IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 387

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is a common fact that migrating to a country which speak a different language result to sever issue in social and practicle context. The essay is indended to explain my view which is agree on the satement emphasis basically on public communication and cultural adoptation in new country.

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Some people believe that sports create peace in world. Do you agree or disagree with ?

football is a sport popular in many countries that will be making restfulness in the earth.

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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is arguably believed that nowadays people tend to be rather reluctant of upholding long-established traditions. Also, there is a considerable number of people who believe instilling deep-rooted cultures and traditions is vital. This essay will examine both views dividedly and argues in the favor of the latter. To begin with, Considering the fact the culture and traditions can be fluid and forever changing, it is inevitable to give in to the vanishing of some. However, it also appears that in the modern world people don’t appear as willing to preserve well established cultures as they used to do ages ago and that is duo to fostering of youth culture. Seemingly, the newly established cultures developed by new generations hold a substantial sway over how traditions are rarely kept. Therefore, the initiating gap between the set of values people are currently undergoing is rather unacceptable and inconvenient to adopt and is potentially raising conflict. However,...

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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is arguably believed that nowadays people tend to be rather reluctant of upholding long-established traditions. Also, there is a considerable number of people who believe instilling deep-rooted cultures and traditions is vital. This essay will examine both views dividedly and argues in the favor of the latter. To begin with, Considering the fact the culture and traditions can be fluid and forever changing, it is inevitable to give in to the vanishing of some. However, it also appears that in the modern world people don’t appear as willing to preserve well established cultures as they used to do ages ago and that is duo to fostering of youth culture. Seemingly, the newly established cultures developed by new generations hold a substantial sway over how traditions are rarely kept. Therefore, the initiating gap between the set of values people are currently undergoing is rather unacceptable and inconvenient to adopt and is potentially raising conflict. However,...

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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is arguably believed that in recent days people tend to be rather reluctant of

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement?

Nowadys, there is a debat associated with governments should invest significant money on railways rather than roads. In may opinion, developing railways can help to resolve trafic issue and it can lead to individuals moving rurals area without any concern about their commute.

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In my conclusion, I will partially disagree that jail is the only effective option or education is the only choice. I think it depends on the level of crime they have sinned.

Crime depicts the countries social dysfunctions. In various nation it is believed that prison is an only effective solution to the problem of misdeeds, but many believe that it’s better to educate them for their greater goods. This essay will provide all the relevant information as to which option is superior. Anti-social activities has been increasing in various region, there is a belief in society that every lawbreaker should be imprisoned and that this is the optimal remedy to that issue in total disregards to the level of crime they have committed. Although there are various levels for criminal activities like there are people who have committed grave harm to humanity like terrorism, homicides, child abusers, assaults, rapes and many more these are all unforgivable crimes which just cannot be solved by educating them these can only be resolved by prison time or some other major means. On the contrary, there are offenders who have performed a felony...

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In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Crime depicts the countries social dysfunctions. In various nation it is believed that prison is an only effective solution to the problem of misdeeds, but many believe that it’s better to educate them for their greater goods. This essay will provide all the relevant information as to which option is superior. Anti-social activities has been increasing in various region, there is a belief in society that every lawbreaker should be imprisoned and that this is the optimal remedy to that issue in total disregards to the level of crime they have committed. Although there are various levels for criminal activities like there are people who have committed grave harm to humanity like terrorism, homicides, child abusers, assaults, rapes and many more these are all unforgivable crimes which just cannot be solved by educating them these can only be resolved by prison time or some other major means. On the contrary, there are offenders who have performed a felony...

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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude male or females from certain professions because of their gender? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience in 250 words.

Nowadays, when roles in society between males and females get closer to each other every year, we are already accustomed to progressive actions in employment as rights for everyone to choose the dream job no matter of any minimal demands. On the first hand it may be seen as a positive aspect of democracy on the other hand as a risk for the own applicant's health. Today, I would like to demonstrate each view of the topic from a different perspective to find the best solution.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is commonly held that when faced with unappealing circumstances, it is better to be open and accept the hardship. However, it is also discussed that one should thrive to change the situation for himself. This essay will approach both views and argues in the favor of the latter. On one hand, life’s not always appealing so, it is common to face money shortage or get stuck in a career that doesn’t appeal to you. Those who are reluctant of struggling and do not know how to find coping mechanisms in such situations, tend to get hurt. On the other hand, Others who do know how to manage, develop strength and patience, for instance, people who work harder instead of becoming frustrated, will overcome the issue way sooner, and more conveniently because they are convinced that nothing in life is permanent, neither are hardships. And the perspective itself will eventually lead to career growth, hopefulness and self-improvement. and circumstances take turn for the bette...

