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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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some people think that in tbhis modern world we are more dependent on each other while others think that people become more independent. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, with the advancement of technology majority of people rely on each other due to the chain systems. some percentage of the public think we are dependent whereas others believe we are independent. I will discuss both views along with my opinion in upcoming paragraphs.

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In many contries, shopping onlines is replacing shopping at stores. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

Squabbling over online and retail shopping is interminable in today's aeon. Controversy exists as to whether it's advantageous or an impediment to society. In this monograph, I will weigh up beneficial and adverse along with my credibility and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is widely believed that the availability of the same products all over the world brings countries together and decreases the amount of cultural differences. As far as I am concerned, it is a positive phenomenon, which makes people from different parts of the world closer to each other and makes us feel united as a humankind.

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Some people think that museums’ main function is to educate people, the others suggest that they can also serve for entertainment purposes. What is your opinion?

Aging is both crucial and inevitable part of process of living. Last couple of decades we observe rising in numbers of older people. This shift in demographical pyramid put pressure on us as the society to develop new ways and approaches to interact with past generations and psychological aspects of aging ought to be taken into account by authorities and scientific agencies. Our survey was aiming at providing sufficient materials on the mentioned theme

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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.

Due to an arm and leg, everyone is looking for better lfestyle and good opportunities in career. As a consequences of this, the major part of the community migrate to another countries. Some people opine that there are plethora of advantages while other's believe that it's not easy to live without their family members. This essay will discuss some pros and cons of living abroad.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The advantage of smartphones nowadays has become having a big part of our lives to adults and children both of them. This trend could be seen that smartphone brought plenty of convinient lifestyle and useful tools in education for children. Like this, there are good influences of using smartphones for children but there are also negative voices to children spending time with smartphone. In my opinion, there are more merits for children using smart devices. I will dicuss of the positive and negative developments of this topic. First of all, it's is well known that smartphone could be a useful way to educate children without controlling by parents. There are so many sources and educational materials on online flatforms that children can enjoy and learn themselves. It also could be said that smart device could be helpful for busy parents like working moms or single parents. Moreover, by using smartphone children can interact with their friends regardless of location and time. Thi...

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Taking risks is one of the most tricky and uncomfortable to discuss subject in our lives. There are some opinions that strongly insist accepting risks bring a lot of benefits after going through it like me, but there are also negative opinions that absorbing risks influences to mentality in a bad way. I will discuss focus on the advantages of the issue and explain some disadvantages based on my own perspective and experiences. First, we can get valuable lessons from having risks. For example, i missed the deadline of my scholarship before and it brought me to realize how managing my schedule regularly is important. As it is seen, i lost an opportunity, but i got great value from the case. In addition, having minus reward is needed in order to have peaceful mindset. In other words, we can invest to some hardrous thing with the mindset that points we are possible to face our fear in peace. If we try to avoid the situation after investing something big because of the risk we will ...

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Some people think that we can use as much fresh water as we want. Others think that fresh water supply should be controlled strictly by governments as the sources are limited. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that water should be used by the individuals to their fullest as it is the fundamental need of people whilst other beleive that water usage should be governed by authority beacuse of the scarcity of water and unavailability of substitute products. I support the latter belief because water is a limited supply and thus it should be used as wisely as possible.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples form your own knowledge or experience.

At present we are living in 21st century. By this year we are facing a lot many health problems. health has become a really major sector for concern these days. Now a days people are having or facing some or the other medical issues or problems. The life of humans has become really miserable. We can say people in every age group is suffering from different diseases and which are dangerous in their own ways. The increase in number of health problems has made a human pillar of pathology. Humans are tired of spending money over their doctor consultations and treatments. People has taken their life very casually as I have seen many of them either ignoring their health or symptoms or just by treating themselves by some home remedies or by taking medications. They do not prefer going to doctor for their problems for the further consultations and advices rather helping themselves with the over and excessive use of drugs, one such drug ; commonly used is tablet paracetamol 500mg. people ha...

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The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern lifestyle. What are the advantages and disadvantages of convenience food?

According to, workload density in modern life is affected using of fast food grossly. In this ,essay we shall discuss the merit and demerit points of this consummation.

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Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have the freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

People thinking towards banned dangerous sports by governments, although others argue everyone should have freedom to play sports. In this essay I will discuss both the views and my opinion.

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Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Aside of the workloads in an assignment, each students have special personalities, let alone when it comes to ones who have mental health problem, such as ADHD and Bipolar disorder. Therefore a few people have their own preference to work as a team in a school project and the other students prefer to work alone.

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An ageing population is affecting parts of the world

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The advantages brought by the spread of English as “a global language” will outweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

The line graph provides information about the number of shops which closed and opened during the period from 2011 to 2018.

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Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that schools should remove non-academic subjects such as music and sports from (the educational/its) syllabus so that students will focus on academic fields which are helpful for their professions. While it is true that intellectual subjects are important, I do not believe that fully concentrating on teaching academic subjects at school is a good idea. Firstly, from the health point of view, non-academic activities are helpful not only for students’ physical health but also their mental health. For instance, after studying and sitting in compulsory classes for the whole morning, it is better for students to do some outdoor or art activities such as dancing, playing basketball to get rid of stress. As a result, their learning ability and concentration in the afternoon will be improved. Focusing only on the academic area is not only harmful to student’s health but also makes their capability decrease. Secondly, not all of students need to be excellen...

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In many countries, governments are spending a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?

It is true that a wide amount of public money is growingly invested in developing the Internet in some nations. There are different reasons identified for this trend and I consider that public funding should be spent on more urgent priorities. The main reason for this trend toward expanding Internet access in various countries is that citizens are able to access resources of information available effectively at any time, meaning that they can have an opportunity to broaden their horizons through reading newspapers online or searching information on the Internet. In addition, the Internet always offers opening access to those people is willing to learn regales of age, location, and background. Another reason is that the Internet helps to enhance the growth of the economy. Online sale becomes more common these days, hence, improving Internet access helps to boost the domestic as well as international trade. In fact, the Internet enables/allows us to save our time and is co...

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

In this sophisticated world, more and more young ones tend towards renowned personalities due to their name and fame. In this day and age, celebrities have become more eminent among adults owing to their lucrative living standards as well as their stunning looks rather than their victories which they gain by determination and hard work. The upcoming will highlight that this certainly not a rational approach that not needs to have opted.

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Today, society tends to watch cinematic pictures without friends. On the one hand, there are a number of benefits of this process, but on the other hand, there are some drawbacks and issues which must be discussed and solved. In this essay, both sides will be explained and supported with examples.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is?

All things considered, it may be hard to come to the clear opinion since the fact that congestion is caused by controversial factors. I believe that using public transport by the citizens more frequently instead of the private one, would have a positive impact on the roads' hecticness. All things considered, it may be hard to come to the clear opinion since the fact that congestion is caused by controversial factors. I believe that using public transport by the citizens more frequently instead of the private one, would have a positive impact on the roads' hecticness. However, if the government make an effort to improve traffic system, then the jams issue will not be so urgent. 2) Summarizing both viewpoints' arguments, alcoholism was a major issue throughout all the times, thus resulting to problems as unemployment, early deaths, serious health diseases and etc. I am a strong advocate of a restricting system opinion since alcohol consuming at the young age m...

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visits such places?

In this contemporary era,the topic of tourism is always debatable that in present epoch there are a lot of visitors are visited areas where conditions are very difficult such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic.This essay will be discussed both the merit and demerit in the upcoming paragraphs.

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