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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them. What are the problems related to this? What are some possible solutions?

It is a pressing issue that the time for a person to look after themselves become less because of busying take care for an old person is leading to a host of problems that a person need to deal with in the future. The biggest problems are about health and financial but can be addressed by take the elderly to the retirement home and find a appropriate job.

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Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them

There is often not enough time in the schedules of those who provide elder care for the elderly. From my perspective, I hold to belief that this cure can decrease quality of health and the most effective solution is comprehensive and society reform.

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scientists should stop using animals as experiments . discuss both views

Propents believe that the scientists have to stop using creatures living in wildlife for their experiments, as they have to suffer excruciating pain as a result of negative effects of practice. While other group of individuals feel this practice has pros for the humankind as animals DNA has quite resemblances with human beings.

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Some people prefer to save money. Others prefer to use their money on things they will enjoy. What is the best approach towards money? Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Plenty of people believe that a frugal lifestyle is vital, whereas others hold the view that their wages should be spent on entertainment. This writer argues that it is better to save money rather than use illogically

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Some people feel that the primary function of a university should be to prepare students for the working world. Others argue that the purpose of a university education is to provide knowledge for knowledge’s sake. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Graduates from high school purse for higher studies to attain a degree in specific fields and work in related occupations. Fraction of people think that a basic responsibility of such institutions to make them ready for working environment. However, other people argue that the motive of an universities is to dispense understanding and comprehension.

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theinternet when used as a source of information has more drawbacks than advantages.to what extent do you agree?

As with the advancement of technology ,more proponents use internet as a signinficant source of information.I titally agree with this notion that excessive use of internet to get information have more demerits than merits.The following paragraphes will disscuss this in detail. Firstly ,the huge number of jobians and students use this technology to complete their official and institutional tasks.They completely relay on the internet,ratherthan reading informative articles or books.However ,most of the time these informations are false or for away from reality .For example ,due to increasing trend of social media and beloging people dont go in the depth of any news just reposts fake news again and again,while on the other hand society behaves silimarily.They just focus on quantity of news but not on the quality of authentic news.Moreover ,news on social media is beyound of any privacy ...

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for government. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

In numerous countries, the average lifespan of individuals has significantly increased in recent times. Many people argue that ageing population creates challenges for the government, while others believe that society may get benefits if there is an ageing population in the community. This essay will argue that drawbacks outweigh the benefits.

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Some country pay extremely high salaries for people .some people believe that the country must not do that and make a limit for the salaries. Do you agree or disagree ?

It is highly debatable whether countries should pay high remunerations to a few people or a cap must be imposed on their wages. I completely disagree with the stance of putting limits on their salaries and believe that it is beneficial to pay exorbitant to certain individuals. This essay will elaborate more on my stance in the following discourse.

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most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals, during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.

It is undeniable that due to the development of society, cultural festivals are becoming forgotable. Additionally, most of people just enjoy themselves during celebration periods. Although I also want to have fun during festivals, I extremely disagree that people have forgotten their origins.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employee. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

In the job places few of the masses thinks that the educational institution can be provide knowledge and skills to their graduates and others community thinks that the course is useful if the students has the ability to knowledge for their own benefits. In my opinion the universities should provide them enough knowledge to know about their works properly.

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There is no denying the fact that computers have positive impact on children. Learning from an early age is an initiative step so it is a good step to use computers, but its time should not proceed so long.This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of using computers

Its true that computers do have plus and minuses in impact on children. However i feel that its not the devices we should worry about but the time given to use them.For instance we live in a generation were technology has almost taken over everything. We use technology for our day-to-day activities such as taxis, purchasing food, informations about the news,weather reports ect. However as the topic is about childeren,I do have few points to mention

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In some countries, it can be difficult for people over the age of 50 to get good jobs, despite their experience. What do you think are the causes and effects of this problem?

In many regions, it is somhow hard for older people above 50 years to have the chance of getting a decent job opportunities, even if they were qualified for the job or have a great experience. In this essay, I am going to talk about the reason and the impact of this issue.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

We are in this improved world, the number of years a person could live is now increasing and it may cause some issues for people and for the community. In this essay, I will include problems and possible ways to solve them .

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Using computers and mobile phones in communication -> negative impact on reading and writing among young people, agree or disagree.

Some argue that youngsters may be affected in writing and reading techniques by communicating on technology devices. I comprehensively disagree with that statement due to several reasons.

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Some people think that advertisements are good for society whereas others oppose this view. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The advertising market is growing dy day by day. That situation cause of a lot of discussions. While some people claim that advertisement are good for people, the other people have opposing view. I strongly agree with the second part and in this essay, both views will be discussed and my own opinion will be stated.

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Some people think that to be successful in sports natural ability is the main important reason others think that hard work and practice is more important Discuss both views with opinion

To commence,many individuals beleive that being successful in sports in only dependent on your natural abilities but others think that passion and hard work is the main reason to be successful in every field of life.in this essay i will discuss both points and give my own opinion as move towards conculsion. First of all,many people enter in supports because they have family support and belong to sports background.They have natural ability to absorb atheletic skills since childhood and they mainly follow their parents to do such activities.For example,a sports man always wish his kids come in same field and take it as professionSsuch people thought to be more success because they have natural ability that provide a head startin sports due to inherent physical advantagesor naturalaffinity for skills,as many persons have more potentiol ...

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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often say that development in science, technology and society in over a decade have brought us a different life that could expand our living quality, so that is the reason why we are living the life that is worth the most. From my point of view, I am partly agree with this opinion and I will discuss in the following paragraphs.

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Nowadays many scientists and tourists would like to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some scientists and those who like to travel rather prefer to visit oversea natural fields, such as South Pole. However, traveling such lands most likely be more dangerous than any other due to the fact that nature is untamed by itself. On the other hand, experiencing the unknown and seeing the unseen are two feelings which can not be felt without exploring. It is agreed that it is quite unnessary, risky and unworthy in every way.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

high-income countries had long life prediction,which could be combined with a lot of issues.Moreover, some procedures can be done to reduce the amount of negative effects on ageing societies.

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In many countries teenagers are encouraged to do part-time jobs. What is the situation like in your country? What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of doing part-time jobs?

Since life started, individuals have sought to live in an excellent environment, but they had no idea how this world would be formed . However, the crucial factors that lead to these conditions are the variety in culture, religion and morality as well as multiple languages. So , to reach this goal people must agree with the minimum criteria of common values and establish a global language.

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