IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 169

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Athers believes that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the most discussed issues nowadays is keeping animals in zoos. It is undeniable that animals become essential part of our life including pets and zoo parks. But there is not absolute agreement on whether good idea that animals kept in zoos or not. I think this essay will lead to the logical deduction.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In current period, young people’s population number correlatively majority, compared with the older people amount. According to this information, although a minority older people account is a disadvantage for a nation, a vast number of young adults amount can play a significant role a country’s development.

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Celebrities are famous for their weath and glamorous lifestyle instead of their achievements. This sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Now a days, Celebrities are booming all around the world via different things such as youtube, instagram, movies and television shows. Due to this scenario, lot of interested people get inspiring every day and try their best to achieve the level of people who get inspired. I completly disagreeing the statement that Celebrities are more familar due to their luxurious life style. I explain you much detail of how much difficulties which hide behind their life story of all.

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Some University students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

According to some University pupils who show interest to learn additional subject apart from major subject. Others argue that is more relaible to devote all their time and focus to studying for become a good job houlder.In my opinion i believe that additional study is more benificial for every student because a student can gain knowledge about other parts as well as they can get lots of other opportunities in the job market.

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financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely intended that financial education should be integrated as mandatory subject in school curriculum to equip students with necessary skills related to budgeting and expense management. This essay will examine why Fianacial education should be mandated and why it may not be suitable.

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news media has become more infulential in peoples lives. some believe it is a negative development. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the contemporary era, the social media has become more flexible and more infulential in individuals life. the majority of pupils think that it is a negative development. In this evidence i am partically disagree.

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in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to reed everything they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The availability of reading online books with no cost, In the future, may lead to demise of traditional ones, such as newspapers and paper books. As far as I am concerned, I do not concur this occurrence cannot be feasible in all over the world due to economic situation in societies and familes.

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Some believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor people, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days Internet is a rapidly accelerated across global. Although it presents some threats between rich and poor. I believe that the gab between them will be decreased by awareness.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Increasing nations in some countries are more keen to learn about the stories and histories of their habitats and houses they live with some reasons in economic, political and cultural aspects.

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people have didffernt expectation fpr jobs, some people prefer to do the same job for the company whereas othes prefer to change jobs frequently. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

there has been controversial arguements surrounding the issue of different aim when looking for jobs, while some people think that should change jobsregulary, I believe that taking a job in the same company is a better choice

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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Extremely sports became very popular over these decades. However if have debates of people about its danger. Some individuals think that cost is extremely expensive or have health risks for all ages so they should be prohibited. Personally I believe that individuals ought to have their own choice and banning and may cause dissatisfaction among such people.

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Celebrities earn more money than other professionals. Some people believe that this is unfair. However, others justify the high salaries of actors, singers and athletes. What is your opinion?

The question of whether thinking that is right that a celebrity or an actor get an higher salary than other professionals who have a "normal job" is generally very controversial. Althogh I agree with the though that it's unfair that artits and actors are overly paid just because they are famous and hyped at the moment.

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Some people feel that it is better to live in the city while others believe that life better in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Many people believe that living conditions in cities are better than rural areas. However, there is another group of people who think that life in countryside is a way better than urban places. I believe that it's impossible to live in cities without a job or an own bussines. This essay intends to analyze both views along with my perspective.

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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives.

The topic about children is always an interesting topic with pro contra opinions. In concern with responsibility, many people believe that children should have extra responsibility and some others believe that children should be free to enjoy their lives.

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for old children the ability to play a musical instrument is just as important as the ability to read and write how far do you agree with this suggestion?

Nowdays many people believe that learning is not only reading and writing but aldo learning about musical instruments however i completely and firmly agree with this statement and in this essay i will examine the importance of learning musical instruments.

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These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this? How could more people be encouraged to come into the teaching profession? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

These days, the number of people who are willing to regard teaching as their considering job is decreasing quickly gradually. There are several reasons why youngsters prefer other careers and also a few ways to encourage them to come into teaching profession.

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“In many societies in the world, the population is aging rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

since the start of the world, all of us have withness a enourmous growth in population, and because of that a lot of places in the world are suffering from the increased cost of their puplic healthcare. Because of that the general puplic are supporting their government by participating in paying for it. I agree with this to a high extent

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Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years,due to the advancement in technologies, film industry and television have increased significantly in every nation. Therefore,according to some ,overseas movies and TV programmes have more choices for the population while others, including me,believe that local cinemas and programmes are more essential by creating a lot of opportunities.

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A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

Nowadays, there is a firm that want to establish a business near with our environment. Personally, i believe that the merit of set up buildings close with our society will be a lot of the disadvantages rather than advantages. In other words, i totally disagree with someone who may form a building near with my circle.

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Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious problems and uses up the world's fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traveling through air is the easiest way for transportation. People use aeroplains, private jet, helicopter etc. Although there are some believe that travel through air ways bring lot of problems. They are saying that air travel should be restricted due to this and uses up the world's fuel resources. I will completely disagree with this statement

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