IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 384

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Topic: Many children and students are taught to push themselves to be better than others rather than work together for everyones’s benefits. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is common in the society to teach the children to acquire the higher position from above all of their peers in the field of academic or in sports. Its outcome seems to create the jealousy, feel of compititon and less frutifull results in between the peers. This stated that there are less benefits for children to succeeding in life if they were taught in this way. This essay will discuss the disadvantages in brief manner.

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I would like to have more information about the starting date, courses duration, teachers, tuition fees, and course certificate.

My parents set a time for me to come home in the evenings. They expect me to be home at 9 p.m. I have asked them to give me a later curfew as I want to spend more time with my friends, but they don’t agree.

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Some people think it is necessary to use animal's for testing medicines intended for human use while others argue that it is cruel to do that. Dicuss both views and give your opinion

Medical scienca go thracigh lstol toials bee fore modicine in the market. launching any Some masses are in the favour of using animal's for medical V exberiments wharas others conside this unethical and harsh to living animals. This estay ussuld disas both the viewes along with my opinion. Since theages, Human beings rare using wildlile creatures fat thais suerval is secebtable: do use animals for research to find ways to find the cure of serious /Inesse For examble, In 2020, duler the COVID -19 kituation , lots of monkeys and rats were used to find the best vaccine to save the Human life Besides this "it in imbossible release nous dengs to practica without exberimenting. Thesefore, animes besome significant in grascarch of saving human extinction. However, animals like imboltant as in equally human Ins can balance leeings beecause the moreovel, Some écosystem. tha animals provide food For instance the living leeing • 3 mused in India to ...

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task。Write about the following topic：Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed，rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case？What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed？Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In recent years, an increasing number of individuals choose to workwork for themselves rather than to work for companies due to a plethora of reasons. However, the major reason is work-life balance. In this essay, I will elaborate on the beneficial and adverse aspects of this trend before coming to a logical conclusion.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task。Write about the following topic：Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed，rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case？What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed？Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In recent times, increasing number of an individual choose to be work for themselves rather than work for a companies due to plethora of reasons. In addition, bank also provided efficient amount of loan to people who needed to start a businness. In this essay, I will elaborate on the beneficial and adverse aspects of this trend before coming to a final conclusion.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

Nowadays, professionals in undeveloped countries such as teachers and doctors prefer to live and work in more developed countries. This essay will discuss what is the mean causes of this issue and give some examples and solutions.

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The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the usa consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The pie charts show the proportions of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in breakfasts, dinners, lunches and snacks of the American people.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task。Write about the following topic：Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed，rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case？What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed？Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

With technological advancement of today's age, able to the start own business with low buget. Therefore, rising the number of people becomes enterneurship in recent times.In this essay, I will elaborate on the beneficial aspects of this trend in the upcoming paragraph.

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Success is often measured in term of how much money somebody has earned. Do you think wealth is a good measure of success? How else could we measure whether somebody is successful or not?

Wealth is one of the factors to determine success though not the only one. There are several other important parameters based on which success is measured.

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ownership of computers, what do you think. agree dis agree?

The bar charts show data about computer ownership, with a further classification by level of education, from 2002 to 2010. A steady but significant rise can be seen in the percentage of the population that owned a computer over the period. Just over half the population owned computers in 2002, whereas by 2010 three out of four people had a home computer. An analysis of the data by level of education shows that higher levels of education correspond to higher levels of computer ownership in both of those years. In 2002, only around 15% of those who did not finish high school had a computer but this figure had trebled by 2010. There were also considerable increases, of approximately 30 percentage points, for those with a high school diploma or an unfinished college education (reaching 65% and 85% respectively in 2010). However, graduates and postgraduates proved to have the greatest level of ownership in 2010, at 90% and 95% respectively, 20 percentage points higher than in...

