IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 313

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices oneveryday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this age of change, there has been much dispute over whether allowing children to make their own choices every day which help to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Others believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. While it has been accepted that making decisions by themselves will affect their behaviors and thoughts.

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In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?

Some people in education and employment work harder than others.They believe that it is the fastest way to be more successful than their opponents ,however, not keeping the balance between rest and work may hurt anyone.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In our rather futurisric society for a number of reasons people are getting more interesed in the past of thier hometowns. With the help of rapidly ameliorating technology their desire to learn about history can be easily put into life. But what are the roots of such an eagerness?

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

In the current century, numerous medical discoveries and inventions have been found out, all thanks to the animal experiments. However, many counters this agrument based on animal cruelity and advice to banned such experimentations. In my opinion, animal experimentation is a crucial step for medical advancement and should be continued as it is. This essay will discuss both perspectives and provide a justification for the same with some alternatives.

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In many countries today the retirement age from work has been raised.Do the advantages of raising the retirement age outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that the retirement age has been raised increasingly popular in our modern society. This trend would introduce both pros and cons, but I think that the benefits do outweigh the drawbacks.

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Recently, there has been an increase in using machines to carry out the work instead of humans to do so. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of this development.

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Many jobs used to be done by hand, but nowadays an increasing number of them are done using machines instead. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development

Recently, there is an increase in using machines to carry out the work instead of humans to do so. This essay will discuss about the pros and cons of this development.

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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and town, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

Some teenagers are moving from the countryside to reside in urban centres, thereby leaving the elderly in the outskirts. This situation will leave older people struggling in life and it will also cause overloads in cities. However, to minimise these issues, the state can upgrade the countryside.

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In most developed countries shopping is not only about buying the goods you need, it is also perceived as entertainment. Is it a positive or negative development?

In modern days, entertainment is not only watching TV shows or going to some popular amusement park with our families but, we can entertain ourselves just by shopping. There are some downsides and advantages to this situation, therefore, in this essay I will discuss why we should agree this situation is negative for most developed countries.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Children are told that if they try hard enough then they can success in some cultures. I think it depends on the thing they work on also the situation they are in, so it is good to try hard but think throughly is far more important before we work so hard on something.

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The way children spend their free time has been altered by new technologies. Are the benefits of this greater than the drawbacks? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Hobbies play a very important role in shaping the personality of children. These days technology use has replaced physical activities that children must be highly involved in. I believe that the benefits and the drawbacks of this change are equal in amount.

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In many countries it is very easy to apply for and be given credit card. However, this causes some people to have problems with debt they cannot pay back. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Although credit cards are easily approved in several countries, however these quick approvals can sometimes lead to the problem of bad debt for banks. This essay will demonstrate how early approvals can generate benefits like liquidity and ease for customers but at the same time can lead to bigger issue such as uncertainity for banks and bad credit score for customers. Whilist acknowledging that there are plenty advantages of this scheme, the essay will argue that the advantages outweigh disadvantages.

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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families, individuals and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In different nations, global fast food takes the place of the local food leading to davestating effects on families and communties. While fast food is being favoured by many people, i totally agrea that its cons outweight its pros. Through this essay, i will discuss the effects of the competition between fast and local food.

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Some people think that robots are very important to human's future development, while others think that they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, the debate around advancing technology and artificial intelligence has intensified. People tend to question the vital role of robots in the future of mankind. Some researchers argue that machines will become the keystone in society’s development, whereas other claim the beneficial role of technology is overrated. Personally, I furthermost agree with the first assertion.

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and imagination than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

For a better development of skills and imagination of a child, adults are advised to do fun activities alongside the child instead of just reading. Whilst I believe that doing accompanying children to do enjoyable activties is necessary for the children's imagination and skill development, reading is also an important addition to fun activities for basic linguistic and comprehension development during early childhood.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with statement?

The is a trend among people to think that the main goal of science is to enhance live conditions humanity. I totally agree with this statement because scientists do amazing discoveries only for benefit to people. This essay will provide reasons for this opinion and some suitable examples.

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Some people believe that sport teaches children how to compete,while others believe that children learn teamwork To what extent do you agree or disagree

Although some people perceive that sports teaches a child to compete, while others argue that it develops social skills such as teamwork and friendships. I’m of the view that sports help to develop love and regard for each other and face challenges together.

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Many first year university students discover that their chosen subjects do not suit them.Why does this happen? What can be done to ensure that students choose a suitable subject?

In the contemporary epoch , subject selection plays an important role in shaping the future of an individual. Learning and understanding the future prospect will help to choose a respective major as a freshman.Numerous complications are faced by undergraduates while opting for major in first -year of university ,as they are not aware of their field of interest and lack future cognizant.

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In some countries, many people do not have enough money to access the Internet. Should governments be responsible for ensuring that everyone can get access to the Internet?

In some countries, many people do not have the internet access because they do not have enough money. The government should take responsibility for ensuring that everyone can get access to the Internet.This essay will argue the benefits of the Internet such as information access and wireless connection.

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In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

In certain countries around the globe, younger generation are refusing to vote. This essay will examine particular causes of this trend and possible solutions of this issue.

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