IELTS Writing Samples Band 3

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Now I want to tell you about smoking. Smoking is so bad and dangerous for people. Because maybe we are sick or dead. so We don't have to smoke sometimes you can see smoke on the floor. When I am going to the park I can see people smoke It is so dangerous for people. You have to be careful if you through on the paper or grass maybe there is a fire. Some people are smoking near other people it is so bad maybe the other people have a problem with breath. Some people have a habit of smoking but it is not good. Some people smoke we have to say don't smoke.
Most countries don't allow smoking in public community because of the side effects. Not allowing people to not smoke in public neighborhood give crowd a better awareness of the disadvantages.
The charts illustrate a designed floor plan and suggested changes to be made to the plan. Overall, there were notable changes made to the proposed plan.
Some tours require proven previous experience before taking you to a trip, despite the money purchased, such tours must provide an accomplished guide who is first aid skilled. Secondly, it might require special outfit and equipment. For example, equipment for Kilimanjaro costs around 30000$ and includes special clothes, oxygen cylinders and many more. Those were the reasons why the price is huge, ignoring the fact that the physical state should be above-average.
There are parents who believe that children should spend time in educational books and they feel that reading entertainment books are waste of time. I strongly disagree with this arguement that wide range of reading is more helpful for the integrated development of children.
In some nation guiders punishing the youngsters physically . which is legally not allowed However some individuals believe that minors should be punished via bodily. I completely disagree with this statement , In the upcoming ,paragraph I would like to represent its disagree aspects.
Many public work for the same work in their whole career, however, other public think that it is far more interesting to try different jobs and it has more opportunities to get a promotion.
Many people work for the same work in their whole career, however, other people think that it is far more interesting to try different jobs and it has more opportunities to get a promotion.
In many countries there is a discussion about the rising financiel problems of the youth. In my point of view, this is not strange, because in the school program there is no attention paid to this. For this reason, I write this essay why I think financial education should be a mandatory component in the school program.
In this modern society, women has a signififant role, in every aspect of life. Though, women empoverment has engouraged globally, it is sad to say that, women are still facing harashment.
These decades the dilemma is environmental pollution, the countries trying too hard to solve and limited this problem. The countries should cooperating to protect and limitation environmental problems. I totally agree with those who say that the countries and authorities need cooperate.
Vaccinating children has become increasingly unpopular among the demographics of society. Some people claim that vaccinations are hazardous to children's health and are not needed. This essay will argue why vaccinating against spreadable diseases is entirely necessary despite some potential risks.
Nowadays, the number of people has medical issues getting higher than before. The big reason is the junk food consuming. One of the solution is increasing food tax. There are several condition that government considered these policy.
Nowadays possessing a business is considered to be the wealthiness indicator as its running demand much time, effort and knowledge. Some people believe that only business outcomes can point out if it is enough successful or not, at the same time others take also company annual growth and reputation into account.
The chart illustrates the proportion of first-year teachers who have usual teaching jobs after graduation in Ontario between 2001 and 2007.
Nowadays, children are spending time with technology more and reading books. It makes kids become unoutstanding students in the class. This is not a good habit for kids all around the world. I strongly agree with topic that reading story books is better for children than watching television or computer games.
The line graph compares the number of visitors to a certain Caribbean island for a 7-year period from 2010.
the chart above explaining about the export earnings between 2015 and 2016 the percentage of each categories compared with every year. Overall we can see that the export earnings of 2015 to 2016 were gradually increased.
The bar chart compares the proportion of Australian women who gave birth in different age groups in the years 1966, 1986 and 2006.
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