IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 22

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development

There is no doubt that these days employees spending extended hours and hours in their jobs.There are several reasons behind this trend.Firstly, the rising cost of living forces many individuals to work overtime in order to meet their financial obligations such as housing,education, and daily expenses.Secondly, in highly competitive industries, workers often believe that staying longer at work can help them achieve promotions and job security. Additionally, the advancement of technology has blurred the line between professional and personal life, making it difficult for people to disconnect after working hours.

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To what extent do you agree or disagree with the view that the benefits of technology in education outweigh its drawbacks?

There is no denying the fact that technology plays a vital role in modern education. While some argue that its drawbacks are significant, I strongly believe that the advantages of using technology in education outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some people believe that advertisements are useful because they provide information about products and services. Others argue that advertising encourages people to buy things they do not really need. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some consumers argue that adverts are a good way of informing the general public about new market provisions. While, others concur that they motivate folk towards purchasing needless things through lavish and misleading content. In my opinion, the latter is more true in the present context.

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In many countries, sports stars earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that sports stars earn too much money, while others claim that they deserve their high salaries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The salaries of sports stars are often considered excessively huge. While some individuals argue that sportspeople are overpaid, others believe that they are eligible to such compensation. This essay will discuss both perspectives before stating why I believe their high pay is justified.

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The plans below show the South Wing of Walton Museum in 2008 and in 2012 after it was redeveloped. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (01.03.25)

The picture illustrates the layouts of the room for training sessions designed for no more than 10 people and for more than 10 people.

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The plans show the room layouts for training session for up ten people and more than ten people. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates the layouts of the room for training sessions designed for no more than 10 people and for more than 10 people.

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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out of work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parent’s absence.

In this modern world, both parents are doing work outside and people are having different views about this trend. I personally believe that it is a positive trend overall, however there are some drawbacks if both parents do work outside, but the benefits outweigh demerits.

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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and work of arts by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is believed that works of art and historical buildings will not be in demand because of the rapid change in technology. Since, all the details of history and art would be witnessed digitally. I personally do not agree with this notion for two reasons , which are comprehensively discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a jobb straight after school. Discuss both views.

Education plays an indispensable role in everyone's life . Some individuals think that students should study at a university level to get proficiency, and a better pay by getting admission in higher institutions. However , others think that students should find better employment opportunities to become independent , and to support their families. I think people should have strategic thinking to make their future brighter.

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The quality of life in huge cities is becoming worse. What are the causes? What can be done?

Nowadays , living in a modern and big metropolis is increasing , which leads to a decrease quality of life . There are many reasons for this problem , and many solutions have been proposed. In this essay, I will outline some possible causes and ways to solvethem.

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QUESTIONS FOR Some people said that handwriting brings benefits to learners, but others said that typing is more advantageous. What do you think about it? Use your own experience and knowledge to explain about your opinions.

Recent years have seen a heated discussion on the matter of whether handwriting or typing is better for learners. Some people debate that handwriting improves remembering and perception, while others object that in the modern digitalized world, typing is more practical and convenient. I think that handwriting still has some unique utilities that are especially supportive for students, but both viewpoints raise valid arguments.

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Some people believe that global migration has serious consequences for both the countries people leave and the countries they move to. Others argue that migration has more positive effects than negative. Discuss the causes and effects of global migration. Give specific examples to support your answer.

Global migration has been continuing as a significant issue from the past to the present. To illustrate the problem, the ongoing conflicts between Palestine and Israel result in a migration. This issue affects many aspects of life, from eastern to western countries, highlighting the urgency of understanding its causes. Economic problems, wars, and educational opportunities are considered major reasons for global movement.

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Some people think lawbreakers should be sent to prisons while others claim they should be made to work in communities. Discuss both and give your opinion.

It is debated whether people who break the law should go to prison or should be forced to work in communities. However, I am of the opinion that some criminals deserve to work in communities, but high-level criminals do not deserve this chance.

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Some people think that, to learn about other countries, traveling abroad is necessary while others think that is not necessary because TV and the internet can give the same information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, some people have pursued travelling abroad by using their electronic devices. However, other people assert that it is more important to travel to other countries firsthand rather than just seeing them in the media. For this reason, I firmly believe that travelling firsthand to many countries is necessary for the precious experiences and easier to learn.

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Some people think job satisfaction is more important than a high salary. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that job satisfaction is more important than earning a high salary. I completely agree with this view because being satisfied at work improves motivation and also supports mental health.

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Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past few decades, technology has evolved rapidly and so has the means of communication. Text messages and emails have certainly limited the face-to-face time with friends and family, which has a huge impact on their social lives. I completely agree with this view as people in general are becoming less confident in their day-to-day life.

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Some people believe that technology has made our lives too complicated, and the solution is to live a simpler life without it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often debated that current technology has over-complicated the daily life of people and it is better to quit its usage for life simplicity. I have a strong disagreement with such statements, as I believe a reverse trend can be noticed where current technologies have improved our life in daily, academic and working matters.

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It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt about the importance of children's development to their lives. While there is a commonly held belief that the media has a significant impact on children's lives, there is also an argument that tends to suggest that the family is the cornerstone of children. This essay will discuss this topic from both points of view and, then present my own opinion.

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Some people think international tourism creates more problems than benefits for a country. What is your opinion?"

In this day and age, the topic of international tourism has undeniably become a critical issue for the general public. While some individuals argue that problems that travel industry brings for a country is far more than benefits, I firmly believe that perspective is not totally true. This essay aims to provide comprehensive demonstration of this major viewpoint.

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The government should prioritize funding for science education over other subjects to promote a country’s development and progress. To what degree do you support or oppose this idea?

The debate over whether governments should allocate greater funding to science education rather than to other disciplines has garner urgency in an era defined by technological breakthroughs. While I acknowledge that science is an indispensable factor contributing to national progress, I contend that sidelining other disciplines would hinder rather than accelerate sustainable development.

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