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IELTS Discussion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. What are the reasons and solutions of this?

Obesity amongst children has been a mounting concern for many countries. While it has various complex causes, I can propose several feasible methods for tackling it which will be discussed in this essay.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant example or experience you have to support your answer.

People primarily work for monetary remunerations and psychological job satisfaction. Admittedly, remuneration like salary and fringe benefits package is crucial, but job satisfaction also cannot be ignored, In this essay we will try to explore it from different angles.

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It is commonly held belief that the death penalty is a good deterrent to prevent heinous crimes. However, others believe that life long sentence is a better deterrent. Discuss both views.

Some argue that capital punishment is an efficient way to deter vicious offences, while others believe that a life sentence has a better deterrent effect. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I tend to agree with the latter.

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In some countries,more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of houses or buildings they live in.what are the reasons for this?How can people research this

In a controversial society,most people tend to know better about their past experiences related to the place where they live.This essay will discuss the main reasons why people search about the past regarding accommodation including getting to know older experiences and being comfortable in their own environment.This essay will also suggest how the research should be done.

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You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.

Whether it is a house or business money plays a significant role in both of them. So, having such an opportunity is really a nice thing to have. In my opinion, if I have enough money to use for any of the above-mentioned options, I will buy my dream house. Having my own house is my long-awaited dream, which I want to fulfil. I would go for this because of two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

It is true that some people live close to their birthplace for the majority of their life. This could happen due to several reasons such as preferring to be near one's significant others. While this has a number of benefits, some disadvantages come with it.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

While some people are interested in trying new things such as unseen places and untested foods, others prefer to stick to what they are familiar with. I personally am in favour of stepping in untraveled roads and experiencing unknowns, however, I believe in some aspects it is better to take caution and not to be adventurous.

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Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Nowadays, food industries rely on preservatives and chemicals. Although food processing using chemicals enhances food quality, the hazardous side of these substances is more powerful. I agree with the previous statement and I will justify my argument in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages

recently, there is a tendency among the youth living in villages or small towns to leave their home town in the destination of larger cities for the purpose of education or got seek a better occupation. However, this trend carries some benefits and drawbacks This essay will examine them in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Architecture is one of the cultural heritage that has to be protected and prevented from being damaged. In recent years, a number of citizens have been becoming become increasingly interested in discovering the history of their houses. In this essay, I will illustrate the underlying reasons for people exploring information about their houses and outline two ways in which the history of their houses can be researched.

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In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their kids when women work full time. What are the reasons? It is a positive or negative development?

There are various reasons to be a working mom and gain money to take care of their families, while her husband takes responsibility for their kids. One of the reasons that I am able to think of is that some women have great opportunities for career growth compared to men side.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people pesearch this?

Recently, a large number of people are paying more attention to historical buildings. As far as I am concerned, the development of countries and technologies may be reasons why people have more interest in it. People can preserve these buildings by raising their awareness and posting certain regulations.

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Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions for this issue?

Nowadays, there are many concerns about young children leaving school without learning how to control their money. This essay will present some root causes and suggest solutions for each one.

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Write about the following topic: These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the new world, people tend to move from their hometowns and they come back later. From my point of view, I think youngsters need to be responsible at some point in their lives to find out more suitable ways of living .

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In the past, sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records. These days they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous. What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect the sports themselves? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the bygone days, an athlete aimed to win a competition or to set a new world record. Nowadays, it has changed, as many players are motivated by the prize and the popularity. The following essay will discuss how the effect of the changes on the young generation and how it has affected the sports industry.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

With the advancement of technology, it is nearly impossible to not find any resource people want on the internet. In this case, searching for the story behind a house became a popular trend in some countries recently. In this essay, I will offer three main reasons and the method of it in this essay.

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The numbers of children that read books for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years. What are the reasons for this? How can we encourage children to read more?

Recently there is a figure showing that the time heir is spending on reading has been decreasing. This may be because of technological advancement, and the time that kids stay alone has increased.

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Some people think it is difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Dedication and determination is a key to success. However, in today's era, some people perceive that children are not able to focus on their studies which is not only harming their educational background but also making their future vague. This could be because of the addiction to technology and the availability of online learning material. This essay will state some solutions toas how students can pay more attention to their studies.

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Write about the following topic. With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

In this technical era, everyone busy in their hectic schedule. They have no time for their family even some people live out of the state or nation. They have no time for the elderly masses. I will discuss my viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs and I will also discuss how can it be managed.

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With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Health care is one of the most important things to our body. This is the reason why many people want to take care of their health. Some people suggest that society has to care for more and more elderly people. Certainly, I will explain how people in society managed to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today.

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