IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 810

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a fmily for six months and look after their six-year old child.

My name is Sai Nay Lin from Myanmar. I was browsing through some of the magazines recently and I stumbled upon your advertisement in one of the Australian magazines that you are looking for a live-in babysitter who would look after your child who is six years old. As I previously had a similar experience when I was in a daycare facility as a volunteer for a year, I would like to apply for the vacancy.

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Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers, while others believe that students' attitudes are important. Discuss both and give your own opinion

The education has been became the most prominant element in every individuals life. Many perceives that the progress in study of a student is higly depends on better educators while others think that students behaviour also matters. This eassy shall discuss the both notions and will provide the opinion.

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Traffic jams are a problem for individuals to use roads freely in major cities. What problems does it have for individuals? How individuals can reduce traffic?

Cars have become a life-changing invention for the human race. But this had led to a rise in traffic jams which are a bane for any large metroplitan region. In this essay, I will discuss how these congestions impacts the lifes of individuals and what can be done to reduce them.

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The most crucial factor of a person ‘s life is his or her time at the workplace and life becomes meaningless when there is no job satisfaction. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It can be seen that in today's time of long run, a perfect and a satisfied job, also plays an important role in one's carrier. I am totally agree with the statement that everyone must have a calming and relaxing workplace. Therefore, the following paragraphs will explain futher, about various reasons that stands in favour of the given scenerio.

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The arts, including art,music,and theatre,are considered to be important in the society Do u think the art still have a place amongst our modern lifestyle? Should art be included in the school curriculum

Arts have been considered in society to be important including art,music,and theatre in the society.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. DO the advanatges of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Learning a foreign language will give children plenty of opportunities in their life and greatly improve their overall communication skills. children will have more learning ability during their young age and they can able to learn new language quicky without any difficulties. When they start to learn new language during their higher studies they may not able to spend more time in leaning language oriented subject as they need to spend more time in academic subjects as it as more weight. In my opinion, it always better to study a new foreign language during the primary school rather than secondary school

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad overweighs the disadvantages?

Education is an inevitable factor in our life. Nowadays university students are increasingly studying foreign countries as part of their studies. This essay analyses the advantage and disadvantage of overseas education.

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Reduce global environment damage should be handle by government rather than people . To what intent do you agree or disagree .

Global warming has it our earth growingly inhospitable. Although, many believe it is solely the government's responsibility to reduce the hard caused by global warming, others believe it should be done by the people. In this essay, I will discuss how both the governement and we should be together in this endeavour.

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Interviews from the basic selection for most companies. However, some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods.to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recruiting new employees can be a long and painful process. Some employers conduct interviews to select new workers. I disagree with the given statement, which says that interview is not a reliable method, and other methods are better. I believe that interview is a reliable method, but there are many other methods which are equally good, and the choice is on the recruiters as to which method they find suitable for their need.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal life. Does the advantages outweighs the disadvantages.

To succeed in life one should take some risks. It is essential for individuals to take certain chances in their carrier path and their private lives. I strongly believe that the positive impact of this situation outweighs its negatives and this essay will clearly discuss both the upsides and downsides of this development.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays kids are receiving more involvement from parents, earlier parents didn't focus on kids' education. The present education system has great change from books to digital platforms,Usually children get distracted from internet sources, as there should be an eye on them by parents.

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Some people think That children should be taught how to become good parents at school. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some individuals assume that parenting skills must be taught at school. This program would create a good people personality in the early age. I personally agree towards this statement which I will elaborate more on below.

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Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. what problems does this shortage case? what measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

People have paid more and more attention to the global fresh water shortage issue. This problem might be caused by the following reasons.

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The obesity rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many developed countries. discuss some possible reasons for this problem and suggest solutions.

Numbers of obese people especially the young ones has increased rapidly in many developed countries. Recent statistics demonstrate to obesity rate is growing gradually and governments are concerning about that. In my opinion, main reason is that junk food consumption so the most beneficial ways to handle with obesity is do not eat these types of meals and do sports.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the social concerns today relates to improving road safety. It’s commonly suggested that strict punishments for driving offences are the most useful to reducing traffic accidents, others believe there are more effective measures. I’m going to discuss these opposing points of view. In my opinion, various solutions can be applied to raise the awareness of drivers.

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Some people consider corruption to be the root cause of problems in government organizations and politics. What problems arise due to this corruption? What are possible solutions to eradicate corruption?

Corruption is a widespread problem that affects government organizations and politics. It is believed by some that corruption is the root cause of many issues faced by these institutions. In this essay, I will discuss the problems caused by corruption and suggest possible solutions to eradicate it.

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A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems can this cause? How might these problems be reduced?

Over the past few decades, technological advancement has significantly improved the standard of living for people. However, unfortunately, the majority of this improvement is confined within cities and the rural areas are still undeveloped. In this essay, we will discuss the possible issues this can create and some potential solutions.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphone Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development.

Nowadays, many youngsters use most of their time on digital devices. This is because social media present them with captivating content and parents use it to distract their kids. In my opinion, this is a negative development as it affects their mental health results in other health issues.

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People want to immigrate to rich countries. What are the reasons? Is this positive or negative?

Moving from one place to another is a life changing journey for many. Netizens of several countries choose to move to more wealthier countries. In this essay, I will discuss why they take the decision to do so and it's postive and negative impacts.

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Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

A healthy body is crucial in living a better life and a healthy diet is how we maintain a healthy body. However, doing so is harder than it seems for many and many fail to adhere to follow a nutritious diet. In this essay, I will discuss how an unhealthy life is the root cause for this and how spreading awareness can combat it.

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