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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that schools should teach good behavior to children and introduce them to right and wrong. Parents should not only be the ones responsible. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In recent years, we might find the children in public especially in school were playing a phone for any occasions such as playing games, watching videos on the internet, or just scrolling social media, while the school actually not permitted the students to borrow their phone when in study time at school because infrequently, the children have a less of concentration if they are using too much screen time during the school day.

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too much emphasis is placed on education. more government money should be spent on providing free-time activities.To what extend do you agree or disagree?

there has been controversy about whether more funds be spent on educaional purpose or on providing recreational activities by government. From my perspective, I am in an opinion that the government should allocate more money for such leisure time activities which as important. I will discuss my arguments in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music

There are various genres of music. In contemporary societies a minute fraction of younger generation pays attention to classical music. There are numerous reasons for this, which I will explain in this reason, and there are substantial elements that illustrate the importance of encouraging youngsters to play or perform traditional music.

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It is believed that children from countries with a high level of unemployment should be offered just with a primary education and should not be offered with a secondary education as anyway they will not get a job in the future. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

There has been some certain debates in less economic developed countries with high rate of unemployment on the issue of education. Some people think that young people must be provided primary basic knowledge whilst others suggest they should not allow adult higher education. I completely disagree with this argument.

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Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world's fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that air travel causes pollution and uses a lot of fuel, but I disagree that air travel should be ected. I believe that restricting air travel would solve some problems but would lead to many other problems.

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Some people think that children should be raised by all the family members (e.g. Uncle, aunt and grandparents) rather than only parents. Give your opinion.

A child should be raised by all the family members like uncle ,aunt and grandparents rather than only parent. The child should grow in an environment were it spends time with all family members and shuold also know the feelings or meaning of the term family.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the current era, it is becoming increasingly common for companies to highlight on the novelty of their items. I wholeheartedly believe that advertising new products have both pros and cons.I will give further explanations in the following essay.

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People think that goverments should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve envinronmental problems. Give your opinion

The most problem of our circumstances caused by pollutant from cars and other vehicles. Many people believe that the best solution for the problem is rise the price of petrol. I agree that increasing the cost of fuel will impact to reduce greenhouse gas emissions and air pollutions, however that policy can effect for lower income people in a country.

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More students travel abroad for further education. Do you believe the advantages of this experience are greater than the drawbacks associated with it?

Nowadays, education has become an integral of everyone life with it people cannot achieve goals. Therefore, for getting best study students are migrating in big cites. I am totally disagree with this statement due to some reasons. This essay will explain all points in forthcoming paragraphs with relevant facts.

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Life has become much stressful compared to our parent’s generation. As a results, stress-related illnesses are increasing around the world. Why is stress such widespread in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems caused by stress?

Peer pressure in the today's era has led to an increasing people suffering stress-induced diseases, which is also making our life challenging compared to the good old times. However, I believe it can by resolved by introducing awareness programs in a society.

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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some that music, art and drama are equally important as other subjects at school, particularly, in the early years education. I completely agree with this because it focuses on their holistic development and also enhances their creativity skills.

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Some people believe that if people are allowed to buy guns, they will be able to protect themselves and the crime rate can be lower. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Nowadays, weapons are starting to be legalized by governments because they believe it. However, I do not agree and I suggest that guns or riffles should be banned in order to reduce any harm.

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Some people think it is better to have many short holidays during the year. Others believe it would be beneficial to have fewer, longer vacations. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Adapted

There are people who believe that it is better to have many short holidays during the year. While others think there are more advantages than backwards to have fewer, however, longer vacations.

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As housing is a basic need for people, government should provide free housing for everyone who cant't afford it, To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that housing is a simple condition of humans, people need to be provided free housing by the government because they can not buy it. Many people are very lucky as their parents gave them a house or a flat but a lot of people are not as lucky as them. In my point of view, I agree with that opinion, however, it is also difficult for the government.

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some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid communuty work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays youth generation are very powerfull, independent and one step forward in every field, situation and work. Few mankind claims that youngsters should be ready to giving helping hand in community work without any cost. So it will be win-win situation for teenagers as well as community. To larger extent I will agree with the given statement which i elaborate in trail paragraphs.

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some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid communuty work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outwigh the disadvantages?

Thank you for this nice cue card topic. While taking a photograph at a family event, everyone had to smile at me as I pointed the camera at them. In fact, without smiles, photographs remain incomplete. So, to make the photos complete and better, a smile is a must. And the people who posed for the picture smiled at the camera to get happy faces clicked. This cue card questions remind me of the day when I clicked a beautiful picture for some of my relatives. I will describe the matter here. The event was arranged marking the 19th birthday of ...... my cousin, here in ....... The event was nice and all the family members gathered here. The event was held on the rooftop and the place was decorated nicely. Some traditional foods were prepared for celebrating the solo. I helped a group of cousins to take some group photos and they smiled at me (camera). event. And finally, it was the time to take photos. Some took group photos while some took a It was more than a birthday party....

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Some people believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative trend?

Nowadays, most population believe that they are not keen on their culture and traditions like before. Moreover, Preserving them is one of the most important things for people because it helps them to introduce the history and structure of their country to the next generations and other communities. In other words, this problem has many bad effects on the traditional and historical conditions of any geographical region.

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The Internet when used as a source of information, has more drawbacks than advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

internet one of the sours of geting details , i strongly believe that sometimes it has a bad effect on our life specially on our time as well as mabye the source is out of science .

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Many manufactured food and drink contains high levels of sugar, Which cause many health problems. Sugary should be made more expensive to encourage to people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Most of the manufactured foods come with high levels of sugar and same can be created many health issues among people .There is an on going debat that sugary products should be made expensive just to encourage people to less consume the sugar and in this essay im writiing in favor of making sugary products expensive and below i have discussed the same in details .

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