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There are serious concerns about the sale and production of genetically modified food. Yet this is necessary if we are to meet the demands of an increasing would population. Give your opinion on this

Nowadays technology assists us to produce sufficient foods for the increasing world’s population. However, some believe that GM products is the best solution to stopping famine around the world, other are worried about the long-term negative effects that these foods may have. In this essay, I tend to explore both ideas and then I will explain my view about it.

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The best way to protect the environment is to use local resource, such as food or building materials rather than transporting resources from other places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that safest means to keep the environment safe is by using commodities produced rather than transporting goods and services from one place to the other . However each type of resource has its own significance. I partly agree with the transporting resources from other place is best way to protect the environment . The reasons for my agreement are explain in following paragraphs.

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Some people believe it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it I better to try and improve such situations.. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although it is sometimes thought that accepting an unexpected bad situation and move on is the right choice, others insist every problem solve with an extra effort. In my opinion, deciding whether to focus on bad situation or move on should be depend on the particular circumstances. One the on hand, people who believe that getting accustomed with such problematic situations will bring ultimate success as they think, bad situation will inevitably help them to gain some skill or experience. For example, if anyone undergoes such bad situation and choose to accept his fate and take it as motivation for next endeavours.

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Nowadays, the number of obese children is increasing at an alarming rate. What are some of the causes of this increase and how can the problem be solved?

There is an argument that the museums becoming obsolete due to availability of comprehensive knowledge on culture and history in ciber space. Humongous amount of information on above topics are freely accessible via internet from home without taking trouble to visit a museum and pay an entrance fee to gain similar information. Hence, it is fair to question the value of existence of museums in today's context. On the contrary, museums provide irreplaceable advantages such as actual living experience based on specimens and the possibility of further studying them. Therefore, I strongly disagree with the idea that the information available on internet can overturn the value of museums in providing facts on history and culture.

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THE NUMBER OF PEOPLE WHO ARE AT RISK OF SERIOUS HEALTH PROBLEMS DUE TO BEING OVERWEIGHT IS INCREASING. WHAT IS THE REASON FOR GROWTH IN OVER WEIGHT PEOPLE IN SOCIETY . HOW CAN THIS PROBLEM BE SOLVED .

In today's modern age, obesity has become one of the most dangerous threats in society. many people are suffering from heart attacks, overweight, and respiratory symptoms due to being overweight. In this essay we will discuss the main reasons of higher incidents of overweight in society and several steps that can be taken to minimize it's incident.

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people naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems of problems can this cause? Whats solutions you can suggest?

There is a notion that youngsters spend extended period of time with smart devices nowadays. This could be due to changes in education trends, restrictions in outdoor activities due to social distancing, and increased popularity of online gaming and social media platforms. While accepting to have multiple negative impacts, I believe this as a positive development to support continued education, reduce boredom, and increase social connections between children.

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some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some infomation is too important or too valueable to be shared freely.

....Our time is the time of freedom, restricting information from being public because of security and national security i find it a bit silly.because this stuff is happening in my country i guess i need to know it, not only stuff related to the national security also stuff like research results, if it's published it may help us i a lot of things in our daily life. ....To begin with, sensitive information,could penetrate the country security such as terrorists location and etc...., needs to be investigated first,but the other information that could help the citizen in choosing such a good brand i think it must be published. ....Can you imagine that there maybe a lot of other technology that has been discoverd but kept in secret, why do you think is that? i'll tell you...that because the country national forces think that everything they find must be kept in secret, didn't you think about why did the covid-19 spreaded so quickly like what happend. in my po...

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write about students advantages and disadvantages.

A glance at the graph show information regarding the usage of cyberspace by women of all age groups ranging from 12 years-65+ years in the USA for two years between 2000 and 2001.

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In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so? Do you agree or disagree?

Compared with the past, lifestyles such as ways of making new friends have dramatically changed all over the world. These days, there didn't use be quite as many close friends with their neighbours as there are now. I totally agree with this view.

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The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centers. It is feared that this trend can bring negative influences on the youths and the society. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view?

In the present age, shopping malls have become

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