IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 287

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

While it is widely claimed that primary children experiencing farm's lifes will benefit them tremendously, others argue that such activity making their children at risk of animal-related infections and accidents and rather opt for other types of activity instead. Both point of views and reasons why I agree with its positive development will be elaborated on in this essay.

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Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Other believe people have become independent.Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is argued that whether nowadays, the dependence on each other are becoming less significant among our society or vice versa. This essay aims to display a closer look at both sides and explain the write's belief that individuals are becoming less independent on another one.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent days, many people have illnesses, preferring using alternative medicines or treatments to conventional medical treatments. This trend can bring a positive result, but its negative impact on health needs to be considered. Therefore I strongly believe that this situation is a negative development.

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produce locally Why people buy imported food ? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food ?

In many nations nowadays, there are more people prefer imported food than local food, which derives from the better quality of foreign food. However, this can be tackled by improving the quality control of local food.

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Some people think that Olympic game are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say Olympics is a waste of money and the money could be better spend on other things. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In modern age, the issue of Olympic games is something which bears some consideration. This writer concurs with the former point of view because Olympics should be hold to give more opportunities for people to have experiences despite those who believing that this amount of money should be invest for other purposes.

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Topic: some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play\ with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the children of having a large number of toys?

Some parents purchase a lot of toys for their kids to play with. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that results from such an approach.

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In many countries , more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food.

In the cutting-edge society, there is a significant increase in number of individuals opting for purchasing overseas nourishment instead of supporting local food. This is due tothe fact that residents have a propensity to try some rare food products. However, local commodities may be consumed more by raising taxes on imported food.

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In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development?

In many areas, the development of hiring not relating to the workers’ age plays a positive improvement on society due to the fairness between community and nation while some citizens believe it is negative because of the obstacles of older age giving for their workplaces. This author agrees with the statement that improvement is negative due to the high rate of homelessness among older public and unfair job.

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The plans show the layout of a public library now and how it will look after development.

Contained in the blueprint is the information pertaining to the alterations of public library at present and in the future.

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Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work than with their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days youngsters are involving to serious problems because parents are unable to take care of their kids due to tough work schedules. I am completely agree with the statement that social problems have their starts from lack of parental care and its side effects on mental health of young people.

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The most important aim of science sould be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is undeniable that scientific knowledges are the most vital for worldwide citizens in the world, and many people believe that particular science should be enhancement of human lives. I personally agree with this statement and the reasons why I agree will be examined in this essay.

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In many countries, boys and girls have to study in separate schools and colleges. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this policy.

Today’s world, boys and girls in educational area have to go to the schools and colleges which are separate in many countries. And this situation has been a subject of debate. It might be effectible for student’s grades but not for improvement for their emotional quotient.

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"In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What can be done to encourage people to buy local food?

In recent years, almost of people prefer buying imported food to local food, thus leading to finding out the benefits of food produced locally to reassure people to choose local food in their meal. This author belives that this is a positive development of regional food due to improving on cultivation high quality produces as international food and price reduction.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Taking risks became significant for individual’s lives, for their proffessional lives as well as their personal lives. Despite some possitive effects, I ceartinly believe that disadvantages are outweighed the advantages.

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Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find ur difficult to get a university education. University should make it easier for such groups to enrol. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Seeing how communities from rural areas were facing difficulty to experience higher education, society began to argue that universities could take the initiative by lowering their standards in order to make it easier for the low class people. I am agree with the argument. I believe that everyone should have the same chance in education. Additionally, studying in university can be a life-changing experience for the poors.

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Many people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops and public transport. Do you agree or disagree?

The vast majority of people believes that cell phones should be prohibited in several locations like libraries, shopping centers and public transportations.I do completeley agree with the statement as I think that these devices can be distarctive for the users and can make others concern about its misuse on specific locations.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foriegn language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country.Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foriegn language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One may argue that the only motivation for learning a foreign language is solely for work purpose. On the contrary, some people argue that there are many other reasons for someone to learn a foreign language. I am personally leaning towards the later statement and I will explain it in the next following paragraphs.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can the government do to reduce the amount of waste produced?

Global trash production numbers are increasing recently. I would say that the root cause of this situation is obviously capitalism. However, this is not a problem that impossible to be solved and there are some ways that the governments around the world can do to decrease the waste production numbers, which is through preventive law enforcement and sanction.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are students in college who learn other subjects outside their major to enrich their knowledges. While some people believe in that, other students argue that peple should pay attention in their major instead of learning other subjects because it might distracts their focus. In this essay we will discuss from both perspectives .

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Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language still could be advantageous

Learning foreign language is a hotly debated topic that divides many opinions.Some people argue that despite there are a lot of translating resources, learning a certain language methodically is a good choice that bring many benefits. In my opinion, I totally agree with that and these below passages will prove that.

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