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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch other people and get new events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Social media have used to keep in touch with other people around the world by many individuals. In my personal view, the positive aspects that using social media provided for the human is more outweigh than the pessimistic aspect.

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Many parents believe that children should read strict educational books and not any other entertainment books as it is were of time. Do you agree or disagree.

Books are an important source of knowledge for people, which have many impacts on children's learning way. While many parents suggests, children should read only from educational books. I strongly disagree with this ideas because in every kind of books have hidden knowledge.

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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People nowdays definitely get married later than the past. Currently, new word 'Dink' showed up, which means people who chose not to have the children. Siblings were common when I was young, but nowdays, I can come across only child more often. In my opinion, having a baby have more disadvantages than advantages. We will illustrate the reason why people chose not to having a baby in this essay.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instrad of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think is a positive or a negative development?

At present, increasing number of population with health problems are seeking other ways such as a prescription instead of a doctor. In my view, this is a negative approach due to many reasons.

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Some people think that traditional education is better than online education.To what extent do you agree or dissagree?

Nowadays, there is many ways to have education, one of them are online. some people believe that there is no better replacement for traditional way of learning, while others think the opposite is true. In my opinion which comes from my experience I prefer the traditional way of leering because it is more affective. In this essay, I will discuss my point of view on this matter in details.

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Should parents be obliged to immunize their children against common childhood diseases? Or do individuals have the right to choose not to?

In recent years, there has been debate about immunization issues in society. Some parents argue that they should be committed to immunising their children to protect them while others say inversely. However, parents have the right to choose whether or not to vaccinate their children. This essay will discuss both perspectives.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events.Do you you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Whether people around the world use social media everytimes to keep in touch with other people and get news events is a recurring argument.This writer argues the positives effect of use social media to keep in touch and get news events overshadow the negative effect of addicted on it.

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people and get events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

In the modern world , many people spend more time using online networking to contact with communities and update more and more new information all over the world. The writer believe that use social media have more benefits outweigh the advantages.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

Nowadays, many people in over the world spend a lot of time using social media to keep in touch with other people and got news events. In this writer will talk about advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In nowadays modern society, people use a wide range of social media to contact with other people and collect social problem events. The writer of this essay believes that despite possible people's addiction it does not outweigh the benefits of obtaining information from the internet.

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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Over the recent decades, there has been a debate from some peoople that all aged chileren should have more responsibiltieis at home or other places as members of their group to learn about social skills such as cooperation with other peers and values such as consideration, being honest, and sharing each other. However, others argue that children should not be on pressure from out of schools to enjoy their lives with happiness and fun time with their families. I would like to put emphasis on the latter view point as it seems more reasonable to me.

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some people say that computer game are bad for children by all means; others believe that these games are contributing to children's development discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a common thought that computer game are not good for children in every situation, but others belief that games can contribute to children's development. While accepting the fist viewpoint is somewhat reasonable, I would contend that there are some computer games can help children facilitate.

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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Today I am discussing what people should do in their spare time. Most the people spend their freeb time in watching TV.

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Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their hometown. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Over the last few years, the number of people who prefer to learn a foreign language instead has increased significantly. Although there are several advantages of studying in their hometown. It can have some disadvantages as well. In this essay I will try to discuss both advantages and disadvantages sides of this and draw a conclusion.

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Some people believe bicycles have lots of advantages, whereas others believe bicycles have more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Whether riding a bicycle brings a lot of benefits or not is emerged as a controversial topic of general interest . The writer of this essay belives that even though this will lead to the inconvenience especially when it comes to the demand to move between locations , yet it must provide good points due to how it improve one's health and reduce the pollution inside the city.

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Some parents think children should have mobile phones others disagree. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion

Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds in every field, especially communication sector. A large number of people say that Smartphones are kept by children while others opine that it is harm to kids. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

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There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family>

Some society believe that having a small family brings more benefits than a large family, while others argue a large family has more advantages. To my view, having a small family bring less conflict and economic beneficial, so relate on these day.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, In several countries around the world the ratio of young public is significantly higher in numbers as compared to the public who is more elder in age. I believe there advantages exceed the disadvantages and i will explain further in this essay.

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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have dissapeared or are disappearing. What problem is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this solution?

The tendency in world to not celebrate specific days is making us live like each other with no differences. In order to solve this problem, the governments may want to protect the social and historical impacts of their subjects and the youth should be informed about certain beliefs and customs in their country.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are groups of people who thinks that it is a good thing to exchange findings and information of scientific research, new business ideas and projects and also new study proposals to the world. Whereas, some assert that there is also some crucial information that can't be good to share with public. I Agree with later viewpoint because some information is to important so its not a good idea to shared openly.

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