IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 309

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Is this a two-part question structure question?

Nowadays, children use their smartphones many hours each day. Improving technological devices and internet make children addicted to their devices and people argue that using too much smartphone has benefits or drawbacks to children.

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The range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Others think it has an opposite eﬀect. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

In this modern era, the technology is evolving per day and the nations are also developing themselves because of it . Due to this advancement, some individuals believe that as much as the range of technology available nowaday in the market is directly affecting the gap between the rich and the poor and this gap is also rosing. However, other people argue that this trend has reverse effect compared to the former view. As a result, both views are discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In today’s world, technology has become more advanced, and it helps people a lot to do their daily chores. In my point of view, out of these one of the highlighted role is played by smartphones. This essay further elaborates benefits and drawbacks of paying by using mobile phone applications.

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Today, newspapers and televisions are giving detailed descriptions on crimes. Some people believe such a practice will cause bad consequences and thus media should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion it's not suitable for a public media to share details of a crime with common people. Specially when we know that children may watch TV or listen to radio and come across with one of these details.

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Some people think advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because advertising makes individuals not satisfied with what they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Currently, there is growing awareness regarding the positive communication and negative sides of advertising. Some folks believe that advertisements are beneficial for economic development, while I believe that it has worse effects on society.

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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Since the beginning of time technology and its advancement in it have shaped the world. They have grown alongside humanity, while also helping it towards betterment. I do believe we go as far as to say that it has now become an integral part of our lives. But, does it always have a positive impact? Especially on our children and how they spend their free time with the new tech. I would strongly argue that this trend has in fact declined the physical and mental wellbeing of the infants. Which outweighs any advantages it may provide.

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In some cities of the world, cars are replacing bicycles. However, in some other cities, bicycles are replacing cars. What are the reasons for these two developments? In your opinion, which one better?

In the modern world, mode of transportation has change . Some people prefer four wheeler over bicycles while , other choose quite opposite . This essay will acknowledge the validity of this and elaborate the reasons.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Cheaper and highly accessible technology is now leading to more children and adults to study and work from home, although it has both positives and negatives, I tend to lean towards the positive aspects.

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Teenagers nowadays prefer interacting with people online rather than meeting one another in person.

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Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violent influence on TV and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Since years ago, cinema industry has drastic effect on various aspects of life sphere. People are exposed to diverse genres of movies, such as action, martial art, and thriller. It is debated that the violence of movies should be curbed with governmental decisions, and some advocate for non-limited degree of violence in movies.

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Challenge 3 : In today’s digital age, anyone with a smartphone can capture and share photographs. This accessibility to photography diminishes the value of professional photographers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that smartphones have a significant role in this days especially in photography. While it is a commonly held belief that the worth of executive photographers will reduce by the new evolution of digital smartphones, there is also an argument that opposes it, In my opinion, I consider that is something irrelevant and experts will not be impacted by the new technology.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In modern times, individuals prefer to have their own company and work for themselves rather than join an organisation. I believe this thing is due to the fact that working for yourself is much more easier and have some cons for individuals which no one can deny, however, there are some pros which need to be discuss like a lack of salary and no insurance.

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Young people are often influenced in their behaviors by others in the same age group. Some argue that peer pressure is important while others feel it has distinct disadvantages. Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages?

Youngsters now have a noticable effect on their behaviors by the people with the same age or at the same level, it is called peer pressure. Some believe that peer influence plays a significant role in teenagers life while others argue that it can have a bad influence. I believe that peer pressure can cause a positive impact sush as competitiveness and aspiration, while it can also lead to bad habits such as smoking sigarrets.

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In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common. Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move out of cities to rural areas. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

The increase in the number of people living in cities has become a significant issue. Some governments are trying to motivate society in order to immigrate to the countryside. The merits of this motivation is far more than its drawbacks.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The proccess of learning is the parent's responsibility, so many views are arising aroung the right of allowing children to not learn, some believe that children must learn during their first 18 years, while others reject that. In this report I will go through each side and present their claims, then I will say me position among this argument.

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In some countries, people these days spend little time with their children. What are the causes of this? Whome does this affect more, parents or children?

It is considered that in many countries parents not spend enough time with their offsprings and this problem can lead to many mental issues especially on children. In my point of view, all family members will be affected however 0-6 aged groups can be more impacts on this problem.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In these days, finding a profeesion requires transforming to another country. In this report I will go through the two aspects of this change, then alow me to share my position.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Upcoming days all transport systems will be free from drivers and individuals can travel like a passenger. I think there are more benefits than drawbacks.

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Many doctors say that people in the modern world do not exercise enough. What are the courses for this? What are the solutions to this problem?

People in the modern world do not exercise enough for various social, economical, and environmental factors. Various parties may need to collaborate in order to change this harmful lifestyle.

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Some people think that getting old is a negative thing, whereas others think it is much easier for people to live in modern society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Growing up is a natural mechanism inside all animals. People cannot avoid from getting old. While there are some voices claiming that became the elderly are easier to live in modern world, I tend to believe that having a young body are easier to live in the modern society.

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