IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 354

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some employers offer their employees subsidized memberships of gyms and sport clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and more effective at work, other employers see no benefit in doing so. Discuss both views and present your opinion.

Some employers encourage their workers to go to the gym to stay fit and healthy. Meanwhile, other people think that it is unnecessary. I will consider both opinions and finally, I will elaborate on my idea.

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Some people think that use of social networking apps is very beneficial in today's world. some say that it put negative impacts on the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Social media plays an important role these days. It's a platform where society gets updates within minutes, however many believe it puts a negative impact on society. in my ,opinion it benefits the community in many ways I will elaborate on both views.

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Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

Throughout the years, there has been an increase in the number of crime figures. There are numerous contributing factors regarding the increased criminal activities such as poverty, narcotics and so many others which are still considered elusive. However, in my opinion, these problems could be mitigated, if the governors focus more on the prevention by improving employment opportunities, impose heavy fines and altering the conventional laws. One of the main reasons behind criminality is poverty. In other words, if the government fails to control inflation or maintain adequate jobs for its citizens, there would be an increase in unemployment and a widened gap between rich and poor. This means that people may become more inclined to commit petty crimes such as pickpocketing or property crimes. In addition, children of these families would struggle with poverty that could push them to fall in with wrong crowds and become delinquent. Some of them would become engaged with dr...

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Nowadays, more and more children play computer games. Why do you think this is the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or not prevent shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. structures Based on my knowledge, some people choose to accept the fate that they have to undergo the bad situation as they believe that good things might come out of it. Their solution is simply to just go with the flow because they think that they will learn something new along the journey. For example, a student received a grade B for his Physics examination. However, he only needs one more mark to get an A. If a student requires to receive a mark percentage of 70% to get an A, this student got a 69% on his paper. As the teacher looked through the questions with the whole class, he notices that the teacher accidentally marked his correct answer to wrong. So, realistically, he should get an A. However, he chooses to leave his grade as a B because, he believes that his current grade will be ...

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Sports programmes are hugely popular on television nowadays. But some people argue that these programmes are to blame for the poor health of many young people who prefer to watch rather than part take in physical activity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people still watch a sports programmes on TV, or on another device which can display a picture of the game. So biggest part of viewers is adults who came tired from their work and want to relax, therefore switch on the electricity and sit on the sofa for a new soccer programme.

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some people tend to take temporary jobs, for they have time to do other things. Do the advantage outweighs disadvantage

In modern era, working for a short time becomes popular. Some people believe that it has a plethora of benefits such as earn money fast when you needed urgently, rehabilitate your life in special cases and so on. However there are arguments like low-salary, unstable life and no career promotion. In this essay I will discuss both sides of one coin and draw my own opinion.

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Percentage of households with electrical appliances and number of housework per week between 1920 and 2019

The line graph provides information about the percentage of house stuff with electrical appliances and the second graph illustrates the number of hours of housework per week between 1920 and 2019 years.

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Currently, some countries' populations include a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In the current world, the population of the earth has been increasing recently, and the ageing of population rates are different all around the world. Therefore, this essay will discuss both views, and I believe that the disadvantages of this circumstance outweigh the advantages.

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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

Illiteracy is a significant and discussable problem that can widely affect people's lives. There seem to be two causes and a number of effects, which we will discuss here. Possibly the leading cause is poverty, especially in undeveloped countries. The ever-rising number of poor people could result in the number of illiterates. It means that when families confront financial problems may have to categorize their needs, and their priorities will be food and housing so that they will forebear education. Therefore, their children can be deprived of literacy. A further well-known origin is governments; neglect of illiteracy and its disadvantages. In other words, the reason for inattention may be that governments do not want to dedicate a considerable budget to students; education. As a result, the quality of education at schools and universities will decrease. The effects of this problem on people can be quite serious. Firstly, losing talent and increasing depression are experi...

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Some people think studying from the past offers no benefits to today’s life, while others believe history is a valuable source of information for us. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Over the past few decades, there are significant changes happened in the world. It is a common public opinion that there is no advantage of studying past in the contemporary life, while other say, it gives more knowledge. Therefore, following this essay will explain both sides and my viewpoint in detail and will reach a proper conclusion.

