IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 315

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes. Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive or negation development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, any kinds of developments can be monitored through social media. This includes contemporary fashion. Many youngsters do not want to be outdated, hence they are following that are trending on screen. This essay will share my thought on why I feel this is a negative development.

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it is important for children to learn the diffrence between right and wrong at an early age.punishment is necessery to help them learn this distinction. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

That is admittedly that children will behave wrongly during their growth period, this is because they are still learning on what is right and wrong. There are debates going on between parents and researchers whether they kids should be punished or not in order to act on the right way. I will share my opinions with regards to this issue.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?

The possibility for scientists and tourists to be able to travel to remote natural environments has its pros and cons. Based on these, opinions could be made as to whether it is positive or negative development.

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Students perform better in school when they are rewarded than punished. to what extend do you agree or disagree ?

It is irrefutable that, schooling plays a pertinent role in the child life, because it teaches necessary skills of the life.

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Some people believe that unpaid commuty service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some authorities think that secondary school must include unpaid community service as compulsory to everyone. I agree with the given statement because this inspires students to help their younger schoolmates, in addition, it brings holistic development to them. However, problem students may start to feel stress can be eliminated by the appropriate guidance of teachers. The main reason is that children understand the value of helping each other, morever the way sharing their knowledge. When they start taking part in charity tasks without payment they get information about their social needs and also understand their own value that how they can help many people. To give a clear example, many schools have started programs in vacation time when students of higher school visit the ruler area and teach children. This activity helps students to realise their knowledge can bring helps to other poor children who are unable to visit the school everyday or who are not very clever to understand...

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the samepark today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given plans illustrate the information on the Grange Park section is varied between 1920 and now. Overall, it can be apparent that the development of novel facilities, buildings and constructions at different times.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that schools are the best places to learn this. Discuss both these views.

all of the people can learn with everything and whenever you do that. not only parents must teach their children but also, they can learn from their children. the School is a place students for learning about the material subject, but most important children must learn from their families. I will discuss about this statement. no matter the best place for children get to learn. i think all people can learn whenever, and wherever.

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The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree.

Some people believe the authorities should allocate funding for prevention health and diseases issues than treatment and medicine. I totally agree with statement.

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Some people believe that educating people about the natural world is the most effective way to protect the environment. Other say there are more effective ways to protect the environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

According to the last century populaion rate increase day by by and still is growing. Here, manger problems facing this century now is growing population. Now we are going to near furture and facing many critical problems, so this essay will discuss highlight overpopulation causes and effects of this problem and which is solution of this problem.

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Students in a school should learn academic subjects and pass exams. Other skills such as cookery, dressmaking, and woodwork can be learned from family and friends. Do you agree or disagree?

It is discussed, one group of people thinks that the only purpose of movie is to entertain, while others believe it have to be educational.

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Some finding have revealed that. Cities around the world are growing large. Could you outline the possible cause and the predicted consequences?

In recent years, global growth enlargement in some cities has been a topic of ongoing debate .In the forthcoming paragraph, I will further this discussion by enlightening on some factors and project the possible effect of these causes. There are many reasons for this phenomenon, increase in population one of them ,that could lead to a high number of global inhabitants .Which in turn resulted in growth at an alarming rate in the country. As an example, India one of the most countries suffer from this issue. To illustrate , a normal family have six to seven children, and that is one of the main cases. Furthermore,high building and companies another reason, new construction takes up large spaces in the area. on top of that, a lot of accommodations like flats take a huge infrastructure too. Several results could be consequences, the biggest one is pollution which is a dilemma the world has to face it. Many countries in the world spread experience development, that lead to a toxic...

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Some findings have revealed that cities around the world are growing large. Could you outline the possible causes and predict consequences?

