IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 111

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. what do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures can be taken to solve it ?

Recently, the phenomenon of becoming homeless in mega sities is increasing nowadays in many places around the world which I intend to disuss about the causes and give some solution throughout this essay.

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people believe that it is better to build new museums and town halls instead of renovating the old ones. Are you agree or desagree?

Nowadays, people believe that it is better to build new museums and town halls instead of renovating the old ones. I disagree because if we build new museums and town halls we are wasting money and we are losing part of the city´s history.

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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In the socitey today, certain population declare that advanced use of technology have made purchasing goods simplier, while others are inclined in disagree. In this essay, I will point out both views.

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An increasing number of people choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their apperance. Why do people have operations to change the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There are a rising number group of people that prefer to take surgery to improve their looks. From my prespective, this phenomenon is going to positive way because people want to take an extreme measure to reshape their face or body to become a beautiful person.

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With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?

It is undeniable that health care system has become an essential part of our life. It’s developing rapidly. Various achievements have been made already. All of them helping us to gain new knowledge and saves many lives every single day. It provides us to feel better and live longer.

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Some people think governments should take measures to improve the health of its citizens. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that these days some people have opinion that government must do something to support and improve the community health and fitness. In addition, the other see that responsibility for the nation. The question is, how is sould be take care about citizents health the governments or personly. In this essay, I am going to discuss the two view and draw my personal conclusion.

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People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than people who lived in previous times. to whta extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,everyone think that technology makes people live easy and comfortable as compare to past time .Likewise, I also agree with this idea that due to robets people can easily complete their work without wasting their time and energy.

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Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is a good thing, while other thinks that it has dis advantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this world , big company owner love to invest their money on sports event to get publicity ,however opponents say it is waste on money which they csn used on other things like education . The essay will explain not only both views but also my opinion .

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More and more fathers are taking break from their careers so that they can stay home and take care of their children while their wives work. This is better for family than having both parents work full time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Nowadays, we have witnessed that fathers leave their jobs behind because they desire to contribute to raise offspring than ever before. While I discuss male should collaborate to take care children simultaneously with their wives, I do believe children need mothers more than fathers in the process of growth.

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In future it may be necessary for us to live on another planets. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now to reseach another planets. Such as mars, to what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is a well known fact that nowadays, wolrl's population is increasing. Many people does not have enough space to live. Therefore, part of them believe that we should focus on researching on another planets. On the other hand, plenty of people tend to move away from their villages to the city while villages still hold more space to live so, I disgree on this opinion.

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Some people spend a lot of money on hosting birthday parties, family functions, and other celebrations. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this.

With people's life quality is becoming better and better, some people will cost large amount of money on entertainment such as holding lots of parties and celebrating festivals. Points of views on this kind of behaviors differ from people to people, some consider it a good chance to connect with family and friends while other think it a waste of money and time.

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Many people today are drinking sugar-based drinks (reason and solution)

In the current era, it cannot be denied that numerous individuals are highly enjoying sugar added into the beverages a lot due to some reasons.

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Countries spends large amount of money on sports competitions. Do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantages.

A phenomenon of countries' huge expenses for sports competitions have brought various advantages and disadvantages. From my perspective, the drawbacks have exceeded the benefits.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to learn foreign languages at primary school rather than at secondary school.describe the advantages and disadvantages

Nowadays,the foreign language play a crucial role in our life.Some stvata notice that it is essential for children to start learning abroad language at school.While, the other opposed that statement.In this essay we will discuss both merits and demerits.

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Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an idea that children’s activities in free time should be managed by parents, otherwise some people believe that it should be free for children to decide what they do in their free time. From my perspective, children should be managed by their parent in choosing activities for spare time

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

University gives people more opportunities to choose a good career, so they feel more satisfied by their job, have high salaries and the possibility for improve their education with Master’s degree in the future. Hopefully, they will also teach other young people so that the country remains success in the future. Also, many workers need to have a degree on their CV when they apply to a job.

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The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel. To what consequences may overpopulation lead? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?

The human population is growing in a fast pace over the last years. This can generate a lot of bad consequences. This essay will discuss and analyse possible consequences of overpopulation and draw some measures that can be taken to resolve this problem.

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As air travel has become cheaper, more and more people are travelling abroad for their vacations instead of visiting places in their own country. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Travelling by plane is the mode of accomodation that is mostly preferred by travellers with far destinations. Lately, the Indonesian government has come up with plans that make flights cheaper, leading to more international flights occuring. This is backed up by the intention to promote the growth of the nation's economy. However, this endeavour has sparked both benefits and drawbacks. Hence, this upcoming essay will discuss those pros and cons.

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Some people think that students benefit greatly from going to private secondary schools, but others assert that private secondary schools have a negative impact on the young generation and the society alike. Discuss both views.

Parents have different perspectives on education, such as secondary school for their child. There is no doubt that to achieve the competencies of a student in secondary school, they should have a personal teacher, while some parents suggest that the children should play together with their friends in the same age group. Personally, I believe that parents should consider private school in secondary school for future education. Along with my opinion, this essay will discuss both views.

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In today’s digital age, anyone with a smartphone can capture and share photographs. this accessibility to photography diminishes the value of professional photographers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays is very common that you do not see a professional photographer because people do not matter the age have their own smartphone, is not a secret that we find in a digital age. If we estimate who many time a family needs a professional photographer, maybe are only in special occasions or never. Besides, daily is easier buy a camera or any instrument that replace the work of someone who studied to be a photographer.

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