IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 57

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that high wage is an essential than job satisfaction for every employees, while others argue that person cannot work in profession which do not want this job. This essay will be discussed in both point of view.

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In the modern world, more and more emphasis is being placed on the acquisition of practical skills rather than knowledge from text books or other sources. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Besides past years which technical studies were a step ahead, nowadays, in the modern worlds, emphasis on acquisition of practical skills rather than knowledge from textbooks or other sources are increasing. Both view of these ideas will be debate in this assay.

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International communities should act immediately to encourage countries to reduce the consumption of fossil fuels, such as oil and gas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think international communities should act quickly to moderate of consumption of fossil fuels,such as oil and gas.But it is uncomfortable for people.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over past thirty years that may cities in the world are now on big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? How government should encourage people to reduce using their cars.

Number of people who owned car has went up in the last thirty years. I my opinion, this situation has potantial to cause big traffic jam in the world. In this essay, it will be discussed why I support this statement and how should governments encourage people to decrease using cars.

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Many people think that students should be allowed to choose the subject that they study in school, whereas others feel that they should choose the curriculum. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many educational systems, there is a debate over whether students should have the freedom to choose their subjects or if they should follow a fixed curriculum. However, while both perspectives have their merits, I support a balanced approach that incorporates elements of both views.

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Percentage change in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality, 1995-1998

The line graph gives information about the percentage of some crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality between 1995 and 1998.

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Serious violent crimes among people who are under-18 are becoming more common. Some people think that children who commit serious crimes should be treated like adults, while others would say that they should be rehabilitated. Discuss both these view and give your opinion.

In recently years, a lot of violent crimes are committed by adults as well as under- 18 teenagers. Some people believe that teenagers who doer serious crimes should punish like adults. Others think argue that they should be rehabilitated, which will be discussed in this essay.

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The increase in the production of consumer consumption goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this and what can be done to solve this problem?

In the developed world, there is an upsurge of the production in the consumption goods, as a result this engender damage to the environment. In this following essay I will provide why this is happening based on my point of view as well as what should be done to solve this problem and make the better environment.

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some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

r than the time they didn't do any sports.

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Topic: Children’s education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some of or all the costs. Do the advantages out weight its disadvantages?

In today's contemporary era, the fee of kid's education is too high. In many countries, the states have responsibility to pay all or a big part of the fee. This action might have both advantages and disadvantages that in continue, this essay will express some of them.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on technology. What are some of the problems associated with reliance on computers, and what are some of the possible solutions?

It is true that student's dependence on applied science seems to be getting widely distributed. There are several reasons for this, and both schools and parents should work together to enhance the situation.

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in this period of globalization many people are lucky or forced to live in other country and face serious social and practical problems because of the foreign language

in this period of globalization many people are lucky or forced to live in other country and face serious social and practical problems because of the foreign language, some of the problems are socializing with others or simply taking a trip in a taxi or asking for directions , in my opinion i strongly agree with this notion and my opinion will be discussed in further paragraphs with a suitable conclusion.

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Some people think that young people should spend their free time with teir families instead of enjoying outside entertainment. However, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Young people spend most of their lifes in school or studying. Therefore, when they have free time, they can either do activities with their families or go out an enjoy outside entretainment. My personal opinion is that there should be time to enjoy both options.

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Nowadays changes need to be made regarding the school curriculum, in order to prepare children for adult life. Discuss which subjects could be introduced and why and they would be beneficial to young adults. Are there any subjects which you feel are now obsolete and why?

Certainly, updating the school curriculum to better prepare children for adult life is a crucial step in ensuring they have the skills and knowledge necessary for success in the modern world. In this essay I will highlight some subjects that could be introduced or emphasized in the study plans.

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Nowadays more and more people are using cellphones and computers to communicate, so they are losing the ability to communicate with each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

In recent times, the consumption of mobile phones and computers reduce the interaction between people in person. I completely agree with this statement because of hectic schedule and it is convenient source, which people prefer electronic devices for communication.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems, sugar products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

Many local and International consumer goods companies use sugar to flavor their food and drinks, which arises many health issues, sugar included consumer goods should be made at high prices to motivate consumers to consume less sugar. I totally agree with this statement because I believe that people who are addicted to sugar cannot be discouraged due to sugar containing products are more expensive. They will buy it whatever the price mark in the product. and marketing campaigns run by consumer goods companies attract customers while their products are expensive.

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Modern Society and Income. Discuss modern attitude to money and how they have changed over teh year.

Currently we are witnessing how physical money is being replaced by credut and debit cards in the modern culture. I believe that this this is the reason why humas are loosing the awareness of the value of money. We are uncertain of the amount of pocket money that we should be given to our kids. In addition there are disproportionate differences in wages between different profesions, that are not always justified by the amount of responsability.

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All people should go to university, even if they are not going to use that education In their job. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that education in university is necessary for all people even though it couldn't be useful in their career. However, I firmly believe that every person doesn't need to get high education at university unless they use that study in real because learning for their work can be trained from other institutions and people can spend time looking for their aptitude instead of wasting their time in university.

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Eating too much sugar is harmful to health. Some people think it is the government’s responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think it is an individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Unhealthy living style is major problem for today's people. The onus is on government to control carbohydrate consumption among people and I am insynchronization with people believe that pupil should be aware for their health . In upcoming paragraphs I am going to discuss both views.

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In some parts of the world people are becoming more focused on connecting with older people and researching their history. Why do you think people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

It is evident that, these days most people pay attention to spend time with older people and interest in their past. I think that individuals try to benefit from the seniors’ history and apply their experiences to their own life which is positive and useful for my personal view.

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