IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 353

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a results. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

In this modern world, health is the most important part of our life and in order to achieve that people need to not just eat healthy, but also do work-out. But in this fast paced world, many working individuals find it hard to accomplish those goals due to various reasons.

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The crime nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance in technology which can help prevent and solve crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Back in the days, Felonies had an increase because some of it no body could know about it. meanwhile, In this present time, the cameras are easily can be in everywhere. in my opinion, I am totally agree with this statement. I will explain my viewpoints in detail in the ensuing paragraph.

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As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibilty towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Huge companies, large corporation and successful businesses, are big players on social events, sometimes their one twite could change a stock market of a country. some say this impact lead this companies to have major responsibility against society but others believe that business men and womens are just should trying to take care of their employers not the whole community.

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certain people believe that the only way to reduce crime is sentencing criminals for longer time period, while others believe alternative methods should be used to lower crimes. Discuss both sides and give your opinions.

The typical ordering procedure for both current and potential clients is shown in the flow chart. the actions taking place between the customer placing an order request and the order being filled and delivered to the customer.

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It is generallybelieved that the internet is an excellent of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find informatio. Discuss Both views and give your opinion

Understanding and embracing technology is an important subject in the domain of digital journalism (Eldridge & Franklin, 2018). Digital innovation has been widely recognized as the key to solving the current crisis in the news industry. With Online News Videos becoming increasingly prominent among news agencies, more and more traditional media agencies started to invest in this new technology with a more enterprising approach (Kalogeropoulos & Nielsen, 2018). Online News Videos has become a frontier practice (Vázquez-Herreroet al., 2022) to observe and analyse how traditional media agencies deal with digital challenges which were introduced by new technologies such as smartphones and social media.

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It is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People believe that it is vital to incorporate practical knowledge in the curriculum of educational institutions, in comparison to what they provide to children, which is too focused on book-based information. I am in favour of this issue, because it is important for minors to relate to people and develop their social skills in order to fully cope with the real world. This essay will devour this matter and will be followed by a conclusion.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that online shopping will replace actual shops and it will lead to them closing in the end. This effect of online shopping which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. It can be strongly agreed upon that this matter has some convincing arguments, despite the contention about it.

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Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home, why and what are the advantages/disadvantages?

There is no doubt that these days some people prefer to eat quick cooking meals than making the food by themselves. The question is, is it beneficial to eat ready meals? What is the upside aspect of it? In this ,essay I am going to see both views and draw my own opinion of the matter.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Taking a look back to our history, women were treated unequally and rarely educated at the same level as men. Through the flow of history, women now have more opportunities to develop themselves. Therefore, it is plausible for them to do many jobs like men. From my point of view, I consider this view in both perspectives.

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Shortage of housing has given several social consequences. Only government who can solve the problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The bar chart compares what are the things that families spent their salary on in a week between 1968 and 2018.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

In many countries these days, technology and innovation can be improved agriculture rapidly whereas lots of nation around the world are still hunger. This essay will discuss why an individuals is starved and provide options for solving this problem.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

More and more parents prefer home learning for their children’s education nowadays while others believe school learning is essential for children’s development. I agreed that both of them are beneficials for children, and parents can choose the best options for their children after a proper assessment of their children’s preferences and needs.

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Your friend has been offered a place on the course at a university where you studied. He or she would like your advice about finding a place to live . Write an email to your friend. In your email •Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university •Describe the best way for him/her to look for accommodation •Warn him or her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

How are you ? I am so glad to hear that you are going to study at the same college from where I just completed my graduation. I am writing this letter to give you a piece of advice about accommodation.

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Volcanoes which has so many drawbacks.To what extent dp you agree or fis agree?

We can see that our planet shown in the picture is unique in the solar system.This essay will show you how a remarkable planet works.Firstly,the oceans have the power of life and death over all living things.Secondly,the atmosphere drives our climate.Thirdly,the ice changes the course of human evolution. lastly, destructive volcanoes are part of a global system.They save the planet from the biggeest crises in the world.It is shown that in lava in Africa there is no water,shelter or even life except few snakes. This volcano has a permanent lake of mut in lava its create of .The lava was at it's most spectacular at night.Eventually, The process of molten rocks charming away below the surface affects our entire planet.There is a crack on the Earth's surface that runs for hundreds of kilometresThe hot plum of rock on our Earth is a hundred kilometers weighed and at least 6 hundreds kilometers deep.

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Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will provide better care for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are different learning ways for the pre-school age kids. Some parents prefer to send them to childcare centres, the others think that taking care by the families would be better. In my point of view, opinions vary among people.

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Sugary drinks should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, many people consume more sugar intake almost everyday, and its not good for our health. I agree that sugary drinks should be made more high in price, so that people will get discourage to buy and consume this kind of drinks almost everyday.

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Handwriting skills (using a pencil, a pen or a brush) are on decline. What can be the reasons for this? Is it a positive or a negative development?

Handwriting skills have declined every day. I personally believe that it is because we are too busy working. Nowadays we spend the most time at work a day, even though we are off work, such as sending emails and answering phone calls. Furthermore, there are many companies that have the same career, which means it is very competitive to get better deals. Writing letters by hand is simply taking too long, compared to texting emails. In addition, sending letters by post is take a day at least, whilst sending emails only takes a second. This is one of reasons why hand skills are on the decline.

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The world population has grown at a rapid rate over the past 50 years, and it is predicted to grow further in the future. What could the future effects of this growth be? Should anything be done to limit world population growth?

World popultion is a big deal in these days. It's growing so fast and pepole would be woreid about it more than 50 years ago. I think there is to side for each effects but for me i belive it the world popultion had benfits for our world.

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Many people think that public libraries should only provide books and should not waste their money on expensive hi-tech media, such as software, DVDs or videos. Do you agree or disagree?

A lot of people believe that public libraries are places for books exclusively and should not spend the money on pricey hi-tech media, for example DVDs and videos. I disagree with this statement.

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Some people think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern facilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As we embrace modernisation, some populace believes in the destruction of old building structures whereas others believe to have a road map for modern facilities. In my ,opinion I would like to support the construction of establishing new structures rather than protecting the old ones as it will have a greater flexibility of having luxurious life and shows the country 's development in architecture.

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