Nowadays, discoveries assert that there is a growth in enlargement in some cities globally.In the forthcoming paragraph, I will further this discussion by enlightening on some factors and project the possible effect of these causes. There are many reasons for this phenomenon, increase in population, could lead to a high number of global inhabitants .Which in turn resulted in growth at alarming in the country. As an example, India one of the most countries suffer from this issue. To illustrate , a normal family have six to seven children, and that is one of the main cases. Furthermore,high building and companies another reason, new construction takes up large spaces in the area. Whereas we have to consider cars and transportation in general . on top of that, a lot of accommodations like flats take a huge infrastructure too. Several results could be consequences, the biggest one is pollution which is a dilemma the world has to face it. Many countries in the world spread experienc...

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Nowadays more and more people are buying products and services on credit. Is it good or bad for the society?

It has become increasingly common that many people buy products or something because of advertisements or celebrities .Some people believe that it is good and reliable .However , personally I think we should have evaluation about products .In this essay we discuss these problems.

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Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists.Other believe it is the only way to save these traditions.

It is irrefutable that every country has own cultural tradition.Therefore culture and tradition symbolize state's history.Majority of people who disappoint of visiting tourists consider that traditional clothes and other things which are counted as cultural traditions are damaged by immigrant people.They think that people who sell traditional items intend to live in luxury.On the other hand,some people want to save their customs and they think that tourists help to their country.Naturally,everyone has own view.This essay intends to discuss both sides of the disagreement.

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Young people spend less of their free time with their family nowadays. What are the reasons for this? Are there more negative or positive sides?

There are several factors contribute to this situation. Firstly, people focus more time and energy on career than ever before. As cpmpetition heats up in most fields, more and more individuls are obliged to work overtime, even moving to the city far away from their parents for career. Accordingly, time they spend on accompanying parents is relatively reduced. Secondly, teenagers are advocated to be independent and live with their own means on contemporary society. In this way, person who lives with parents are normally considered as a member of neet group who is slothful and relies on father and mother excessively. Consequently, most young people tend to live alone and make their own earning in order to avoid reproach. Additionally, the increasing affluence of social relationship activities of youth aggravates this problem. Some individuals are preoccupied in numerous parties, receptions and ignore their parents.

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ome people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In modern world, some people thought that school should prohibit usage of cellphones during the lesson, on the other hand, others thought that students can use their phone. From my point of view, usage of mobile phone has beneficial as well as detrimental effects to pupils. This essay will discuss both of side and give my personal opinion in further.

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Many inhabited areas of the world have been affected by severe flooding in recent years. What are some of the causes of this phenomenon? What can be done to prevent it from happening?

Natural disasters have had a devastating impact on many urban areas. Specifically in recent decades, intense floods have been happening frequently. In this essay, some of the important causes of the rise of flooding would be addressed, and some efficient steps which could be taken to tackle the issue will be presented.

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Some people feel that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

‏There has been debate about public money disbursement on education at colleges without any fees for pupils who are interested or not . In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall discuss both views and explain why ‏I completely agree with the former viewpoint . ‏ ‏On the one hand, having free teaching allows huge opportunities for all ‏people in different financial levels, ‏especially individuals who suffer from poverty . As an example, universities in Saudi Arabia for free if they are inhabitants anyone with a high degree ‏ want to involve in after-school learning can have the chance. While he or she proves themselves to have the opportunity.resulted on that exhibit their serious and ambitions ‏. In terms of justice,all people have the same right of learning. ‏Furthermore, there is no discrimination in order to maintain the country.overall, based on the above discussion. I believed that the funds of government must spend on education to improve society on many levels. ‏Secondly, Im...

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Investing in building sophisticated sports facilities is often done by some countries in order to achieve victory in international sports competition. This might cause a problem due to the inadequacy public sports facilities that everyone can use. This essay argues that although it brings national pride, it also has its negative aspects for citizen.

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Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the fast-paced world, environmental pollution is at its peak stage. Some people argue that government take responsibility, to control pollution and housing problems for illness and disease. I do not agree with this statement.

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