IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 435

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that old buildings should be protected by law. Others, however, think that they should be replaced by new buildings. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

These days, there are so many historical places have been destroyed to expand more residential areas. However, several places are legarly protected, so these cannot be demolished. Some argue that the legal requirements should be applied to keep the old buildings while others feel that rebuilding shuld be allowed. In my opinion, historical buildings are significantly important because that brings more people to visit these places and has economical benefits. This essay explore the reasons behind this and provide some examples.

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Ever year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, we are living in a world with the advents of several remarkable moderns. And communication between countries is urgent. However, a group of people who believe that linguistic diversity is not vital, bring a struggle to talk to each other. In my personal viewpoint, I strongly disagree with this assertion and this essay will acknowledge the validity of this statement and elaborates on my reasons.

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In spite of the advances in medicine, many people around the world still die of easily preventable diseases. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Beyond doubt, although there have been a lot of progresses in the medical science, many people suffer from some illnesses which are avoidable. I will delve into the main reasons, and I will explain how people can avoid these questions.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people，however，think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary society, the prioritization to economic development has sparked discussions among invididuals. Some contend that the human development relies drastically in the econimic progress, whilst others argue that efforts should be focused in developing other aspects instead of solely in boosting economy such as environment sustainability. In my viewpoints, both opinions hold their merits, meanwhile I maintain that the intergative development should be the prominent goal.

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Some people believe that schoolchildren should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The debate over homework in education is longstanding, with proponents and opponents both presenting valid arguments.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that teenage years are the best periods because of the lack of things we have to do, while others claim that although it brings more duties, being a major brings more joy because they can decide by themselves and they have enough money to spend, and this is why I think the best term of our lives are the times we are over 18.

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Some people believe that to protect local culture tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable and that banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

Nowadays, local culture has gained consideration among people who want them to be protected from visitors, as it can reduce the value of their characteristics, whereas others believe that the action will cause disadvantages. In my opinion, that action can cause financial drawbacks both in small and large scale.

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Some people think that it is an individual responsibility to take care of an environment but others think it is the government's job to do so. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion

Nowadays, the debate over whetever people must be concerned about environment or government should undertake the responsibility for taking care of surroundings has become the center of question. This essay will shed light on both points of views and reveal my personal perspective.

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Some people like to spend their leisure time after work with co-workers while others prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some folks enjoy spending their free time with co-workers, other group of people choose to keep their private activities and work life separated.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the work place. why is this hapenning? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

Study online and apply more A.In technology and smart devices in recent years, artificial bits of intelligence have been able to develop learning experiences and help from virtual websites has been more positive than negative.

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SOME COMPANIES SPONSOR SPORTS AS A WAY TO ADVERTISE THEMSELVES. SOME PEOPLE THINK IS GOOD, WHILE OTHERS THINK THERE ARE DISADVANTAGES TO THIS. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The group of companies are advertising themselves by sponsoring sports. While many people think is profitable, others believe there are cons of this. I am going to discuss both points of view and give my own opinion.

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it is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Some people believe that punishment is necessary to help learn the difference. However,other groups do not agree with that. In my opinion,punishment is necessary for children to learn something.

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Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a debatable topic whether the government should cover all the educational cots for citizens until they complete their university degrees. In my opinion, I agree with this statement some extent, but also disagree because this gives society to improve their educational levels, but also this decreases the number of students who eager to complete their studies. This essay will explain the reasons behind these opinions and provide examples.

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Many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialize with others. What problems do children face when going online without parental supervision? How can these problems be solved?

In the modern era, many parents have no control over the content that their children may encounter on the internet. This can cause a lot of difficulties both for the young children and their families which can be tackled by some fundamental changes that I'm going to explain in the rest of this essay.

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in some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

In recent times, the trend of getting a personal fitness coach is gaining popularity and more people are inclining toward it, rather then going out to play sports of do physical excercises. This is due to the hectic life style of a person or his popularity, where he is not able to attend a gym or sports ground and it should be considered as a positive development as it not only allows a person to stay healthy, but also create oppurtunites and employement options for many online fitness trainers.

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Many people believe that the high level of violence in films and TV programmes today is causing serious social problems. What are the problems caused by excessive violence in films and TV? How could these problems be reduced.

It is a well-established fact that films and TV programmes contain a lot of violent scenes. And those scenes have influenced people’s lives in a great way. There are 2 principle reasons for this.

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Some people believe that advertisements aimed at children should be banned. Others argue that advertisements have a positive impact on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that adverts targeted to kids should be prohibited whereas others claim that they have an advantageous effect on youngsters. This essay disagrees that promotions have an advantage to teenagers. In as much as they assist them to find out cost effective playgrounds and plan on how to visit the area, they may negatively affect them by draining their minds to unhealthy programs such as cartoons.

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People aim to achieve a balance between their work and personal life, but few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problem? How to overcome it?

It has been universally accepted that problem of low achievement of balancing personal life and profession is escalating at an alarming rate. The problem is bringing a state of depression among the masses and in economy too. There are plethora of reasons of the same and it's possible solutions can be suggested which are discussed as follows.

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In some countries, people's weight has significantlyincreased, while their levels of health have decreased. What do you think may be the causes of this problem,and what solutions can you suggest to solve them?

Obesity has become a common health disease among people all over the world. There are several factors that contributes to this disease and I will discuss those in this writing, along with remedies to curb this issue.

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In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work fro home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

As time passed, the way of working has changed among people. Since technology has improved, numerous new developments have come across. Furthermore, instead of going to work offices every day, many people tend to work from home and do their tasks online. This method has come forward with various pros and cons.

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