IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 111

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The percentage of overweight children in Western society has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

To begin with, In today's world we can see alot of changes in the food culture, In the past people used to eat helathy food, If we can see now there is a huge change in the food habits and the culture of eating.

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The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the advant of information technology, communication has became easier than ever before. While some people believe that this is a positive development, others argue that it causes isolation and desocialisation. I completely agree with the former opinion as amples of reasons are present to substantiate it. This essay will delve into my viewpoint with relevent illustrations.

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Celebrities are usually famous for glamour and wealth rather than their achievements. Some say taking them as an example can be dangerous for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Along with the development of social media and all kinds of platforms, individuals have more interation with celebrities however some of them are recognized by their wealth o prizes instead of achievement. In my perspective, the issues like that will be hazardous for youth, especially for the adolescent.

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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. •describe the item you lost •explain how you lost it •tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

I am writing to ask you to pay the insurance for what I lost. I went on a trip to Thailand and stayed in a hotel there. The place was very big and comfortable. The game seemed interesting to me as it was a game to win money and I played it. I won ten thousand dollars in this game. In Thailand, I went to the beach and shopped in various stores. My two-day trip is over and I am back home.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided maps offer an overview of the planned developments surrounding the southwest airport.

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The picture below shows Bell Hill farm in 1976 and the changes that took place in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The map indicates the changes in Bell Hill farm over a 30-year period.

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Some people think that homework should be given every day. Others think that it gives children under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, the homework is really important for student's education. Some individuals have noticed that assignments is the best option for examination.While, other suggested that it creates a a burden on infants. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give a lucid opinion too.

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In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Dicuss both view and give your opinion.

In some cultures, people who are adulthood is valued by culture. However, from my perspective, youth should be a priority in a number of specific field. This essay will discuss both views and give the opinion of the writer.

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SOME PEOPLE SAY IT IS IMPORTANT TO KEEP YOUR HOME AND YOUR WORKPLACE TIDY, WITH ORGANISED AND IN THE CORRECT PLACE. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION ABOUT THIS?

We are liveing in morden town. There are all fecility are available. Some People shops online and other people buy your shoping to reatils and other shop like shopping malls and Reatils outlets. To Comments with, Online shopping marker are growing day by das There are lost of person shopping online. In this essay. I will discuss some pros and cons in below paragraph.

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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems of problems can this cause? Whats solutions you can suggest?

Establishment about decision-making or changing life, may conceive several profits , oppositely, could detriment the proper lifesyle, by influencing newer issues. By contrast, with knowledge how these detrimental factors advance, many approaches may participate for these troubles. The apparent reason, why dwellers still resist innovating life,seizing an opportunity is not for all, consequently the apprehensiveness is primar cause why citizens are persistive. Altough more ,staying in constant- circle rate can be more prospecting, rather than quotidianly uniform a lifestyle.

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Because some children do not seem to have natural ability to learn other languages, schools should not force them to learn foreign languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, learning foreign languages is become trendy and academic sectors and parents are frantically wanting their children to study certain languages. However, it is argue that some pupils are have no talent to learning extran languages curriculum because of the brain memory limitation. And, if students are not offer to learn institution should not give them pressure to learn it. In my point of view i completely disagree with this statement due to language is the key to open the world.

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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?

Modern era is technological era. Computer become a integral part of our life. Youngsters use it in many ways. In my opinion it has more positive impacts than negative on young generation.

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People can eat a variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadavantages?

It is generally true that people can consume various food which are came from different countries and for this reason, they tend to eat less local food. In my oppinion, this tendency has more negative effects than its possitve effects. This essay will indicate drawbacks of taking foreign food and why disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals dwellers busy with own working and others feel that it is improve to work unique organization.

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Some people think that economic development is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others argue that economic development is damaging the environment and needs to stop. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

World wide, numerous development occurred over the last decades and countries is been ranked over the development. Be that as it may, people often debate whether economical development is positive or negative effect.This essay will explore arguments on both sides and provide detailed analysis to aid readers in to their own conclusion .

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Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause and suggest a possible solution.

Nowadays the car reliance are the most popular in the world because the majority of pepole are using the car , which is important to go any where croos the city or travel by a car , in the essay Iwill tell the problem and The solution

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and gie your own opinion.

Much has been debated over whether employment should be required to work in the country thẻu has trained. While other people believe that they can choose where they work maybe in another country if they want, I agree with both views but I nearly prefer free to work apply anywhere

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Some people think that the parents of children who commit crimes should also receive a punishment

It is often said that parents should be punished when their offspring commit crimes. this writer agrees with this statement because those offspring imitate the behavior and actions of their parent and their parents might be responsible and take care carefully.

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Nowadays, older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problem does this cause and what are the solutions.

The older people need employment but more compation with young that because the thinks that know about the position of the job more than the old people because donot know about anything in this life that is from the young people thinks

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In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances. What are the causes of this phonomenon and what are the some of possible solution

Nowadays most ot professional sport .there is increase of the singinfact of athletes using a banned substances in this essay I will discuss the problem and solution this one

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