IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 28

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

One of the major problems in cosmopolitan cities is traffic jams in different parts of the area. The growing population result in high demand for transportation, so there is a profound increase in the number of cars in big cities. Car sharing stands out as the most pragmatic solution for the rising traffic crowd.

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Fastfood is becoming one part of our life. some people say that every individual should take responsiblity for it while other people say that it the government's responsiblity. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Fastfood is now getting almost essential in our life. Some people believe that each one of us should be responsible for it while others think the government should be. This essay will discuss both perspectives and give my conclusion in favour of the former.

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Some people say libraries are important in society as a place to get information and use books. Others say as computers are advanced, libraries are a waste of money and recourses. Discuss both views and give your opinion

With the advent of internet and E-books, many cities have seen an overall decline in the use of libraries. Some people insist that libraries are important while others state that libraries are a waste of money and recourses. I will explore the multifaceted nature of this trend, emphasizing the belief that the benefits of having libraries outweigh the disadvantages.

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question is In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?

Nowadays, a lot of athletes in professional sports are taking prohibited substances to improve their athletic performance. This problem is mainly due to the competitive spirit around professional sports and the increased social pressure these athletes are facing. To stop this kind of cheating, I recommend improving the culture surrounding these sports and having sport event a lot more often

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Some people say the fashion industry is bad for the environment, as it encourages consumers to buy new clothes all the time. Do you agree or disagree?

It cannot be denied that fashion has a strong impact on people's lives nowadays. We have been influenced by society to have a good appearance which made people spend a lot on clothing. From my perspective, I strongly believe that the fashion industry will be harmful to the environment.

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Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The government should invest more financially to support the artists in the country which has been a crucial topic recently. Some people believe that this should be a part of the government investment while others think that they should rely on alternative sources of funding. The following paragraph will present both perspectives.

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Some parents believe that learning mathematics at schools is redundant and should not be taught while others believe that it should remain a foundational subject whether or not it is used in later life. Discuss both sides.

In current society, with the advent of calculator and the rise of AI, many people do not need mathematical skills. Some people believe that it is a foundational subject to be taught in school, while others point out that there is no meaning in teaching mathematics. I will explore the multifaceted nature of this trend, emphasizing child development and its usefulness in daily life.

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Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. Why do you think is that? Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities?

There are lots of varieties how to deal with negative emotions, thoughts, stress or even more, depression, and one of the ways is shopping. Nowadays, going to the shopping mall is getting increasingly popular among the young generation yet there are some reasons for this phenomenon. However, there are a number of hobbies that can replace shopping with their more useful benefits.

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Technology has impacted on the way people interact. These days, many relationships are created and maintained through technologies such as mobile, telephones and the internet. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using technology to establish and develop relationships?

In recent years, The study has proven that long-term family lives are carried by AI like cell phones, landline devices, and websites. The input of computers for this generation has significantly made changes. In this essay, I will discuss both views and share my opinion.

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advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to the same and look the same. do you agree or disagree

Many people argue that advertising has impacted every section of the society and forcing individuals to do the same and look the same which has resulted in destroying individuality of a person. I agree with the given statement and my reasons will be explained below.

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Young people learn more about good behavior from books or films/movies than they learn from real-life experiences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that kids can learn good behaviour from books ,films and, movies more than their reality. However, in my opinion, I strongly disagree with this statement for several reasons .

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In recent years, there has been growing interest in relatiosnhip between eqaulity and personel achievements. Some people beileve that individuals can achieve more in egalatarian socties. Others believe that high level of personel achievements are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Over the last few years, there has been rising curiosity in the relationships between equality and personal accomplishments. No one can deny that some individuals think that the public can get more success in balanced communities, while others prefer to think that a high level of attainments is possible only when community are free to choose victory or downfall as per their benefits. It is important to admit that both views have their own pros. In this essay, I will discuss the possible reasons that support each view, and what advantages they bring to society.

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Some people are of the opinion that being highly qualified is the only way to ensure a well-paying job. While others believe that having work experience is the best way to get a well-paying job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Every year, numerous amount of third-level alumni seek their dream job. Many of them believe that a high-level academic qualification will be sufficient enough for high-income jobs, while in reality, the most in-demand certificate for well-paying jobs is experience. In this essay, I will examine both opinions, and support my perspective.

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle

Many towns and cities in our world are overfull with people, moreover, this causes a big part of problems with work or living. In general, issues as no workplace or how to find a house in overpopulated areas can be solved by offering more opportunities for rural society by government.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It is considered that some people find crucial to have a home rather than rent one. The reason for that may be in economical benefits that owing a home can bring as nowadays renting a home is quite expensive. I think that it a positive trend as I find owing way more convenient in many aspects while renting can bring some issues.

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Some parents think that child care centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and girve your opinion.

The discussion of childcare is surely one that begs the question of exactly how it provides the best service for children. In my opinion, due to educational reasons, supporting centres for child care will be the most appropriate choice.

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It has been more than 40 years since man first landed on the moon. Some people think that space research is a waste of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the rise of technology, space research is growing more than ever since humans first landed on the moon more than four decades ago. As such space research is costly, whether the research is a waste of mony or not has sparked much debate. From my point of view, I strongly agree with the perspective. I will explore two main reasons why it is not beneficial, emphasizing other priorities in the nations and limited opportunities in the space.

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In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourage young from taking part in any sport themselves

In our contemporary era, there is considerable debate about the influence of direct persistent broadcast of sport events.while so citizens insist that this will be an effective factor in obstructing young people from being athletics.In my opinion, Iwould argue that the covering of sport activities for prolonged will drive youth to be energetic and active, mainly, due to the effect of the observed role models.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Saving a part of one's income might be profitable in the upcoming years. There is an opinion that I agree with that states there is a need to encourage all individuals, including young adults, to save money for the future. This is because I think it will increase finacial stability when people grow old and this act could create better citizens.

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Companies now prefer to hire people with good social skills as well as good academic qualifications. Do you think that social skills are now getting more important than educational qualifications?

A lot of companies encourage people who have strong social contact abilities. The main positive feedback of that is the employer acquires values during the work and it is an excellent impact on the company. In other words, the knowledge of experiences on meeting customers is an important strategy for all businesses. For example, my brother is working in an oil company and he is achieving many financial and political assessments regarding his occupation. After two years the manager gave him a promotion and additional salary. This is because, he convinced many customers to deal with their services and commodities. So speaking skill is an important aspect in a place of work. In addition, employees have the capability to negotiate with others, often those labors attract people's attention and obtain a huge level in their jobs.

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