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Some people think governments are responsible for people's health. Others believe it is an individual's responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 7.5 score: Most contemporary economies allow such a model of employment as being self-employed, which appears very tempting for many. However, still the vast majority of people opt for being employed in a company and not to set up their own business. This essay will attempt to look into the key factors as to why people may prefer entrepreneurship and major drawbacks to it. or Ardo A a fourtan to the right of corner oppo earby for peop To start with, in many modern societies, including Russian, entrepreneurship is greatly encouraged with lots of business seminars and workshops advertised. These may range from slightly fraudulent to genuinely educational and supportive, and generally any information on setting up a company is easily accessible for those who are willing. And willing they are, as being a business person, the image itself has a certain feel of luxury, respectability and success. People are being told that they ...
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-Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays technologies more develop than it was in the past. It seen to be considered that it is a best tools for student to learn more information and improve their knowledge. I agree with this statement and reasons will be explained in the essay.
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Children learn best by observing behavior of adults and copying it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is true that offspring adopt most of their habits from what they observe on daily basis from their elders and try to print it. I totally agree with this statement and a counter is explained in detail along with the conclusion.
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Some people believe that students work better if the teacher is strict; others think it is better for students, if the teacher has a friendly approach. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

When we go to school, we will meet all kinds of teachers in， they are kind, they are positive but very responsible. They often bring different feelings to students, some students like kind, some students like positive teachers, because it keeps some naughty and some unintentional students in check。
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There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The advancement in technology has brought enormous changes towards our living standards. It has made our lives easier to such an extend that we can do anything by sitting in one place. Though it has has it's own drawbacks as people are becoming lazy which is leading to health issues like obesity and heart problems.
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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

Years ago people thought about robots just as futuristic movies . Nowa days, some people think that robots will replace all types of jobs. Although Rrobots can replace human jobs, there are jobs that request human contact that robots won’t be able to substitute.
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These days people prefer to watch live performances (shows, concerts) through tv or computer, online rather than go to the place of that event. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today many people prefer watch live shows and concerts at home on tv or computer instead of do it in reality. I agree that mostly people watch content at home and i'm going to explain that in my essay.First reason is that it comfortable to individual because a lot of people can't go to concerts in real life due to that many of that events going in other cities or countries. Also sometimes even if that event happens in local area tickets usually expensive and number of them are really small so the only way to watch show is only by tv or computer. In my city for example when popular artists like Kairat Nurtas,Dimash are making a concert tickets usually sells quickly and you need to watch at home.Second reason is cost many individuals can't afford such expenses and because of that they need to watch it on tv. Prices are big usually and especially for stars show however prices can even double or triple if concert will be soon. This is ofcourse understandable due to rent of place for eve...
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Some people are happy to stay in the same area for their whole life, while others prefer living in many different places. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In a community, there are citizens who prefer not to travel while in ,contrast some folk want to explore other parts of the world. This essay strongly supports the latter but it will also try to find the reasons and formulate both points.
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Some people encourage young children to leave their parents house as soon as they become adults while others say children should stay at their parent's house as long as possible. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Life is made up of various stages such as child, young child, adult, seniours, old each stages has their own importance and role in life. However, As child grown up people think to encourage them to go out and live their life at their own beside their parants or some say should live with their parants. let discuss the both points of view and conclued to the reasonable statement.
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All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school.' How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language

All around the world, speaking a foreign language from young age seems to be crucial skill because we live in globalized world. I think that it has many disadvantages, and I will explain why. The main obstacle would appear to most schools are unable to teach a foreign language when child enters the first grade. If it is really necessary to learn a second language from the beginning, parents need to pay additional tuition fee for their schoolchildren and in some cases extra payment is impossible to some parents. A further issue is being a bilingual is mostly parents desire, especially what language to learn. In my place, parents tend to train their children by Chinese for preparation of abroad education because it is our neighbor country and developing market. However, after few years training children avoid their studying because of their interest. Finally, speaking both language fluently is affected children’s cultural development in some cases. For examle, children studyi...
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Nowadays, there are more workers working from home and more students studying from home, due to the fact that that computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

These days , there are higher cadres working from home and also students analyzing from the accommodation, as the fact that computer technology is more and major quickly usable and economical. I am sure that it is an optimistic tendency due to it may manage time and it can help with self-development. But sometimes this may be harmful to the eyes. As long as the lights of gadgets have a contagious side for health.
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The government should allocate more funding to teach science rather than other subjects as it help in development of a country. To what extent do you agree?

Compared with the past, the methods of progressing of countries have dramatically changed all over the world. Some people think that the government should gather more money to teach science than other subjects. I totally disagree with this view.
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These days people in some countries are living in a “throwaway” society which means people use things in a short time then throw them away. What are its causes and what impacts can it have? 

Modern day society is mired in a notion, known as "throwaway" customer culture. This culture is based upon the idea that things we are buying are temporarily and we don't even need them to be usable for a long time. In this way of social consciousness people are tend to see disposadle things to be more practical than reusable.
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Global warming is one of the most serious issue that the world is facing today .what are the causes of global warming and what measures can government and invidual take to tackle the issue ?

In contemporary period, the entire planet is subjected to endure the highly critical problem of global warming.From my perspective, human modern living standards have contributed to the genesis of this phenomenon. which must be addressed by both, authorities and planeteers. Therefore,this essay is intended to identify contributing factors as well as elaborate potential measures. To begin with:rationals behind the most pressing issue of an upsurge in global warming,and the most fundamental factor is attributed to modern human activities. Since the introduction of industrialisation has modified human impact on ecosystem. For example, It is estimated that following the establishment of factories in the late 20th century, air pollution presented an unprecedented rise within a decade.Seconde the common reason is evident from the excessive practice of deforestation in recent decades.This has resulted in droughts and other climate catastrophes ,across the world.lastly,overcon...
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The chart showes the hour spent per week on sport and exercise by young people in england

The bar chart shows the amount of time that 16 to 24-year-olds in England spend per week on sport and exercise. It is clear from the chart that young women are less active in their leisure time than young men.
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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in

Nowadays, some people who have recently bought a house or building are curious about its past of its. It can be some reasons about some people would do anything to know about the past on their building. This essay will argue what causes of people being curious about the story of how their building is built and the story behind it.
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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in foinding out bout the history of the house or building they live in

Nowadays, some people who have recently bought a house or building curious about the past of its. It can be some reasons about why some people would do anything for knowing about the history on their house.
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These days many kids spend a lot of their time playing computer games instead of doing sports. What is the cause of this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Today, with the advent of technology, computers have become an integral part of human life. These days kids are exposed to computers at an early age which has resulted in spending less time into physical and outdoor activities.
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Sugary drinks should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays , in the period of development , many people have bad eating habits which include absorbing too much sugar . While some opinions suggest that sugary items ought to be encouraged with higher price , from my point of view , it is both a productive solution that could give advantages to consumer as well as a negative faces
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Some people think that cooking is an essential skill for young people to learn. Others believe people should learn how to cook after becoming adults. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Some argue that learning to cook is essential for young adults, while others believe children should wait until they are older to practice cooking. In this essay, I will show some analysis of it and give my idea.
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