IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 202

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in on European country on different days

The chart illustrates the proportion of people visiting a cinema during seven days of the week in a European nation from 2003 to 2007.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

At present, when people face with health problems, they prefer using medicines and curing by non-professional rather than going to hospital. In my opinion, I believe that this is a negative development because patients will not recover from their sickness.

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People learn in different ways. Some people learn by doing; some people learn by reading; others learn by listening to lectures or watching demonstrations. Which of these methods of learning is best for you? Use specific examples to support your choice.

The way of learning is different for some peolpe, we currently have several forms of learning. We have computer, tablet, social media, although they help us, it can also be harmful. This essay will demonstrate different points of view and my opinion about learning forms around the world.

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Some people believe that money is the major source of happiness in life. do you strongly agree or disagree?

In today's society citizens consider that money plays an important role in happiness of our life. Yes money is needed at every instance of our life from our birth to the day we die and from my point of view i also think its true that cash does affect the smiles on our face. In the paragraph below i will elaborate my opinion for the same notion.

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Childhood obesity is increasing at rapid rates in developed countries. What are some of the causes of this problem? What are some ways in which childhood obesity rates can be reduced?

Nowadays, in occidental counties obesity has had an incredible rise for the last years. Actually, this health problem is seeing in the youngest, a fact that should concern to our government and take action about it. In this essay, I am going to discuss some of the causes and possible solutions that this issue may has.

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Many companies and Organisation required employees to wear uniform at work what are advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform?

There are always two sides to everything.The same goes for companies and organisations require employees to wear uniforms at work.Most people admire it as an advantage and some seem to take it as a negative impact on the employee. I personally believe that employers to wear uniform at work are advantages.

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Many students find it harder to study when they are at university or college than when they were at school. Why is this? What can be done to solve the problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there are many students who are at university or college find difficult to learn than when they studied at school. This essay will explore some reasons behind this phenomenon befor suggesting some solutions to tackle this issue.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society? You should write at least 250 words.

Majority of students across the globe are not keen in selecting science as a major or an elective in univerisities. There can be several factors that influence the students and let us see the major reasons for this problem.

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These days, more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

In today's world, some men tend to choose become a caretaker in the household while women are likely to earn money. This essay will look at some primary causes of this and provide a few my opinions below.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, the number of elderly people is increasing in many nations. While an ageing population doesn't have enough working employees, I believe that there're more advantages because the elderly have more expertise and can work effectively even after retirement.

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Some old people today struggle with the use of modern techonologies such as smartphones and computers. What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?

The lack of habituation with innovative tools due to the lifestyle of the old times is the reason is why a portion of old people find it challenging to work with smart electronic devices. However, this could be addressed by introducing courses to provide training to those residents.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays most of the countries are becoming same in the terms of products availability with similar qualities from all the places in the world. Though It is somewhat harmful for old traditional business at the same time, It's positive improvements overweight the negative improvements.

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Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no denying the fact that cohabitation for young people is a crucial thing. While it is a commonly held belief that cohabitation brings massive benefites for who deciding to get married of young people. In my opinion, I consider that it allow male and female to understand each other and get married.

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Some people think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to the new buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree? How important are old buildings?

Historical buildings are highlights of the nation. People argues that, buildings which are built before 10 decades should be demolish and construct modern ones. I completely disagree with this statement and will be explaining the importance of old buildings in the ensuing paragraphs.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

Countries nowdays wanted to be in every race either it is a coldwar or a Sport race. For this, they are inversting in best of the technology and in best of the best to win gold in olympics. At first glance, it looks healthy but later it is a disasterous move for healthy sports.

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Some people believe that children should be allowed to choose what subjects they study at school. Others argue that everyone should study the same subjects. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is believed by some echelons that study courses should be decided by toddlers, while others oppose this by stating that everyone should study the same subjects. I strongly agree with the first statement, because choosing thesis by own will not only lead to generate interests among youngsters, but will also precipate in generating great personalities to the nation. I will discuss both the points in upcoming paragraphs with lucid examples.

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4 – Young people spend their free time in shopping malls. This has negative effects on young people and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument that due to teenagers spending their spare time in shopping centers, consequently it brings undesirable effects on them and community. I partially agree with such point of view, because even though it is important to hang out with friends to socialize, it is not a good idea to encourage teenagers to spend so much money with unnecessary things.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction

It is commonly argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with high wage even if it does not appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that job satisfaction is much more important than salary.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

It is considered by some that, acceptable age for marriage should be minimum of 21 years but others oppose thet this is not a valid criteria. I agree that, the people should get married on or after their 21s because of the maturity and the financial readiness.

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Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Celebrating important events may be very attractive. Many people like to invest in their different parties and spend a lot of money in order to make a fancy celebration while others think that it would be a waste of money and time. I think that it is important to enjoy the different celebrations but besides to be realistic on that.

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