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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that the activities of large multinational corporations mostly benefit the economies of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that the large multinationals are generally harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

the charts illustrate the number of participants in two fields, education and science. this survey was conducted in developed countries and industrialised countries within ten years, starting in 1980. it is clear from the given data that the industry states had more amount of people in both sectors, therefore the amount of money was justified in spending in the advanced countries.

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Nowadays public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think it is happening? How can this problem be solved?

In the modern world, public movement fees are growing. This essay will highlight the principle causes and the solutions to resolve this issue.in my opinion the root causes are high cost of fossil fuel and environmental taxes which make tickets more expensive. The possible solutions are using public transport and alternative types of vehicles. There are many causes held responsible for this issue.firstly, fossil fuel is too expensive due to many countries do not have natural resources of oil and gas so they must be imported to the countries at a high cost.for instance , the USA does not have enough resources of oil and gas.As a result it has to buy barrels of them from Iran and Arabia.therefore, it makes the cost of fossil fuel increase which affects on price of public movement tickets. Secondly, the high salaries of administrative workers make tickets fee expensive because many companies are keen on to pay bonuses for directors of companies. For example, LRT company in NUR_SULTAN...

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Obesity is now a major global epidemic. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem?

Nowadays, we often hear about health problems caused by an unhealthy diet. One of these is represented by obesity, which has reached an epic proportion around the world. To solve this problem, government should play a significant role by applying an higher tax rate on certain types of food and increasing people awareness about the obesity’s effects.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. Why is that the case? What can we do to reduce this problem?

Nowadays, the natural environment is damaged by the increasing production of consumer goods. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with the rise in the creation of products and suggest viable solutions to solve this issue.

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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Thebefore, all students have to wear school uniforms. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Students are fascinated by wearing fashionable clothes. A classroom is a place where everyone is equal there is no difference between race, colour, rich or poor therefore I promptly believe that uniform is compulsory in school.

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People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?

Unarguably, people throughout history have been trying to set up a perfect place to live in for future generations. In this essay we will discuss the factors responsible for it and how to overcome them.

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he global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given chart compares the profit-making from video games in a six-year period from 2000 to 2006 around the world. The information is provided in billions of dollars.

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Today, TV channels provide men’s sport shows more than women’s sport shows. Why? Should TV channels give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport?

Nowadays, sports play a vital role in the entertainment industry and they also encourage people from different age groups to stay fit.Although,even with such a huge audience and following for the game, the tv industry still prefers to show men's play over than that women's.

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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflet the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued that in the contemporary world the majority of products are purchased not out of necessity, but thanks to proper advertising. Convinced that marketing can be considered to bea really powerful tool, when it comes to persuading people to buy a certain good, I tend to agree with this statement.

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Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

A number of adults thinks that, it’s too hard to be into education at school and note institutions as an important places. From my point of view, the main reason for this issue is social networks and people are able to get out of this situation by controlling their daily routines.

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It is thought by some that a teachers role is to motivate and inspire students. However, other people believe that a teachers primary role is to pass on knowledge. what do you think is the role of a teacher?

In some communities, people believe that teacher's role is to motivate and inspire students. However, people who have the opposite opinion speaks that a teacher's main role is to pass on knowledge. Even though they teach students with strict methods, most of them take care of children. The motto of Korean teachers is "Giving motivation and affording knowledge to kids". In my opinion, teaching ability in school is more important than motivating and inspiring students. Most citizens say that the main quality of humans is knowledge. 68% of the citizens who lives in the United States of America claim that teachers should be strengthed in educating children and even though a number of moms and dads' have educated nowadays, passing knowledge is a professional area and most tutors are educated in how to teach kids in perfect ways. Also, most South Korean elders insist younger should learn about motivation and inspiration in the household. Traditionally in the Republic of Korea, the ...

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In many societies, there is less social contact between the elderly and the young. What are the reasons and what measures can be taken?

In the contemporary world, advanced technology has rapidly developed and this tendency has caused the elder generation and the younger generation to have a big gap in their differences in order to have their lifestyles as being less social connection. This essay will expound on and provide possible solutions to address them.

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Some people say that young people are much more influenced by their friends than their parents or teachers. Do you agree or disagree?

A friend in life is important and you should know how to choose your friends because this right idea is that friends have more effect on the person than the family and the teachers.

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People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than people who lived in previous times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, some individuals think that the public who living in the 21st century have improved and high-quality of lifestyle than that of the population who lived in old time. I agree with the statement and give the reasons for my agreement in the body paragraphs.

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Many parents complain that computer games have no value to their children's study. On the contrary, those online games have produced a lot of negative effects on their mental and physical development. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, technology is affecting many areas of our lives and the picture of children's daily life has changed. A Number of youngers enjoy games, especially computer-based games and video games. Most of them play this entertainment almost every day. But their parents complain that computer games have no advantages for their kids. It is because they believe that computer games have no advantage to their children's education. I believe that online entertainments produce a lot of harmful effects on mental and physical development and it is recognised to everybody as a myth. In my opinion, it is important for boys and girls to reduce playing games. Most of them do not finish their homework and play games. This situation will affect their educational development and finally, it may give harm to developing mental and physical health. The parent's role is most important to solve this problem. First, they should remind them that playing it will harm their children. Most moms and ...

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Economics, as an integral part of many countries’ core morality, plays an extremely important role in achieving the development goals of a state. But from the perspective of the government, economic evolution is the most important and should pay more attention to? Many politics think that the economic advance of a country is essentially their most important focus.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.

Learning a foreign vocabulary is not much more important than learning a mother's vocabulary. As the result of learn only local language the students will face huge problems in the future. I agree with that statement. Because learning an international accent will help when communicating with other countries. In addition to that, many of the books are written in English than in the local language. Therefore, English is very useful when improving knowledge too.

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In some country, young people are not only richer, but also safer and healthier than ever before however, they are less happy what do you think are the causes of this? What solution do you suggest?

It is an undeniable fact that nowadays in some nation, young generation are not only weltyer but also safer and healthier than ever before. They are less happy. This essay will discuss various reasons behind this trend and give some solution to tackle this issue.

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Some students take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a tendency for some students to have an off year before university in order to have a job or take a trip. What I believe is that the merits of such action are overshadowed by its merits since this gap has some detrimental effects on their futures which I explain in detail as follows:

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Pollution increased in large cities day to day. Therefore, it leads to serious issues after which environment will suffer due to pollution. The objective of this essay is to examine such problems as land pollution and air deterioration, and also propose a number of ways to tackle the problem.

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