further. I believe that there are ample positive aspects.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statment?

These days some individuals when living in a nation where you should speak a non-native language can lead to dangerous social issues and might also practice problems. I totally agree with this statement and I will mention the reasons for this phenomenon.

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Some believe that the government should support artists like musicians, painters, and poets, while others argue that this is a misuse of funds. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often said that government should promote the artistic people like musicians, painters, and poets because they play a huge role in youngsters's life. However, There are some individuals that are completely against this idea. I will discuss the debate and give a concluding view on this topic.

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The world is heavily dependent on oil for energy, which is unsustainable due to global warming. What future resource do you think will take oil's place? Why do you think this ?

Nowadays,oil consider as the main source of energy in the world however, looking for alternatives is significantly important due to the global warming.Although there are a huge efforts to find aulternatives to the oil such as , wind and water energy , and solar pannels , I think oil will remains as the main source of energy if the governments do not invest in ulternatives energy sectors.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

In an era characterized by rapid advancement in the field of technology and artificial intelligence, it has become increasingly common for individuals to buy online as opposed to buy products in shops and bazaars. While there are clear drawbacks to this approach, I believe that it does more good than harm in terms of time-saving.

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In education and emplyoment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?

In the domains of education and emplyoment, some people put more effort to their jobs and responsibilities. There are several reasons for this, such as personality and the need to achieve more by setting goals. Since it comes with consequences like not having lots of free time, I believe that working hard is not always good for people.

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Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both.

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Some people like to read online newspapers, on the other hand, others prefer to read paper based newspapers.Some people like to read online newspapers, on the other hand, others prefer to read paper based newspapers.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are 2 types of people of consume information, some people prefer online newspaper as a resource of information, on the other hand, others enjoy to read paper based newspaper. This essay will examine some key points of both 2 different views and outlines my view.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, numorous people are concerned about the future of our planet. They are looking for a solution for main thraets. Due to this some people believe that the problem could be solved by preserving endangered creatures, while others argue that there is some other fundamental issues there. In this esaay, I will discuss both views and support my opinion.

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Some people think that it is an individual responsibilty to take care of an environment but others think it is government's job to do so. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

Although many humans supported that they should taking care of their environment without including the organisation, however, others believe that government must take action to get rid off environmental problems.Therefore, I personally support the point that the state should impose regulations to avoid global warming, land degradation to mention but a few.

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