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the maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbiton

An industrial area in the town of Norbiton is illustrated regarding the current status and plans.
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To what extent do you agree with the following statement? Anything that is good for you can also be bad for you if you do it too much.

Generating habits that encourage us to feel happier about the good things we can do can help us be better, perform better, and reduce our emotions for the bad things we may have done.
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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other s think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own oipinion.

advertising were used since long time ago to promote both goods or services. it develop through time and now we can see so many different advertisments anywhere in various medias. i believe that advertising still give impact even though there are only small amount of people notice the commercials.
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Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.

It is often believed that the higher the degree of studies, the higher is the chance of succeeding. However, many people have been the proof that that is not always the case. In my opinion, that would have been true a few decades ago, but with the advance intechnology and the increasing amount of job positions that do not require higher education, the statement seems to be outdated.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give opinions.

One of the most important concerns in modern society is how to tackle bad situations. There are those who said that bad situations can be solved by accepting whether it is an unsatisfactory job or a shortage of money ,however others believe that overcoming bad situations by trying and improving.This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide an overall opinion.
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Stress-related illness are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In the current 4.0 era, social become more develop, mental health should cared more and more over because people influenced by social every much. So that, mental illness are becoming grow very fast.
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The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments for driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, street accidents have been increasing every day. So, traffic accidents are growing very fast. Because of that reason, governments decided to give stricter punishments for driving offences to raise people’s awareness. This is an efficient way but in my point of view this is not the only way.
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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate whether a myriad of museums and historical venues mostly attract travelers in lieu of inhabitants. This essay is dedicated to the underlying roots, followed by some equivalent far-reaching resolutions to this dire problem.
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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over whether a wealth of historical exhibition halls attract tourist but not indigenous people. I would contend that this essay is devoted to the underlying reasons, followed by some equivalent effective solutions to this dire problem.
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Some people think that getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that is would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.

Today there are various ways for getting job and specilize in it.Some people believe that getting a degree from a university is useful and helpful for having a profession,but others says we must go straight into work and get experience instead.In this essay we will investigate this subject and also present some pros and cons.
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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

In this modern era, advent of advent of technology has brought many advantage and disadvantage to our life. the approach of how people meet each other has been changed.it is true that internet bring a lot of convenient to our lifestyle, however, this has some detrimental consequence.in this essay I want to examine is it a positive development or negative one.
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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

There are some controversial perspective heating a debate over historical area. While some claim that there are some historical sites become attractive to international tourist but not indigenous one, and it is necessary to make historical places become a tourism appealing to local people. I consider myself an advocate of this idea.
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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will useful in the future, such as those related to science and techology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

For decades, choices of the fields in the graduate level has been discussing. Recently, there is an upward trend on a restriction of willing of the students' selection. There is an idea that students must obey the limitation of choosing lessons according to just study in developing technologies in the light of science. In fact, the autorities should apply this strategy due to all jobs requirements seeking a knowledge on technology and science and establishing sustainable developments in the country.
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Some people argued that history is of little or no use. Others believe that studying history give many benefits. Discuss those views and give your own opinion?

There are controversial perspectives heating spurring a debate over the benefits is brought by learning history. While some claim that learning history is of tremendous benefit, the opposite makes a statement that history is not useful. While the latter is valid to some extent, I consider myself an advocate of the former.
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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. how true do you think this statement is? what measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars

Some people say that car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now „one big traffic jam”. It is true that cars become the most popular means of transport. A lot of people are the only owner of the car. It means that one family has even a three or four cars. This amount of vehicles creates a lot of new problems with which the government is struggling.
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Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?”

Some people get into debt by buying things they do not need and can not afford. This behaviour has a lot of causes. One of them do not know how to plan a budget. Another, are influenced by advertisement and discounts organised by shops.
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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling in these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles will outweigh the disadvantages?

The advancements in Technology brought a significant change throughout the world. Most of the automobile industries successfully invented the driverless cars and busses over the last decade, which may even develop to automatic-driven vehicles in the upcoming years. In the forthcoming paragraph, i will discuss the advantages and dis-advantages of this development.
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Challenges of Cyber Security Laws and policies regarding Human Rights Laws.

In recent times, the Digital Security Act 2018 has been a controversial topic of discussion in the country, with citizens taking to social media to express their discontent. The hashtag “Abolish Digital Security Act, 2018” has been trending, with people creating posters and infographics in opposition to the Act. (Footnote)
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Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drinks that have been scientifically proven to be bad for people‘s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays a great number of people consume junk food which is harmful to health. It is considered to be that these kinds of meals and beverages should be restricted for sale. I totally agree with this idea and will support my point of view with the examples below.
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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

In recent years, an increase in the manufacture of consumer goods has been seen. While this is connected to population growth, it has resulted in an increase in a detrimental effect to the environment. In this essay I will look at 2 possible causes for this as well as suggest some solutions.
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