IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 14

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that there should be the death penalty for extremely serious crimes. Others believe that it is not morally correct to kill criminals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

At present era death penalty is anti against whether to have or not. In this essay I am going to discuss both the points and then explain why I believe.

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Many government thinks that economic progress is their most important goals, some people however thinks that other progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

From many years ago, the strenght of a government or a nation is determine by the strenght of their economy. While many think that a country's progression in the economy sector is important, I believe that other areas such as education is equally as important.

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In achieving personal happiness, our relationships with family, friends and colleagues are more important than work and wealth. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some say having personal happiness and good relations with family,friends and colleagues are way crucial than work and wealth. I agree with the statement but nowadays money is very important to survive.

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The comparison of the production and the consumption of rice in X country The comparison of rice and other food crops comsumed in X country

The line graph illustrates the amount of rice production and consumption in the past and prediction for the future, while the bar chart gives information about how much rice and other food crops was and will be consumed in a particular country.

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Sociologists opine that social networking websites can have a negative impact on society as they can be used to spread false information. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that social networks can have impact on society. While it is a commonly held belief that social media can have a negative impact on people they use it and spread falsse information. There is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, i consider that social network websites are have to sides first one is possative and the other one is negative. To beging with, social network websites is a big world we can found right information and also thier is rong information. In other words, we can found new information about any thing we intrestied on it there is not a big sluotion if we learn new thing from internet if is not impact on our hailth. For example, old people take all whatsapp massige on serioues way. Another point to consider, it is very wrong to take all internet information and believe it, if we believe it well spread all this false information on socitety and it well make a big proplem first, disesse will increase because they independad on wa...

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Some people believe that we should do our best to mitigate the effects of climate change, while others believe that we should learn how to live with it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today's world, climate change become one of the beggiset problems in the twentith century. Both animals and humans suffer of many illnesses that are caused by the climate change. Therefore, some people believe that it is our reponsibility as a socaity to satnd aginst people who are the reason behind making the climate change worse.

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The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the production of chocolate. Overall, there are ten stages in total of the process, beginning with cultivating cocoa trees and finishing with the chocolate packed.

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Some experts belive that it is better if parents are giving the right to know everything about their child. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that parents should give the right to know everything about their kids. Whereas I agree with that children have to know what they want to know, I do still believe it has more drawbacks.

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In the furture, buses, cars and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside will be passengers. Do you think tha advantages driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that, due to the development of technologies, we will be driving cars with no drivers in the future. Whereas there are a couple of advantages of driverless vehicles, I still believe that there are more drawbacks than benefits.

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In order to solve traffic problems,government should tax private car owners heavily and use the funds to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution.

In the days of developing Era,the vehicle is a debatable issue in all the nations across the world.For controlling problems, some folks assert that legal bodies should gather more tax from the car owners and use these tariffs to enhance the performance of local mobility. In the essay , I clarified the pros and cons of given resolution.

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nowadeays many medical research projects are funded by private compnies. in your opinion , do you think that resersh shoul be carried by private companies , individuals or government? give reasons for your answer

In today's reality almost every medical research projects are financed by private compnies and as an every situation it has positive and negative effects. Personally i Think that medical researches should be conducted by private compnies but under the goverments control.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree ?

In recent year, there has been a growing debate over whether the traditional five-day working week should be shortened to allow for longer weekends. From my perspective, although there may be adverse economic consequences, this proposal is both rational and prudent.

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Public celebrations (festivals, national day) are held in some countries. Some people think that they are very expensive and the government should spend money on some other important issues. Do you agree or disagree?

Government host some celebration for people in many countries . But people think this is waste of money they have to spend money to other important works.

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Now more than ever, people are aware of the importance of good health. Unfortunately, many have poor lifestyle habits that are difficult to break. It is crucial for people to adopt better physical and dietary routines if they expect to improve their health. Which of the following do you think is the best way to stay in good health? - Participating in group sports - Learning how to cook healthy meals - Joining a gym and following a strict exercise routine

The chart shows the comparison how many international students are studying at the cathedral school and where they come from.

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Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face-to-face. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or negative development?

Modern people prefer to interact in virtual reality instead of real life. I conclude it happens because of advances in technology and easiness that is resulted, but I personally criticise this phenomenon.

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In many countries people working in sport and entertainment earn much more money than professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers. Why do you think this happens in some societies and do you consider it is good or bad?

In this modern era, money is necessary to fullfil to human essential. There is always debatable between working salary professionals like doctors, teachers money with sports and entertainment. However, I quiabble for them and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools, especially at the preschool level. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Music industry is a growing business in today's society. People has discovered music many years ago. However, the study of music remains controversial in particular at the preschool level. In my opinion, music should be taught and emphasized as a major subject like science stream and here are my reasons.

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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree .

Some people believe that internet will be the most beneficial way to learn about the news, however, I believe that the newspapers also are the best way to read something equally with the internet.

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Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Some people believe that, the price of tourist attractions for overseas people should be more expensive. I completely disagree with this view.

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Many young people leave school with negative attitudes towards learning. What are the causes？How to encourage young people to study？

There is an opinion that asserting a lot that can be inferred into leaving school by students and the way they incourage.There are many responses on this dilemma such as financial consistants, the method of theaching which might be offered by institudes and the subject that some of people detest to learn; however, my personal approach toward this is that many boys and girls do not like to learn because some of subjects are hard to learn like maths,but, by applying new methods in tutoring this issue can be solved.I will discuss the reasons and how to encourage people to learning.

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