IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 13

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (15/16 years) (for example for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). Do you agree or disagree?

It is highly avknowledged that involing of volunteering task should mandotory for high school. While I partly agree because participating free chores bring several benifits , it also has some drawbacks for learners.

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Some people think visitors to others countries should initiate local customers and behaviors. Some people disagree; they think the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.

Some think that tourists should prevent cultural differences and act as same as local people in order to show respect to their country. I disagree with this opinion, because i think it is better for citizens of a country to be polite to those visiting a country and be flexible to learn something new about communities abroad so that visitors then will return back and try to learn local customers behaviours voluntarely.

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Topic: In many countries, too much money is spent by government and individuals for national holidays such as New Year and religious festivals. Do you agree or disagree?

National and international holidays are involving significant spendings by both government and individuals in many countries. I pursely agree with this opinion, but in some cases these costs are not economically beneficial.

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In many countries household wast e.g .food packaging is increasing day by day. What are the reasons? How can this process problem be solved

Recyclable materials have become an indispensable part of modern life. There has been a frequently discussed issue of whether household waste is crucial for community, or whether it poses risks. I firmly agree that there are a lot of beneficial effects to reduce using food packaging. This essay will delve into this phenomenon, supported by relevant example and insights.

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Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Tax is the amount individuals pay to the government for the betterment of society. Many argue that paying taxes is sufficient as member of society. On the other hand, some believes there are more responsibilities for a person than just paying taxes. I believe both ideas are equally important and will be disscussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not having strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both and give your opinion.

There is a debate about laws for drink. While some societies are using legit age of drinking, others think such harsh laws are not needed for better policy. This essay will discuss both views in detail and put forward that why former idea is more beneficial.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge fo its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

University prepares graduates to be prepared for jobs. While some people argue that graduates should learn anything, I side with those who feel that graduates only be prepared with needed knowledge and skills in workplace.

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Recent advances in air travel have focused only on those sitting in first class and have left other passengers with no benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that people who purchase air tickets for the first class have more advantages than other travellers. This essay agrees with this suggestion completely, that the first class tickets have high influence in society. The essay will discuss the relationships between employers and clients, and about an access to comfort in an airport.

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People today are not as fit as they were in the past. What are the causes of this? What can governments do to deal with this issue?

Health is wealth, we have often heard this a lot. However, it is very difficuilt for people to stay fit in today's busy world as compared to the past. So we will discuss the causes of unfit people and what important steps government should take to prevent this issues in upcoming paragraphs.

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Employment sectors of graduates from Brighton University, 2019

The chart illustrates the proportions of Brighton University graduates in 2019 who were employed in various sectors. Overall a lot of graduates chose service industries while very few chose charity or sports sectors.

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Some people believe that it would be beneficial if employees worked three or four days per week rather than five or six days. Why is this? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a debate among individuals some believe that people should solely work for few days in a week while others say working five days during weekdays would be advantages. However,I personally believe that humans should only work for few days.In the upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss my viewpoints.

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Some people think parents should control the behaviour of children from a very young age but others think we should give them more freedom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The debate over whether parents should strictly control their children's behavior from a very young age or allow they more freedom is a hot topic. This essay will discuss both views and I will provide my opinion later.

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Some people think that government should spend money on railways. Others believe that there should be more investment into new roads. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

There is no denying the fact tht the transborts have a big impact on the way people live, and there is a commonly held believe that nations requier to maintain the money and spend it on benefical things such as improve roural roads, as well as there is how argue this idea. In this essay, I will express my own opinion and discuss this question the end.

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Celebrities complain that their privacy is being invaded by the media. Some people say that they shouldn't complain while others say that celebrities deserve privacy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this present world, famous people do not have their own privacy, because of different social media. Some people including me, support that people who are famous can also have their own space, while others are against it.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's character and culture from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that it is hard to know other people nations and personalityes from the way they dress. In this assay l will talk about this point of view and talk about my opinion as will .

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Some people believe that reading books are better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A few individuals think that reading books is more useful and better than spending time in front of the screens and watching television or playing video games for teenagers.This essay will discuss what is more valuable and essentially,it will be finished by my own perspective.

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Some experts suggested that cyclists should have to pass a exam before riding on cycle for road safety. To what extended do you agree or disagree?

I partially agree with the suggestion of requiring cyclists to pass an exam for road safety. Educating cyclists on traffic rules and safety measures is essential to reducing accidents and protecting everyone on the road. However, enforcing an exam might be an unnecessary burden for many people, especially children or those using bicycles as a simple means of transport. Instead of exams, awareness campaigns or teaching safety in schools could be more effective. Additionally, improving cycling infrastructure, such as providing dedicated lanes, can greatly enhance safety. Ultimately, a balance between education, awareness, and infrastructure improvements is the best solution for improving cyclist safety without complicating the process.

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nowadays many peopl use social media what are advantages and disadvantages?

In recent years the number of people who use social media has increased. Some consider that this phenomenon has a huge number of drawbacks such as addiction and potential health issues while I firmly believe that the merits of this ranging from communication to receiving information exceed the drawbacks. This essay will explore both the pros and cons of this trend.

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Some people argue that only talented children can become successful musicians or athletes in the future. Others believe that children can be taught to succeed in music or sports. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The debate about success in music and sports often revolves around whether it relies on innate talent or can be achieved through training. Some believe natural ability is essential, as genetic predispositions can give individuals an edge in areas like athletic performance or musical aptitude.

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Question: Many people today are worried about cybercrime chess hacking and identity theft. What problems does cybercrime cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and business to take?

Nowadays, lots of people are concerned about online hacking and identity stealing. This may lead to problems such as people's personal information being stolen. Action must be taken like installing developed security systems. This essay will dive in depth to this topic.

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