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Whereas the beneficial aspects of utilizing nuclear technology are considered as an incentive for proponents to pursue their investigations in this realm,the opponents have been debating the drawbacks that it can cause for Man.However,in my point of view,while it should be restricted owing to the negative footprints that it may occur,prohibiting it completely can have as well some other problems,hence a balance ought to be imposed.Nevertheless, both sides are uttered here.
Over the last few ,years the world experienced some modern technology which is most supportive for human mankind.One of them is artificial intelligence.This nomenclature will replace the position of driver and assist human with accuracy. In this essay I will outrage the benefit of driveless car and aslo briefly discuss the major drawbacks of it.
Plastic wastes are becoming increasingly serious in many nations. Although plastics threaten many societies, its effects can also be combated successfully. I opinion that both governments and individuals can solve the problem.
How am I supposed to answer this question, thought I with tears desperation as I stare at the blank page on my desk. This is my first time sitting in front an external exam, although I have conquered the last few pages without any difficulties, I find myself hopelessly stuck at the very last one. To add to my misery, I realized that this question also brings the highest mark- precisely eight marks.
Nowadays , Citenzen in flourishing countries easily possess cars which bring some favour for their own in some extent, while I reckon this trend for individuals outweighs the drawbacks for habitat.
People have different views about how to invest into cities. Some people argue that governments should spend money on decorating cities to become more beautiful. However, other people think that it is important to focus on develop cities' funtionality. In this essay, the both views of this argument would be analyzed and i will give my own point of view.
Nowadays in some countries, most the grownups tend to live with their parents after finishing their studies and having a job. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of adults living with parents.
In many countries, an increasing number of people are choosing to lead an unhealthy lifestyle these days. However, I strongly feel this to be a negative development.
Computers have become an integral part of our life. Now they are used in almost all sphere like education, administration, banking, healthcare and others. Some people think that computers have made our life more comfortable, but others have a negative view. In my opinion, there many benefits of using computers.
With the development of economy, there are various museums in our country. However, it is argued that whether a free admission tend to be more benefit. In my opinion, obviously there are some advantages of a charging admission, but a free admission would contribute to the society more in the long term.
Nowadays, the increasing number of young people who live independently or with less members of their family has been one of the major social issues among populations in many parts of the world. This essay will start from the causes of this problem and end up with my opinion.
Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh City are the two largest cities in Viet Nam. Those two cities are located in two geographical locations quite far apart, so there are some differences and similarities in climate.
Several students do a multitask of work and studying. Because of that, some of the students do not have enough time to study and at the same time feeling mentally exhausted. I think the reason behind it because in several cases, students at the same time have to fulfill their own tuition fee or do not have enough pocket money to live their life. Other than that, I think the best solution to solve this problem is to provide more scholarships for them.
There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over whether news is irrelevant to human’s lives and there is no worth to read and watch news. While it has its own perk, I would contend that it has both pros and cons.
Many argue that music brings people of different generations and ages close to each other. I completely disagree with that because i think that people of different cultures and generations value different things.
In many countries around the world, the legal prohibition against tobacco smoking has been enacted successfully. However, several other countries have not introduced the official restrictions as of today for multiple reasons, which will be discussed further in this essay. On the one hand, those who oppose the implementation of smoking restrictions in public places share the view that these measures can be non-effective in terms of reducing the frequency of second-hand smoke. In fact, they tend to highlight that the additional cost of building special “smoking areas” in public places is added, which has been the case in many instances. Furthermore, the critics of the smoking laws claim that banning indoor tobacco smoking can exacerbate the environmental pollution, as the smokers might continue to smoke outside of the public places, hospitals, or even educational institutes and pollute these areas with smoke and cigarettes butts. In contrast, the supporters of the smoking...
I graduated in 2014 with a bachelor degree in doctor of dental surgery in 2014 at Cantho University of Medicine and Pharmacy, Vietnam. After graduation, I worked as a community health worker and dental clinician at a local medical center at Can Tho city, Vietnam for 4 years. In 2018, I was awarded a scholarship from the Danish government including full tuition fee waiver and monthly stipend around 1100 CAD for my master education in Public Health at the University of Southern Denmark. After...
It is widely known that most staffs are in need of soft skills such as communication skills and working with teams that are required in job in contemporary world. In the following paragraph, I will discuss the main causes for this and the possible effects of this problem.
Designing a city becomes a difficult task when there exists a controversy whether to give preference to its beauty or the functionality. I feel both the aspects should be looked upon, but in most cases, the second aspect can be given more preference.
Many companies are racing to produce merchandise with new features and products and market them in the advertisement. Because they want to distract attention from the public and attract more and more people to purchase their products after watching the advertisements. I believe this is a positive development because both consumers and corporations could benefit from this trend.
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