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the employment sectors of graduate students from Brighton University in 2019 as proportions scattered in approximately 10 different job sectors.

This chart illustrates the employment sectors of graduate students from Brighton University in 2019 as proportions. The graduates were scattered in approximately 10 different job sectors.

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Nowadays because of digital technology, it is possible for not only studios but also individuals to produce their own films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The phenomenon of information technology development pace is faster and faster in the modern world and lending to a myriad of social media that allow the public to share their own movie has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, I believe that its advantages outweigh the disadvantages to the human community.

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As the number of cars increases ,more money has to be spend on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this . Others, however think that drivers should cover the costs . Discuss both views and give your opinion?

As the number of cars increases ,more money has to be spend on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this . Others, however think that drivers should cover the costs . Discuss both views and give your opinion? Some would argue that the number of private cars is increasing at a faster pace and government should spend large amount of funds in construction of roads, while others think that the money should be paid by car drivers. I completely agree with the former view and opine that regimes must pay for paths for better development of their areas . To commence with the fact that why some individuals are willing that regimes should pay the road costs because they consider it the prior responsibility of government. People are paying higher taxes to their city officials every year and expect that government bodies should emphasis towards poor condition of roads . Besides, city authorities have several social contacts with local municipal committee’...

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As the number of cars increases ,more money has to be spend on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this . Others, however think that drivers should cover the costs . Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Some would argue that the number of private cars is increasing at a faster pace and government should spend large amount of funds in construction of roads, while others think that the money should be paid by car drivers. I completely agree with the former view and opine that regimes must pay for paths for better development of their areas . To commence with the fact that why some individuals are willing that regimes should pay the road costs because they consider it the prior responsibility of government. People are paying higher taxes to their city officials every year and expect that government bodies should emphasis towards poor condition of roads . Besides, city authorities have several social contacts with local municipal committee’s who deals with maintenance of damaged pathways. One relevant evidence is the Quebec government who looks after both poor condition of paths and repair costs .Personally , I also believe that funds must be paid by governable bodies. ...

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Since most information about culture and history can be found on the internet, museum are not needed anymore.To what extent do you agree?

Due to the advancement of Technology nowadays information related to culture and history are vastly digitised and easily available on internet.Therefore,some people think the physical existence of museum is not required anymore.However,personally i disagree with such thinking.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Perhaps the idea of in this modern era a lot of manufactured meal and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health issues.Sugary goods should be more coslty to encourage humans to consume less this item.Many people holding different beliefs on it.

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The diagrams show how the bee makes honey and the stages in the production of honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and making comparisons where relevant.

This diagram describes a multi-step process of honey production by bees. It consists of 07 steps starting with bees leaving their hives and ending with the production of honey. Bees act as the intermediate carriers between the flowers and the hive.

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Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a debate about whether doctors and engineers need to be made to stay and work in the country they studied in or be allowed to choose any other places. This question should be solved by considering all the possibilities.

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In today’s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. in the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualification. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, market has shown an increasing interest in recruiting employees with better practical skills rather than the ones with academic qualifications. While this may challenge the need for requiring educational degrees in order to enter the job market, I disagree that in the future the role of academical education might diminish. In today’s tough economy, choosing a career early on is considered common. Youngsters are more inclined to start earning money and to enter a workplace as soon as possible rather than spending their time and youth in prolonged academic courses. For these reasons, pragmatic short courses, which are cost-benefit and have momentary tangible results, have become a popular demand. For instance, these days cryptocurrency has become a source of investment and income for many people. It can be seen that many enter this field solely by attending a 1-week training program without any prior academical knowledge regarding economic literacy or socio-...

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In today’s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. in the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualification. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, market has shown an increasing interest in recruiting employees with better practical skills rather than the ones with academic qualifications. While this may challenge the need for requiring educational degrees in order to enter the job market, I disagree that in the future the role of academical education might diminish. In today’s tough economy, choosing a career early on is considered common. Youngsters are more inclined to start earning money and to enter a workplace as soon as possible rather than spending their time and youth in prolonged academic courses. For these reasons, pragmatic short courses, which are cost-benefit and have momentary tangible results, have become a popular demand. For instance, these days cryptocurrency has become a source of investment and income for many people. It can be seen that many enter this field solely by attending a 1-week training program without any prior academical knowledge regarding economic literacy or socio-...