IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 22

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

Many individuals enjoy living in a house, while others argue that living in an apartment has more benefits. While living in an apartment can be convenient because of the many services that it offers, I believe that the freedom that a independent house brings about is much more significant.

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Some people believe that young people who commit serious crimes should be punished the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is suggested that the punishment for committing major offences should be the same for both adults and young individuals. This essay completely disagrees with this viewpoint because minors might not know that their actions are wrong and imprisoning them can have a detrimental impact on their development.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

It is widely believed that children are having excessive exposure to their screen in the daily life. This essay will explore the intention behind such action and why I advocate that it is a negative development.

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Foreign countries are craze among people do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Undoubtedly, migrating abroad has become a matter of concern. Some consider it opportunistic while others controvert and stress it as a worthless notion, as people wasted a hefty amount on their immigration process. I believe that staying overseas has much more plausible results.

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Foreign countries are craze among people. Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Undoubtedly, migrating to abroad has become a matter of concern. Some consider it opportunistic while others controvert and stress it as worthless notion as people wasted hefty amount on their immigration process. I believe that staying overseas has much more plausible results.

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Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet?

There is currently a contentious argument over negative effects of extreme and immoral content present on the internet. Some people argue that the only way to limit the effects is to cencor the information by government-controlled methods.I believe that government should regulate certain harmful information but full censorship would hinder the freedom of speech and access of knowledge.

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Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive. What is the reason for this? Is it a negative or positive development?

Without any qualms, it has become very costly to hold marriages as bigger events. The major causes of this trend are maintenance of social status and expression of uniqueness in the wedding by the individuals. This essay believes that it is a positive progress as it is a sole opportunity of social interaction and strengthening of societal bonds and this ceremony serves as an unforgettable day which brings everyone together and closer.

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Participation by 5 to 14-years-old in selected leisure activities (Australia)

The chart shows the number of boys and girls in Australia who take part in five different leisure activities. Overall, we can say that boys’ participation in these activities was greater than that of girls.

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Many men and women are making the decisions to have children later in life. Why is this trend occurring? What are the impact of this development on both family and society? Give reasons for your answer and include examples

In the present world, it is obvious that newly married couples postpone raising children. There are many reasonable causes for this trend, which can impact society as well in different aspects.

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Some people think that media like newspapers should stop publishing information about people's private lives, while others think that control to stop such publication should be put in place. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

In today’s world, many believe that a person’s personal life should not be shared through newspapers, while others think that it should be managed without completely being banned. In my opinion, I have a balanced view about this argument, as there can be advantages as well as disadvantages.

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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no denying the fact that online social platforms are taking over face-to-face meetings between a lot of people in the community. While it is held that social networks have made it easier to stay in touch, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that the disadvantages are more serious than the advantages.

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Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio. How does media affect the society? Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

Many people around the world need help, and some argue that governments should dedicate their efforts to help their citizens and not waste their resources supporting other people in different countries. I completely agree with this view, as focusing in local people’s needs can positively impact the country’s development as well as reduce the global number of poor people who needs external financial support.

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Schools should stop using books to teach and use films, TV, and computers in the classroom instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Being in a reputable job position remains a top priority for many employees. While some people advocate for university programme completion as the main reason to occupy a proper job, others believe that getting involved in the market directly after school, may be more effective. In my opinion, although the practical experience is essential to find a suitable job, the graduate studies are fundamental in creating a strong career pathway.

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IT IS COMMONLY BELIEVE THAT NOWADAYS MAIN FACTOR THAT AFFECT A CHILD’S DEVELOPMENT ARE MEDIA,POP CULTURE AND FRIENDS.A DIFFERENT POINT OF VIEW IS THAT FAMILY PLAYS THE MOST SIGNIFICANT ROLE.DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION

Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course in university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

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“It is better for people to be unemployed, than people to be employer but they do not enjoy. Is it written correctly?”

There is a view that being jobless is better than having an unpleasant occupation.

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Dropping Rubbish and littering in cities and villages have become a common problem now a days. How is this a problem? How do you think this can be solved?

It is indisputable that the environment has been severely affected by the improper disposal of human waste in both urban and rural areas. This has led to the release of harmful substances into natural ecosystems, contributing to environmental degradation. Therefore, governments must implement strict regulations to address this issue effectively.

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

What should be taught in educational centers to students is arguable, with some people concerned that the centers do not value teaching practical skills to students and would rather focus on theoretical knowledge. I agree with this statement to a large extent.

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Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A vast amount of time and money is currently being measured out by authorized organizations

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More and more adults are playing computer games. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or negative trend?

In today’s fast-changing world, mostly grown-ups tend to spend their day playing video games. This essay will discuss the main reasons for this development if it is the advancement of technology, and agree that this is a negative tendency.

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‏There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company. Some believe that money is the main reason. Do you agree or disagree?

Motivation is required to stay focused in any field of work. Few people believe that many reasons can motivate the individual to work for the same organisation , while others consider that money is the crucial key. I fully disagree with the notion for which reasons that are articulated in the upcoming paragraphs.

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