IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 20

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Teaching profession is decreasing day by day. the government should encourage students to go for this noble profession.why is this profession declining and now should the government encourage people to go for this noble profession?

Teaching is a dignified profession.Teachers are torchbearer for the society that educates all other professions. However it seems to be less favorite among youngsters these days. This essay will examine the reasons for its downfall and the steps that government should initiate to encourage people to opt for this field.

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

Most people think that, in a very near future, the most used method for payments will be the electronic one; shops will be likely to accept exclusively payments by credit cards or apps on the phone. I believe that not only this situation represents the future, but it is already the normality for most of us.

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Nowadays, more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same job. What problemes does this came? What are some possible solutions?

In the modern world, due to technological advancement, the total number of jobs has remained the same as the population has grown. Because of that many older generation people have to compete with the new generation for the same kind of work. This causes many issues. This essay will investigate the major problems behind this phenomenon along with useful steps to control it in further paragraphs.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The technological era has seen many advancements, of which the internet has been popular amongst many. Social media and online press organisations have also become more relevant. This has meant that more traditional news outlets like newspapers have become less popular. I wholeheartedly agree with this sentiment because news websites are easier to access and provide more up to date information on worldwide events. In contrast, newspapers and magazines have to be printed earlier in the morning, hence they could miss out on events that happen later in the day.

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In recent years, the debate on technology and its effect on human relationships have been brought to light. People have different views on whether current technological advancements has united or divided communities. I believe that modern means of communication brings individuals from all over the world.

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Some people believe that schools should only teach children subjects which are beneficial to their future career and therefore other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a global debate about the importance of art subjects in the education system. While some claim that students should only learn the main essential subjects, I firmly believe that art subjects have a unique ability to improve student academic performance across all subjects by serving as reducing stress and provide several opportunities through exposure to multiple fields.

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Some people think it is more important to provide parks and sports facilities than to provide shopping centers in these new town for people to spend their free time. To what extent doo you agree or disagree?

It is indisputable that public services are critical for citizens. While some believe that new towns should not prioritizing shopping centres over parks and sports facilities, there is also an argument that opposes this perspective. In my opinion, I firmly agree with the former viewpoint, as these kinds of facilities can be a main factor in raising the individuals' fitness level resulting healthier citizens. This essay will discuss both views before presenting my opinion.

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Map showing changes in the Lakeside area from 2000 to 2009

The diagram illustrates the changes that took place in a lakeside area between 2000 and 2009. Overall, it is clear that the area saw an increase in facilities to support residents, alongside significant industrial expansion. Additionally, the woodland area was reduced by half to accommodate new buildings and infrastructure.

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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. L Discuss two views and give your opinion.

Few society believe that spare time should be invested in movement such as reading, and playing word puzzles which improves thinking power. while, others feel that it is essential to take a rest in their leisure time. I strongly believe that the public must spend their remaining time in movement to improve their mind power. This essay will discuss both views.

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Scientists tell us some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions?

Although scientists clearly explained activities that are beneficial or harmful to health, a number of individuals continue to follow unhealthy lifestyles ,despite knowing the consequences.The main reason behind this problem is addiction ;however, this issue can be addressed by initiative of parents ,family and government .

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City planners’ new designs include setting up schools, markets and commercial places (like office) in different areas of the city. Do you think it will help the city dwellers?

City planners want to make new designs for cities. They will build schools, markets, and offices in different areas. I think this is a good idea and it will help people who live in the city.

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Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Various nations around the world have mandatory service for adolescents after graduating from school. In recent years, there has been a debate on whether all countries should make national service obligatory and require both men and women to enlist. However, while I believe that countries should make conscription necessary, I do not agree that women should be made to serve.

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Worker often have to retire at the age of 60 or 65. However, some people say that they should be allowed to continue working for as long as they want. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

It’s popular that the retirement age is 60 or 65. Some people argue that workers should be allowed to continue working as long as they can. In this essay, I will explain my own opinion.

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It was predicted that people living in the twenty-first century would have more free time than ever before because of improvements in technology. To what extent has this prediction come true?

Living in the twenty-first century, the era of modern technology and advancements made life much easier and saved people plenty of time. In my view, I agree that being surrounded by technology enables individuals to have much free time that can be well spent in other developments and further enhancement of human life.

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Modern technology is now very common in most work places. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

It is very usual to utilize up-to-date technology in the majority of the workplaces. In my opinion, the advent of the contemporary machinery also has affected working habits of people. Though there are several advantages of it such as automated processes and increased work efficiency, the disadvantages - risen impatience and lack of analytical and writing skills - should not be overlooked.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, the trend of decreasing population density in rural areas due to urbanization has sparked a significant debate. Some argue that this trend is a positive development, while I believe it is detrimental because it exacerbates overcrowding in cities and hampers the development of rural areas.

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In many countries, people like to eat a wider variety of food than can be grown in their local area. As a result, much of the food people eat today has to come from other regions. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In various nations, people are now in favor of diversifying their diet by eating a wide variety of foods coming from different regions than their local one. While there are some disadvantages to the local economic development, I firmly believe that the benefits of consuming a larger range of nutritional input far outweight the drawbacks.

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In today’s time, the internet is making it easy to study online from home. So prefer online courses to study and they think its better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The 21st century has witnessed so many ground breaking inventions and the one that stands out is the Internet and its rapid evolution. As a consequence, in the contemporary era, the conventional methods of learning in our classrooms are almost extinct and now being replaced with virtual classrooms. I will discuss both sides of the coin and will decipher my reasons for opting to follow traditional methos in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Games are a crucial part of the individual's life as it is a source of entertainment and knowledge. Some people have a notion that the players should have the physical strength to become famous and other masses and I think that a powerful intellectual memory is the most pivotal part to become successful. I will discuss both views and my opinion in the further paragraphs.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In most places today, a variety of food from around the world is available to individuals. Some people believe that this trend could lead to environmental pollution, while others argue that it fosters economic development and cooperation between countries. Personally, I agree with the latter perspective.

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