IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 13

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home.Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Nowadays, the issue of working home becomes more and more globalized. İn this regard, some people believe that remote work is very significant, although others claim that this option is irrelevant. Below, I will touch on both benefits and drawbacks of this situation.

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Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most people think that social networking sites influence to people and individuals negatively.

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Over the years, I had a lot of changes in my life. Some of the most important changes were motivation, opinion, focus, NIS, and discipline.

Over the years, I had a lot of changes in my life. Some of the most important changes were motivation, opinion, focus, NIS, and discipline. Those changes were because I got older, so I started being more active and achieving my goals. All those changes have changed my mind and brain.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to healtha, while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important

Now people are split up to the sides of the theme about being healthy by using the gym and being healthy by exploiting diet.

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Many people now work from home due to technological advancements. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home.

There is no doubt that working remotely offers numerous benefits, such as a flexible work schedule and saving time on getting to an office. However, it also comes with drawbacks, including motivation decrease and dificulties with the work-life balance. Therefore, this essay will explore both positive and negative aspects of remote work.

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The internet is viewed an excellent means of communication by many.However, there are some who would argue that it is actually destroying our communication skills . Discuss both views and give your opinion

In the contemporary era, communication along with the internet an necessary mode of interaction by various individuals. However, few believe that it would demolishing our interaction skills. While In my notion, it is a positive development where as, other opposes it. In this essay, I will justify u opinion with some of the reasons.

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some people prefer live in a house but others think live in a flat advantages. What do you think advantages or disadvantages. Compare them

Nowadasy some people prefer to live in a house but others think that there is more advantages to living in an apartment I think , living in a house is considered better than living flat. I think, it is considered abvantages for people wgo live in house.

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the pictures show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK.

A glance at the chart and table reveals data about the average income and expenditure on clothes and food by a normal family in a specific city for 3 years in the UK. The initial impression from the table is that even though the average income saw a decline, there was a increase in expenditure.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, every people believe that the best way to get a good job is having a university qualification. Besides going to university as others countries, some students prefer to live at home with thier family while they are studying. This method has it is adventages and disadvatages.

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For instance, according to recent data, it is said that in India, in particular New Delhi considered to be a common destination at the moment, tourism is causing the same forms of pollution as other industries such as air emissions, noise and release of sewage.

Some people believe that travelling plays a crucial role in the economy. This essay will argue that although there may be some problems if tourism is miscontrolled, the benefits that globetrotting can bring, far outweigh any drawbacks.

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Nowadays many young people are attracted to dangerous sport such as snowboarding or mountain biking. What makes these sports so attractive? What measures should be taken to minimize the risks?

In this modern world, snowboarding and mountain biking are now gaining popularity among youngsters. Further, in the next paragraphs, I will discuss why it's popular and some preventions to decrease the risks.

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Some people argue that holding sporting events is beneficial to countries' development. However, other people hold the opposite opinion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is an irrefutable fact that our life-style has been changed in the significantly alterled during the recentl decades also the world has developed in many ways. Majority of People arugue by saying that housting spoting events by any countries while others aruge by giving their opposite opinion of not houst the games and also have differeent opinion on development on countires. I an in complete accord by saying that housting game in your country as the same time you are also developing your economy below i will endeavor to shed some light on my view point.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people mind that young people should be required to have full time education until their adulthood, while others think that is not necessary. I believe that young people should not distribute their time for education by their own and they must have a full time education.

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In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

Developing countries around the world are suffering from the deterioration of air and water quality due to the industrial pollution and construction problems. Tightening the pollution regulations and launching public awareness campaigns by the government can be viable solutions for the issue.

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some people believe that fast food is harmful to our health and should be regulated by the government. Others argue that people should have the freedom to eat whatever they want. Disscuss both view and give your own opinion. - - Give reasons and examples to support your answer.

Fast food has become a popular choice for many people, but it's often criticized for its negetive health efffects. Some believe that the government should regulate fast food to protect public health, while others argue that individuals should have the freedom to make their own food choices. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and explain my opinion.

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More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are the possible solutions?

An increasing number of citizens have just started using vehicles in unstable countries leading to traffic congestion. In my opinion, a solution can be found by upgrading the public transportation system.

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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be reason for this? Do you think it is positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the number of fathers take responcibility of their children while mother takes finacial responcibility to go out work. This essay will explain the reason of this because people aware of equality and children needs both p[arentshood.

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Which of the following do you think is the best way to stay in good health? - Participating in group sports - Learning how to cook healthy meals - Joining a gym and following a strict exercise routine

Individuals are given multiple choices to keep fit nowadays, such as doing workout with peers and friends, following specific meal plans, or seeking professional training through gyms. People have been argue about the most effective way for individuals to practice to stay healthy. In my opinion, I think participating in group sports overweights the other two options as it is more motivating and easy to start.

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Most societies are based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they wanted, society could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every community or society have been following a set of rules and principles for many decades. These rules and laws are essential to maintain proper functioning of the society. In this essay, I will discuss the consequences, if individuals were free to do whatever they want.

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Countries should restrict foreign companies from opening offices and factories in order to protect local businesses . Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

The nations should ban international organizations from setting workplace and occupation, in way to save national trading. I disagree with the statement because it raises the economic growth of the country and provide many job opportunities for local people.

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