IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 386

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Do advertisements give correct information, or do they encourage people to buy things that they may not need?

In this days, many people believe that propaganda induced the socity to buy unecessary items. others assume that it is a jenuine way to keep people update on new products that would make daily life easier.

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Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. it would be better to encourage them to spend more time outside playing sports. d you agree or disagree

Nowadays, children are addicted to electronic devices such as computer and mobile phone exteremly. It is dangerous for their development process.According to me, childeren is supposed to focus on outside activities like playing sports.Two essential factor push me to think like these.One of them is that children those making sport have sucsesful acedemic life.Secondly, making sport improve children self-esteem directly in their daily life.

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Children preffer to study online, whwt are advantages and disadvantages?

Across countries, it has been considered that due to digitalization the way of education is changed now. Learners are liked to study on screen rather than printed versions. This essay instands to provide some drawbacks and a number of benefits of this trend.

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Write about the following topic: Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, creating an equal society has become a popular issue to talk about. As an important element in this issue, long-term job seekers receiving government benefits are getting more attention when we discuss if they should do voluntary work to give back to the community. Personally, I think they shouldn't be made to do so.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime.other,however,argue that the circumstances of an individual crime,and the motivation for committing it,should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Disscuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Crime however small or great should always be dealt with a fitting punishment. Criminal in the fit of rage or sometimes in self defence commits the crime but there is always a motivation behind any commited crime.

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Job application is controversial. Discuss your opinions on both views.

My previous emails are mainly inquiry emails to ask for information such as services in the campus, or information related to the courses. However, the purpose of this email is to apply for a job, so there are some differences in the structure and format that I should follow. Firstly, because this is a job inquiry email, thus the resume should be attached to provide more detailed information about ourselves for the employers. Secondly, this type of email also requires sufficient information about our skills or experiences in the past that can make us a strong candidate for the position. Thirdly, to write this type of email, we should also have prior knowledge about the target company and mention that information appropriately in the opening of the email. Lastly, formal tone is a must for this kind of email because our receiver is not someone that we have an established relationship with and moreover, a formal tone guarantees a good respect to the employers, which may increase our ch...

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute jobs satisfaction ? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers ?

Job satisfaction is an important aspect of individual life since people almost are at workplace. Therefore, authorities and employers should provide enjoyable and satisfying conditions for workers if they want to have the highest function. In this essay, some of the main factors will be outlined and also i will describe how the expectation of job satisfaction will become realistic.

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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

Nowadays, the trend that use solar energy as a resource of daily life in each household have became popular. The essay will discuss about the reason, merit and demerit of usage of solar energy.

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"These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary school. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?"

In the recent years, we have noticed that less people are interested to become teachers, particular in the secondary school. The main reason justifying this statement, is the behaviour of students which we will elaborate and discuss and propose some solutions to this issue.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

All generations ranging from children to the elderly have had a tendency to food that concludes sugar. as these types of foods can bring many negative consequences to health conditions, it is argued that should be more expenditure to limited consumption of people. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement and I think it would benefit public well-being.

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Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about the right and wrong. Other people consider the main responsibility of the parent is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Over the past few decades, the families at large have witnessed issues with regard to effective Parenting.It may not be a hyperbole to suggest that the deficiency in proper awareness has been a core element and an inviolable subset in this matrix of progress.In this ,context an issue that has become a fixture of many discussions pertains to the effectiveness of Parenting .This essay shall analyse the issue from every angle and state that good parenting always nurtures children by providing a safe environment to grow up in.

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The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Fuel, one of the most important resource known to humankind. Plays a important role in our day to day life. From cooking to flying, it has many usages as it is said, a coin is always two faced same apply here . Even though fuels have there advantages it also have it's disadvantages.

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It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most people think that family can fulfil every responsibility of friends. I totally disagree with the view. Because people sometimes cannot say many things to their families about what happens to them. There is a between line family and friends.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Teenagers, the future of our society. Teenagers are the backbone of our society and that backbone should be strong so that one day they can support the society and there families, for that to happen the important thing is they should understand there responsiblity there role in the community. Community service is one of the grand stage in which they can understand there responsiblity, improve and be a better man/women to the society.

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It is a common aspiration among people to run their own business rather than work for an employee. What are the positives and negatives of this?

Today’s world is full of chaos. People’s expectation to themselves are much higher. They move from the idea of working as a employee to become an employer and hence it create confusion among them. Today, we will discuss about the pros and cons of being a employee and employer.

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Some people believe that a country will benefit greatly if its students study abroad. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that there is a highly benefical if students have opportunities to pursue their education in foreign countries. Personally, i agree with the arrertion that a country derives enormous benefits from abroad students.

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Many young people are motivated and successful at high school. Many others, however, lack motivation and see high school as irrelevant to their interests and needs. Why is this? What could be done to help all students succeed?

Nowadays, many high school students have strong motivation to their school and gain success in school life. On the other hand, there are students who cannot have plenty of motivation and recognize their high schools as irrelevant to their interests and what they want. I suppose the cause of this situation is a pressure of study and future. Furthermore, I believe that a implementation of non-academic classes at high school will be a solution to this problem.

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The best way to understand cultures is by working at a multinational organization. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people insist that the best way to grasp cultures is working at a multinational organization. In my opinion, I partly agree this statement.

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Many young people are motivated and successful at high school. Many others, however, lack motivation and see high school as irrelevant to their interests and needs. Why is this? What could be done to help all students succeed?

Nowadays, many high school students have strong motivation to their school and gain success in school life. On the other hand, there are students who can not have plenty of motivation and recognize their high schools as irrelevant to their interests and what they want. I suppose the cause of this situation is the pressure of study and future. Furthermore, I believe that implementation of non-academic classes in high school will be solution to this problem.

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humans are demaging the environment. what can government do to address these problems and what can individual do?

Across countries, it has been considered that we are destroying our surrounding circumstances in various ways.This essay will discuss to prevent this devastation what meassures each person and government can be taken.

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