IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 173

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think most crime is the result of circumstances. Otthers believes that most crime is cused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Some people say series of conditions is the reason behind most crime. others thinks bad nature of some people is the result of most crimes. In this essay, I will discuss the caused behind of the majority of the crimes and I will provide my point of view.

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Nowadays. More and more people decide to have children in their later life .what do you think are for this reasons. Do the advantages of the trend outweigh the disadvantages.

Majority of nation, more and more dwellers plan to have kid delay in their life. It is easily seen that the financial burden is one of the reason why many spouses tend to latter their childbirth because birth early forces then to tighten the budget. The advantages of this trend outshine the disadvantages which I will hashout in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language still could be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent days, technology has been helping very much in people’s today life and we can also talk that technology are playing an important role in our life now. And because of the growth of technology, there are also more and more translation software available in the internet. But in the other side, although the increasing rapidly of translation software, there is still an opinion about learning a language still could be advantageous. And for me, this is an excellent opinion.

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Freshwater is a limited resource in certain regions of the world. Today, the escalating demand has transformed it into a global problem. What are the causes of increasing demand? What measures can governments and individuals take to respond to the problem?

Clean water is a restricted recourse in certain nations of the earth. Nowdays, the

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Nowadays consumers are faced with the advertisements from all kinds of companies. To what extent do you agree that consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures should be taken to protect them?

There has been a claim that buyers are encountered with the advertisements from all sorts of corporations. I completely agree that there are many types of advertisements recently, and consumers are exposed to them easily. There are several reasons why I agree with this topic, and methods protecting people.

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Some people think the newly built houses should be the same as the old houses in local areas. Others argue that local authorities should allow people to build houses in their own style. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In a free society, it is important to speak your opinion. Nowadays, people are begging to understand the values and strengths of free speech

In a free society, it is important to speak your opinion. Nowadays, people are begging to understand the values and strengths of free speech. Personally , I agree that the spread of freedom of speaking is not only desirable for people today but also popular.

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Freedom of speech is vital in free society? Do you agree or disagree?

Now people are beginning to realise that in our days we can tell what do we want , where do we want and when do we want. So am i agree with that people can now freely share their opinions?

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Machines and robots are increasingly replacing workers in a number of industries. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Technology equipments are developing and they are supplanting employees in many factories .I am of the opinion that the number of benefits exceeds that drawbacks , which will be discussed in this essay .

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In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment.

Nowadays, the number of crimes still increase and the percentage teenagers who join it is also rising. Certain people think that should send teenagers crimes who join the heavy crimes into the jail as well as the adult people to receive same punishment. This essay will shed light on this situation and put forward of my opinion that I keep neutral views about this statement.

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The developments in Happy valley shopping center from 1982 to 2012 is represent by maps

The images illustrate detailed information about how the Happy Valley shopping centre developed in the space of three decades.

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Global warming is one of the various climate issues. Discuss the possible causes ad offer measures to control the damage caused.

These experiences of involvements in projects and industrial exposure were both deeply insightful and in fact were contributing factors in my growing enthusiasm in the aircraft systems and flight performance field. Now, I am eager to delve deeper into this specialized field, working to develop an application that can enhance safe operation of UAV through accurate trajectory planning and optimization. Additionally, I am committed to promoting gender diversity in engineering. Even in my undergraduate level, through my positions in student bodies such as Business Manager in Society of Mechanical and Aerospace Engineering Students (SOMAES) and Webmasters/ Social Media Manager in SEDS-Pulchowk, I have actively participated in motivating the younger generation into STEM, especially women. A graduate degree will not only enhance my technical expertise but also position me as a role model and advocate for women in engineering.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visits such places?

Over the last two or three decades. the tourism sector has been revolutionzing due to the globalaisation. As a result, the explorer are visited to the rare places like Sahara desert and Antartic. This has some benefits along with some drawbacks to visit such these locations. This essay will discuss it briefly for the following reasons.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays fashion industry plunged into the new age with the global money surplus when people buy clothes as a hobby without any reasons. It is like a human physiological disease and general public cannot stop wasting money on useless sneakers, t-shirts and other stuff. Some people consider that it is closely connected with people’s mindset. If you have brandy shoes, you are better that people who have mass market clothes. However, others consider that it is not true, so let us get to the bottom of this problem.

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Many parents encourage young people to leave home when the become older. While others thinks that they should stay at home with family. Discouse both views and give your own opinion.

Many families try to convice the younger generations to leave house when they get adults while others wants them to stay at home. I will discuss each perspectives and share my own opinion.

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In spite of advantage made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

Technology is flourished by leaps and bounds in each and every field, especially agriculture sector. Even though, people are still facing famine issue to around the world. Two main reasons for this situations ans two feasible solutions can be mitigate this issue.

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Students in schools and universities learn more from their teachers than through other means such as the Internet, libraries, and TV. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that Internet, TV, libraries and other technology can better teach students than the teachers. While I strongly disagree with this statement, because individuals can have better conversations with teachers in class and it is about clear data and information that provide teachers at schools and universities.

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Living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often argued that people have more health problems especially when they live in larger cities. While I agree with this statement, I believe that they have immense benefits considering the standard of living. This essay will discuss my opinion in detail with relevant examples.

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Buying things on the internet such as book, air ticket and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages.

In this era of diverse technological advancements, it is very much common to place orders for books, flight tickets or to even do monthly household shopping by a click on one's personal computer.

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Some people think that the best way to ensure road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Talk about 1 and 2 graphs.

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