IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 449

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

At present, it has been said that the relationship between individual accomplishment and equal rights is developing day by day. Certain people believe that a person can reach the peak of success while living in identical communities. On the other hand, another group of people convey that one can gain whatever he wants from his career only when he does not have any boundaries for being passed or unsuccessful owing to his personal strength. In the forthcoming paragraph, I will explain both sides with proper explanations.

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Nowadays, some people believe that fashion is very important for youngsters and it has negative impact on the people and society. Do you agree or disagree with statement?

21st century can be regarded as the fashion oriented era. Major trends in the field of clothing, beauty products and hair dressing can be seen in last few decades. According to some people's opinion, fashion has become inevitable for the youth but at the same time it has a devastating effect on the social and cultural life. I tend to disagree with the statement and would like to elaborate my point of view on the same.

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many manufactureed food and drink products contain hight levels of suger which causes many health problems. surgary products should be made mpre expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

many food substances are being made from unhealthy materila such as sugar,which is responsibility of many chronic disease. for instance, hypertention and diabetic. some people argueed that the government should but some regulations on it by increasing its price. in my opinion, I disagree with this notion,and i will further explain more in the essay with some example.

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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant period of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.

In the recent years, more people move abroad for different purposes, one for career opportunities, while others aim for higher and better quality of educations. This essay will try to elaborate about the positive sand drawbacks regarding this situation.

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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is a fact that travelling nowadays is become popular than last decade as people mostly travelled by horse.

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In many countries,paying for things using mobile phone

These days a lot of people around the world tend to pay by using their cell phones.There are many benefits of paying by using mobile applications ,People find that paying by their cellphones saves time for them,On the other hand phones can be a target for thieves.

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In many countries, more and more people are becoming overweight. What do you think are the main causes of this? What effects might this have in the future? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Obesity is a rapidly growing concern in many countries around the world. This essay will explore the causes and potential consequences of this escalating health issue.

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Reopening new mining companies on islands can be harmful to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Islands are regarded as one of the most versatile tourist attractions and home of natural minerals and resources because of the ocean surrounding them. Due to the rapid globalisation, the need of minerals and natural energy has become evident. Taking this into consideration, many mining oraganisations are being established on the islands which are full of natural materials. I completly agree that inaugeration of industralization will cause depletion to the islands despite it's economic benefits.

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Developments in tourism offer very little direct benefit for residents who live in these areas. To what extent do you agree?

Across the world many countries focus on the development of tourism. Governments offer profits to localites that are sourced from the tourism. I completely disagree with the point that residents will get less direct benefits with the development in tourism. In the forthcoming paragraphs i would justify my view on this.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans represent the layout of Southwest Airport before and after development next year.

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three types of enquiries received by the tourist information office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The graph illustrates three types of enquiries received by the tourist information office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

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Space travel is fantastic these days, but there are many issues, such as environmental problems, that we should be focusing on. What are your views on the allocation of public funding?

Travelling to space is trending these days, but environment and funding are the creating some problems. This essay will focus on both the issues and solutions for the same.

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Nowadays there are more and more advertisements. Some people think that they have a negative influence on people, and therefore should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true to say advertise become more popular currently from before. Few masses believe that they have bad impact on people and for that reason it should be cramped in my opinion there should be no restriction on commercials because they not only source of information but also effectiveness of the product

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which cause many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Current life, it has become a habit for most people to eat sugary products instead of healthy foods. Many people claim that products of drinks and food contain an excessive amount of sugar which leads to many problems in terms of health. It is argued that sugary products have to be expensive for the public to consume less sugar. I am of the view that I strongly agree with this phenomenon that higher prices on sugary products would help people avoid health problems and change their buying behaviour.

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People should only concentrate on a single skill for life because it is the best way to succeed. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the 20th century, commuting is one of the crucial aspects of the development of the city. A long time ago people usually worked nearby their house, right now, place of worked is tending to be concentrated in the center of the city. People from supporting areas or other in the edge of city transporting daily to their place of worked. If a city does not possess good infrastructure for commuting many minor until major problems could occured Therefore, infrastructure to makes commuting more efficient is necessary for the city.

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The amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in schools in order to teach the problem of overweight children. Do you think this is the best way to deal with the problem? What other solutions can you suggest?

Many thinks that school must raise the amount of sport and exercise at school, in order to prevent children to become overwight. This essay disagree with the statement, and will try to elaborate the reason and provide the solutions.

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Some people think The mental strength important for success in sports while others believe that is it more important to have strong and fit people in sports. Discuss both views and give opinion.

Repacing books and printed educational materials with electronic devices such as tablets and laptops is becoming prevalant. Athough it is generally believed that changing the educational stuff could be useful in students's learning process and in environmental terms, I personally disagree with their claim due to some arguments. The proponents of replacing books and printed materials like assignments back up their claim with several reasons. Firstly, they the electronic devices may offer a wider range of information than the physical books. The ability to use internet is helping these things to provide use an enormous volume of information in just a second. moreover, by diminishing physical books the environment may preserve better. For producing paper, trees must be cut down and due to the elimination of papar, forests will be intact for the future generation. In addition, more trees will be equal to more oxygen for people. On the other hand, the opponents of using tab...

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Many people believe that educational standards have declined in recent times, particularly in the area of literacy and numeracy. Discuss the problem and give solutions ?

Knowledge and quality of learning are very important to our society, and some of the people, nowadays don't really focus on their learning. In this, the essay I will discuss the problem and my opinion.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

An online store is an e-commerce website or app where buyers can see a catalogue of products or services and electronically purchase them. We cannot overlook how these outlet are fast growing these days. ,However saying the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all boutique in towns and cities closing is a bit overboard.

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What is advantage and disadvantages of study in the international program

The advantages of studying in international programs at a university. Obviously, improving your English skills because, in every international program ,English instruction is used throughout the four-year curriculum. This will help the students are more familiar with and proficient in using English than studying in a Thai curriculum. As you know, English has become so important in our lives. It is a language that is widely used all over the world.Most of international programs students can be graduated in 3 years and a half instead of study 4 years, some of the faculty of international programs study in Thai campus for 2 years and 2 years study aboard.Thus making, people who graduated from international programs have a higher chance of getting a job.

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