IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 309

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to the cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

The occurrence of urbanization has impacts on the population in the countryside which are mostly decided to move to the cities. This development has both negative and positive effects on society. However, though urbanization has some disadvantages, it is strongly believed that its benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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Zoos are inhumane and pointless. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The morality of the zoo has been criticized by the critics for a long period of time leading to the controversial issue debating on the topic of whether the zoo is considered inhumane and pointless or not. Some may agree while some opponents may disagree. However, after a thorough consideration, though there are some benefits of the zoo, the drawbacks of the zoo should not be put down by any chance.

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Many manufactured food and drinkproducts contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

I would like to apply for three days of personal leave due to a family emergency that happened over the weekend.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

The sweet necter of science revolutionized and significantly increased the amount of food we can produce, it has not been able to guarantee the universal food security nevertheless. Socio-political instability and our irresponsible behaviour are the reasons among many. In this essay, I will talk about these reasons and propose some solutions to this problem.

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Children nowadays watch significantly more television than in the past, which reduces their activity levels accordingly. Why is this the case? What measures can you suggest to encourage higher levels of activity among children

It is universally acknowledged that technology dominants diverse aspects of life . In terms of educating the youth, emerging television, as an entertainment object, causes a tendency towards having sedentary lifestyles among juveniles . This essay will express the reasons for this awful phenomenon and also propose practical solutions to prevent it.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary era, the majority of people are showing an upward tendency towards using home remedies without considering their doctors' advice. While many argue that this shift brings convenience to individuals, I vehemently consider it as an absolute negative development due to the reasons this essay further elaborates on.

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19 .As the world has become technological advance, computer are replacing more and more jobs that maybe lose because of computer. Discuss at lear one problem that may result.

These days, the world is becoming more depnded in technology and the gadgets like computers are taking the place of the workforce in the businesses. This attitude has some problems that I will mention further.

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges related not only to the environment, but pollution and education as well. What problems your country will face in next years.

In this cutting-edge era,most companies are facing various problems,it may be related to poverty, education ,and unemployment.However ,nations across the globe suffering the important challenges,which is not regarding the environment,but the contamination and schooling as well.This essay will articulate predominant issues facing by our country in coming year,along with a relevant conclusion.

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some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different opinions about whether students should work competitively or work in teams. There are several benefits of working with other individuals, I believe that work alone in competitive environment is encouraged.

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The plan below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The given diagram illustrates the development of public park known as Grange park between its first opened in 1920 and nowadays.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

While it is widely claimed that numerous peoples prefer to be self-employed rather than working for a company or organisation, others think that it can be bring about some negative outcome as well. The reasons why this trend happened and some possible drawback of doing that will be elaborated on in this essay.

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An increasing number of larger shopping areas, malls and department stores are leading to the decline of smaller corner shops.What are the advantages and disadvantages of shopping in larger shopping center rather than smaller, more traditional shops? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Ratio of convinence stores in comparison to huge shopping centers are declining. These days, people perfer to buy items from big shopping complexes rather than the local vendors in their vicinity. This has both upside and downside which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Many people nowadays spend a large part of their time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is quite common to see individuals entertaining themselves with the help of technology in the society we live in today. Active people might turn to electronics to find some peace of mind which they lack in their daily routines while the inactive ones look for a transition from all the work to the content that sparks their interests.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The stability of the financial status of a nation has direct influences over its development. It is conspicuous that, recently most of the wealthy countries are willing to pay their patronage by donating money to diminish the lower economical levels of some developing countries.I totally agree with the notion that despite the provision of money,economically unstable people can be aided in more sustainable way, as discussed by the following essay

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It is better for students to live away from home while studying at univeristy than to live with parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Personally, I agree with this. Based on my experience. It will make the students more independent.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Owing to current popular political ideology and technological advancement, nowadays we have more options in contrast with the past. However, I disagree with this is too much as until this day, option availability is not universal and often influences by the those in higher position of power.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change, other, however, think that change is always a good things. Discuss both things and give your own opinion.

There are competing views on whether to make changes in life. Although change always involves risks, I still think that it is always good to make changes because, in the lang run, people wil gain more from the changes they made than they lose.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that in today's world subjects like Science and technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

As the technological advancements today, choosing curriculum subjects for students is very crucial for the generation developments. While some value the importance of history courses, others prioritized courses such as science and technology as the most important key. In my opinion, owing to students interest and ability, school should enable choices for their pupils to be able to select which subject they want to pursue.

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In many countries women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first month after the birth of their baby. Does advantage outweigh disadvantages?

Maternity is a well-known concept in which the preponderant role of all mothers is recognized as vital in the development of newborns. Then, some would argue that it must be mandatory to establish a specific pospartum period of time to allow bodies' mothers recovery their physiological homeostasis. I staunchly believe that all mothers have their own time, after giving birth, should have their own time not only for their health but also for the babies' growth. In this essay, I will explain my reasons in detail.

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Some countries encourage foreign companies to open in their country. Many people think that the government should focus on encouraging local business rather than foreign businesses. To what extent do you agree? (reported 2021, 2023)

The question of whether governments should prioritize foreign businesses is a complex and multifaceted issue , while it is vital promoting local enterprises should not be ignored.I believe the balanced approach which is taken by authorities could be more beneficial to address this issue

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