IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 809

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions of this issue?

It is said students leave secondary school without learning the method how to manage their financial aspect. There are many reasons why children leave high school without learing how to manage their money including, school curriculum do not have materials about financial management, a lack of awareness among children about value of money, however there some measures to addressing this issue including, introduce a new subject in school about money management, raise the awareness among children about value of money.

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In Britain when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other people where the nurses look after them.sometimes the government has to pay for this care.who do you think should pay,the government or the family?

This practice of arranging old folks to stay in a welfare home and hiring nurses to take care of them has been in the British system for quite some time. I do agree that government do cover the expenses for senior citizens if they are unable to pay due to unforeseen circumstances. I would like to argue that both families and government hold the fair share of responsibilities to take care of the senior citizens.

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Most employees do job interviews before offering position to a person. Do you think this is the best way to do it or are there better alternatives? What is the best method of choosing employer in your opinion?

These days, who give to the occupation someone before they doing discussing to a person. Personally I believe that way to do it more than better. This essay I will discussing the way about befor given the occupation more than better to do discussing .

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Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, many schools have a tendency of assessing the ability of teachers to maintain their educational quality. There are plenty of statements suggest that these schools should survey their students to know how competent teachers. Although this task can be time-consuming, in my opinion, I believe that this is the effective way to judge teachers.

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Some people believe that once a person becomes a criminal, he will always be a criminal. Do you agree with the statement? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Nowadays in this modern era, most of the societies are becoming materialistic with more focus on earning money without concerning about how and its source. This is primarily a sole reason for more criminal activities in our society. Most of the people think that once a person becomes criminal, he will always be a criminal, however I do not agree with the statement at all. With proper guidance and thorough rehabilitation, the criminal can be a nice person with having an understanding of right and wrong.

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Countries spends large amount of money on sports competitions. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Undoubtedly, the increasing popularity of various sports including Olympic Games have become a major factor for many countries. Because of this development, millions and ofbillions dollars of investment was done by not only the government not private organisations also. It seems to me that, evolving effects in competitive sports will generate more benefits than problems themselves.

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It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solutions?

Nowadays, many people suppose that people in the cities hardly to take fully physcial exercise. In this essay, I will give some reasons and suggest my solutions for this situation.

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Countries are becoming mor and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In this contemporary era, as a result of globalization, people are able to buy the same goods where ever they live. Although it can affect local manufacturers in negative ways, I opine that the beneficial aspects of this phenomenon outweigh its drawbacks.

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An increasing number of young people are traveling overseas to study . is this positive or negative development

There in no doubt that these days more and more students are prefering to study out of their countries therefore, there are two different opinions people decided to consider seperatly, one is with evolution and the other is not .

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It is suggested that all young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work, helping people in the community.

In this day and age, there are some people who belive that the youths should be obliged to provide aid to people in the community for a short-term period, albeit free of income. This arrangement, would seemingly disadvantage in certain aspects, actually possesses many merits that, in my opinion, would overshadow the drawbacks.

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Many famous athletes advertise different products. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Although advertising various of goods is thought by some to be a perfect choice for popular athletes, other people think that it can be detrimental. In my opinion, I consider that advertising products can bring about more advantages for athletes compared to any problems it might bring.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to gibe longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views

Today It is impossible to imagine modern life in peace. Although the government does everything for level of crime diminishing, it still continues to be a huge problem in society, that makes inhabitants think about this issue. While the majority believe that prolongation of prison sentences is the best route to eradicate criminality, others argue that there are more effective ways to provide unassailable world.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways for reducing crime. Discuss both views.

Currently, the society we live in is struggling with a great number of issues, one of them being the continuous rise of the crime rate. Because of this, people often wonder whether they ought to make a change in the system. While many believe that extending the prison sentences will be the best way to guarantee a safe environment, others claim that there are much better courses of action.

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Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or not agree?

To get a success in our lives, we can not deny how lucky we have been given that were not from our efforts. However, it is not all the time we can stay under a tree to wait fruit falling down at our mouths; we need to labour suffieciently to get our rewards. So I do not agree tally that someone’s achievements come from by luck.

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The key to solving the environment problems is for the present generations to sacrifice their convenient lifestyle for the sake of future generations. Agree/disagree?

Although many people believe that sacrificing the modern lifestyle by the present generation is the only key to solving environmental problems, I think in a reverse manner and disagree with the given statement. My inclination is justified in the following paragraphs.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives To waht extent do you agree ordiasgree with this statement?

The most significant purpose of science should be to increase individuals’ lives. This essay partially agrees with the statement and it will elaborate the reasons behind it.

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Some people regard eating meat as completely wrong. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, many people choose to be vegan for their health or due to their allergies. However, some people think that consuming meat is wrong. Personally, the statement is not sensible and agreeable because humans commonly eat meat in their diet. There are reasons to this support.

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It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. therefore physical education and sports should be compulsory for all students in all schools. what do you think.

In recent years,whether in all schools should be compulsory for all students who study physical education and sports or not has caused a controversy. although this trend is nost without disadvantages will be far over shadow.

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It is often said that to become a successful business a tertiary education is not at all necessary. To what extent you agree or disagree. Give your opinion.

Education is a key for being profitable and it is cumbersome to lead a job market without it; however there are some who believe that higher education is not essential to grow in any business field. Personally, I am not totally agree with this idea and this essay will discuss my point of view in the following paragraphs, including some examples from my own experience.

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Some people believe that young people who commit serious crimes，such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals opine that underage children who are barely 18 years of age should be sentenced the exact same as mature people who have been charged with unavoidable offences, such as mugging or serious physical threats. I strongly disagree with this concept. This essay will explain the differences along with my perspective in upcoming paragraphs.

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