IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 13

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Theplansbelowshowthelayoutofauniversity'ssportscentrenow,andhow It will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The top diagram represents the plan of a university’s sports centre in precent days. Directly below , are the expected growth and the modifications for the same map in the future .

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Some children spen hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case ? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some children spend hours on their smartphones every day. This is the case because smartphones are very addictive. I personally believe that it is a negative development because it consumes their valuable time.

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It is a better for student to live away from the home during their University studies rather than staying with their parents to what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, more and more students prefer to live away from the home during their University studies instead of staying with their parents. In my opinions, I'm more supportive of students staying away from home during their college years.

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وتبين الرسوم البيانية أدناه النسب المئوية للرجال والنساء الذين تتراوح أعمارهم بين 60 و 64 عاما في أربعة بلدان في عامي 1970 و 2000 يلخص المعلومات عن طريق اختيار الميزات الرئيسية والإبلاغ عنها ، وإجراء مقارنة عند الاقتضاء. يجب أن تكتب 150 كلمة على الأقل.

يوفر هذا الرسم البياني معلومات أساسية حول عمالة النساء والرجال في أستراليا واليابان والولايات المتحدة وبيجيوم ، بين عامي 1970 و 2000.

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It has been proposed that citizens should only consume food and drink products that have been produced in their own countries. A To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is suggestion that the population of the countries should use only national meal and drinks.While i agree that consuming local products has their own benefits,in another countries production there might be unhealthy things and we should start produce own goods to reduce waste of products from other countries.

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In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree? a

Smoking is not legal in public area in many nations and it will be honest if person who wants to smoke leaves that place. I totally agree with this statement because it negatively impacts other people’s health and bad example for young generation.

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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

There are saying that people lives are not fully secure

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Many people live in towns and cities where there are museums that promote historical and artistic objects of cultural importance, but they don't visit them. Why do you think many people don't visit museums? What is the cultural importance of museums to society?

To get a promotion in the workplace, workers do their best every single day. This is given to only those individuals who deserve it. So, these days it has become a debatable issue . Thus, a few folks

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others aregue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Here people discussing about there bad situation were some human belives that accepting their bad situation as an unsatisfactory job or accept the situation of shortage of money were as other people think that to try hard on that situation come out from the bad situation here will share my views.

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Topic: "Some people argue that governments should make healthy food cheaper and unhealthy food more expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"

Governments around the world should make healthy food cheaper than unhealthy food in order to make people stay healthy and reduce rates of obesity. Making healthy food more affordable would encourage people to choose healthier options. For example, in Mexico, sugary drinks and junk food were contributing to a high percentage of obesity and diabetes. So governments announced the high tax on unhealthy food and promoting cheaper fruit and vegetables. As a result, public people started to buy healthier foods so that they could stay healthy. Therefore, the right way is to make healthy food inexpensive to maintain the wellness of people.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

population of elderly increase from younger generation in recent years.some people believes that this issue the number of young adults employed in society causes an improved nation compared to the old employed people in the countries, while some other ideas are the experience of old people should be used for improving the community.

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The tabel illustrate the information about the average annual expense of university students in three different countries.

The given table illustrates the information of average annual expenditure of university students in three different countries.

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Computer Games are very popular in all ages and nationalities. Parents think, it has a little educational value and more harmful. Discuss your opinion with examples.

Computer games are becoming more advanced and complex with the rise of technology. As the result, it become popular in children and people of all ages as well. However, I personally agree with the opinion of parents at the time that these games are affecting children in many ways.

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Some people believe that there should be the death penalty for extremely serious crimes. Others believe that it is not morally correct to kill criminals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

At present era death penalty is anti against whether to have or not. In this essay I am going to discuss both the points and then explain why I believe.

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Many government thinks that economic progress is their most important goals, some people however thinks that other progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

From many years ago, the strenght of a government or a nation is determine by the strenght of their economy. While many think that a country's progression in the economy sector is important, I believe that other areas such as education is equally as important.

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In achieving personal happiness, our relationships with family, friends and colleagues are more important than work and wealth. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some say having personal happiness and good relations with family,friends and colleagues are way crucial than work and wealth. I agree with the statement but nowadays money is very important to survive.

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The comparison of the production and the consumption of rice in X country The comparison of rice and other food crops comsumed in X country

The line graph illustrates the amount of rice production and consumption in the past and prediction for the future, while the bar chart gives information about how much rice and other food crops was and will be consumed in a particular country.

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Sociologists opine that social networking websites can have a negative impact on society as they can be used to spread false information. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that social networks can have impact on society. While it is a commonly held belief that social media can have a negative impact on people they use it and spread falsse information. There is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, i consider that social network websites are have to sides first one is possative and the other one is negative. To beging with, social network websites is a big world we can found right information and also thier is rong information. In other words, we can found new information about any thing we intrestied on it there is not a big sluotion if we learn new thing from internet if is not impact on our hailth. For example, old people take all whatsapp massige on serioues way. Another point to consider, it is very wrong to take all internet information and believe it, if we believe it well spread all this false information on socitety and it well make a big proplem first, disesse will increase because they independad on wa...

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Some people believe that we should do our best to mitigate the effects of climate change, while others believe that we should learn how to live with it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today's world, climate change become one of the beggiset problems in the twentith century. Both animals and humans suffer of many illnesses that are caused by the climate change. Therefore, some people believe that it is our reponsibility as a socaity to satnd aginst people who are the reason behind making the climate change worse.

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The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the production of chocolate. Overall, there are ten stages in total of the process, beginning with cultivating cocoa trees and finishing with the chocolate packed.

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