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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person.Why do you think this is the case?What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person?

In the modern 21st century era that we as the world are currently live in,the age group of youngsters who are more commonly known as ‘’teenagers’’ have been noticed due to the reason of a particular manner which they embody in their day to day lives.The teenagers in our social world nowadays have shown us that they are more keen on socialising via the social media rather than a face to face natural communication with each other.This phenomenon may be caused of the fact that they normalised this behaviour as children.

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Nowadays, we can watch entertainment performances from the screen and no need to watch it live. To what extend do you agree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge

This world is coming to the streaming era, when many streaming sites have competed to possess variations of content that can attract audiences such as TV shows, movies, theatre plays and concerts. As a result, many people think that they just need to enjoy their favourite shows at home rather than go to the livehouse or theatre. I partly agree with this opinion.

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In today's world, private companies rather than government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays, private companies companies have been carrying out and investing more capital in scientific researchs than government organizations. While I accept that private funding for researchs may have some disadvantages, I strongly believe that its advantages are significantly greater.

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Some people think the main reason for success is hard work and determination. While other people think factors like money and personal appearance are also important. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

It is inevitable that most of people are aiming succed. Although some people believe that the main factor in success is hard working and determination, others think that money and personal appearance is the main point. In this essay i will i will explain both of views and say why i believe that both of them are important.

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Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and new events. Do you think advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantages?

Whether social media has more advantages or drawbacks has always been a heated discussion.Social applications has been popular these years, as with people's dependence on smart phones, ipads as well as laptops.Users in no matter ages use social apps to get in cloth with their friends and family memebers.At the same time,social media such as Youtube can always ensure that we keep in touch with the latest news.Some say that technology benefits us ,others suggests that it ruins our normal life more or less. In the upcoming paragraphs I will discuss both sides and give my own idea.

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Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and new events. Do you think advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantages?

Whether social media has more advatages or drawbacks has always been a heated discussion.Social applicaitons has been popular these years, as with people's dependence with smart phones, ipad as well as laptop.Users in no matter ages use social apps to get in cloth with their friends and family memebers.At the same time,social media such as Youtube can always ensure that we keep in touch with the latest news.Some say that technology benefits us ,others suggests that it ruins our nomal life in some degrees. In this essay,I will discuss both sides and give my own idea.

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People believe the over-use of smartphones are causing many problems in our lives, and it should be regulated. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The ubiquity of smartphones forever alters the human interaction as we once knew; on the other hand, the side effects that come with them are captivating sizable media attention. This essay seeks to demonstrate the smart devices conundrums and proposes that certain form of regulation is warranted.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

In modern society, the Government is spending more various funds for arts instead of using for other community conditions. They consider entertainment is one of the most successful keys in our lives. I believe both factors are equally needed for residents because of some evidence below.

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Today’s teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss the view and give your own opinion.

It is often considered that nowadays the young generation gets easily depressed as compared with past youths. In my, an inclined this is true that juveniles live stressful life because competition around the globe rising. Thus this essay will elaborate on the statement which leads to the logical conclusion,

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COMMUNITIES AND HELPING EACH OTHER We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Do you help other people? . it is necessary?

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Advertising encourages customers to buy in quantity not in quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Schools are one of the most significant part in personal growing. There we spend on average eleven vital years during which child became the part of the society. Schools extremely influenced on our behavior, character and habits. Mostly academia have special classes based on health, but fatness and diabetes are still critical problems all around the world, that’s why I think that it is not one because schools do not do enough to describe students all essential of the healthy lifestyle.

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Do you think it is good to push students to study hard in their youth?

Now a days, people are forceful toward their children about study and career from the very early stage of their childhood with the view that, studing hard may make the youngsters successful. However, this essay will show the disadvantage of pushing hard for study at youth. In my opinion, learning should be with pleasure then pressure.

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Many people today are worried about young children using video games. What problems might these games cause for children and society as a whole? How could these problems be reduced?

gov. - put restrictions import - encourage sports and industry - offer intresting substitutes -

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“Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?”

Today's generation, they came up with different websites which help people to interact and connect with other individuals or use them for news updates. Earlier using Facebook was the most common social media used by all types of age groups. It played an important role in youngster life. Using Facebook was not an issue earlier also.

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In today's world, private companies rather than government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

There is no doubt conducting scientific research requires an amount of money. It is often paid by Private Company rather than Government. While I accept that this trend may have some drawbacks, I strongly believe that its benefits are greater.

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In some countries, celebrities can now earn more than senior politicians. what might be the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

In some countries, celebrities are paid more than senior politicians. Acting and Ruling are two different things. One is for entertaining people and the other one is for helping people in a political way. There is no discrimination in one's work.

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Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, while others feel that crime is being tackled effectively now. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Crime has always been a concerning issue in many societies. Despite that, some hold the view that crime is being dealt with effectively, though other people call for more measures to alleviate it. I personally agree with the latter view.

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University should accept equal no. Of male and female in every subject.do you agree or disagree.

In my opinion, man and women have same opportunities. However, I do not agree with this idea of accepting equal proportions of each gender in every subject.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Nowadays, people are getting more and more lazy. They want convenience in everything. when they come home from work, they will have microwaved dinner or fast food so that they do not have to take the trouble to prepare a meal or wash up after dinner. The introduction of fast food is also the main cause of unhealthy living. People are opting a fast food restaurant meal rather than a simple home cooked meal. Yes, your burgers and pizzas tasted better than a homecooked meal but think of all the calories you are swallowing. The oil they used to fry your fries. It is literally black. Eating too much fast food will also lead to health problems. Sugary drinks,pacheted chips, candies and chocolate are also some of the causes that contributes to unhealthy lifestyle. Heavy consumption can lead to weight gain and diabeties.

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In today's world, private companies rather than government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

These days, most scientific studies are invested and managed by private corporations instead of authorities. While I understand that the matter may have some benefits, I strongly believe that its drawbacks are greater.

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