IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 24

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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People have a lot of opinions about the value of advanced education. Which do you think is the most important reason to attend college or university? Use reasons and examples to support your answer

Nowadays, Many people believe that receiving a high-quality education in school or University is essential for many reasons. In my opinion, the most important reason is to improve one’s job opportunities and build a stable and rewarding career.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

This essay argues that, in many countries, the level of crime has risen; I believe this is because of weak laws in those countries, which cause many crimes in cities. To solve this issue, the government needs to impose strict penalties and help poor people to reduce crime.

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some people believe that mordern technology has made shopping easier today, whlie others believe that it has not helped shoppers much. discuss both views and give your opinion

In recent years, the topic of mechanization has changed many aspects of our lives, including how we shop. Some public think that shopping has become easier thanks to modern technology, while others believe that it has not made a big difference. This essay will elucidate these differing perspectives.

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Some people think the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the growing influence of authority funding has sparked considerable debate among the general public. Although some individuals argue that the government should prioritize teaching science over other subjects, I firmly believe that all subjects should receive balanced attention because each plays a unique role in a country’s progress. This essay will aim to provide a comprehensive analysis of these differing viewpoints.

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Some people believe that governments should make university education free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that education plays a vital role in shaping individuals and building strong societies. People firmly believe that college should be paid for by the government, while others argue that every student should pay the tuition fees. I strongly disagree for several reasons, the most significant one is that not all students can pay college fees.

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Some people believe that hard work and determination are key factors for success, while others argue that money and personal appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

There is a debate over what the most important aspects are that lead one to be successful in their life, with some saying working harder and being determined are vital, and others think good looks and having a fortune are what makes the difference. In my opinion, while hard work and determination have always been key factors for every person’s future prospects, personal appearance and money are more important as they can create a great first impression and allows self-investment for future personal development.

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These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?

In recent years, many people move overseas for employment with their families. While this trend presents some disadvantages, such as cultural adaptation challenges and social isolation, it also provides significant benefits, including enhanced career opportunities and improved living standard. I definitely believe the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some people think that team sports prepare children for work life but others think individual sports are better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Sports are often seen as an important part of children's growth, not only for physical fitness but also for developing life skills. However, some people argue that team sports can help developing children's professional life in future. Others believe that individual sports are far better than team sports for building future career.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend Do you agree or disagree?

It is said that there ought to be less working and more week days. This essay strongly disagrees with this statement, for this trend might cause some issues in civil and economic terms.

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Nowadays people use social media to keep in touch with others and be aware of news. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In our world, people these days use social media for many things , JUST like to keep in touch , to gather not only that , but also to be aware of global news. Some people think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. This essay agrees with that view.

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Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boys and girls in schools. Others disagree and believe it is a waste of school time.

Some say that zoos where creatures are kept in an unnatural environment should be banned in this century. This essay totally agrees with this statement because animals that live in these zoos are more likely to develop psychological disorders compared to their peers, and nature programs allow us to view animals without the need for a zoo.

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Some people think that having more TV channels is good because they will have more choices. Others think that it is not good because the quality of the program is lower. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

It is true that TV is a great source of entertainment. Some individuals believe that having different Tv channels is a great idea as they will have more variety to watch, and increase their learning. However, others said that distinct channels that rely on the same concept and have limited sources force them to produce lower-quality programs. I am with the latter view.

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Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge

Travelling around the world has been a trend for lots of individuals nowadays to get away from their high pressure life. There are different views whether to travel in a group with a tour guide or not.

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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is an ongoing debate on whether children should be allowed or banned to use their mobile devices at school. Both views will be discussed and a personal opinion wil be written on the later part.

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Some people believe that the internet has brought more harm than good. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Internet has a great influence on the lives of people all around the world.The extreme use of internet by all the age groups raises a debate leading to argument by some people that the internet possess more detrimental impact for the users than the benefits. I strongly agree with the presented notion. This essay will demonstrate both the advantages and disadvantages of internet, concluding with my opinion.

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Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions difficult such as sahara deseret or the antartic .what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

Extreme places have become more popular for many visitors. While going to sahara desert or the antartic provides a unique experiences, it can also lead to some disadvantages. This essay will explore both of the views.

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In the past, most working people had only one job. However, nowadays, more and more people have more than one job at the same time. What are the reasons for this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of having more than one job?

In the past, many workers preferred to have one job. Recently, many people have more than one job at the same time. The benefit is that they can gain much experience while working at many jobs, but this results in several drawbacks because they feel tired and find it hard to do many things at the same time.

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Some people think that it is better to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

crowd have different views about whether or not it is more beneficial to live in a garden city. Although there are some advantages to inhabitation in these areas, I would think that it is better to dwell in vertical cities.

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

Supporters claim that the technology advancement leads us to become unity. Critics, on the other hand, suggest that it will influence people to live as individuals. This essay will discuss both perspectives and give the writer's opinion at the end.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. whhy might this be the case? what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

It is true that most of the individuals choose to have their own business instead of working under the supervision of their managers. This happens due to the flexibility, independence and use their thinking for the growth of their business, and this trend has some negative effects such as sole responsibility, bank debts and legal requirements as well.

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