IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 434

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Scientific research confirms that the majority of humans use a plenty of fast food and it is extremely harmful for their body. However, some individuals presume that education enables human to deal with this issue through the essential knowledge provided for consumers, whereas some think that this method will not be efficient at all due to the popularity of junk food all around the world. This writer believes that the educational system more or less reduces the impact of this kind of refreshment.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foregin language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Today we live in an era which the whole Earth has shrunk and become a global village. More an more people choose to seek job opportunities and pursue further studies overseas, meanwhile, the language barrier becomes a major concern. To some extent, I agree with that speaking a foregin language can result in issues such as misunderstanding and adapting to a new environment, but I believe these problems can be solved.

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Scientists agree that many people eat too mucch junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Lots of researchs illustrate that there is an increase in population consuming fast food, which affects negatively on their health. Whether this matters can be dealt by education or not is a controversial topic. Although many people argue that this solution is possible, this writer opposes this opinion due to service and addictive substances of junk food.

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It is imporatnt for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?What sort of punishment should parents and teahcers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Early years for children are crucial as it is imperative for them to know about right and wrong at this stage of life, also, punishments are necessary to help them in getting this distinction. I totally agree with this notion, even though, punishments can be varied from harsh to soft, I believe that soft punishments will make them good behaved.

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Some people think that children are having to much free time and this time should be use to study more

One school of thoughts believe that nowadays youngsters have a lot of spare time, and that should be utilized to improve academic performance. I agree to some extent that children should invest their time studying but I believe that children should consider going out and engaging in extra-curicular activies to spend thier spare time. In the folowing essay I will discuss the importance of resourcefully utilizing the time.

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in many countries doday,crime novels and tv crime dramas are becoming more and more popular why do you think that these books and tv shows are popular? what is your opinopn of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

In many nations, crime novels and crime shows has started trending and large number of audience is taking interests in such genere. In my essay I will be dicussing in detail about the inclination of audience in TV crime dramas.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning foreign language is in order to trawel or to work in foreign country. Others say that this are not only the reason why someone should learn foreign language. Discuss both this views and give your own opinion.

IT is a common myth among masses that one should learn foreign language to get a job in foreign country or for travel purpose. Nowadays, there are so much employment oppurnities are available for people who can speak, translate, and write languages like German, French, mandarin, Japanese and so on.

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Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in newspapers and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people assume that consuming information daily through newspapers and news channels serves them no purpose. I completely disagree with the aforementioned statement and will explain my reasonings in following passage.

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Some people feel that playing computer games has a nagative impact on children's health and social skills. Others say that it can have a positive impact on their lives. Discuss both these views.

The advancement in technology has created an evolution in the field of computers and the invention of computer game is a by-product of this process. Although some people believe that computer game affects the development of a child others are of the opinion that it benefits children in future. This essay will discuss these two arguments in detail.

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(VMN)Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

As excessive consuming fast food is considered to adversely affect to the human health, whether this concern can be tackled by the education is a recent debation.From the author's prospective, the strength of educating is noticeable but not sufficient to limit the trouble, due to the individual's awareness and their harsh schedules.

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Many people work for long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or disadvantages

In today's fast-paced world, many people find themselves working long hours in order to meet the demands of their jobs. This leaves very little time for leisure activities, such as spending time with family and friends, pursuing hobbies, or simply relaxing. While some may argue that working long hours has its advantages, such as financial stability and career advancement, the disadvantages of this situation far outweigh the benefits.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

A few people believes that having a default retirement age for all the elderly people above 65 years regardless of their occupation is unfair. They think that specific employees are deserved to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. This essay agrees with this statement. Firstly it will discuss the health issues that an elderly people are facing. Following that it will discuss regarding the type of workers should be benifited from early retirement.

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Investment in local amenities such as leisure centres is the best way for the government to foster a good comuninty spirit. To what extent do you agree or disagree

These days, people are talking about activity, some people say the government should development event place. Other people have a different way of thinking they say the government is not responsible for development of local amenities. Personally, I believe development of local amenities has more positives than negatives, in this essay I will give my reasons.

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In some countries around the world men and women are having children later in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

Nowadays, people choose to push back having and raising next generation in certain countries. At the same time, however, there is some uncertainty as to the causes of this trend and its influence on societal and personal life. In this essay, I will examine the reasons and impacts of this development to reach a conclusion.

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Some People say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that a key natural issue nowadays is the dying of specific trees and species while others say that there are more vital environmental issues. (This essay will discuss both the given views and I will conclude my opinion at the end of the discussion) 37

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Many feel that the common educational system of teachers and students in a classroom will be replaced by the year 2050. Do you agree with this view? Give your opinion.

The conventional method invloving teachers and students is an ubiquitous form of teaching across the globe. While some people believe that school training is an essential way to educate children, majority are of the opinion this system will be substituted by modern approaches such as onlineschooling in the forthcoming years.In my opinion, both these systems will prevail irrespective of the fast moving technological advancements.

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Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. what problems does this shortage cause? what measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

Having fresh water is a fundamental element in our lives because it has a direct correlation with people's health and quality of life. However, there has been a growing concern regarding the ever-decreasing of freshwater these days, which has detrimental effects all over the world, irrespective of people and flora. This is harmful because it contributes to people's health and ecosystems.

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Some people believe that animals must be used for conducting laboratory tests, while other people think that animals are innocent creatures and we must not exploit them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People are calling into question using animals for conducting laboratory tests, while some individuals believe that we must use animals for testing. Others assert that animals are innocent creatures and we must not exploit them. Both sides present rational justifications that will be explained.

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Many social media accounts are fake. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

In these days and ages, there is a phenomenon that there are many accounts on the social flatforms are fabricated. This problem is attributable to the misinformation and the scam on the network, but it can be tackled by the strict censorship from the cybersecurity checkers.

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Nowadays, more and more foreign students are going to English-speaking. countries to learn the international language English. It is undoubtedly true that studying English in an English speaking country is the best way, but it is not the only way to learn it. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

Although learning English through living in English-speaking countries is one of the best ways to learn this language, but it's not the only way. There are numerous ways that a learner can achieve their goal in learning the language by using them. For instance, watching movies and videos, reading English intructor books, searching for educational videos on the internet and etc...

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