IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 59

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes, is one of the most widely-used drugs in the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long term health costs are high-for smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity. Do governments have a legitimate role to legislate to protect citizens from the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke, or are such decisions up to the individual?

Many believe that governments should legislate the usage of tobacco for their citizens, while others think that this is a decision to make on your own. However, I strongly believe that, as we are a society, the autority should administrate this issue.

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In some countries young people of 18 can drive a car, vote, get married etc. What do you think is the appropriate age to take on adult responsibilities?

In some countries, young people of 18 can drive a car, vote, get married, and take on other adult reasponsibilities. The appropriate age for most adult responsibilties is often dabated. I believe 18 is an appropriate age for most adult responsibilties, but there are exceptions.

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Computer games are very popular in all age groups and nationalities. Parents think it has little educational value and harmful effects. What is your opinion about this? Give examples based on your own experience.

Nowadays, the technologies are becoming more advance where it also affect the computer games' development. The computer games have entered all age groups and nationalities. However, some people believe that the computer games would bring negative impact in adolescents' education and negative effect for their lives. In my opinion, I agree that computer games could affect children's education and their health. Here are my explanations.

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Some people believe that schools should teach students how to fight and physically defend themselves while others think it causes many problems for the youth. what is your opinion?

while a group of people think is better to children learn how to fight back in schools and keep themselves in every fight another group does not believe that, also they think learning them to battle has a lot of bad effects on them I agree with the second group and I think it can be harmful to them in some ways.

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some people believe that schools should teach students how to fight and physically defend themselves while others think it causes many problems for the youth. what is your opinion?

while a group of people think is better to children learn how fight back in schools and keep themselves in every fight other group is not believed that, also they think learning them to battle have a lot of bad effect on them I agree with the second group and I think it can be harmful for them in some ways.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Nowadays traffic jam and pollution which lead to environmental problems are widely discussed questions. Many ways are proposed to solve these problems. One of them is increasing cost of petrol. This essay will shed light to this issue and some other measurements which may be beneficial relating to this problem.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Nowadays, the technology advancement has direct influence on our lives, some believe that, the science breakthrough must rais people’s life quality. I agree with this statement to some extent, but we should consider that we are not alone on this planet.

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Nowadays, parents are allowing their children to use tablets and smartphones to enhance learning. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times, we are using the technology everywhere in our life. Parents can allow their children to use tablets or smartphones to enhance the learning of their children. This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks. The essay will first demonstrate the disadvantages about the situation, followed by it will explain how the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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school teaching should focus on success on the workforce and lesson attention should be given to academic achievement, to what extent do you agree or disagree ?

it is a controversial isssues as wether the teaching of school be emphasized on childrens's boosting in mechanical training, or wether if should be consentration of chidren academic success.

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the topic of the share of income earned by the top 1 percent from 1975 to 2015.

The provided line chart illustrates the percentage of seven countries who earned income by the top 1 percent based on a world wealth and income database from 1975 to 2015.

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The care for children is probably the most important job in any society. For this reason, all mothers and fathers must take a course that prepares them to become good parents. To that extent do you agree or disagree?

Children care are regarded as the primary duties in many countries. I am strongly convinced that all parents are supposed to learn how to breading their children appropriately.

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Some people think that Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say Olympics is a waste of maney and the money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that many people believe that it costs a huge amount of money to the Olympic games that bring other countries together. Others say money should be spent on agency problems. The writer of this essay strongly agrees with the statement and lays out the reasoning below.

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In the past knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded the internet. Do the advantages and outweigh the disadvantages?

Back in the days, acquaintance is included the internet.That is to say, they are electronic books. As we know.Majority of individuals exploit the phone and internet to learn knowledge. There are weak side and strong side. At present time, majority of adults who are learning foreign languages. As we know, there are many requirements to learn knowledge. Many human's life related to the phone.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, adolescents are pressured to excel academically. Hence, numerous people think that to be succeed in academic category, non-academic subjects should be removed from the school syllabus. I strongly disagree with this opinion, this is because there are many ways to be a successful person, not only academically

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19 .As the world has become technological advance, computer are replacing more and more jobs that maybe lose because of computer. Discuss at least one problem that may result.

Nowadays, information technology development becoming more sophisticated and play important role for our life, especially for business activities while certain roles have more dependecies with technology. Then, this condition could bring a problems for humans since there are several job rolesthat could be replaced by technology. In my opinion, information technology could offer several advantages through to make the business activities more effective and efficient.

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Number of tourists visiting Caribbean island(2010-2017)

Given is a line graph depicting information on a number of individuals who visited to one of Caribbean islands over the period of 7 years. Units have been supplied in millions.

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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea ora waste of time?

Regarding to the statment that some pupils chooses to one year take break before starting university, to ethier travel or gain new eperience related to work. I thing It is a great idea to take a year gap before starting university for two important reasons and I will outline it in this essay.

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Fast food is becoming a part of life everywhere, negatively affecting our lifestyles and diets. Do you agree or disagree.

There has been an ongoing debate on pertaining to whether fast food is having a detrimental effect on our everyday life and our choices of food. The writer of this essay supports this statement as fast food have contributed to many health problems and have also generated many unhealthy ways of living.

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Some people say that large companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is a common belief that sports centers and social buildings for local communities should be established by large companies . I wholeheartedly disagree with this opinion due to two main reasons, that it is the governmental responsibility and the company should use this money to develop related companies.

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Some people believe that true friendships are becoming less common in today's fast-paced world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons and examples to support your opinion.

It is a norm that nowadays a number of individuals claim that the love in fellowship might be lower-rate through time. On the contrary, societies said that the same-age individuals' relationship holds the same compared to previous. However, In my opinion, I tend to agree that the lasting of friend emotions are reduced subsequently to hours.

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