IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 10

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Employers should focus on personal qualities over qualifications and experience when choosing someone for a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent years, choosing employees have more personal qualities than qualifications and experience has become a broad issue for the general public. Some people argue that focus on personal qualities is better. However, it seem to me that employers should priority qualifications and experience workers. The following essay will clarify light on these viewpoints. Employers should focus on qualities over qualifications ad experience when choosing someone for a job has been a heated topic in the contemporary society.

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You have recently moved to a different city . you did not have a chance to tell your friend about the move . + Explain why you decided to move + Compare your new home with your prevlous home + Tell him / her about the aera you are now living in

I hope you’re doing well. I wanted to let you know that I’ve just moved to Da Nang City. Sorry, I didn’t tell you sooner. Everything happened quickly because I got a great new job here.

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Some people think watching television is bad for children in every way other belive it is good for devolping children as they grow up discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is beleived that kids have to learn and enjoy their lifes. Some people prevent their children for doing activities that west their times , and others courage their kids to wach TV and play computer games. In my opinion, kids should spend their time in learning and developing their skills in good ways, because in this age the learn is very important to grow their personalities and the TV nowadays is full of bad programs .

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Some consumers are increasingly choosing to buy goods that are produced in their local area, rather than imported goods. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative trend?

Despite the trend of globalization, quite a few people are preferable for regional produce over international products. A couple of factors are atrribute to this circumstance and I bieve that it's positive for boosting municipal economy.

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Many people think that the government should spend more money on providing faster and cheaper means of public transport. Some others think that there are important factors to take in consideration like (fuel,cost and environment) Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Public transport plays a vital role in the daily lives of millions of people around the world. Wit rising urban populations and increasing transport congestion, the need for effective public transport has never been greater. However, some individuals argues that additional considerations, including energy use, financial burden and environmental effects, are equally significant. This essay will discuss both views and provide a reasoned opinion.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too much choices. To what extend do you agree and disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn0owledge of experience.

Many individuals believe that people have so many different options in life. However, I totally agree with this statement, beccaus every person has to choose what major he should specialise in among a lot of other majors. In addition, he had to choose if he wants to travel to another country or city to get a better opportunity.

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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people’s lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is believed that people this days tend to follow the trend in social media such as global fashion trend . Some people change their types in dress especially the young because they follow many artisters or youtubers who influence their life. In my opinion , it is negative situation because of many reasons .The most important one is that their personality are not appear and they change the local culture. First and foremost, people follow global fashion trends because the big separate of social media , so the young wears what the popular youtubers wear ,that reflex on their personality and make their pessonality weak and do not be able to make decisons. For example, my friend follow tiktoker and used to wear the same clothes, so he can not choose any decision related to his life ,just make what the tiktoker make. On the other hand, most people follow the best action that they find it suitable for their life.In other words , the global fashion trends became benefit because it is not ...

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Nowadays families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this. Why is this happening ? Do the advantage of this trend outweigh the drawbacks ?

It is irrefutable, the family is consider the backbone in everyone's life.Although, numerous people are living apart from their family members due to certain reasons.However, in my opinion, education and profession are the primary causes of this phenomenon, and it is harmful for one's life.

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The internet has a bigger impact on people’s lives because it is more popular than television. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support you position.

The question is whether the internet has a bigger impact on person's lives du to its bigger popularity than television.

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Prison is an effective way to punish criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The best way to costigation criminals is jail. While some oppose this notice , I personally argue in favour.

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In order to solve the problems of cities related to pollution and traffic, some people say that the government should offer free public transportation. Do you think the advantages of this will outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe that fixing pollution and traffic problems can be solved by free public transportation. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this statement and the following examples will be provided in order to support my point of views.

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ome people think that visiting museums is the best way for children to learn history, while many others think there are several better ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As every country owns their own history, which should be knowledged by each citizen by different ways. Few states museums holds vast impact on learning history while remaining says teaching history can leads to many other improved ways and i strongly opine museums are the best way for new generation to learn their history and culture in better way but it can be also introduced by many more creative style in their lives. My essay will explicate both statements in detail.

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IN MANT COUNTRIES, PEOPLE ARE NOW LIVING LONGER THAN EVER BEFORE. SOME PEOPLE SAY AN AGEING POPULATION CREATES PROBLEMS FOR GOVERNMENTS. OTHER PEOPLE THINK THERE ARE BENEFITS IF SOCIETY HAS MORE ELDERLY PEOPLE. TO WHAT EXTENT DO THE ADVANTAGES OF HAVING AN AGEING POPULATION OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES?

It is argued that many problems arise with the increase in old age population. Many people think that having old people around is a blessing as they teach the next generation moral values. I strongly agree with the later statement.

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Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to vaccinate their children? You should use your ideas, knowledge, and experience, and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Nowadays the question of vaccination plays a critical role in society. The low about vaccination was debated for a long time, and even now some families have doubts about it. In my opinion, it is a controversial question because it depends on many predictions and the type of illness (first of all, how many resources already exist). On the one hand, I can understand the worries of parents about vaccination, because even in science articles they can find information about side effects and consequences of the same kind of vaccine. For example in Ukraine, with a new law, the government is strongly recommending getting the vaccine from COVID for babies from 0 to 6 months, without previous resources. On the other hand, we as a humanity can prove that the vaccine has already saved a lot of lives, and it is important not only to the person but also for the development of group immunity.

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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out of work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parent’s absence.

The children need someone to take care of them, therefore, anyone of the parents should stay at home instead of going to work. The question is, some people believe one of the parents should take care od the children and the other one goes to work. In my opinion, I believe they can not go to work together, one of them should take care of the children. In this essay. We are going to discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Nowadays, more and more people prefer choosing online courses to learn than attending regular classes. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, a considerable proportion of the population prefer studying online system rather than attending offline classes. This essay will discuss both the disadvantages and advantages of this trend.

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In some countries,owning a home rather than renting one is very importent for people. Why might this be case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

There is no denying the fact that importance of owning a home for many people and essential thing. While it is commonly held belf that many individuals like to owning a home rather than renting. There is also an argument opposes it. This essey will discus the postive and negtive ponits and i will express my opinion.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There are more and more parents like spending a lot of time with their children and teaching them by themselves at home instead of going to school. In my opinion, the benefits of this way outweigh the disadvantages and the child is able to get more help and harvest in their grownth.

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Home-schooling belongs in the past and it is unaccepted in modern society

Nowadays, technology is becoming popular day by day and children prefer to learn at their homes by using their devices. Some people believe that home-schooling have left in the history, while other argue it is not accepted in today's era. I strongly disagree with this, in the forthcoming paragraph will clear my point of view and will give my own opinion.

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Many people prefer to communicate through social media instead of face-to-face interaction. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In these days, people prefer communicating by internet rather than interacting face-to-face. This is good for people that is far from their friends and family and for shy people that have problems to socialize. However, there are cons for children and teens such as meet weird people and problems of isolation because children do not interact with others. In this essay I will try to cover whether the pros outweigh the disadvantages.

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