IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 386

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disgaree with this opinion ?

This essay will discuss the increasing numbers of people who have health problems from ingesting too much fast food and whether should governments start to apply higher taxes on this food. I strongly agree with imposing a higher tax rate on fast food and the provider.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disgaree with this opinion ?

This essay will disccus the increasing numbers of people have health problem from ingesting too much fast food and should governments start to apply higher tax on this food. I strongly agree with imposing a higher tax rete on fast food and the provider.

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Some countries spend lots of money to make bicycle usage easier. Why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion.

In todays world, some countries provide lots of financial subsidies to their citizens in order to promote usage of bicycle among them. This essay will describe the reason behind it. Moreover, it will also answer if it is the best solution to the problem of traffic jam.

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Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

over the last decades , the way that everyone in business is done has changed dramatically due to the major changes in technology. so in the era of 21st century,office stuructures are going to be changed from one room into in an open areas . so is this development positive or there are some drawbacks by choosing this kind of enviornment.i would like to explore the pros and cons and i wll draw the conclusions in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

Developments in technology and manufactory plant have deeply influenced all aspects of life. The biggest consequence of this situation is pollution on the environment. Water ways also had been affected by pollution. This essay will discuss casues and effects of the pollution in waterways, oeceans, seas and lakes.

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Writing Task 2 People eat more processed food now than in the past. Task 1: what is the reason behind this? Task 2: what effects might people have by this?

Processed food is accessible more then ever and people are eating more of it. Several factors might be reason behind this happening. In this essay I will be touching upon few of the reasons behind the increase in consumption of processed food and what might be the effects of such phenomenon.

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In some countries, more and more adults choose to continue living with their parents after they graduate and find jobs. Do you think the benefits outweigh its drawbacks?

Due to high price of housing, many young people choose to live with their parents, even after they have found jobs. This trend may be beneficial to family members economically, but it causes some problems to both young people and their parents.

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The large number of private cars on the roads in many parts of the world has led to serious problems of pollution and may contribute to global warming. Some people think that governments should spend money for the development of public transportation systems in order to help solve this problem. Others think that it is better to spend money for the development of electric and other types of cars that may cause less pollution. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this modern era, global warming is the big threat to the living creatures. One of the main reason behind is rising number of private vehicles such as car.Some people harbour a belief that investing budget on develop of public transport systems able to tackle the problem while other people argue that other feasible method can be done. In this essay, I will elaborate on the beneficial and adverse aspects of this thread and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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it is more important for a building to serve its purposes than to look beautiful. Architects do not need to worry about whether it is a real work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

Buildings play a prominent role in human culture from the past to the present. They are the ones that stand out as marvels that describe the city's landscape. The main objective of these structures is to serve their purpose,,however from ancient to modern society these are treated as the symbol of pride and to stand unique among the global community.

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The large number of private cars on the roads in many parts of the world has led to serious problems of pollution and may contribute to global warming. Some people think that governments should spend money for the development of public transportation systems in order to help solve this problem. Others think that it is better to spend money for the development of electric and other types of cars that may cause less pollution. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It's undoubtedly true that global warming issue is the main threat to the global world. Some people harbour a belief that government should spend some budget on development of public transport system which discourage people to use private vehicles while other people argues that to trackle the global warming issue, other feasibles method is the better solution.In this essay, I will elaborate on the beneficial and adverse aspects of this treads and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

World has been changing since the beginning of it’s birth and every era or century has it’s own trends. In course of time those trends replaced with the new trends and eras changed, but there is a new trend and it looks like it is not going to be replaced with any other thing in the future, they call that an online shopping. Nowadays people say that online shopping will demolish shops in cities and towns, I totally agree with that and next paragraphs will explain in detail why enormous power of online shopping won’t be beaten. First and most important reason of growing online shopping is money, when any goods price is compared between the physical store and online store it can be clearly stated that online shops are cheaper and pocket friendly. It can be explained with two main factors, first one is rent and the other one is customer numbers. Phyiscal stores will continue to pay rent to be able to making sales and they will continue to serve same number of customers, on t...

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The government should pay to the parents of very young children, so that one of them can stay at home and look after their children.What do you think are the pros and cons of this policy?Justify your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There have been arguments about the government paying the parents in order to make one of them stay at home and take constant care of their children. In this essay, from my perspective, I will illustrate pros and cons for this policy, supporting it with examples as well. Firstly, some families are suffering from financial problems; therefore, they can not offer anything for their children. Legislation paying them will not only help them with money income, but also will decrease unemployment. The purpose of helping the parents with finance is to make sure about providing the kid all kind of privileges. Nevertheless, it perhaps will encourage the parents to take constant care of their children. But on the other hand, not all parents are educated and acknowledged about the significance of taking care of a child, in fact, some of them are reckless and irresponsible and will probably spend the money on useless stuff for example, cigarettes and drugs. Parenting is n...

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Nowadays, there is a trend of learning through distance mode of education. Why people do prefer such mode of education? And what challenges are involved in it?

It is undeniable that as long as the technology develops, different type of education system will appear. Roughly 10 years ago all students were compelled take a course or attend class every day, however world is changing and people must keep up with the reality. I hold the view that long distance education became famous especially when Covid 19 covered all the word and people were forced close all courses, schools . In a time people decided to create something new in order not to fall behind, then they were able bring to the word new program like zoom. Nowadays everybody are able to use zoom in order take course.

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SOme countries are considering imposing curfews in whicgh tenenagers will not be allowed outdoors at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this policy

It is true that certain nations around the world are trying to not allow young people going outside without their families. I completely agree with this statement, the impending essay will discuss the same with a logical conclusion. There are multiple reasons why a country do not let children to walk during the dark time in the city. To begin with, this policy may encourage children to stay at home and pay attention to their education because they will have plenty time to learn academic skills at home resulting in a significant increase in the level of their knowledge. As a result, they will implement their homeworks properly. For example, in Tajikistan, young generation is not allowed to spend time in the streets after 8:00 pm due to that almost 88% of students get high score in their entire exams at school. Furthermore, staying at home during the nights safe teenagers from hazards because most of gangs or thieves start robbing during the dark time and they target weak people es...

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In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

School plays a crucial role in the personality of child. The importance of co-education has becomes a controversial in recent times. Some people agrues that parent should enrol their children on co-educational schools while other people have opposed this notion. In this essay, I will elaborate on the beneficial and adverse on single gender and co-educational school and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

The given maps demonstrate the southwest airport site in the present and after renovation in the next year.

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With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be . Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.

In recent times divorce rates and separations are increasingly growing in the world. As the result of this families nowadays are moving away from each other compared to previous times . In this essay I will discuss the causes these phenomenon and provide few options to overcome it .

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Some people think that famous people can help international aid organisations to draw attention to important problems. Others believe that the celebrities can make the problems seem less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While it has been arguing that eminent people can collaborate with international aid centres to highlight major problems, some people claim that the celebrities diminish the significance of these issues. I agree with the former ones and I explain both views in detail as follows:

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books beacause they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The unpredictabile pattern of society brings several notable notions with them , the rising tendency of newspaper is one of them. Many claiming that read newspapers in future will be dicline. However, in this eassy i will discuss both positive and negative effects and give a suitable conclusion

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Some people believe that the activities of large multinational corporations mostly benefit the economies of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that the large multinationals are generally harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

the charts illustrate the number of participants in two fields, education and science. this survey was conducted in developed countries and industrialised countries within ten years, starting in 1980. it is clear from the given data that the industry states had more amount of people in both sectors, therefore the amount of money was justified in spending in the advanced countries.

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