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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.

Nowadays , technologies are developing so al lot of websites  are created by website founders ,  especially social medias are most popular among the various age groups . However, posting personal informations by may be a risk for individuals . I think more disadvantages than advantages , because they are safety and creating comfortable zone , I will discus both options
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The funds for postgraduate research are limited; therefore, some people think that financial support from the government should be provided. However, only scientific research should be funded, rather than other, less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In order for government and the societies they control to improve, it is necessary that support be provided to the next generation of thinkers that pursue postgraduate studies. With this idea of government support in mind, we have to consider putting all of the funding towards science, which is the controversial stance that some desire. Providing the entirety of the money towards science is a horrible idea, as arts and the communication are equally deserving of this postgraduate financing.
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In many workplaces, online communication is now more common than face to face meetings. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In contemporary times, many are of the opinion that meeting someone via the internet has risen in popularity than face to face meetings. While I acknowledge that there are certain benefits to this trend, I am confident that there are also downsides due to several reasons.
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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

We live in the time when our kids could see flying cars and driverless buses, or trucks on the autopilot in the future. These new technologies have advantages and disadvantages, and of course can impact the lives of simple citizens.
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Some people say that to reduce crime there should be longer prison sentences. However, others believe that there are other better ways. Discuss give own opinion

Nowadays an increasingly number of people are becoming concerned about reduce crime should be longer prison sentences. There are two diametrically opposed opinions on the matter. Some people assert that should be longer prison while others state that thera are other better ways. In the forthcoming lines of this essay I shall discuss both sides of the argument, and explain why I am in complete agreement with the latter wievpoint.
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Some people say that history provides little or nothing to us, while others argue that we must learn history to understand the present. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People always say that we should remember history. We learn history from childhood, but we can not go back to the past. However, whether history can give us experience and lessons is what we should think about, especially its impact on the present.
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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectaction of job satisfaction for all workers?

People prefer to spend most of their adult time at occupation, beacuse job satisfaction become crucial part of wellbeing of individual. I think there are several factors that are playing important roles in job satisfaction such as environment, and a number of salary. Job satisfaction is really important for all workers in their do their work.
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Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

In recent years, there have been numerous people who argued about consuming meat can cause serious health problems. As such, there are agreements and disagreements to this trend, although I opine that its disagreements outweigh the agreements. In my opinion, I disagree with this opinion. In this essay, I will examine all the relevant arguments based on experiences.
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It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

The people who travel to different places to learn about other culture and tradition ,some says that learning through books, films and through Internet are enough .Visiting the places and knowing about their culture gives you better experience than learning through Internet, books and films .Let us discuss both ideas.
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Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could computers be considered a hindrance?

It is easy to understand why some people believe that computers are more of a hindrance than a help. Operations such as obtaining a refund or changing a ticket tend to be fairly straightforward without the aid of a computer, yet once one is involved, the process can become time-consuming, complex and prone to errors. In an office environment, it can sometimes seem that for every hour saved by computers, at least set of problems caused by a system malfunction.
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2)The world is experiencing dramatic in population,which is causing problems not only for developing countries but also for developed nations Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes and suggest at least one possible solution.

The population of the Earth is growing day by day. Every country wants to have an impressive population. However, such organized reinforcement can harm the government, since the presence of more people means the coexistence of demanding and complex problems.in this way, not many people support this and want a solution to be found.
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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Nowadays, peoples are loving travel, In our busy life visiting places give more mind relax and happy. Part of the people decide small areas go to visit, another part of people go to tour different areas such sahara desert or Antarctic. They decide based on their money and mindset. When we decide go to different areas that will give advantages and drawbacks. Following paragraph that will discuss.
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Some people think that using mobile phones and computers has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

It is says that utilizing smart phone and computer by teenager has bad impact on teeenagers reading and writing mastery. This essay strongly disagree with this statement because using technology giving more opportunity to improve the expertis on reading writing also it is helping to practicing whenever they want, whereever they are.
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Some people believe that the purpose of education is to make individuals useful to society, while others think that education should help people pursue personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Recently, the purpose of why people should accept education increased a significant discussion. It is clear that, educated people have their own society responsibility, since the government invest a brunch amount of tax to established this system. However, opponents would argue that individual should pursues their own profile after education. This essay would discuss both view respectively and advice that this two idea are not opposite.
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More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV progams to get news. They get news about the world through the internet. Is this positive or negative development?

News are the major identity in every countries. It is come from newspaper, TV programs, radio castings. Nowadays, while, most of the people is not motivated to read newspaper or watch TV programs to get news and they addicted to go online to get news all over the world. However, it is time-consuming and no need extra cost for get news are the positive development. Although, in my perspective it is not reliable source and lot of gossips spread through the internet.
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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive development or negative development?

The thought of promoting a brand and showing that it is new in the advertise has been increasingly common. This is because life has been taken mammoth dimensions. I applaud the efforts being made to bring the transition.
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Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the sahara What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

With the extreme conditions are becoming more and more common, many researchers tend to choose to work or study in such places, or just for sightseeng. There are some benefits and drawbacks that should be concered.
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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, Television entertains people often and distracts them from the actual goal they set. However, it is a problem to have such type of technology which allows the person to be lazy. It is strongly agreed that TV is not good for health reasons to individual hence this essay will explain with point why television can be harmful to the individual in the following paragraphs.
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Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While it is believe by some that competitive sports can contribute to positive impacts on the education of teenagers,others claim that there have negative consequences.This essay will delve into the detalis of both points of view in addition to my opinion.
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Topic: More and more people think there is no need for printed paper newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most of the individuals believe that there is no need of printed newspapers. I agree with the given statement to a great extent . Because , we can read news through mobile phones on Facebook . In this way we can save paper as well .
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