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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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several people assert that the main cause of crime is an economically disadvantged background. However, others say that crime is casued by person's nature.

The casued of crime is a heavily studied topic in modern society. Many experts believe that crime is caused by poverty. However, others believe that crime is a result of a person's nature. Extensive research about these causes has not been able to produce a definite answer about the cause of crime.

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In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at 4 years old while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?

In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at 4 years old while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. Although education in Azerbaijan used to start at the age of 6, it has been starting at the age of 5 for the last 2-3 years. I am against starting at 5 years old because not all children have the same perception and at 5 years old they are still discovering new things on their own. I am in favor of them going to kindergarten until the age of 6 or 7, because it is stronger for them to start their socialization period there, to build relationships by playing games and having fun. In countries such as the United States of America and China, formal education begins at the age of 4-5, which depends on their cultural, social, and individual factors. In my opinion, this is a punishment for children because they take away the entertainment in their life and it is burdened at the earliest time of childhood. I don't agree...

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the past few years, there has been an ongoing trend about choosing career pathways. Is it better to work in one organization for a long time? Some people claim that it could benefit one’s life quality. However, I believe that having a job in different companies might give life experiences.

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Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to some, young folks spend a lot of their valuable time in shopping malls. They feel that shopping keeps their life interesting and acts as a great stress buster. However, it can lead to many downside effects not only for them but also for society. Hence, I support the claim that excessive spending on malls leads to negative effects and I the have following reasons to support my stance.

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Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is sometimes argued that young people are supposed to suffer same punishments as adults when break the law seriously. In my opinion, while children should take responsibilities for their behaviours, they are not ought to be punished severly.

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Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Whether or not individuals are likely to depend on each other is such a controversial argument. The writer believes that people tend to count on each other due to several reasons such as higher productivity and maintaining their networking relationship.

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people likes to travel or work in the time between highschool and university studies. what are advantages and disadvantages.

people like to travel or work in the time between high school and university studies, a lot of people like to travel or work before university studies, so in this essay, we will know the advantages and the disadvantages of work or travelling after high school.

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Some people think that it should be compulsory for people to retake their driving test every 5 years. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

Many people suppose that renewing driving license every 5 years is necessary to those drivers. The following paragraph will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this policy.

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Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In modern society, there has been growing public interest in establishing specialized sports centers which have various professional equipment. There are some people who have claimed that the government should provide sports facilities for ordinary citizens to motivate them to play sports. This is true; however, I also understand that the country should invest money in establishing specialized facilities to train capable athletes to promote countries worldwide.

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according to some recent researches rates for committing crime after a criminal's release is concerning at such high numbers, although unspecified

according to some recent researches rates for committing crime after a criminal's release is concerning at such high numbers, although unspecified. This writer firmly believes that the case resides in the contentment of prison life and the society as a whole of prisoners, which can be resolved by improving facilitites as well as providing treatment for those people.

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Today more and more people wants thing instantly (eg : goods, service, news). Why is this ? Is it positive or negative development ?

In recent years, there have been a lot of people who want things instantly such as goods, services, and news. This phenomenon happens because the greed of humans is increasing and this thing can bring negative development to personal life.

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Today more and more people wants thing instantly. Why is this?Is it positive or negative ?

Because of the high cost of living, the demand for people is higher and higher. That is why most people want all things immediately. From my observation, it will have a negative impact on humans and society.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweight the disadvantages?

Number of people who move to a different country for their higher education keeps increasing in every year. The trend peaks to a new level every years and saw no dip. And certainly this happens for many good reasons. And we are going to discuss about the factors which attract students to immigrate into a different nation.

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Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly. Why is it? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is argued that the prompt desire of things is increasing among people in today’s age. This essay will delve into reasons behind this trend and evaluate whether it represents a positive or negative development.

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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future lives. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Which of the two has more influence on children's careers - the experiences before going to school or in their teenage? Although social skills are instilled in the child before joining a school, In my perspective, the experience during teenage is more crucial as it creates a new identity for a person.

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is private cars banned from certain city centres. It is undeniable that private cars has become an essintial part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement as some people find banned private transport beneficial, while others consider everything associated with banned cars negatively

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is private cars. It is undeniable that private cars have become an essential part of our life. However, these days have many problems using private cars around the world.

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Many young people do not spend their holidays and weekends doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in natural environments. Why is this case? How can they be encoutaged to go out?

By the millenniums, adults’ preference about westing their weekends have been changed. Today they tend to spend their holidays by not doing physical challenges on the outside.It has wrong due to the fact that, they do not have enough data about this activities. teenagers will be involved into activities in natural, if the company will have a strong advertisement on social platforms.

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In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?

In the field of education and employment, some people choose to work harder than others. The reason for this phenomenon is because some people do not have priviledges in their life. However, to be a hard worker is not always a good thing.

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Many young people do not spend their holidays and weekends doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in natural environments. Why is this the case? How can they be encouraged to go out?

By the millenniums adults preference about westing their weekend have been changed. Nowadays they tend to spend their weekend by not doing physical challenges on the outside. It has wrong due to the fact that, they dont have anough data about this activities.Teenagers will be involved activities in natural, if the company strong advertisement on social platforms.

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nowadays, some employers think that formal academic qualification are mor important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. why is this? what extent do u agree or disagree?

In recent years, the employers show more interest in looking for those who have a high certificate comparing to experience in real life and personality traits. This phenomenon stems from recruiters completely believe in the assessment system at universities. However, the writer does not advocate this assumption because of more efficiency fostered by practical experience and good attitude by selecting employees with good personality.

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