IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 13

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that success in life is measured by the amount of money a person has. Do you agree or disagree?

A good way to assume if someone won in life is by the sum of cash they have in their name . If we only consider the material gain , and not take in count that that person may have other goals in life - it’s easy to determine if they fulfilled their goal.

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Some people think that urban spaces should be used for parks rather than for housing. Discus both sides and give your opinion

Today we live in fast changing world and major part of people live in the cities. But there is a problem about urban spaces - it doens't enough for everything - people should decide is it for living or business or is it for parks and other entertainment. This essay will discuss the arguments to both sides of the question, with my personal viewpoint on the problem presented at the end.

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some say that if you pick a career path earlier in life, you will have a better chance at feeling a sense of satisfication in your working life. Conversely, changing jobs at a frequent rate, can potentially leave you feeling un able to settle down. I completely agree with the that statement, as believe that doing the former helps an individual lead a strctured life with clearity, as well as have enough time to plan ahead.

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Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main source in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative source of energy (wind and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The natural resources like gas, oil and coal are prioritized in many nations but on the other side, the other forms of artificial energy like wind and solar are used by most of regions. In my opinion, it is positive encouragement towards the country as it will help in saving the natural resources for the tougher time and also community will get rid of pollution and saves money on the same time. These points will be discussed by me in the following paragraphs with examples.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activites. Does this situation have more advantage or more disadvantages?

Some people argue that working for a long time and having less time for leisure is beneficial, where others denied that. Although both sides have positive and negative aspects and this essay will disscuse the both.

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In recent years, many countries have introduced laws to make public transport free of charge. Write the advantages and disadvanatages in your esasay.

Nowadays, according to the laws that were introduced in many countries, public transport has become free of charge.

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In recent years, many countries have introduced laws to make public transport free of charge. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, according to the laws that were introduced in many countries, public transport become free of charge.

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Bringing in foreign workers to fill positions that domestic workers are unwilling to do can cause problems in the local community and should therefore be stopped. Do what extend do you agree with this?

Nowadays, welcoming outsiders to fullfill the demand of labourforce , which local workes are unwilling to do, can cause cultural and social dispute in the community. Therefore , the foreign workers, however, should be banned. I strongly disagree with this point due to merits that immigrant workers contribute towards on country GDP and baised selection of the employee in the work place.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I strongly agree with this sentiment, the development now reach what we haven't though about it before. The science is key to reach and have everything. Although with the development of it all the world try as much they can to be more successful than others.

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Some people believe that since the children now have access to the Internet, they no longer need to attend school and can learn at home using the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Because the internet has transformed education in recent years, some argue that attending school is no longer necessary for children, since they could conveniently attend online classes from home using the internet. I totally disagree with this assertion, as I believe that children must aquire a comprehnsive set of skills provided in a school enviroment, as well as the hands-on activity and the field trips.

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Some people think that government should not spend money on sports stadium and building theatres. Instead it should spend more money on education. Do you agree or disagree

Many people claim that government should not spend money on sports stadiums and building theatrs. They say that this money should be spent on education. Nowdays we can confirm that governments spend too much money on sports and stadiums because of it's incomes. They invest money on these stuff because it has a huge profit and rating amount. Same thing can be said for theatrs also. Some governmesnts can balance spendings on sports, arts and education. If it is balanced right, people of the government do not ususally complain. However, sometimes money is mostly spent on arts and sports, and I do not think that this is right, and most of people agree with me on this issue.

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In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development

It is argued that in some nations, employees take the majority of time at work. The reason why this happens is because they want to get a promotion, it is a negative development because it causes exhaustion.

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In recent years, many countries have introduced laws to make public transport free of charge. Do the advantages of free public transportation outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, in several countries have introduced laws to make public transportation free of charge. While this trend brings a lot of benefits to environment and social, however, it also presents certain financial and practical challenges. I personally disagree with this statement as it affects on energy. However, the other factors opinions should be considered.

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Many people think it is very important to protect environment but they make no effort to do it themselves. Why does it happen? How to solve this problem?

t is a noticable phenomenen that many people do not make a difference on conserving environment, although they really aware the significance. What shoudn't be neglected are the inner logic and deeper reasons behind it.

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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Many people believe that the abortion rate has been increased over the past few years because of the unplanned occurence of pregnancy , whereas other says it should not be permitted . In my opinion , it should be legal as it is the sole decision of parents to have a baby .

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Countries should produce enough food for their own population and import as little as possible. Do you agree or disagree with this statemen

The world has changed greatly in the prvious years, especially when it comes to food production. Many people think that governments should focus on food production only for their countries and try to avoid importing food as much as possible. I partialy agree with that idea. This easy will explain my point of view about complete production of food and import as little as possible.

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Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true ? What is the function of a newspaper?

Nowadays, Majority of individuals believes that the reality of the news should be objective rather than subjective . In the upcoming paragraph we will shed light on why it so , with some supportive examples.

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Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced number of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

We live in digital era, where people cummunicate with each other through social media such as email and messages. Due to that people don't like to spend more time to visit their friends. Because of it their social lives is impacted by negative effects. From my point of view It can also leads us towards disaster.

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In many countries, primary and secondary schools close for two months or more in the Summer holidays. What is the value of long school holidays? What are the arguments in favour of shorter school holidays?

In this digitalised era, in every country where governments announce holidays for students in every education sector. Vacation is held by the education department in the summer than in other seasons like autumn,spring and winter. Although temperature percentage is considered different in every country but in most of them the climate rises more particularly in summer. According to a recent survey, world news claims that in more than seventy countries temperature almost risen to almost 43 °C. So from my perspective, it can help students to be safe from varicella disease.Moreover, it can be enjoyable with families through different ways , like a trip to amazing countries like Western Italy. northern areas ot Pakistan and east of New Zealand. According to the first statement, many sectors of the education department , like schools, colleges and universities, remain closed in summer for more than two months or three. Particularly these holidays for students to enjoy their life with fami...

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Many elderly individuals fail to engage in regular exercise. What factors contribute to this issue, and how can we encourage them to exercise more? How it can be solved?.

Some older people refuse to do physical activities. In my opinion, it can happen, because of lack of motivation, awareness of benefits and also limited access to facilities. However, it can be solved through organising community fitness programs for seniors and raising awareness and give medical guidance.

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