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Some people say governments should give health care the first priorities,while some others belive there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayer's money.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different opinions on the priority order for spending of government when allocate taxpayers' money.Some people think healthcare should be the top priority,but some others consider that other areas deserve more attention.
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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your oponion.

Some believe that it is essential to share as much imformation as possible for academic, business and scienfic research. However, critics argue that some information must be kept private as it is too important and valuable to be shared freely. I hereby agree with the latter opinion as most of the details can be used as a weapon against us.
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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think that it’s a waste of time. Discuss both sides of question!

Some people believe that art lessons should be essential at schools to help children to strengthen their skills and build their imagination. However, others think these lessons are unvaluable and waste their time.
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Some people believe that stricter punishments can reduce crime rates. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Laws and society rules are essential in any civilized nation. Some researchers think that harder sanctions can limit crime levels. In my opinion, i agree with that proposal of strengthien punishments; however, in this essay the both aspects will be discussed.
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Many people think that increasing business and cultural contacts between countries is a positive development. However, others believe that these are leading to the loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Many people believe that business and cultural contacts between countries is positive, while others believe that countries loss their national identities because of globalization. I personally believe that while cultural and business contacts between countries do not let countries celebrating their traditions, it is a positive development because countries can protect each in others' traditions and culture.
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These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having a negative impact on children's beahaviour.do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that we are watching an increasing amount of violence on TV, and this trend is negatively impacting the behaviours of children. I personally agree with this statement because children follow their elders, and if they watch these age-inappropiate contents, they want to copy them. This trend also affects their studies.
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Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both view points and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

In my opinion, both factors are important, which one is more important I do not know. From my point of viev, perspective at work is the most important issue, good working atmosphere it is just a benefit. I will try to explain my opinion.
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The gragh below shows the changes in production of three products in a garment factory

This line graph illustrates the changes in production of three kinds of clothes in a garment factory between 1990 and 2010.
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Eating too much of sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is the responsibility of government to limit people's sugar consumption while others think that it is an individual responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Consumption of suger is too comman thesedays ,although it is harmful for health. Some people believe that government should do something to control the usage of sugar , while others thinks that it is the responsibilty of an individual to minimize the consumption of sweets. I believe that it should be controlled by an individuals.
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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relativity large number of young adults convert with the number of older people do the advantages of this situation outweight the disadvantages

Recently, young people population have increased in some countries compared with elderly people. Although it has positive aspects, especially financially, it could lead to lack of experimental worker.
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“Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.”

It is considered by some individuals, increase in economic development will help in solving the problem of poverty, whereas, some said economic growth would leads to environmently problem. I support the view that, increase in economy will help in generating more job which will help in solving the problem of unemployment. Meanwhile, industrial development will cause air pollution and water pollution.
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Some people think that only staff who worked in a company for a long time should be promoted to higher positions. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples.

According to many, in order for employees to increase their position in workplace, an extended period of experience need to be requirement. I strongly disagree with this perspective on the grounds that, by lenghtening promotion period, workforce faces both motivation challenges and injustices.
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Writing task 1Writing task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

In this modern days, the usage of computer is undeniably important. Even children use computer to complete their school assignment. It is agreed however, that using computer daily have more negative than positive outcome. It can lead to addiction, as well as poor implication to health.
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Recent research has shown that media like the internet and TV has a greater influence over people’s lives than politicians. Which do you consider to be the greater influence? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

According to a recent research media such as Internet and TV have a great influence over the lives of the public than politicians. I personally believe that media has a great influence over the lives of public because public follow media to access information and news, and they can be motivated and negatively affected by the media.
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Many parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, unfortunately children were exposure to pressure. Definitely it's correct some parents especially blame to their children for unsuccess. I think shouldn't be thing. But now people being want specifically become doctor or pilot most of list for parents choice for their children.
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One of the major problems that faces today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

With the increasing populations worldwide, inevitably there wil be an increased in human's necessities. A place to live or home is an essential need and the governments are facing issues to meet this demands. However, this does come with consequences in particular to our nature. Not only development can cause pollution, it can also harm our flora and fauna.
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You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. *describe why you are having the party *give directions on how to get to the venue *suggest how you cab accommodate him or her

I am delighted to tell you that,I am going to organize a wonderful wedding anniversary party on coming 5th of November in a grand hotel at our city.I would like to invite you and your family to join with this special occasion as you are the one and only friend for me.Since it will be the last celebration here in Sri Lanka, so I decided to share my happiness with lot of kind hearted people like you.
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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

Hello everyone, As we know that growing number of overweight people is putting negative impact on our health system,so i am completely agreeing with this point that education or awarness play vital role in every field and education can bring change in any kind of environment, as we can solve this issue with education like we can arrange some various kind of awareness public camps in which we can introduce some free medical camps we can arrange some doctors with help of doctors with help of government sponsership so they can help in create awareness as they can provide free consultation and few medical test in this people attract towards these camps and moreover we can also promote health awareness through some booklets which can we provide them some kind of social public places, acc to the education not only related to for health of school we can associated with some extra activities so it can create popel interest in this issue.
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In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

First of all, we all believe that the economic situation has a great influence on our lives on different sides, lots of nation convinced that the economic situation has an opposite effect on social values, although I have a great faithful in our social values however I will discuss the advantage and disadvantages.
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𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘋𝘪𝘢𝘨𝘳𝘢𝘮𝘴 𝘣𝘦𝘭𝘰𝘸 𝘴𝘩𝘰𝘸 𝘢 𝘴𝘮𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘭𝘰𝘤𝘢𝘭 𝘮𝘶𝘴𝘦𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘴𝘶𝘳𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘥𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘴 𝘪𝘯 1957 𝘢𝘯𝘥 2007

Two pictures describe information about the difference between museums between 1957 and 2007. Overall, there current situation of the museum has been renovated between the inside and outside. In addition, the car park has been added to make it easier for visitors to coming to the museum and several rooms have been building to make the museum more convenient.
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