IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 314

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The first picture shows the current layout of a particular university’s sports centre, and the second picture illustrates some proposed changes in the future.

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The government has the responsibility to ensure the safety of its citizens. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. To what extent do you agree?

It is true that governement has a societal obligation to provide safety to the their community and to do so, it is essential for government divert more money towards defence than social benefits; as stated by many. I believe it is a somewhat true, to support my claim I would provide evidence and examples for the same.

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Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that children should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In a hustle and bustle world, people more and more want their children mature and independent as fast as they can, so that, some parents force their child to start school at a very young age. This essay totally agrees that it is more beneficial for children to start school at an older age due to getting love from family and being mature enough rather than starting school at an age which they should not.

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Some believe that violent computer games are just a form of entertainment, while others think they lead directly to violent behavior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world, everyone can acquire information from their devices such as iPhones throughout the internet. The majority of individuals of all ages utilize the online platform for seeking knowledge rather than books or daily magazines. I strongly agree with this statement. My opinion will be illustrated in the following paragraph.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In these days, some people are prefer buying a house than renting one because, it will be asset in their lifetime. On the contrary, some people choosing to rent the house or flat as it is cheaper and flexible. This essay will discuss positive and negative factor of both sides.

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The way many people interact with each other nowadays has dramatically changed because of technology. In what way has technology affected types of human relation ship? Has this been a positive or negative development?

It is undeniable that advanced technology are growing unstoppable, supporting people lives. It is considered by many that technology causes changes of interaction between people. As far as I’m concerned, technology do take a vital role and affects to people relationship in many aspects both positive and negative effects.

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some people believe that professionals, such as doctor and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some individuals agree with skill transfer and some others disagree. From my

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THE PROCCES SHOW PROCCES OF MAKING COCOA BEANS AND CHOCOLATE

The following chart shows the way in which cocoa beans are made and turned into chocolate.

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Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages four tourists who visit such places?

Recently, due to the development of the travel industry, many people are interested in various kinds of travel. Not only previously well-known travel spots such as London, Tokyo or New York, nowadays people are even more interested in discovering challenging places to trip such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. There are a few benefits and disadvantages to think of.

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Directors of large organisations recieve much higher salaries than ordinary workers. Some think it is necessary while other think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe the chairman of the company must earn higher salaries than other workers, however, there is another attitude which it is unfair. I know recieving unbalanced salaries might cause dissatisfaction and show the less contributions of the worker in company, but I disagree with that and I will examine and explain.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The advanced technologies of cars are promptly grows, and easily catch the attention from tech-savvy people. In the future, Some people believe that the vehicles likes cars, busses and trucks will have the driverless feature, fit with only passengers inside. As long as I’m concerned, the driverless vehicles might have a slightly drawbacks compared to its benefits.

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MANY PEOPLE AROUND THE WORLD USE SOCIAL MEDIA EVERYDAY TO KEEP IN TOUCH WITH PEOPLE AND GET NEW EVENTS. DO YOU THINK THE ADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES?

Nowadays, with the development of technology, people have many ways to keep contact with their relationships and access information and the most popular method is that they use social networking sites. This writer believes that the benefits of using social media outweigh the drawbacks.

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Difference between countries are becoming less evident.Nowadays,people are watching the same films,fashion,brands,TV channels.This is a disadvantage or advantage?

The difference between various countries is less evident.In the present day,the population are have the same favorite fashions,and brands,watch the same TV channels even the same films or programe.This author believes that this is a negative phenomenon due to having no various differences in culture between countries and easy to-lose characteristics that make people different.

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The movements of people from the villages to the cities for work has caused a lot of problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

Over the past few decades, there has been a notable trend of people migrating from rural areas to urban centers, resulting in a host of challenges for both cities and villages. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the primary issues arising from this phenomenon and propose potential solutions to address these complex problems.

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More and more people are relying on their private cars as a major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

Without clean oxygen, humans cannot live on earth.Many human beings are currently using private vehicles as the only convenient transport system, however, cars can cause some drawbacks around the world such as pollution and it is also expensive to use. Thus, the government must introduce electric cars with less pollution.

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Many companies today sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that this is a good thing for the world of sports. Others think this has disadvantages. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In the modern era, it is the best method for donor sports to advertise their companies. It is often argued that it is the most effective way for the world of sports while others believe that this is the drawback of sports.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors, engineers and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The number of migrants moving from their home countries that are underdeveloped is snowballed by the allure of rich countries. There are a multitude of problems that arise due to such trend and need to be reduced. This has to be tackled with some effective strategies which will be explored further in this essay.

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Some people think parents should take childcare training courses. do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by some individuals that all parents ought to take childcare coaching. In my opinion, i agree with the notion that every parent, this day, should take some training about how to take care of their child because it will lead them in the right direction in terms of being good parents.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.

It is necessity for persons to take risks in their professional and personal lives. The risk takers may get failure initially, however, I believe that later on they achieve the success. The essay will discuss both merits and demerits and argue it.

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Some people believe the best way to deal with the problem related to traffic and transportation is to encourage people to live in cities rather than in suburbs and the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is an argument that someone believe that if all people move to urban areas, the problems related to traffic and transportation will be solved immediately. I firmly disagree. Although there is an advantage such as reduction of using private cars, there will be some disadvantages for people who live in city center.

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