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Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programs should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Due to the widespread of mass media, it is thought by some people that spectators must be trained about current concerns by all well-known television entertainment events. Despite the potential benefits, I would suggest that such a shift would be counter-effective and generates an arduous effect on viewers’ rights.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people think that we should divide students based on their academic ability, while others think we should educate all students together. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Nowadays, the idea of separating the students according to their capabilities has been popular. Whereas, many people find it useless. should the student be divided due to their academic levels ? This essay will discuss both opinions with examples and evidence.

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Nowadays movies and computer games containing violence are very popular. Some people believe that they have negative effect on the society and should be banned, others, however, believe that it is harmless entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the recent years, movie and video games industry are industries that had significant growth. Innovations are also the things that are not excludable in this industries. They always try to make a video game or movies as realistic as it could be. Consequently, with this effort, crimes and violence also depict in the modern movies and video games. These things brought a controversy in the society, whether it should be banned or not due to their potential to have negative impacts. For this problem, the author believes crimes and violences in the movies and video games should not be banned, but should be constrained with age restrictions.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.

A variety of social media is developing faster and faster. Before decades ago, people cannot imagine that Facebook, Instagram or Twitter are becoming important things in life. Some people believe that social media cause disadvantages for young people. On the other hand, some people think social media is a tool which benefits connecting with each other. In my point of view, it certainly is a useful way to build relationships but it has a demerit on our society.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Today, it is a common belief that computers are being more and more in education, whilst some think that is leading to negative consequences. I prefer, that computer will use in education, however it is more useful and this is a positive trend. To illustrate computers suitable for use your necessary thing it is comfortable, faster, easy. This essay will examine both sides. On the other hand computers has been provided a pile of information, valuable education, news, different videos, and music to compare in computer should teach play the guitar and learn some other languages, available information about other cultures. If the weather is cold and you are teacher also minus 25 people would spend lesson online format may be zoom, whatsapp, facebook. I prefer will live modern and should be meet modern requirements because nowadays it is trend. On the other hand others argue that it is leading to negative consequences reason behind this is that If chilndren or teenagers had be...

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Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species. Some people say that it is too late to do anything. Some people think that we should take effective action to improve the situation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. ??

Whether leaders or directors of organizations should be old people or young people is being widely discussed currently. From my perspective, I think young people should lead the team.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's society , it is ubiquitous to notice that youngsters spend hours on their smartphones on a daily basic .This essay will explore the cause of this issue and provide my opinion that it is still a merit change in the community . To begin with , it is obvious that nowadays children are living in the era in which the artificial intelligent and the advanced technology are constantly developing , so it is common that smartphones has become an essential device for people of all ages , especially young children . This is because not only smartphone is really convenient since they can bring it to anywhere with them but it also has many powerful platforms and eye-catching games .As a result , children can be addicted to many games online and they spend almost a day glued to their smartphone screens just in order to playing games with their friends . Another reason is that they are influenced by many famous social platforms such as facebook or instagram and can not help thinking ...

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Topic: many people use distance-learning programs to study at home, but some think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending school, college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

E-learning is well popular now especially, after the Covid pandemic. A few years ago very limited people used online learning wiring in the whole world. However, during the SARS Cov - 2 infection, since the latter part of 2019, most of the cities, as well as villages were locked down and pupils were unable to go to schools, colleges or universities. This worst situation compelled institutes to start e-Learning to continue the education of pupils beyond the lockdown. As it was compulsory to switch to online teaching and learning, not only the undergraduates but also the teachers adopted the new system in the initial period, whether they like it or not. Later they realized that working from home or studying from home is quite easy and cheaper compared to going to institutions. The transportation cost and time were saved due to the new method of learning, which lead people to adopt online learning. Due to increased demand, a lot of the latest operating systems were introduced such as...

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In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the last century, almost every family were running in same mode---- the man went out to work for money and the women. standed at home to take care their children. Now a days , it is abnormal. The role division has ecome more and more unclear . The family Stracture has changed. I think this changing are bring many positives to our sociaty and make our life better. There are three reasons to prove that

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Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In current years, people debate whether it is true If the stakeholder spends the budget massively for establishing open public zones. Obviously, I agree with that notion because I believe those areas will be needed for supporting the city folks' lives.

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