IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 22

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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some universty students wants to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects .others believe it is more important to styding for a qualifacation . Discuss both views and give your owm opinion .

Some undergraduates study more subjects than their main ones. However, there is those who argue that it will be more sufficient if they study only their main courses. This essay agrees that an increase in knowledge is beneficial to students.

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Many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialize with others. This can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children. What problems do children face when going online without parental supervision? How can these problems be solved?

The internet can be an unwelcoming place for children due to content that it contains. Nowadays, many parents tend to give their children devices without enabling parental control, thereby putting their mental health and social development at risk. This essay will analyze the effects of this trend and suggest possible solutions.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, some people have suggested that improving people's lives should be the top priority for science. I firmly agree with the statement as science truly revolutionalized different sectors of our society and contribute to peoples' well-being.

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Experts believe that, over the next decade, robots will be doing many of the jobs currently done by humans.

It is understandable, that nowadays with all the technological advancements present and the beginning of artificial intelligence’s reign over manual labor, some sceptical opinions are forming in the society concerning the fact that many jobs could be replaced by robots and artificial minds alike. However, this could be a positive thing in the scary disguise. Here are some advantages and disadvantages of this.

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Some believe that research on family history is a useful thing to do, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Although obtaning information about the origins of family is a really essential action for some people, others consider this irrelevant. This essay states that the research can help us not only be more aware of important individuals who are probably our relatives but also gain a lot of details about family, whereas resources may be inavailable, and the work is time-consuming.

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Some people think secondary school pupils should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

High school is the crucial stage of student learning to develop critical skills in them.Many folk believes foreign relations should be included as a course in curriculum but others suggest it is unproductive and a wastage of time .Today in this essay I will enlight both the ideas with my viewpoint at the last .

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Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

The factors of success in sports are a matter of discussion for the experts, while some of them believe that mental streng is the key factor, others think that it is only necessary to be strong and fit to achieve greatnes. However, my opinion on this topic is that the athletes need to have both of them to fulfill their goals. In this essay, I will explain the benefits of both sides and provide examples to support them. Finally, a suitable conclusion will be given.

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some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and the homeless. Do you agree or disagree?

People often argue that local presidents must be accountable for individuals without jobs or houses. While having a home and a job is essential for all citizens, the government is not responsible for providing these privileges to its residents. Therefore, I strongly disagree with this opinion.

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As a result of growth in some urban areas, the environment in those cities is deteriorating. How could this issue be tackled by both the government and individuals?

More and more people move to bigger cities, as a result the environmental conditions of them worsen. However, the problem can be addressed if governments implement appropriate programs which will interest individuals to stay in non-urban territories and individuals choose their homecities over urban areas being affected by assets they can earn by staying more.

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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both therse views and give your own opinion.

In this modern era where human beings crave safety and belonging at their work places, different people have their distinct mindsets. Although some believe that one should stay with the same institution for the rest of their life, i agree with the ones who think changing associations is more excellent.

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Some people believe that teacher should assign a lot of homework for student whereas others believe that they should focus on completing academic work during the school day. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

There is an ongoing debate regarding whether students should be assigned lots of homework by teachers or whether teachers should concentrate completely on finishing academic work during the school day. This essay will attempt to illustrate that students have more time to study social knowledge and devote their time to entertainment will clarify that teachers should assign various homework to students.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.(Huseyn 1)

Needless to say, the number of people who are curious about the history of the buildings they live in is increasing day by day. There are some causes why it happens such as safety and cultural or historical interests. In some ways, individuals can find out information by searching on the internet and talking with neighbours who have in a long time there.

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Many teens own their smartphones, does advantage outweigh the disadvantages Give your opinion

These days, many teenagers own smartphones. Although this may help them communicate with friends, I believe that the disadvantages outweigh the benefits, as excessive phone use can harm both physical and mental health.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Full time education on teenagers is a very relevant topic. I agree that every kid needs to go through a education program until they turn eighteen years old and these essay will adress and explain my position.

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The government spends a lot of money on space exploration and on trying to discover life on other planets. Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend more money on addressing problems in society. To what extent do you agree?

It is considered that civic bodies apply trust space exploration as well as they are investing to find life on planets, whilst many individuals believe that the government must use more funds to mitigate the communities' issues instead of wasting capital to explore advanced technology. However, I totally agree with the statement ministry should develop the education and sport sector, as some points will be explained in forthcoming paragraphs.

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The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut art and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on useful subjects such as information technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

In this cutting-edge world, there is growing pressure on schools to prioritize certain subjects that are considered practical and job-oriented. While proponents believe that art and music subjects play a vital role for a well-rounded growth of students, critics argue that schools should focus on subjects that benefit in the future for career. However, I firmly disagree with this idea, as such art and music are equivalent important skills to learn for individuals. This essay will discuss why maintaining a balanced curriculum that includes creative subjects is essential.

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The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialized and developing nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.

The world’s population has increased, and its growth has accelerated for the last 50 years and will continue for several decades. This essay examines some problems that this phenomenon has brought about and actions that our society can take to mitigate these problems.

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Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do to try and have a satisfying working life?

It is frequently believed that deciding on a career path in early life and continuing to it can have positive effects on job satisfaction. I completely agree with this idea, and I will introduce some other important factors in this essay.

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Fossil fuel (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main source in many countries, but some countries, the use of alternative source of energy (wind and solar energy) is encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, some parts of the world have switched their preference towards using renewable energy sources, as compared to some countries still rely heavily upon fossil fuels as their primary source of energy. In my opinion, it is a positive development with some drawbacks.

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Nowadays, many people spend less and less time at home. What are the ‎causes of this? What are the effects of this on individuals and on society.‎

In recent years, outdoor activities have become more appealing than indoor ones. This essay will discuss two main causes of this issue: a busy work schedule and an active social life. Additionally, it will analyze the effects of this phenomenon on the individuals and people around them.

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