IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 13

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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jnuSome people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Advertising play an crucial role in influencing choices of people in terms of acquring goods and services. Few masses believe that marketing is very effective way to push any person into acquiring things.Whereas, others think that advertising is too outdated for them.This essay intends to delve on both prospects prior to embark on a suitable conclusion.

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More and more plastic is polluting cities, the countryside and oceans. What problems are caused by plastic waste? What can be done to solve this problem?

There is no denying the fact that the impacts of extensive plastic use have an impact on the environment, cities, countryside and oceans. This essay will discuss the problems and issues that occurred due to plastic waste, and then will express some ways to solve this disaster.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. do you agree or disagree

Sugary products should be increased more price to encourage people to consume less sugar. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement and the following examples will be provided in order to support my point of view.

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Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities which are done alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I do agree with the first statement, but that doesnt made me fully agree on the second statement. why? because i do think when more than one people gather and do something together. their knowledge on communication, social, awareness skills increases without any of their concern. When more than one people or we can say team work together, they face something such as misscomunication, difference of individual behaviour, conflicts, self sabotage where could lead into suspicion, doubts, lack of trust inside the circle of teams. However, from every conflicts i said above, they learn how to solve conflicts step by step. And that is the benefit of team activities, where i do think activities which are done alone might learnt it the hard way. But on what reason i disagree where individual activites couldnt teach more skill for life than teams?

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Some people think that schools should invest more money in technology, such as more computers, while others think more money should be spend on teacher. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, the question of whether institutions should invest more funds in technology tools or good teachers has been widely debated. While schools put money into tech gadgets, others argue that they spend more money on tutors. This essay will discuss both perspectives and explain why I support the former viewpoint.

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The internet has become profoundly efficient and popular that people choose it as a platform to learn. Some believe that it would eventually replace the need for books. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been observed that internet is the main source of information worldwide these days. Although, internet has first choice for most of the individuals globally to obtain reliable information. While some individuals think that hardcover would be supplant by this platform. I strongly agree with this statement. My inclination will be explained in the following paragraphs with relevant examples and justifications.

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Today much of the food people ear gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Personally, I understand that a good part of our meals has parts coming from distanced places from where we live. Since the majority of Brazil's population lives in urban sites, it seems only natural this logistics, at least at first sight. The region, as we will see, has, indeed. good reasons for that arrangement, both economic and health related ones.

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There are more cars on the roads these days and more accidents. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test.What do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modren era, cars became the first option is comming to the mind when we speak about transportation. This leads to more cars in the roads. Due to this fact, the cars accidents are increaseing. Some officials have a suggestion before this issue has to amplified. They offer that people should take the driving test more than one throughout their lives. In my opinion, the pros far outweigh the cons. This proceduer affects indirect way to keeping the drivers are valid to drive and developing the roads facilities which helps to decrease the number of accidents.

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In some poorer areas of large cities people are too afraid to leave their houses at night time due to a fear of crime. What are the causes of crime in those areas and what can be done to tackle those problems?

The poorer areas in the big cities are very dangures because it is a home to people who have no money nor jobs , which are the two major motives that made people comit a crimes ,and as a result people who lived there ofcours will be afraid and feel unsafe.

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Work today is very different from the past. Many people work from home because of technology. Some people say that this is a positive development. Others say that it is negative. Discuss how this has changed the way we work and are there too many disadvantages in relying on technology.

The world is very different today, and there are many things that have changed, including how people work now in many places. Technology become a big part of our life and change many way people do daily task.This essay will examine do I think this has changed the way we work and do I think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and agas together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that music is the best way to gethering people with culture and connect with all ages. It is commonly believe that music is the art of life.

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In some poorer areas of large cities people are too afraid to leave their houses at night time due to a fear of crime. What are the causes of crime in those areas and what can be done to tackle those problems?

In the poorer section of many metropolitan cities, people are scared of going out of their houses after sunset, due to potential risk of crime. There are many reasons of, why this happen such as hunger, etc. However, these problems can be tackled with the help of government actions. I will explicate the casues of these incidents, and the ways to avoid them, further in this essay.

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Many people nowadays change career more frequently than ever before while others stick to a single job. What are the advantages and disadvantages of changing career?

Now a days, many people prefer changing their jobs often, rather than, continuing the same profession due to various reasons, that causes them unsatisfaction. In this essay, I will explain both pros and cons of changing careers on a frequent basis, and will explicate my point.

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Some people believe that the increasing number of vehicles is one of the biggest problems facing cities, while others believe that cities have bigger challenge. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In today`s fast-paced world, everyone think that increasing number of private vehicles is the large problems for the cities, while numerous people believe that cities have many other challanges than traffic. In my opinon, council has many other concern to think rather than traffic, such as poverty, education and waste management.

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A large number of young people can not find a job after leaving school. What problems will youth unemployment cause for individuals and society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among young people?

In recent years, A large number of young people can not find a job has become a widely discussed issue around the world. while some argue that a young people can not find a job, other believe that problems will youth unemployment cause for individuals. This essay will examine both perspectives, considering their implications and possible outcomes, and will explain why combining their strengths may lead to the most effective and sustainable solutions in society, communities and relevant insitutions.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

History represnts the cultural heritage and grandeur of a nation. As much as knowing history of your nation is important, it is also vital to pay un-diverted attention to the Field of study a candidate has chosen to pursue in University. I completely disagree with the statement, students should not be required to take history courses in universities.

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Should companies ensure that they employ a quota (or fixed percentage) of women in all jobs, or is this an impractical concept? Discuss both sides of this debate, and reach a conclusion based on your own opinion.

Some people argue, that there should be a fixed quota alloted to the women in all types of employments, whereas, others debate against it. I believe, that there are both positive and negative aspects of this development, which, I will discuss further in this essay, and will explicate my opinion on it.

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Nowadays many students live with their families while others go to another city to study at university. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of both scenarios. Include relevant examples in your answer.

While some university students live with their families during their education, others choose study in another city and live by their own. There are both advantages and disadvantages for each occasion.

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Some people think university students should only focus on one particular study area. Others. However, others believe they should be encouraged to study a wide variety of subjects. Discuss both views and mention your own opinion.

It is commnely believed that some students perfer to stay in particular area and other believe it is good to discover other parts. Some people aruge that studying a varity of subjects would make a good future for students. While I agree that discovering other area help students to get a good job in the future, I believe take subjects that you are not understand well put pressure on students.

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Some people think that too much attention and resources are given to the protection of wild animal and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that too much attention and resources are given to the protection of wild animal and birds. In opinion, I strongly agree with this statement, and the following examples will be provided in order to support my point of view.

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