IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 348

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays for many people internet is replacing books. What is your opinion?

In today's era of the modern world, the Internet is taking the place of books as a source of information. I do believe that Internet is preferred by many people, However, some people still read books. In this essay, I will discuss my opinion.

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Some people argue that arts such as painting and music are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other public services. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

WHILST OTHER PEOPLE ARE DEBATING IF ARTS INCLUDING PAINTING AND MUSIC ARE DRAINING THE FUNDS OF THE GOVERNMENT,SOME BELIEVE THAT THIS MONEY IS BETTER OFF TO BE SPENT ON OTHER PUBLIC NEEDS.I STRONGLY AFFIRM THE LATTER VIEW AS THERE ARE OTHER NECESSITIES THAT THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD FOCUS ON, AND THIS INCLUDES POVERTY . PRESENTLY, MANY FAMILIES FROM DIFFERENT PARTS OF THE WORLD ARE EXPERIENCING difficulty TO ITS HIGHER LEVEL ,TO THE EXTENT THAT THEY COULD NOT EAT MEALS AT LEAST THREE TIMES A DAY AND CAN NOT PROVIDE FOR THE BASIC NEEDS OF THEIR FAMILY AND THEMSELVES.FOR INSTANCE, IT WAS RECORDED THAT MANY FILIPINO PEOPLE SUFFERED IN starvation BECAUSE OF THE LACK OF JOBS.AS A RESULT,MOST OF THEM ARE LIVING IN SLUMS AND IN BAD CONDITIONS DUE TO NEGLECT FROM THE GOVERNMENT. FURTHERMORE,FOCUSING ON ARTS LIKE PAINTING AND MUSIC IS NOT REALISTIC AS NOT ALL PEOPLE CAN ENJOY THIS KIND OF TALENT.GIVING ATTENTION TO MORE IMPERATIVE NEEDS OF THE POOR CAN HELP THEM ALLEVIATE THEIR DAILY HARDSHIPS....

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Most employers nowadays put increasing emphasis on social skills. Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualification for job success. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days the majority of employers require good social skills. While these social skills could improve employee management and bring effective networking, these social skills could not determine exact qualifications and abilities.

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some people believe govt must apply high taxes to provide good public service to everyone. Give your opinion

It is generally accepted that some people argue that the government offering high taxes, will lead a better public service for residents. This essay will demonstrate why the more expensive taxes will be more beneficial to society services throughout the following paragraphs.

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Computers these days can translate all kinds of language with great accuracy. Hence, our children will not need to learn more languages in the future. Do you agree or disagree?

Title: The Importance of Language Learning in an Era of Advanced Translation Technology

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According to observations, some animal species have become extinct or endangered in recent decades.What are reasons behind this tendency?What effects it may have on ecosystem in general?

Recently, a growing number of animal species have been harmed and become on the verge of extinction. There are numerous underlying causes that I am going to delve deeper into, in order to reveal their possible effects.

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Some people believe that hospitals should spend money on equipment. Others think it would be better to spend money hiring doctors and nurses. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A number of individuals assumed that hopitals must distribute budget on medical tools. Meanwhile, others suggest it is preferreable to assign money by recruiting more professionals such as doctors and nurses. I will discuss both views, and in my opinion it is important for health centre to increase more advanced medical tools, because there are many demand to handle more serious disease as long as health centre have enough number of professionals.

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TASK 2 The most important aim of science should be to improve people lives To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Nowadays, we are living in a world with the advents of science. Not only it brings along benefits as for the aspect of studies, but it is also applying that increased life-quality of citizens. In my personal viewpoint, I strongly agree with this assertion and this essay will elaborate on my reasons.

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Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree?

There has increasingly been a discussion about whether developed countries have a right to help other countries suffering from health problems and education. I will explore which policies about assistance are decent or not in this essay as concisely as possible.

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many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access for software Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvanages?

Nowadays several people provide personal information to technology websites and applications to obtain access. Some people believe that this trend has several disadvantages, others argue that it is not harmful. I totally agree with the latter argument as ample reasons present to substantiate it. This essay would delve into both viewpoints and explain my support with relevant illustrations.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

Today's fast pacing generation mostly teenagers every time they tend to try sugar-based drinks.And due to the fact that the consequences are apposite for teenagers health.In the forthcoming paragraph, I will explain and discuss why people like sugar-based drinks and what are the solutions for not using these kinds of drinks in their lives.

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

Nowadays, many people are struggling with their jobs because they do not like it or do not have enough talent to apply for better organizations or just have more valuable jobs. In my mind, it can happen because of parents. When children are going to study at university their parents, in most cases, are deciding what major will their son or daughter have. Moreover, some people do not believe in themselves and can not work harder to get more opportunities and knowledge for better jobs. Respectively, in our time we have so many workers who do not like their job.

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Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many individuals dispute that hard work and desire to lead to sucess, however, some people think that having money and apprearance can suceed in life. In my point of view, I support the idea that hard working and determination can lead to sucess.

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In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion

Currently, the whole world has seen a growth in average lifespan, which becomes a controversial issue. From my perspective, there are both benefits and drawbacks in rising longevity.

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International air travel has a negative impact upon the environment and should therefore be restricted.Do you agree or disagree?

Travelling through air is one of the quickest way to reach other countries. Some say that air travel has great impact towards the environment whilst others disagree on it. Although, I believe that flights affects the environment through high carbon emission and it also stops the bird migration due to the the radiation.

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full time university students spend a lot of time studying.some say they should do other activities too.To what extend do you agree or disagree?

many college pupils tend to spend excessive time on studying, while there are some arguements that these indiviuals ought to implement several jobs or hobbies. this writer believes firmly agree that the experiences from life's activties can make these students more mature and possess lots of knowledges from the surrounds.

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some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

in the modern era, many individuals show appreciate of effort and hard working in human life but other people hold the opposite view that it is better to prior finance and the way they look as the most vital things in order to succeed. From my perspective, I believe that determination and hard work will help people get success in both aspect of work and life and this essay will elaborate more on both views by exemplifying ucid instance.

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Additional police enforcement is the most effective alternative to reduce the number of car accidents. Do you agree or disagree?

In contemporary times, one school of thought holds that strengthening the polices' human resources is the best way to decrease the rate of vehicle accidents. While I accept that perception is somewhat justified, I believe that there are other factors that might result in logical opposition.

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Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, there are some developments in space exploration. However, some argue that it is a waste of money and that governments should invest in other properties for national benefits. I completely agree with this opinion. In this essay, I will discuss this opinion and why I believe that it is better for governments to spend money on other things.

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it is important for people to take risk both in their professional lives and their personal lives . Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweighs the disadvantages?

In contemporary society, individuals are often confronted with decisions that require them to weigh the benefits and drawbacks of taking risks in both their professional and personal lives. This essay will argue that despite the inherent uncertainties associated with risk-taking, its advantages far surpass its disadvantages, as it fosters innovation, resilience, and personal growth.

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