IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 10

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Health experts say that obese women and women over the age of 40 should not be given free fertility treatment (IVF) because they are more likely to experience health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Older women should not be provided with free fertility treatments according to some health specialists as there are higher chances of medical issues. This essay will delineate the both aspects along with the reasons why I do not agree with the given statement.

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Throughout history, male leaders always lead us to violence and conflict. If a society is governed by female leaders, it will be more peaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people said a peaceful society could only happen if a woman were in charge. That opinion is formed because history has shown us that warfare and conflict are mostly led by male leaders. In that regard, i would disagree with the statement.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some students believe, that focusing on qualification subjects is more valuable, than studying other in addition to their main course. They are also concentrate their full time and attention for their university subjects, but is it really better, or not?

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to thair main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

University students strugle to understand how to use their knowledge and time before trying to qualify somewhere. They swing between learning about other areas. In addition to their main subjects and giving all of their time and ambitions on studying for a selected course.

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Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity.However,somepeople feel that this has both positive and negative effects. Why is shopping so popular? What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society?

Nowadays, people are more fond of shopping than ever before and shopping has became a from of leisure activity. There have been profound impact on both individuals and society. This passage will focus on the reason of the phenomenon and the influence it bring out.

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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some of the people who are going to university take a break before starting university because of pleasure.Many people believe that it is excellent idea while others thinks it is a waste of time. In my opinion taking a break is really good idea for me .

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Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Other argue that teenagers shouldn’t sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. While some of them argue that teenagers shoud rest more by joining after-school activites instead of having an extra job outside school. I would lke to discuss on both views.

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Some people think that there will be decrease in international travel in future. Do you think the less amount of international travel is a positive or a negative development?

Some people make predication that in the upcoming future, people will visit different countries less. I believe that, this is a positive trend because, it will promotes organizations to grow within the Nation, and be stress-free travel.

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Health experts say that obese women and women over the age of 40 should not be given free fertility treatment (IVF) because they are more likely to experience health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is contend by health specialist that fertility treatment should not be practised by women, who are overweight, and above the age of 40, since it creates complexity during pregancies. Nevertheless, in my opinion, I totally agree with the viewpoints, due to the reduce abilities of natural birth after cross certain age limits, and malnutrition of an infant through innovation tools. This essay will shed lights on my position with reasons and examples.

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More and more people are using mobile phones and the internet to communicate. Therefore, people are losing their ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Cell phones and the internet are used as the medium of communication by many a number of individuals and this trend is being popular more than anything now a days. Consequently, people are being incapable in direct, real world face to face interactaion. In my opinion, I strongly agree that people are more invested in virtual connection rather than physical one in this internet dominated digital era.

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The two plans show how a farm has changed between 1950 and today. Overall, it is clear that the site has been significantly developed, with several new facilities added, while some original features have remained in the same place.

The two maps illustrate how a farm has changed between 1950 and today.

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In the future, nobody will by printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read eveything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The future of printed media is a topic to disscuss in many countries resently. I strongly agree withe the idea that printed news papers and books will become obsolite.

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In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In most of nations in Europe, fewer pupils from the age of 11 or 13 are send to schools to aquire excellent technical skills , which will promote them to aquire future employment, while other students remain in the institutions , which aids in gaining more academic studies. In my opinion, the schools should prepare both education in a balance way to support the learners for the employment for the world. This essay sheds light on both aspect of education with its examples.

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Some people think students should not leave universities without good understanding of how to manage their money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that financial management plays a vital role in improvement the economic condition of individuals. While it is a commonly held belief that students in a high stage should focus on this concept to enhance their life, there is also an argument that opposes it. From my perspective, I tend to believe that we should educate scholars about that in the early age.

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Some people belive that robots are very important to human’s future development, while others believe they are dangerous and negatively affect society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is usually believed that technology has a strong influence on people’s lives nowadays. In my opinion, I agree with this statement, but some people may disagree. In this essay, I am going to discuss this question from both points of view and give reasons for my opinion.

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The increasing use of social media has significantly changed the way people communicate. Although online communication has many advantages, it also has significant drawbacks. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The increasing use of social media has significantly changed the way people communicate. Although online communication has many advantages, it also has significant drawbacks.

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News media often focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

It is often argued that news organisations mainly highlight problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. This essay completely agrees with this view. Firstly, negative stories attract more audiences and therefore generate more profit for the media; secondly, this constant focus on crises can negatively affect people’s mental health and create unnecessary fear.

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Some toddlers are using mobile phones for hours each day. Why is this the case? Is this positive or negative development?

Many toddlers, nowadays, are using mobiles for long periods on a daily basis. This is because parents want to distract their children while they are busy with more important matters. This could have a negative impact on toddlers’ development because it reduces the interaction with the real world.

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Video records are better to learn about the way other people in the world lives than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is usually believed that video records are more effective than written documents in understanding how people around the world live. In my opinion, I agree with this statement, but some people may disagree. In this essay, I am going to discuss this question from both points of view and give reasons for my opinion.

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Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe printed materials should only be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many school of thought, strongly states that online reading materials should be imparted for pupils for learning to read, however, the other school states one have to be totally depend on printed material, both has its pros and cons. In my opinion, the second method is more reliable than the first. This essay sheds light on the advantages of online materials and disadvantage of it.

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