IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 18

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people encourage young people to leave their parents’ home as soon as they become adults while others say children should stay at their parents’ home as long as possible

Recently, there has been a controversial debate about whether young individuals should leave their nest when they grow up or stay as long as possible with their parents. Both choices could benefit the juveniles but in my opinion I would make the claim that children should stay with their family.

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Technologies like AI and Robotics are automating many human jobs and helping to maximize company profits. However, this may result in a new wave of mass unemployment and government should step in to regulate these fields. Discuss arguments for both sides and give your opinion.

This era belongs to various technological advancements, Artificial Intelligence and Robotics are one of them. Now, they have started replacing humans at work places and causing unemployment. Thus, a few opine that the governments must step in and frame some laws to restrict their usage. However, I do not agree with this view to a large extent and reasons to support my stance are elaborated in the following paragraphs.

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Some people dislike changes in their society and in their own lives, and want things to stay the same. Why do some people want things to stay the same? Why should change be regarded as something positive?

A few people do not want any changes in their social life as well as personal life and they keep everything same the way it is. The main reason would be that they are afraid to go out of their comfort zone. However, changes can lead to the successful in their life.

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Some people think radical knowledge is the most important skills. The nurses should have others. There are more important qualities discuss both view and give your opinion.

Some believe medical professional, such as nurses should require exponential medical knowledge and expertise to provide healthcare for the patients. While some recon nurses should possess qualities like empathy and passion to be successful in this field, although being a caring and good human being is a surplus in this profession, I believe in that the knowledge of human health should be the priority while training nurses.

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. Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Competition at many places such as working place, school, and even in daily life seems t be an excellent thing. However, many people argue that collaboration would be better than become opponents to defeat each other. this essay will discuss both views of this statement and give the reason why I suppose that competition will give many positive aspect to people.

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in some parts of the world, traditional festivals have disappeared or disappearing, what problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

The decline of traditional festivals poses significant challenges to cultural preservation and community cohesion. However, several strategies can be implemented to address this issue effectively.

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Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than local when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Charging tourists more than the natives is controversial practice. While some argue that it should be implemented for economic benefits, others believe that this may harm country's reputation and create inequality. I strongly disagree with the idea of charging foreign vistors more as it raises potential long term negative effects on tourist industry.

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Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports. Is it positive or negative development

Today, many young people are obsessed with playing computer games instead of sports. Regardless of some significant advantages of this phenomenon, I reckon that it has more bad implications for children's health and social life.

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Today our communications,medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology.Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays,the issue of dependency on computer technology in the area of communications,medicine and transport is a controversial one.While some argue that it has various negative impacts inthese sectors,many argue that our world has transformed into its most developed era through internet.I,personally,believe that media communications,medical coding and as a advanced means of travelling are the byproducts of a range of softawres.

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With an increasing population communicating via the internet messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what extent you agree or disagree?

With a growing number of citizens conversating via online messaging, eye-to-eye conversation will be an item of history. I am in complete concord with this conception.Many people's lives are related to their mobile phones and their children are taking cases from their parents and playing gadgets regularly . They spend their time on the phone by playing online games with their friends, watching illegal videos and watching horror films. But there are some households which have a positive interaction with each other to use their smartphones wisely by learning foreign languages, and subjects in online lessons. Especially, on a daily basis they talk to each other by messaging and calling. Even some emotional attitudes are made by communicators.For example, the BBC LEARNING English announced that most traits are created by youngsters online calls.

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The debate over whether reading stories from books is more beneficial for children than watching TV or playing computer games has long been a topic of discussion. While television and games can provide modern preference and sometimes educational content, I strongly believe that reading offers unparalleled cognitive, emotional, and linguistic benefits that outweigh the advantages of screen-based activities.

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Some scientists think that there are intelligent lifeforms on the other planets and messages should be sent to conduct them . Other scientists think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous . Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

At present no one on our planet is sure about the life in outer space. However, there are scientists who believe that there is life in space and their civilisation is more advanced than human. So we should send signal to them in order to communicate with them but scientists believed that it’s a bad idea. I will elaborate on in further paragraphs.

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the best way to improve health is to exercise daily to what extent do you agree?

Currently, there are a lot of opinions about daily exercises. People try be more healthy and active with sport. Also, both children and adults implement sports on a permanent basis and make their own special schedule of activities. Someone has an opportunity to spend all time to do it, but others don’t want to do it.

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Nowadays children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time being active or creative. What is the reason for this? What measures should be taken to encourage children to be more active?

With recent technological advancements, new entertainments, like watching tv, have been added to children's leasure time lists. Compare to the past, children spend more time on siting infront of the tv and watching their favourite tv programs, and they involve less in the physical or the mental activities.

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Some people think multiple choice tests are better than tests which require you to write an essay. Other people think that tests wflicl1 require you to write an essay are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people suggest that multiple choice tasks are better than tests like open-end questions.On the other hand, there are growing number of poet who prefer the task which include essay questions.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed books or newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying? To what extent, do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today's fast-paced world, reading has become a pervasive in human life. In every part of business and daily life, it is not difficult to observe that individuals faces some reading activity unless arbitrary or mandatory. While some people defend that people would rather printed books than online resources in the future, I contend that they are able to reach online reading materials as free for two main reasons, which I will elaborate on in this essay.

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In many countries around the world, it is common for families to run their own business. Some people think that keeping the business within the family is the best approach while other believe this could lead to problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It has become a common practice to start a family business these days. some people believe that starting a business with the family members is a good option, because people trust their families and there would be less chances of fraud, while others think that this can cause certain issues, if any loss is observed, so this can cause conflict between relations. I will discuss both views with relevant examples and i will give my opinion as well in this essay.

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A growing number of people feel that natural areas should not be exploited by people, and that they should be left as they are, while others argue that humans must use this land to satisfy their various needs, including farming and building. discuss both the views and give your opinion?

It is a highly debatable topic these days whether natural areas such as forests and wildlife should be protected or either it can be used for mankind various essentials such as food and building new houses. This essay will look into both the aspects along with my viewpoint.However,I personally asserted with the latter phenomenon.

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Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports. Is it positive or negative development?

These days a lot of time is wasted with video games which children play instead of exercising sports. Although this phenomenon creates some dangers for children's health and social life, I reckon that it can give some benefits.

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All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this ? What are the effect ?

All around the world, more and more people are obesity and this number is rapidly increase. People do not aware of their own health and obesity can lead to many problems. I think, the most significant reason why people are obesity is they do not control what they consume. Obviously, the effect of this is dangerous, even they will get heart disease.

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