IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 313

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The demand for coaching services has grown significantly in the digital age, with online coaching platforms becoming prevalent. Some now feel online coaching is a superior option to in-person coach. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, online coaching gets more and more popular. Some say that real life services are inferior towards the digital one's. Others prefer to stay in their home and talk to a camera. However, I entirely disagree that in person meetings bring less benefits.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people are risk-takers, while others tend to play it safe. The importance of risk taking in all aspects of people’s lives can hardly be overestimated, whether it is about career or casual daily activities. While there are both advantages and disadvantages associated with this topic, the negative aspects take precedence over the pros.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.

These days in many nations, the number of elderly people has risen more than ever before and this happening has made concerns about how these people can be beneficial or more of a problem for government. In this passage I am going to discuss why its disadvantages outweigh the benefits.

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Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

Food is one of the fundamental needs of the people. People are slowly increasing passion towards the taste of the food and some people are becoming crazy about the food. These people always require different tastes and invent new and easy methods to prepare food. These new inventions always change the lifestyle and let us discuss how it made the difference in our life.

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In the past when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own counrty. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

In the past students used to study in their own town when they were doing university degree. However, nowadays they have more opportunity to study abroad. And there are many advantages an disadvantages. Any

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

According to many people around the world are willing to find out more data about the places they live in.

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In many countries, people are now living longer then ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, in some parts of the world, people are living longer compared to previous decades. There has been a debate on wheather this population brings more problems to governments or more beneficial. In my opinion, the disadvantages of having elderly population outweigh the advantages.

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User Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Some argue that we should give more emphasize on learning English than learning local language in formal curriculae, however, many native languages are at risk of being forgotten if they are not being passed on. I think that, it is crucial for everyone to study English because it is a lingua franca and it should be useful in many aspects, but, our mother tongues should also be preserved through funding and various programmes by government and higher authority, as they are served as part of our cultures.

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Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by a few individuals that having a job at a major corporation is better than a small one. I completely agree with the this and my opinion will be discussed in detail.

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home.

Working from home has become increasingly popular, especially with advancements in technology that enable remote work. However, it also comes with its own set of advantages and disadvantages. In the following essay, I will delve into working from home, including both its upside and downside.

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Director wants to shoot a film in your city Suggest a place Why is it fascinating What time is it best to shoot

I am writing this letter to recommend you one beautiful spot in my city that in my perspective will be a good fit for your movie. First of all, I want to thank you for selecting my hometown to be shown in your movie, this will prove beneficial for my city’s tourism and economy. The place I want to highlight is the XXX Park at the top of Auora Hill in the heart of the city.

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Some people think that people should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family. Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job? What other factors should be considered?

In the modern era, due to increase in prices of every essential thing need to surive a majorit of individuals insist that, folks must take a job which provide a good and stable salary to provide security to their family members. It is true that money is a very essential factor in choosing a job and I agree with this view. Hence, my stance is further elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs as well as several other things must be taken into consideration when applying for a Job.

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Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Certain individuals believe that computers should substitute libraries because investment in libraries is draining resources. However, others suggest the opposite and also want the libraries to be preserved. From my perspective, the libraries are a great sources of knowledge and computers cannot make them redundant.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

As it is enunciated by a proportion, it is essential to make scientific discoveries by using fauna while, others contradictory viewpoint, it is illegal and it has a plethora of drawbacks on animals. Albeit there is a dichotomy of view on this concern ,these two apprehensions have various merits and demerits .In my view of point, some scientific investigations ought to be done by using fauna. I will provide interesting justifications and exemplify essential elements to justify my perspective.

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In some cultures, children are told they can achieve anything if they work hard. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In many cultures, a common refrain that people tell their children is “you can do anything if you work hard enough”. This message gives optimism to the children and gives a complex picture, but this may sound optimistic but also sounds unrealistic and they could result in disappointment.

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Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

A vast majority of cities are constucting residental zones by constructing high-rise buildings, while others creating housing by houses which is located on a wider area of land. Skyscrapers better, as they provided services which can help individuals to save their time and money, while individual place of residence requires a good amount of attention.

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Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the historical period we are living in, many people are moving to another city or country that can give him/her a working opportunity. Regarding this topic, there are different opinions in favour and contrast. However, in my opinion, advantages outweigh drawbakcs.

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Some children start school at 7 while others start school at 4. Does starting school at a young age have more advantages than disadvantages?

Nowadays, starting school at a young age being popular in some parents' decision. However, the others think that children should start their first school at older age like 7. I agree with the parents who decide to let their childer turn into school since younger age because it gaves them more advantages. In this essay, I will discuss about the benefits of this situation which outweigh the drawbacks.

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Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. what problems does this shortage case? what measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

In a modern society, problem of shortage aqua pura is becoming more significant and importance of this is increasing. The main cause of lack of pure water is pollution of resources which was giving drinking water to population, and the best solution for this problem is to help people to understand the significance of water by providing video clips about this catastrophe.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

In many places, people are in dire need of new homes, however the only place to built them is available in countryside. While few persons think it is not a great idea to construct new houses in the countryside. I think this is true because if people move to countryside there will be no land left for farming and as well as for the domestic animals. And it also leads towards environmental problems. I discuss my opinion in the following paragraphs.

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