IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 111

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Knowing the difference between good and bad is paramount in a child's life. However, punishments are needed to enable them have good morals. Although, some disciplines might be too harsh a little chastising is okay. In my own opinion, timeout and chores are more appropriate and inflict less trauma to the child.

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some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and age together. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that music is a better way to connect people all around the world. Some bands have lot of popularity and their songs have emotional connection with the people.Therefore,I completely agree that because of music people can come together and can create a fanbase for their favourite singer.

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Some people think that people in senior positions alone should make decisions in a business, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

decision making considered as an important factor. in regard to this, some argue that senior workers are only isolated bodies in making decision while, others opine that team member should also be included in my view, senior executive should include employees and other workers too and in this essay i will demontrate both side of the arguemnt

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Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that spending a significant amount of time teaching academic subjects such as history is beneficial, while others think that schools should focus on teaching practical skills to prepare students for future employment. I do believe that a balanced mix between the two opinions integers academic subjects and practical skills can lead to comprehensive education.

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In many parts of the world, rural residents are migrating to cities, leading to a decrease in the population of the countryside.

In many parts of the world, rural residents are migrating to cities, leading to a decrease in the population of the countryside. While this development has some positive aspects, I believe that the drawbacks outweigh the advantages.

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In some countries a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

Labor market changes every day, the world progress does not stay at the same point. Some jobs are getting more popular, meanwhile others gradually disappearing. That is why market economy has significant gap between different subject specialists. Some people consider that it is great that professionals have high salaries, while others reckon that government need to control this field and cope with enormous salaries.

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In some countries, people are purchasing fewer new items and more second-hand goods. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative trend?

The market for used goods is gaining popularity, evident from the mushroom growth of offline and online stores specialized in second-hand goods. As per my opinion, this is a welcoming trend and is driven by several reasons. This essay will discuss the cause for this increasing trend as well as look into the advantages that support my viewpoint.

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More and more people are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are ther more advantage or more disadvantages of such services.

Due to the technology online translating applications gaining popularity. The essay will argue despite its drawback that people will lose a interest of learning new language, I believe that there is more advantages such increase inter-nation communication and save time and cost for learning something new.

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The percentage of overweight children in Western society has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

To begin with, In today's world we can see alot of changes in the food culture, In the past people used to eat helathy food, If we can see now there is a huge change in the food habits and the culture of eating.

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The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the advant of information technology, communication has became easier than ever before. While some people believe that this is a positive development, others argue that it causes isolation and desocialisation. I completely agree with the former opinion as amples of reasons are present to substantiate it. This essay will delve into my viewpoint with relevent illustrations.

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Celebrities are usually famous for glamour and wealth rather than their achievements. Some say taking them as an example can be dangerous for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Along with the development of social media and all kinds of platforms, individuals have more interation with celebrities however some of them are recognized by their wealth o prizes instead of achievement. In my perspective, the issues like that will be hazardous for youth, especially for the adolescent.

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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. •describe the item you lost •explain how you lost it •tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

I am writing to ask you to pay the insurance for what I lost. I went on a trip to Thailand and stayed in a hotel there. The place was very big and comfortable. The game seemed interesting to me as it was a game to win money and I played it. I won ten thousand dollars in this game. In Thailand, I went to the beach and shopped in various stores. My two-day trip is over and I am back home.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided maps offer an overview of the planned developments surrounding the southwest airport.

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The picture below shows Bell Hill farm in 1976 and the changes that took place in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The map indicates the changes in Bell Hill farm over a 30-year period.

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Some people think that homework should be given every day. Others think that it gives children under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, the homework is really important for student's education. Some individuals have noticed that assignments is the best option for examination.While, other suggested that it creates a a burden on infants. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give a lucid opinion too.

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In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Dicuss both view and give your opinion.

In some cultures, people who are adulthood is valued by culture. However, from my perspective, youth should be a priority in a number of specific field. This essay will discuss both views and give the opinion of the writer.

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SOME PEOPLE SAY IT IS IMPORTANT TO KEEP YOUR HOME AND YOUR WORKPLACE TIDY, WITH ORGANISED AND IN THE CORRECT PLACE. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION ABOUT THIS?

We are liveing in morden town. There are all fecility are available. Some People shops online and other people buy your shoping to reatils and other shop like shopping malls and Reatils outlets. To Comments with, Online shopping marker are growing day by das There are lost of person shopping online. In this essay. I will discuss some pros and cons in below paragraph.

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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems of problems can this cause? Whats solutions you can suggest?

Establishment about decision-making or changing life, may conceive several profits , oppositely, could detriment the proper lifesyle, by influencing newer issues. By contrast, with knowledge how these detrimental factors advance, many approaches may participate for these troubles. The apparent reason, why dwellers still resist innovating life,seizing an opportunity is not for all, consequently the apprehensiveness is primar cause why citizens are persistive. Altough more ,staying in constant- circle rate can be more prospecting, rather than quotidianly uniform a lifestyle.

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Because some children do not seem to have natural ability to learn other languages, schools should not force them to learn foreign languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, learning foreign languages is become trendy and academic sectors and parents are frantically wanting their children to study certain languages. However, it is argue that some pupils are have no talent to learning extran languages curriculum because of the brain memory limitation. And, if students are not offer to learn institution should not give them pressure to learn it. In my point of view i completely disagree with this statement due to language is the key to open the world.

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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?

Modern era is technological era. Computer become a integral part of our life. Youngsters use it in many ways. In my opinion it has more positive impacts than negative on young generation.

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