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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society.

The major contributing factor to life style related diseases, typified by diabetes, high blood pressure and heart disease, is often obesity. Therefore, we have to think about losing surplus weight. When I was watching TV the other day, I found a program which tried to introduce a way to cook low-calorie dishes. It showed food images for a full hour. Then they let 3 overweight guests eat 3 full servings of curry-rice (Japanese style curry with rice). The dishes were made with lower calories than normal but that “tasting” totaled 1,800 kcal. If you have a chance to visit to America, in which many people are struggling to lose excess weight, try watching TV. You will find it is filled with food commercials and medicines that are supposed to help you lose fat. However, the best way to lose weight is not by eating low calorie food, but by reducing the amount of food you eat. It is really difficult to reduce your meal portion sizes while surrounded by actual food or images...
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Some people do same type of work for long time, while others change the type of work frequently. Discuss both views and give your opinion

part of comunities are more realible having same kinde of job for extend perioed of time ,despite some of them have seen that more preferable to change their jobs consisitantly ,so i will disscuse of diffrent sides and i will contrbute my own opinion on it .
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Destination of Anthropology graduates and their salaries after 5 years' work.

Data related to Anthropology graduates’ employment status are depicted in the pie chart, and their salaries were estimated after five years of working in the table.
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Children should play online games nowadays. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.

It is partially true that people can learn about life through playing games. There is the evidence ground to underpin this opinion. Taking an example, there are various kinds of games such as board game, sports game and computer game. In particular, playing sports game and computer game need to cooperating among players, and all player have to have a variety of strategies to win other players, otherwise, people are not able to overcome the missions of games. As it can be seen from the example, cooperation and strategy are ones of the necessities to people to live their life successfully. Considering the statement above, the first insistence could be believed to be acceptable.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, in many society some people can’t make a decision alone. Some other strongly believe everyone must be get a decision alone eventually although in general humans need advice additional in last century. We’ll discussed both point of this view in the following statements also I’ll say my opinion a bout this issue.
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some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more im-portant than History

Some people believe that History is one of the most important lessons in school life, but another group of people claim that, nowadays, there are more important subjects like Science and Technology than History. In my opinion, I strongly agree that history is one of the major subjects which children should learn thoroughly. Primarily, Science and Technology developed until today regarding people's needs in our history and while Technology and Science were improving, innovators used information that came from the past. For example, the population was raised by the time and people spread to a larger area and the communication of people was going to be harder than ever. As a result of this, Graham Bell innovated the first phone in the past. By that time, science and technology help us all use cellphones and even reach people from overseas. However, this innovation hasn't happened suddenly in our life. There is history behind of today innovations. Secondly, history is one o...
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Developments in science and technology have caused environmental problems. Some people think that a simpler way of life will protect the environment, while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days, public debate has been going on over whether a simple way of life could preserve natural resources and animals or the technological and scientific solutions. I tend to believe that some developments would lead to a green future for the following reasons.
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As countries develop, their population tend to live individually or small family units. What are the causes of this trend and what are the effects on society?

With the expansion of countries' development , life gets more difficult therefore people choose to stay single or have fewer children. people are no longer willing to have extended family or involve in relationships.
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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believe that some information is too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your ownopinion. Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As the author states, that expressing wide range of resources with scientists, entrepreneurs ,teachers and professors is beneficial. This practise aids to be more resourceful and knowledgeable additionaly to be extremely evident and justify it's correctness.  In order to, support the authors statement we would discuss with few idea and examples.
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Children from 7-11now spend more time watching television and playing video games than before. What are the effects of this on children, families and society? What are the possible solutions to this problem?

Nowadays, children adore watching TV and playing games, especially primary school pupils and they waste more time than in the past. It will affect their academic results, socialising with parents and communication with peers. This essay will discuss these problems and provide possible measures to address them.
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In some countries,most people do not have internet due to lack of money.the government should be held accountable so that everyone can get internet. To what extent do you agree?

In some countries , most of the people do not have much money to access the Internet . The governments should be held accountable for ensuring that everyone can get access to the Internet.
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In many countries people increasingly talk about money (how much they earn or how much they pay for things in their daily conversations). Why? Is this a positive or negative development?

In contrast to the pass, the residents in many countries start to discuss their daily costs between conversations with people. Whether it is a positive or disadvantageous phoneme, I would explain the ideas in this essay.
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In many countries people increasingly talk about money (how much they earn or how much they pay for things in their daily conversations). Why? Is this a positive or negative development?

In the contrast of pass, the residents in many countries stast to discuss about their daily cost between conversations with people. Weather it is postive or disadvatage phonomen, I would explian the ideas in this essay.
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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of heath and fitness are decreasing. I think that the cause of these problems are due to unhealthy lifestyle and the lack of exercise.
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Cooperation rather than competition should be encouraged among high school students. In about 200-250 words, write an essay to express your opinion on the proposal. Use reasons and examples to support your position.

Well, this topic reminded me of my appointment whit my childhood friend. I guess it was several months ago when my childhood friend called and invited me to have lunch at the restaurant. I was very pleased because I didn’t have seen her for a long time so, we arranged a time for the weekend. I was very busy during the week and then at the weekend our appointment just slipped my mind. I was studying at home when my friend called and at that moment suddenly I recalled our meeting. I felt embarrassed and I was very sorry and didn’t know how I can explain the situation because I didn’t have any valid excuses. I was puzzled because it was the first time I’d forgotten an appointment. Actually, I wasted my friend’s time and she thought I didn’t care about her, so I apologized to her and I didn’t know she really forgave me or not.
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It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is normally believed that Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people think that it is not the best place to find information.
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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

We cannot deny that population are dramatically rising overtime, in my own point of view, there are many ways to meet the people needs specially on food consumption. I agree the idea of eating edible insects as source of food.
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Failure is proof that ones ambition was not strong enough. To what extent do you agree?

"Failure is proof that ones ambition was not strong enough." I do not agree with the above statement because being failure does not determine the amount of hard work one has done and his commitment to his desire.
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some people think that the governments should pay one of the parents of very young children to stay at home to look after their children. what do you think would be advantages and disadvantages of this policy?

Many countries are ageing society these days so that governments try to establish some policies that young people want to have children. Some people believe that the government should help of their parents who have infants stay at home to take care of their children financially. This would be a controversial question. I would like to give the advantages and disadvantages of this policy.
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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?

Nowadays some dangerous people keep on perpetrate crimes even though they have already spent a period in prison. This essay will discuss the main reasons of this attitude and then describe the possible effects of the problem.
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