IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 812

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Buying things online such as books, flight tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of such purchases outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, an Internet play vital role by means of online shopping, booking goods and other multiple uses. The usage has been drastically increased apart from several years ago. More than 90% of world population do their needs by themselves. The upcoming paragraphs explained about advantages and disadvantages of an online business.

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Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think that success is much related to mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Success can be achieved in many ways, but i strongly believe that the essence of devotion and discipline, especially in sports is based on mental attitude.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people argue that higher education is the key to accomplishing a career, while others argue that finding a job as soon as you leave school is the best method to succeed in their profession. I believe that secondary and tertiary schooling are crucial because there are more opportunities for well-paid careers.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays we can meet an advanced education programs at highschools that one of them is how to become a god parent.The schools try to reduce the domestic violence by teaching children how to be a normal good parent for the own children in the future. I am definately agree with this point of view. In this essay i will try to bring a relevant examples from my own experience.

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some people believe that toruist do not learn anything during their holidays, while others believe that they learn a lot. discuss both sides.

going abroad is becoming increasingly popular. This increase leads to a discussion of the benefits. On one side, people argue that visitors acquire nothing on their vacations. On the other side, others believe that they do learn about new things while they travel.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, most of the products are in all over the world and this is due to growth of technology and transportation. Because of those, companies export their products to get more market share and this development leads to countries are becoming like each other. Although, its has own advantages and disadvantages, I think positive side is outweigh of negative side.

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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, during the internet and social media we have a huge variety of famous people. We can see them on TV, hearing on a radio or see them on an advertising board during our journey or going to work . Some of those people suffer from the abnormal treatment of the exaggerated attention of media and private people. Some of them are ready to pay a fee for their fame and somebody are not, and this attention disturbs them and their family members. In my ,opinion the people who have decided to be famous or known either on social media or on TV have to be ready for extreme attention for your person. In this essay I will try relate to both views and provide an example.

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In many cities the use of video camera (CCTV) at public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that measures restrict individual’s freedom. Do the benefits of these CCTV cameras outweigh the drawbacks?

some developing countries have increased in their population especially in the numbers of youngs ,which are higher than the numbers of olders. In this essay, I will explain why this situation has its advantages and they can outweigh the disadvantage.

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many people believe that social media networking sites( such as face book have has huge negetive impact on both individual and society.

Over the last few decades,social media became a prominent tool in society.It is accepted by some about social media for instance facebook has a detrimental effect on both individuals and communities.However, from my point of view such a platform has several benefits for an individual especially friendship and commercial aspects,and many disadvantageous consequences in community life.

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In many countries, people would rather rent a house instead of buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of both.

Nowadays, choosing a perfect shelter to live is kind of question to the many people. According to their lifestyle scenarios some of them could find benefits in staying own house and other a rented. In the megacity, 60% of family occuring from different states. The upcoming paragraphs explained some merits and demerits with examples to support a statement on both the views.

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In some countries, adults living with their parents after graduating or even after finding a job. Do the advantages of the outweigh the disadvantages?

Needless to say, some people are preferable to stay with their parents after becoming financially independent due to a plethora of reasons. In this monograph, I will weigh up both beneficial and adverse aspects of this thread and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack sleep cause? what can be done about lack of sleep

In recent years, sleeplessness has become one of the major issues that people are facing across the globe. In this essay, we will discuss the results and solutions to prevent sleeplessness.

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Today many people do not realize how important the natural world is. Why is this? How can people learn more about the importance of the natural world?

Nowadays, some people do not realize the importance of the environment and do not care about nature. As nature is the source of our all needs, humans should have the knowledge of it. In this essay I will discuss the reasons of this ignorance and how people can learn more about world.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, technology has become one of the tools most important for people. Adults and children are involved in working and studying to be conventions of easy access. There are pros and cons that I will discuss in this essay. However, I think that if it is a balance, it will be workful for people and the planet.

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To learn effectively , children need to eat a healthy meal at school. How true is this statement? Whose responsibility is it to provide food for school children?

Nobody can deny that we are living in a world in which much of the public populace tends to focus the values of students’ well-being in a school environment perspective. While many public populaces hold the notion that schools take full responsibility for good balanced diets for students, others say that adult members of each family oversee this. I, myself partly agree with both ideos in the paragraphs below.

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Nowadays, many people spend less and less time with family. Why is this happening? How does this affect individuals and their families?

In today's modern world, families have lost their role.In many societies, a majority of communities don't spend a lot of time with their families compared to the past.In this essay , I will discuss why some people cannot spend their time with their families and also,and I will highlight which causes on individual and their families.

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Nowadays, many people spend less and less time with family. Why is this happening? How does this affect individuals and their families?

In recent years, people have become that they have not allocated time to their parents. This case can be related with technological development, expanded work spans and generation gaps between family members. This situation affects individuals negatively because they forget the concept of family and solidarity.

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Some people argued that business within the families are always good Discuss both advantages and disadvantages?

This is one of the debatable of today's world is that family business is good or bad.However, there are some who express that business within families is the proper way to carry out their services.In this disquieting, I will explicate my agreement on family business

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Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation.

Artists like many creative people should work hard to earn money. However, some of them become millionaires while others become poor people and even have problem with lack of food. Also , from my perspective the government should not help artist.

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Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?

Some company owners want to contact their employees at each times, even on off days. It does not bring any types of benefits rather it creates worker's private disturbance. On holidays work brings more demerits than merits.

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