IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 58

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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the birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over. What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? what can be done now to deal with this situation?

The projected decline childbirth and increase in the older population in the advanced countries will have deep socioeconomic consequences. If these forecasts are confirmed, the labour power will shrink, leading to lower economic growth. A smaller working class could lead to labour shortages, productivity and innovation. In addition, there will be increasing pressure on pension and health care systems as a larger part of the population will be relying on health industry.

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Food travels thousands of miles from farms to consumers. some people believe we should buy food from local farmer to protect the environment and support local businesses. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Handful of people opine that food products should be bought from local farmers rather than buying it from big corporates which made food travel thousands of miles before getting into hands of their cosumers. Buying food from local markets is definately advantageous and outweigh the disadvantages.

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Investment in local amenities such as leisure centres is the best way for the government to foster a good comuninty spirit. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

These days, people are talking about activity, some people say the government should devolopment event place. Other people they have different way to thinking they say the government is not responsible for devolopment local amenities. Personally, I believe devolopment local amenities have more positives than negatives, in this essay I will give my reasons.

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THe amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries

the bar chart illustrates how much tea and coffee is imported by four different nations. Overall, the amount of tea and coffee imported by the United States ranked first, while the imports of Canada and the United Kingdom stood at the last in the amount allocated.

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The amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries

What has been depicted in the bar chart is how much tea and coffee is imported by four different nations. Overall, the amount of tea and coffee imported by the United States ranked first, while the imports of Canada and the United Kingdom stood at the last in the amount allocated.

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In some countries, people waste a lot of food which is bought in shops and restaurants. What do you think are the reason? What can be done to solve this problem?

Wasting food became very popular among people nowadays. In many different countries people waste foods that are from restaurants because variety of reasons. In this essay I will discuss what I think are the main reasons for such action.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities other however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required .dissucs both these views and give your opinion

In recent years, it has become prevalent that citizens are more likely to do exercises. Some people believe that enhacing the number of sports facilities is beneficial to motivate people to do sports, while some may argue that more methods should be implemented. I am going to discuss both these views and give my own thought.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A commonly held belief is that some people are born with significant talents like problem solving skills, music, sport, logic et cetera. But, it is often asserts that any child can be taugh to become certain person with talents.

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The diagrams are the existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery.

The given plans illustrate the blueprints at the moment and in the future for the renovation of an art gallery.

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It is commonly said that today's children are facing huge challenges. This essay indent to discuss the causes of these pressures and give some suggestions to solve them.

Nowadays, almost all teenger childrens are facing very big challenges. More clearly discribe is school childrens have many works as a homework, lots of lessons, study a foreign langueges and others. Unfortunately, in most case parents are tend to unscareable. And some teacher give to students too much homeworks. And now, i explain to these causes following paragraph.

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Today, more and more people want things instantly. Why is this ? It is negative or positive development.

In this day and age, human wants to be fulfilled their demands immediately by fortune or good services. From this writer's perspective, this issue is connected to high-tech devices and brings to humankind negative effects.

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Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does the shortage of fresh water cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The problem of depletion of fresh water is raising concerns globally and there are multitude of reasons affecting the availability of water. There are numerous solutions to solve the issue by implemeting some of the strategies which will be examined further in this essay.

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Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or not agree?

While many believe that some people's successful achievement is somewhat happened by luck, others argue that precise plans and continuity of hands on are keys to achieve anything instead. The reason why I agree with the latter statement will be elaborated on in this essay.

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Some people believe that the radio is the best way to get news, while others believe that TV is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a bunch of people thinks that the radio provides better acess for news, on the other hand rest of the majority believes that television fulfills this aim better.This essay agree with second statement. I believe that TV makes information visually described and variety of informations have more diversity than radio.

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Animal are in danger of extinction. Some people say that we should protect only those animals which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree with this?

Some humans are thinking that animals are in danger of world . In the other hand, some people discussed that they have to protect those animals which are served to nation in particular.

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Task: Your local community centre has raised $1500 and is asking for input about how to use the money to help build trust and friendship within the neighbourhood. One choice is to let children decorate a wall or a fence. Another choice is to hold a neighbourhood party. The community centre has asked you to respond to an opinion survey.

In my view, opting for decorating a wall or a fence outweighs choosing a neighbourhood party. The preference is grounded in multifarious factors that I will delineate in the subsequent paragraph.

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Today more and more people want things instantly. why is this? Is it positive or negative development?

Nowadays, people's demand for immediate access to things is rapidly increasing. This phenomenon caused by the development of transmission and transportation technologies. Personally, I believe that this is a negative trend that is going to badly affect humankind.

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International air fares are falling and tourism is growing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity?

ln this modern world average price in global airline defisit from previous years while the thriving of tourism is increasingly. In this essay will discuss about the benefit and the opposite.

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Main reasons for students choosing a particular UK university between 1987 and 2007

The pie charts compares main reasons for particular UK university that students choose in 1987 and 2007

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Today more and more people want things instanlly (eg,… goods, service, news ). Why is this ? It is a positive or negative development?

In the modern era, people are becoming more and more busy, thus there are presence of instant things. The writer believes that this is a negative development due to a lack of perseverance and patience which made people very reliant on these stuffs. It must be understood that there are many advantages of instant things in our life. This is especially so if people are busy with work or study and need to save their time. Therefore, this became increasingly prevalent. For example with a click of a button people can easily access the internet, allowing them to update the latest news or send immediate messages. Another argument worth considering is that the instant result makes people have a convenient tool. Consequently the community will become impatient which impacts their concentration. For instance, according to an article published in news in Viet Nam in 2019, a survey of many students becoming lazy when they could do research easily on the internet. In my opinion, this development ...

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