IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 552

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In many countries, young children are looked after by other people while parents go out to work. Is it a good thing or a bad thing?

Nowadays, It is true that young children are looked after by someone else when their parents are working. Although this trend can be a negative development because parents should take care their offspring by themselves, the main benefits are not only to parents who work full time but also to children themselves.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given maps elucidate the different layouts of a public park called Grange Park in 1920 when the park was opened in 1920 and on this day.

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Some people think the government should provide free housing, while others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

some people believe the government should give the public a free apartment on the other hand one group of people say this occasion is not the responsibility of the government.

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Plastic bags, bottles, and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to slove this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Global warming is the biggest problem that everyone in the world is facing right now. It is caused by many factors and one of the main factors is plastic. There should be somethings we can do in order to reduce this problem. This essay is going to discuss the effects and what way outs that the government and everybody can do.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, liesure and work activities. What extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, technological advancements have changed our daily life as they are present in every aspects of living. In this essay, I will illustrate the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon and delineate that IT developments have more benefits for us.

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Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains. Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach.

In the last decade the population growing.However, the production of food should be increased by turning to GM crops.This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of this method.

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some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualification

These days, a group of university students have interest to learn about unrelated subject to their major in addition to thier main subjects. While, others have the opposite view which is students should focus only in studying subjects which relate to thier qualification.This essay is going to discuss both views and I totally with the view that others subjects are very important for the future of students.

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In the 21st century, contact between many different parts of the world has developed rapidly through air travel and telecommunications. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Although interconnections between distinct regions have been enhanced due to significant rise in number of airlines and tele companies, the influx of connectivity can also cause serious issues. This essay will demonstrate how communication increase the trade between countries but will also show that this can lead to such problems as the diminishing of employment opportunities in own country whilst acknowledging that there are drawbacks, the essay will argue that the advantages of the linkage outweigh the disadvantages.

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4.Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

It is true that technology has significantly changed the means of people communicate with each other. In this essay, I will outline the impacts of this trend and I believe this is a positive development.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Everyone has different ideas to solve a bad situation. Some people believe to accept the bad situation is the best choice. However, others think that people should try to improve such situations.

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Some people believe that online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 40 mins

Some people argue that whether solely online reading tools or printed handout is suitable for learning children. In this essay, there are many reasons behind this, which I'm going to explain.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others however believe that school is the best place to learn this.

It has been observed that few people think that kids should be taught to become well mannered in society. While rest says school could teach them.

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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discussion both sides and give your opinion

Over the many centuries, the world has been discovered by humans. Furthermore, population settlement is the first milestone in the way. By the way, the early modern period has lasted from A.D. 1500 to the present and has resulted in wide-ranging intellectual, political and economic change. Furthermore, people have changed the way they learn, think, and communicate by using a variety of technologies to adjust themselves.

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Government should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many believe that the government should allocate more money on building railways rather than roads. I unequivocally agree with this statement for two reasons. The first reason is that building public transport and promoting them could reduce air pollution, in addition to saving lives that is otherwise lost due to road accidents.

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Today more people are overweight than ever before. What are the primary causes of this? What is the main effect of this?

Overweight is of concern in today's world. My essay seeks to look at some causes and effects of this problem.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates the current layout of Southwest Airport and its appearance after the renovation in the following year.

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Some people think that the government should fund music, dance and arts lessons for children. Others think that they should be funded by private businesses or by children's families. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Music, dance and arts covers everything in the world. In fact, nowadays is hard to find someone that is not a music, dance or an art lover.

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Some people say that it is possible for a county to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

It is said by some people that, for a nation to be economically sucessful whilst having a clean and green environment is achievable whereas a section of people rejects this notion. I agree with the given statement and will explain my point of view in upcoming paragraph.

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Tourism is an ever-growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?

Under globalization, people travel around the world more frequently and the tourism industry is flourishing, bring about a myriad of advantages to both individuals and society.

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Some people believe that competitive sports have a positive effect on children’s education, while others believe there is no place for such sports in schools.Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Few people assumes that students can perform better in academics when they are engaged in the competitive sports while many believe that competitive sports are not mandadated in schools. This essay shall highlight the the postive effect of playing the competitive in schools and later discuss the why educational institutions are avoiding the extra curriculum activities in their syallabus.

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