IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 12

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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several languages are in danger of extinct because they are spoken by very small number of people. some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

These days, several languages of ethnic minorities are getting extincted by decreasing people who use the laguages. Regarding this phenomenon, some people argue that governments should expend budget on saving these languages, whereas others insist that the governments do not need to save the laguages with public money. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Some people think the best way to learn new things is to study them alone. Others think that it is always better to get help from a skilled teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your choice.

Study is one of the important things in our hole life, and everyone has their own's skill to do this. Some people's opinion is let them alone to study can get the best gread. When they are alone, the world become quiet, they can concentreat on their study. Try to imgine a sitruation, you are in a quieting room, you can not hear any crowd sounds, no one can talk to you, no things can find you. At that time, you must feel peace, safe and concentreat on your study, you can learn it in your method, your rhythm, your space. And then you will get the best effect.

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The number of outweigh children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast-food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children’s health. To what extent do you agree with these views?

It is argued that the growth nember of childrens obesity in developing countries is rissing. Many people belived that the availability of fast-foods is a big reason and others said is parental influnce is the main reason. This esay agrees with the statement that parents should cntrol their childrens food, while fast-food is a pleasent option for other.

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Some parents and teachers think that children’s behaviour should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

The behaviours of child are very important to their parents. Some people believe that the actions of a child should be restricted. However, some opine that children should have the freedom to do what they want. In my opinion, both views are relevant but I strongly believe that children should have restrictions on their actions. This will limit their mistakes in the future.

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Students hand writing quality is lower than any other times In your opinion, what are the reasons? And what can be done to overcome this issue ?

Nowadays, the quality of students' hand writing is lower compared with the lasr decades. In my opinion, this happen due to that they do not rely on hand writing as much as in the past. However, there are many method to enhance their writing, such as practicing.

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Indıvıduals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There's a deferent between individuals affect than government and large companies about improving the invironment.

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It is sometimes thought that people who travel outside of their own country are more tolerant and understanding of others. To what extent do you agree?

The society has changed greatly, and this includes their thoughts. People may think that traveling abroad and being exposed to other cultures, can make them more understanding and accepting of others. I completely disagree with that idea.

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Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is believed that the knowldge come with person without profite, however some individuals think it can enhance by studying and practising. In my prespictive, not the innate, but the prosses of learning is the most significant factor for intellingence in my opinion .

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all education and healthcare hould be funded by the government and free for everyone. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?

Many people are of the view, that the government should fund the education and health sectors and make these facilities free to everyone. I strongly agree with this statement as it will have various benefits like improved literacy rate and better lifespan.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? Give reaons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many governments are experiencing ever-increasing crime rates due to economical instability and mass immigration. I think solutions lie within the government itself, they need to regulate immigration rules and help middle class to stabilize their income.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that print medias are the best source of news, while other argue that alternative medias such as electronic and online provide latest and updated information. I believe that while newspapers offer more flexibility and detailed news, electronic and online news portals are better as they broadcast up to date reports and less expensive as well as environment friendlier.

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More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purpose. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Throw the period of tchnology there are a lot of different types of plat forms to make the life easier and more comfortable for humanity. Some applications ask a personal information for using it and others just an option. These statistics have to sides, the first one is positive, and the other is negative.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that secondary school should provide free community programme such as free community working specially for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports. I partialy disagree with this point because sometimes free services are not valued by others and students do not get interested about this.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are lot of arguments inside communities inside workplaces, educational institutes and in othe activities associated with livlihood involving whether, they should compete between each other or they should work together to reach the achievement as a team. This essay will demonstrate why cooperation is more important than competition.

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Importance should be given to the academic subjects by the schools. Music and sports should not be as a subject. Do you agree or disagree. Give reasons and examples for your answer

In the modern era, schools might broaden their curriculum to include subjects like music and sports. Some argue that students should prefer educational subjects instead of studying creative activities such as music and sports. I strongly disagree with this view as both subjects are essential for children’s overall growth.

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Some people believe that the government should spend money to create more art such as paintings and statues in cities to make them a better place to live to what extent do you agree or disagree?

There's some people that prefers that government should spend money to create more art ,in this report I will talk about it and tould why I see that I agree.

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Questions 1. Some argue that all famous entertainment TV programmes shoulde contain education on social issues. *To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, there is a growing debate about education social problems durring tv shows. While some people believe that people should know about social issue by entertainment tv programing, others argue that social issues can not solve it by funny tv show. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain my opinion. I personally believe that spicial tv programing can solve the soical issue but not by entertainments show. The essay will first examine fixing social issue by entertainment tv programing, followed by a discussion of social issues not be solves by funny tv show.

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Some people believe that governments should spend money on developing public transportation systems, while others think that improving roads and highways is more important. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

There is no doubt that many residents think crucial improve the mass transit. Others opinion that enhance the roads and highways for the reason that government should focus on update different road for cars as well as public transports. In this essay, I will discuss more comfortable side for individuals and also how to the public transit is significant for inhabitants.

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Several people assert that the main cause of crime is an economically disadvantaged background. However, others say that crime is caused by a person's nature. Discuss both ideas and give your opinion.

There are two main views: one is the reason that crime is caused by poverty and the other is that it results from a person's nature. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion. On the one hand, some people argue that the main reason for crime is poverty. For instance, if some people who have lived in a poor environment, they may do theft more easily. This is because they may not have abundant food or clothes. In addition there is research that poor people are more likely to engage in criminal behavior such as stealing or other illegal activities. If they steal something from others, they can get clothes, food and some other things that they cannot obtain with their money. Therefore, people who are struggling with poverty tend to commit crimes more often than others. On the other hand, crimes cannot be explained only by poverty. It can be also caused by person's nature. Even if some people have an enough property, they may do crimes because of their disposition whic...

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Young people have been gradually far away from reading stories since they have access to a huge range of stories online in the form of video games or movies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Technology plays a crucial role in the daily routine of every individual. Today's generation has gradually moved away from reading stories, as they can access a variety of stories online through video games and movies. I fully agree with this perspective, and I will explain my thoughts further.

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