IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 20

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

These days, the importance of studying has never faded as it is a shortest way to success. Some people believe that learners should pay the school fee for their own as the benefits of university bring to our live. From my point of view, I partly age with this statement and will give a clear evidence in the following essay.

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people's character is influenced by environmet rather than genetics. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

When it comes to the own personality traits can be affected by environmental impact rather than the genes. The writer of this essay absolutely agrees with this notion due to not only elaborating the mindset but also changing the habits.

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Large business have big budgets for marketing and promotic and as a result people garvitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

It is believed that a contemporary group of individuals are inclined to use goods of huge companies as their budgets allow them to spend a lot of money on advertising. Nowadays, this problem is globilizing and may have a bad consequences, however, this issue can be tackled by taking relevant measures.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people believe that people on over the world may use products from anywhere they want and that is a reason why nations tend to be similar. While this trend may bring about some drawbacks, I would argue they are eclipsed by the benefits.

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Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion?

In modern world, numerous citizens claim that human caused the Earth being crushed. while the others hold the view that mortal inclined makes being better. However, I believe it is have a good and bad side.

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Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computer should replace them. Howevee, others do not agree. Discuss both aides and give your opinion.

Libraries has been a critical part of learning and culture for centuries, but with the advent of digital technologies, some argue that these institutions are now obsolete, and computers should replace them. On the other hand, many peoples believe libraries still holds significant value that cannot be easily replicated by computers.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building thay live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

As modern technologies help people to easily track the history of the house, many people consider the history of the house when they buy houses. There are several reasons why they search past events of the house and building and popular methods exist for research the history.

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Some people think that government should change they way individual live, while others believe that they should choose the way themselves. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

In the contemporary society, there is divisive opinion, where some folks argue that government should involve in personal live while others oppose that it should become privacy matter. Personally, I strongly advocate for the latter. Despite there is maybe some merits in the first argument. This essay will discuss both viewpoints before arriving at the conclusion.

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Too much empasis placed on testing these days. The need to prepare for tests and examination is a restriction on teachers and also exerts unnecessary pressure on young learners. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

In the present education system, some contended that examination is over emphasized, and it leads to an excessive amount of pressures on both teachers and students. In my point of view, I acknowledges the benefits of testings, but I do believe there are also fair amount of drawbacks, and I will be analzying this issue provided with my own opinion below.

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Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people think it is necessary, but others are of the opinion that it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is generally agreed that the higher is the level of employee’s responsibility, the higher his salary should be. However, some disagree with this statement, emphasising that ordinary workers often contribute to the company’s success even more than white collars, so there should be no gap between incomes. This essay will explore both perspectives, although I personally support the former.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for years between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

The majority of countries eencourage students to be employed or visit for a year after high school or before studying institute studies. In this essay, I will discuss both viewpoints.

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In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays people store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In ancient times, books contains all the knowledge that people need, But these days all the knowledgeable information is stored on internet. Although books are easy to carry, I believe that there is a fear of losing them. Therefore the advantages of online texts outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some people belive that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of a bad's person nature. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nobody can deny that, the crime rate has been increased dramatically, doubting people about the major reason why it has been occuring throught the decades. Some individuals believe that it has happened due to poverty and personal issues, whereas others consider it as the result of human's nature. This essay will discuss both views and provide my own view.

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Some say that due to heavy traffic, governments need to build more roads in metropolitan cities, while others argue this is not the right solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays people affect by traffic jams because in our time cars are integral part of our lives. Therefore some say we need to build more roads, but does it really right solution? I want to give two excellent examples why I don’t agree with the first option.

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some people believe that if people are not allowed to work after the age of 60, it cause problems. Do you agree or disagree?

The sphere of job would be changed through aging process of life. Thus, it is debated that the elderly should retire after the certain age compulsorily, and others argued that forceful retirement leads to a plethora of harmful problems. I advocate for the latter and in the following paragraph, it will be defended.

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he plans show Ashford in 2010 and Ashford now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The map illustrates, a city, Ashford in 2010 and at present.

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Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behavior. What is your opinion?

In these day, violence in media split the society in to two, some thinks that violence on the big screen has a bad side effect on community's behavior. on the other hand, some believe it dose not has any what so ever harm or effect's to consume entertainment material on people's behavior . in addition, I think it is completely safe to watch, read , and play violent video games. And, In this essay I will give my opinion in details .

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Tourism today creates a variety of problems, such as pollution due to flights, traffic congestion and water pollution. Do you think that governments should impose extra taxes on flights or accommodation to restrict today’s tourism industry?

One of the widely discussed issues in the contemporary world is the large amount of pollution problems from air traffic, transportations and polluted water. Now, governments are beginning to realize that they have to impose extra taxes on flights or accommodation to restrict the future of the tourism industry. Personally, I totally disagree with this statement since there are more essential ecological problems that governments ought to solve.

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If all workers in a company were paid exact same wage regardless of job role there would be much more harmony and cooperation between staff. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that there would be much more harmony and cooperation between workers if all employee in a company were paid equally despite the job position. This essay does not agree that equality in pay regardless job role can enhance the relation between staff. Firstly, it can reduce the motivation to work; secondly eliminate competition among staff.

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