IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 23

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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If financially possible， is it always better for young people to leave home and be independent at the age of 18

It’s argued that it’s a better choice for young people at the age of 18 to leave home and become independent. I completely agree with this idea.

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In an increasingly globalized world, communicating in English is becoming an essential skill. Some people argue that it should become an official language in Vietnam. This means English would be used ingovernment, legal documents, education, and other official communications. The government of Vietnam should make English an official language. Do you agree or disagree?

English is becoming a global language and nowaday comunicating in English is important for eveyone who want to devenlop their lives. But I am not sure that the government in Vietnam should make English an official language, which will be great for Vietnamese people. Because Vietnamese language overcame a range of years to devenlop by Vietnamese people, it became beautiful and connect history with present. History of Vietnam strongly proved that Vietnamese people protected their nation, their land and so on. Therefore, language too, they always want to protect and maintan it forever. Moreover, Vietnamese lauguage is important and necessary culture, and you know, on over the world, we only have any nations have language for them. Personally, I am Vietnamese, I prefer to not making any language an officical language in Vietnam, including English. I want to keep my language forever, I always talk with my friends: "English is a tool help us, it not changes my mind". So I love my voice, l...

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the impacts on society and families?

These days, many people decide that they will have children later in their life rather than having a child after marriage. In this essay, I will argue about why young people do not interested to have a baby at their early stage and bad impacts on society as well as family members.

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some employers want to be able to contact their staaf at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages.

In these days, people looking to job and want to work every days without get on holidays. so in this essay I will write both sides advantages and disadvantage of this point with an example.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Some people think that the biggest environmental problem today is the loss of certain plants and animals. Others believe there are bigger issues we need to focus on. In my opinion, while both ideas make sense, I agree that there are more important environmental problems than the loss of some plants and animals.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualification Discuss both these views and give youn own opinion.

Nowadays, there is a debate whether learners should study other subjects despite of the main ones. Although some argue that it is important to forcus on the main subjects in order to improve your performance, I am in favor with those who think that minor lessons are good for addition as you get to learn more skills.

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Nowadays people believe that governments should invest tax-payers' money in healthcare while others believe that money should be used in other areas Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

Present-days a lot of people think that government have to spend the money of tax-payer to improving of healthcare system. But on the other hand same people believe that authority of country should apply this money for other part of social life. Now I am going to write about two side of this situation and then I will give my own opinion.

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Some people spent most of their lives living close to where they born. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Many people think that staying in the same city in which they were born is a great place to spend a whole life but, others are saying there are some disadvantages to staying in one place. In this essay, we will find why people prefer to spend their life in one place only and will discuss what advantages and disadvantages there can be.

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Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the child’s education while others argue it is not so. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and opine

Many people believe that competetive games have a positive impact on the child's learning while other deny with it. In this essay we will discuss both positive and negative side of competetive sports.

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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this

There is no denying the fact that having children for married couples is a sacred thing. While it is a commonly held belief that spouses should to remain childless due to various challenges these days, there is also an argument that opposes this decision. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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some educators argue that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

There is no denying the fact that learning to play any musical instruments can helps in feeling happiness at sometime. While it is a commonly held belief that students should be taught to play a musical instrument, there is also an argument opposes this idea. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Social media has harmed people’s social life. Do you agree or disagree? Write a one-sided opinion essay giving reasons and examples to support your opinion.

For many people in today's world, social media plays a significant role in their daily lives. Over the years, modern innovations in technology have transformed the way we communicate. In my opinion, social media positively impacts individuals life because it made people always incontect and allows people to have communication with others from various different countries.

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Many manufacturerd food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the food and beverage industries produce goods with very high amount of sugar. We know that the habit of consuming excessive sugar can cause various kinds of diseases. Some communities said that sugary products should be made more expensive to encouurage people to cunsume less sugar. However, I will give my opposing opinion. This essay will explain deeper into the topic with any examples.

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Due to low-cost flights, many people are choosing to holiday abroad rather than have holidays in their own country. What are the advantages and disadvantages to this?

NOWADAYS, A GREAT NUMBER OF PEOPLE HAVE THE ACCESS TO TRAVEL OVERSEAS DUE TO LOW-COST FLIGHTS, RATHER THAN TRAVELLING IN THEIR OWN COUNTRY. TRAVELLING ABROAD MAY OFFER NUMEROUS BENEFITS; HOWEVER, THERE ARE ALSO POSSIBLE DRAWBACKS AS WELL.

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Some say that young people should take a break between school and university to go travelling and learn more about the world. Others say that it is better for them to go straight to university from school, and then go travelling when they have finished their studies. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In this contemporary world, taking a break from university after completing school has become a new trend among younsters. some people think in order to maintain momentum in their studies youngsters should not take off from university, while other claims , instead of going straight to degree education student should take break to learn different and practical aspects of a life rather than just studing theories only. I persnolly believe having a off from studies gives a break to stress that student are getting from schools while studying however their are various aspects that should be considered while taking break such as length of break.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, some people think that boosting punishments level for driving offences can reduce traffic accidents. The other people believe that government should make other measures in enhancing road safety effectively.In my opinion, both punishment and a range of other measures can be used together to promote better driving habit.

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Working abroad can help employees earn a great deal of money and gain more benefits. However, some people think this trend has many negative impacts. what are the advantage and disadvantage of working abroad.

The labour market has undergone a significant transformation by involving foreign workers in this era. While overseas working can assist staff member to obtain wages which can suit their lifestyle, a wide range of folks believe there is a detrimental impact from this phenomenon. In this essay, both benefits and drawbacks will be elucidated.

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Extreme sports such as sky diving and rock climbing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Nowadays, more and more dangerous activities become popular, especially among young people. Unfortunately, it also brings more deaths. That is why some believe it is necessary to forbid such kinds of sport. I argue that extreme doing such as rafting, rallying, mountain climbing help people relived the routine pressure, throw out the adrenaline. Therefore, it is necessary to better control these actions, but don’t to put a bun at all.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps depict how the Southwest Airport is planned to be developed next year. Overall, there will be extensive developments with regard to the construction of facilities, additional terminal gates, and buildings at the airport.

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The leaders or directors of organizations are often elderly people. However some say that young people can also take the lead of organisations or companies. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In this period of globalization, many elderly people are appearing as fuhrer In my opinion, young people possess many abilities and skills to become the puissant leaders in various aspects of industries,and i strongly disagree with this notion and my opinion will be discussed in further paragraphs with a suitable conclusion.

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