IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 434

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Today more and more people wants thing instantly. Why is this?Is it positive or negative ?

Because of the high cost of living, the demand for people is higher and higher. That is why most people want all things immediately. From my observation, it will have a negative impact on humans and society.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweight the disadvantages?

Number of people who move to a different country for their higher education keeps increasing in every year. The trend peaks to a new level every years and saw no dip. And certainly this happens for many good reasons. And we are going to discuss about the factors which attract students to immigrate into a different nation.

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Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly. Why is it? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is argued that the prompt desire of things is increasing among people in today’s age. This essay will delve into reasons behind this trend and evaluate whether it represents a positive or negative development.

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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future lives. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Which of the two has more influence on children's careers - the experiences before going to school or in their teenage? Although social skills are instilled in the child before joining a school, In my perspective, the experience during teenage is more crucial as it creates a new identity for a person.

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is private cars banned from certain city centres. It is undeniable that private cars has become an essintial part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement as some people find banned private transport beneficial, while others consider everything associated with banned cars negatively

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is private cars. It is undeniable that private cars have become an essential part of our life. However, these days have many problems using private cars around the world.

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Many young people do not spend their holidays and weekends doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in natural environments. Why is this case? How can they be encoutaged to go out?

By the millenniums, adults’ preference about westing their weekends have been changed. Today they tend to spend their holidays by not doing physical challenges on the outside.It has wrong due to the fact that, they do not have enough data about this activities. teenagers will be involved into activities in natural, if the company will have a strong advertisement on social platforms.

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In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?

In the field of education and employment, some people choose to work harder than others. The reason for this phenomenon is because some people do not have priviledges in their life. However, to be a hard worker is not always a good thing.

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Many young people do not spend their holidays and weekends doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in natural environments. Why is this the case? How can they be encouraged to go out?

By the millenniums adults preference about westing their weekend have been changed. Nowadays they tend to spend their weekend by not doing physical challenges on the outside. It has wrong due to the fact that, they dont have anough data about this activities.Teenagers will be involved activities in natural, if the company strong advertisement on social platforms.

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nowadays, some employers think that formal academic qualification are mor important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. why is this? what extent do u agree or disagree?

In recent years, the employers show more interest in looking for those who have a high certificate comparing to experience in real life and personality traits. This phenomenon stems from recruiters completely believe in the assessment system at universities. However, the writer does not advocate this assumption because of more efficiency fostered by practical experience and good attitude by selecting employees with good personality.

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In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In modern days, people are able to live longer lives compared to how they used to in the past. This raises some concern to a some as longer living people mean there will be less job opportunites for newer generations. However, other argue that the longer life expectancy brings benefits such as better mental wellbeing of common folk due to having more time to live and spend with their loved ones. I believe that the advantages nor the disadvantages outweigh each other.

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Some people see sports only as a leisure activity, while others believe sports play a more important role. Discuss both views and give your option.

Whilst many think that playing sports is just a source of entertainment, I believe that participation in different sports have many benefits becasue games helps a person to stay physically and mentally healthy, and sports also increases competetive spirit among individuals.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Animal testing nowadays is considered to be very inhumane by some individual groups. However, in others' beliefs, experimenting on animals led to important scientific discoveries. In my opinion in some cases animal experimentation could be justified because of their contribution to the innovations in the field of science. However, it is not the sole contributor to the development of science, as in vitro method has been proven to be a good alternative in some situations.

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Some people think that children are having to much free time and this time should be use to study more. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

There is an opinion saying that youngesters need to study more than wasting their time on their leisure time. I believe that having enough spare time is crucial for every single child.

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The unlimited use of cars may cause problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars? Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

A controversial belief has arisen about using cars, many people believe that it is essential to reduce using them because of the various problems that they cause. In this report, I will present some harmful sequences of using them, and then I will explain why people should avoid this kind of transportation.

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Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Every person has their own perspectives of success. Some believe that a proper measurement of success is either career or education. For instance, they strive so hard to achieve the highest position in their jobs. Meanwhile, others try to accomplish a certain degree. Those are just a few examples of how people define success. Of course, we have very broad definition of success since we come from a different environment with some distinct personal traits. A further explanation about success from my point of view will be presented below.

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In recent years, many small scale local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to to shopping. Is it a positive or negative development?

A time ago it was noticed that many unknown shops had been shut down, because buyers used to visit malls or any big shopping area. I believe this is a positive development, it has opened opportunities for employment and also malls are providing convenience to their customers.

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Some people think that all unviersity students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowaday, there are many gigantic grow of education factors due the need of the job opportunities. Due to this effect, a group of people believe that colleage student motivated to pick the course subjects that they want, while some people believe that only the science and technology subjects should be allow while it will be provided positive impact for their future. For my opinion both of the ideas are have a difference benefit and might be fit in some situations.

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In developing countries, rural children have less access to education.some people say that this problem is solved bquestoiy providing teachers and schools. Other think that computer and internet should be provided. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is unfortunate that in the midst of vast progress in every field of city lives, there are also some impoverished areas where education is not accessible for every child. To tackle this issue, some people suggest to send teachers and build schools, others advocate for distant learning by providing Internet and digital devices. I believe both measures can solve the problem, however, the former idea is more cost-effective and beneficial to local children.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is positive or negative development?

In this new era with high prevalence of entrepreneurs, the creation of innovative products has become more popular, mainly because of the competitiveness and the necessity to improve their marketing. I consider that their positive impacts outweigh negative ones, and in this essay, I will explain my reasons in detail.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is no matter what period people live in, learning as well as education is something we must do, to contribute to a better life. Nowadays, some university students want to learn about other subjects beside their main courses. On the other hand, a part of other believes that spending all their time and attention to studying for a qualification is more significant. In my opinion, I prefer the former statement to the second idea.

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