IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 14

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I strongly agree with this sentiment, the development now reach what we haven't though about it before. The science is key to reach and have everything. Although with the development of it all the world try as much they can to be more successful than others.

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Some people believe that since the children now have access to the Internet, they no longer need to attend school and can learn at home using the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Because the internet has transformed education in recent years, some argue that attending school is no longer necessary for children, since they could conveniently attend online classes from home using the internet. I totally disagree with this assertion, as I believe that children must aquire a comprehnsive set of skills provided in a school enviroment, as well as the hands-on activity and the field trips.

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Some people think that government should not spend money on sports stadium and building theatres. Instead it should spend more money on education. Do you agree or disagree

Many people claim that government should not spend money on sports stadiums and building theatrs. They say that this money should be spent on education. Nowdays we can confirm that governments spend too much money on sports and stadiums because of it's incomes. They invest money on these stuff because it has a huge profit and rating amount. Same thing can be said for theatrs also. Some governmesnts can balance spendings on sports, arts and education. If it is balanced right, people of the government do not ususally complain. However, sometimes money is mostly spent on arts and sports, and I do not think that this is right, and most of people agree with me on this issue.

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In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development

It is argued that in some nations, employees take the majority of time at work. The reason why this happens is because they want to get a promotion, it is a negative development because it causes exhaustion.

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In recent years, many countries have introduced laws to make public transport free of charge. Do the advantages of free public transportation outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, in several countries have introduced laws to make public transportation free of charge. While this trend brings a lot of benefits to environment and social, however, it also presents certain financial and practical challenges. I personally disagree with this statement as it affects on energy. However, the other factors opinions should be considered.

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Many people think it is very important to protect environment but they make no effort to do it themselves. Why does it happen? How to solve this problem?

t is a noticable phenomenen that many people do not make a difference on conserving environment, although they really aware the significance. What shoudn't be neglected are the inner logic and deeper reasons behind it.

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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Many people believe that the abortion rate has been increased over the past few years because of the unplanned occurence of pregnancy , whereas other says it should not be permitted . In my opinion , it should be legal as it is the sole decision of parents to have a baby .

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Countries should produce enough food for their own population and import as little as possible. Do you agree or disagree with this statemen

The world has changed greatly in the prvious years, especially when it comes to food production. Many people think that governments should focus on food production only for their countries and try to avoid importing food as much as possible. I partialy agree with that idea. This easy will explain my point of view about complete production of food and import as little as possible.

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Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true ? What is the function of a newspaper?

Nowadays, Majority of individuals believes that the reality of the news should be objective rather than subjective . In the upcoming paragraph we will shed light on why it so , with some supportive examples.

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Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced number of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

We live in digital era, where people cummunicate with each other through social media such as email and messages. Due to that people don't like to spend more time to visit their friends. Because of it their social lives is impacted by negative effects. From my point of view It can also leads us towards disaster.

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In many countries, primary and secondary schools close for two months or more in the Summer holidays. What is the value of long school holidays? What are the arguments in favour of shorter school holidays?

In this digitalised era, in every country where governments announce holidays for students in every education sector. Vacation is held by the education department in the summer than in other seasons like autumn,spring and winter. Although temperature percentage is considered different in every country but in most of them the climate rises more particularly in summer. According to a recent survey, world news claims that in more than seventy countries temperature almost risen to almost 43 °C. So from my perspective, it can help students to be safe from varicella disease.Moreover, it can be enjoyable with families through different ways , like a trip to amazing countries like Western Italy. northern areas ot Pakistan and east of New Zealand. According to the first statement, many sectors of the education department , like schools, colleges and universities, remain closed in summer for more than two months or three. Particularly these holidays for students to enjoy their life with fami...

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Many elderly individuals fail to engage in regular exercise. What factors contribute to this issue, and how can we encourage them to exercise more? How it can be solved?.

Some older people refuse to do physical activities. In my opinion, it can happen, because of lack of motivation, awareness of benefits and also limited access to facilities. However, it can be solved through organising community fitness programs for seniors and raising awareness and give medical guidance.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Most people whould prefer to work alone or to be indepandet it, rather than be an employed by a firm. For this matter there is many reasons why they want to choose this path exactly. However for such decision like that, lots of circumstances surrouned it, and why it might fail.

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4)Children can learn effectively by watching television . Therefore they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

In recent times , watching informative content on television can be effective means of learning by adolescents. Due to this , some proponents thinks that offsprings should be motivated to watch T.V. on daily basis. In my opinion , I largely agree with the standpoint and my viewpoint will be shed light on the ensuing paragraph.

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fossli fuels such as coal , oil, and natural gas are the main energy sources in many countries the use of renewable energy like wind and solar power is being encouraged . do you think this is a positive or neagtive development

in recent times , in many coutries the use of renewable energy has been a topic of interest, while some might hold the belief that use renewable energy is a positive development . I hold the view that using renewable energy brings many negative inveronment . The following essay will shed light on these viewpoints.

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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, companies always proudly highlight the technology which is invented recently that is included in the latest product. There are several resaon behind the phenomenon. Although this brings benefit, I believe that the negaticve effent could cover the positive part.

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In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their childern to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that childern going to single-sex schools have disadvantage later in life To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays parents in many of parts of the world is freely to pick what school their kids wanna go is it conversional school or even same gender school. In my opinion many downside aspects for children to learn and study at this type of school. However being able to focus on the study and not knowing or involved in romantic relationships can be the advantages.

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An Increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problem does this causes? What solutions that can you suggest to deal with this situation?

The number of professional workers in the field of medicine and schooling is leaving their needy state to advance nation-states. Furthermore, poor land sometimes give a small amount of wages, moreover education in medicine is very high price in addition to returning the invesment, many residents try to work in high-income countries. Therefore country needs to make a higher salary to doctors and teachers

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

Nowadays, people prefer to buy foreign products rather than locally produced ones. The main reason for this trend is that they believe the quality of goods varies depending on the brand. The following discussion will explore the factors leading people to choose imported food and propose ways to motivate them to buy locally produced items.

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In many countries senior positions have higher salaries compared to those of young workers of the same company. Some people think this isn't justified. Do you agree or disagree?

A good salary is one of significant part of better career prospects. Many companies around the world pay higher income to its senior employees while the younger workers are paid less. While few people argue that is this inequality in pay is not justified. However, In my opinion this system of higher income to senior staff is acceptable.

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