IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 456

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The illustartions below show how coffee is sometimes produced.

The diagram illustrates the process by which coffee is made. In general, it can be seen that there are 12 stages, from sorting beans by hand to packaging and soldering.

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Many young people do not spend their holidays and weekends doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in natural environments. Why is this the case? How can they be encouraged to go out

Nowadays , many people prefer to spend theirholidays or weekends playing video games or scrolling social platforms in my opinion they should play football or do outside activities with their friends because it's useful for their health.

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It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?

There is argue that college learners should left their parent to live by themself with far distance. To me, living with parents uptill university time is better than separeting from them. This essay show several point to disagree to this statement.

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some people think they have right to use as much freshwater as they want. Other believe governments should tightly control the use of freshwater as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Water is a main object which is used in different types of nutrition plans. In recent days, we can observe that there are many companies using water as their business. They provide the water in bottled packaging in the name of purified water.

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Describe some of the problems overreliance on cars can cause and suggest a possible solution.

These days we are depending much on private vehicles such as cars. This essay outlines the problems that arises from overreliance on cars including sedentary lifestyle that is the root cause of chronic illnesses and on the other hand traffic congestion on roads which is the main issue in big cities which is also a leading factor causing global warming and environmental problems. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems such as using public transport, daily exercise and walk.

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Some people think that robots are important for humankind's future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Artificial intelligence is immensely evaluated and it was predicted to has a bright future.This could be a reason for great concern in many countries.Scientific agents have a point of view that evaluation has a significant positive impact on civilizations,while,trepidatious ones vouching against this technological progress find this improvement could be dangerous on societies over time.in my opinion,the effect of AI progress will affect badly on human beings.

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The only way to reduce drug is to legalise the substances and bring them under control. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statements? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Illegal drugs have become a wider problem in our world. There is a widespread problem of drugs all over the country. In my opinion, legalising things could result in some kind of positivity while illegal substances have many negative effects on society.

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people should only buy food sourced locally. what are the advantages or disadvantages of this .

Due to increase in diseases related to food, a majority of people believe that all individuals must purchase local fruits and vegetables and this will be e beneficial for their health. There are several merits and dismesate regarding this view and both are further discussed in the upcoming paragraphs with valid examples and explanations.

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The health benefits of physical exercise are well-known. Despite this, a lot of people do not exercise regularly. What are the readons for this? What would be done to exercise more often?

The public knows the importance of working regularly. However, many do not include the routine to their daily schedules which might lead to some physical issues. In this essay, I will discuss why humanbeings do not take exercises seriously and how they would be encouraged to do some permanently.

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It has been believed that advertisement make people buy products which actually they do not require.Do you agree or disagree?

There are common belief such as advertisements are made such a way that they urge people to purchase things that in reality they don't need for their daily lifes. I completely disagree with this statement.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, many individuals across the world are relying more and more on private fitness instructors as a form of excercise as opposed to the traditional way of sport participation and joining active excercise classes. This is mainly because personal instructors offer the best results due to their expertise and access to modern equipments; thus, making it a much more beneficial initiative.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is widely differing views on the issue that some nn-academic subjects should be removed from school syllabus because in this case, it would be easier for children to focus on their studies. I personally believe that those subjects should remain in the school syllabus. There are two principal reasons for this.

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Some people argue that radio is the best way to get news while other thinks that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

There is a belief that radio is the best medium to provide knowledge. On the other hand, some argue that television works better in that matter. In this essay I will evaluate on why, I entirely support TV as the source of greater information.

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Restoration of old building in main cities involves enormous government expenditure. It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sugar patients must conscious on their health because it affects their immune system. It is globally true that taking more sweet has a drawback on human’s health. However, some people trust the ruler ought manage the quantity of sugar taking. Remaining think that it is solo involvement of knowing their sweet taken. In my opinion, people should know their daily usage of sweets. In this essay, I will discuss my key point to increase the healthy life.

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Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

It is an arguative issue that the expension of weddings is more and more popular within extremely high budget. The primary causes stem from gaining a reputation and the increase of personal income, which lead to unwanted result of operator's depression.

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Some people say in orther to prevent illness and disease,governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The majority of people often said that government should concentrate on housing problems and environmental pollution to prevent disease and illness.The author agree with this statement and will highlight the reason why in the following essay.

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Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

NOWADAYS, DUE TO THE RISING OF NEW ILLNESSES AND DISEASES, THERE ARE OPINIONS STATED THAT GOVERNMENTS SHOULD TACKLE THE POLLUTED ENVIRONMENT AND HOUSING ISSUES TO DEAL WITH THEM. PERSONALLY, I AGREE WITH THE STATEMENT FOR THE FOLLOWING REASONS.

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Some people in order to prevent illness and disease , government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays , people are trying to minimize the epidemics , the head quarter should concentrate on bringing down Contamination and the accommodation issues . This author of this essay claim that they will solve and paying attention to these complications .

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Some people in order to prevent illness and disease, government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, it seems that social status and material possessions have been important for people to give bias to others. On the other hand, honour, kindness and trust, which is called old-fashioned values, have lost their value already. In this essay, I will discuss this issue of judging people and give my opinion.

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