IELTS Writing Samples Band 3. Page 125

<4

band

Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies.

It is important for the society to educate their children not to harm others even though they are suffering from bullying, they should ask for help through right path.

<4

band

every year several languages die out .some people think that this is not important because life will easier if there are fewer languages in the world. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Lots of languages is becoming extinct every year. some people have an opinion that this is good as life will become easy if there are few langauages spoken inthe world. This essay totally disagree with the statement and present why language extinction is serious concern for human civilisation. If languages becoming extinct we will loose lots of knowledge and cultural heritage.

<4

band

The amount of sport, shown on television every week has increased significantly and this is having an impact on live sport events. Do you think the benefits of having more televised sport are greater than the disadvantages?

Modern day technology has enabled us to be up to date on international affairs across the globe, including sports events. Based on the fast progression of satellite engineering, it is safe to presume that the current amount of television coverage will undoubtedly increase further in the years to come. Live sports events have already been influenced by the phenomenon; there is, however, both benefits and drawbacks.

<4

band

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Developed countries spend forutune on low economic countries and it didn't help with there finanical struggle. So they shouldn't give them these kind of aid and replace it with other methods.

<4

band

Industrial and technological developments have led to noticeable changes in all spheres of human lives and activities that resulted in numerous environmental problems with climate change to be one the most serious. What are the reasons of climate change and what should be done to solve this problem ?

There is no doubt that development in the industry has altered the qualities of humans’ lives and caused great changes in the world,especially impacted on climate change. This essay will state the causes and measures to this huge environmental catastrophe.

<4

band

In most Asian countries including Taiwan, we only studied in the senior high school for 3 years, so my ninth grade was in Taipei Lishan Junior High School and tenth, eleventh and twelfth grade is in Taipei Municipal Chenggong High School.

In most Asian countries including Taiwan, we only studied in the senior high school for 3 years, so my ninth grade was in Taipei Lishan Junior High School and tenth, eleventh and twelfth grade is in Taipei Municipal Chenggong High School.he provided line graphs illustrate data on the proportion of people owning electrical devices as well as the number of time people spent doing household chores in one family from 1920 to 2019, in a period of approximately 100 years. Overall, it can be seen that the utilization of refrigerators and vacuum cleaners increased sharply during the period. Additionally, washing machines witnessed a marginal rise. With the help of these sophisticated equipment, the spending time per week dropped significantly.

<4

band

The plans below show how the ground floor of a particular building has changed over time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams illustrates the architecture tranformations a cerain building's first floor underwent throughout three different periods.

<4

band

The arach below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four tween 1990 and 2007.

The chart given illustrates the emissions of acid rain in the United Kingdom from 1990 to 2007. Units are measured in millions of tonnes.

<4

band

In some culture, children are being told that they can achieve anything if they work hard.What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Hard work is the key to success. It is commonly believed that encouraging children for doing hard work will leads to their successful life. In my opinion there are procs and cons of this scenario which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

<4

band

In some culture, children are being told that they can achieve anything if they work hard.What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Youngsters have many ambitions. To begin with, children mainly care about profession in childhood. This is because they dream about ideal careers in the future, namely doctors, pilots, programmers and so on which highly demand either professional skill or bachelor degrees. Therefore, children can earn huge amounts of money and accommodations.

<4

band

Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Schools spent majority of time teaching conventional material such as history. Some citizen think that they should spend more time in taughting skills which will help the students to find a work. Teaching a skill will help in variety of ways in the future and give the students more options. learning a traditiilonal subjects is the fundmental learning basics.I agree with adding skill learning in the study curculum and to study normal subjects at the same time.

<4

band

It is better for students to study from home rather than go to shcool. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for studen...

<4

band

It is better for students to study from home rather than go to shcool. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for studen...

<4

band

It is better for students to study from home rather than go to shcool. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for student to join the class at home asdfghjklIt is more benefical for studen...

<4

band

In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe these measures restrict our individual freedom.Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?

Growing numbers of security cameras in cities for the purpose of enhancing social saftey has led to some concerns for a group of citizens. This group are mostly worried about the potential threats of these devices for human liberiy. Accepting this probale issue,I personally assume that the benefits of using these measures considrablity outweigh its disadvantages. As these devices can intrude people’s privacy,they could be potentialy problematic in some societies. In some special cultures like religous ones,plenty of activities in puplic are not illegal but unconventional. Leaking these kind of scenes from puplic cameras can hurt feeling of society members and in advance jeopardize people’s personal lives. As a vivid example, a video got viral several years ago showing how a lady accidentally had caught her husband with another woman while using google map. On the other hand,however, certain various benefits could be considered via using puplic cameras.The foremost value, is enhancin...

<4

band

Some people believe that the arts (such as music, literature, and theater) are more important than other subjects in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that the arts are an important subject. While it is a commonly held belief that arts are more important than other classes in schools, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that the arts are not as necessary as other subjects.

<4

band

It is better for students to study from home rather than go to school. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is an argument that studying at home is better than go to school. I absolutely disagree with this statement and this essay will explain things.

<4

band

In many nations around the world, declining health and a lack of fitness are becoming very common among people. There are a number of causes of this, but certain measures could be taken to alleviate this problem.

Desertification can kill more people than any other single weather-related catastrophe. Conflicts can come to the surface from water scarcity. From the Bangalala midlands to Lake Turkana and Darfur, from Lake Chad to the northern parts of Mali, Niger, Chad, and the Central African Republic, communities are migrating and being displaced as they search for scarce water resources. Water is essential for survival and it is dangerous if we lack water.

<4

band

Some people believe government should spend money in saving languages of few speaker from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give opinion.

Around the world, there are have many minority ethinic who have cultural and language private. And population very sparse and people learn their language very few. So the speker their language low and endanger extinction completely. In order to saving languages that the governmen need spend money for this. When they carry out missons, they face up with 2 side opinion. One group support this and other think it vey waste of financial resources. This issue that i will see you both of side.

<4

band

Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is true that being a parent is a huge responsibility and raising children is going to be sophisticated if it not impossible. Personally I disagree with the idea that we should therefore force all mothers and fathers to attend to parenting courses.