IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 54

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that schools should spend more money on computers, others say that more money should be spent on teachers' wages. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

There is existed an arguement that academic money should be spent more on computers or the salaries of teachers. I will discuss both perspectives and prove that the teachers' wages spending is outweigh the electronic counterpart.

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Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While many employers believe that social skills are more crucial than academic qualifications, others argue that academic performance should be the main focus in terms of selecting employee instead. The reasons why I agree with the former statement will be elaborated on in this essay.

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Some people believe that after hundred years life will be easier for most of people, while the others are unsure. What is your opinion?

The new technology and modern science has created a great impact on our life. As we all knew in the last century human life changed dramatically. We are enjoying the best service of science. According to many people, there is a better time to live here than before.In my opinion, it is true and we will discuss why it is the best time to live now.

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With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

There is not doubt that these days modren life became more easier to reach and have multiple wayside effect.fast food has the biggest impact on the people in this life time and easier to get in this essy i will explain our behaviour towards food and how can fast food has advantages and disadvantages,outweig can be the centre of the universe biggest problem caused by the evolution of modren life.

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There has been some controversy about the practise of companies in wealthy countries outsourcing labour to countries where wages are lower. What do you think are the disadvantage and advantages of this practise? Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experiance

Many large companies in the developed and rich countries are using unwealthy and poor countries' workers as their labour due to the fact that having to pay less salary. There are different opinions about this topic being ethical or unethical and whether it should be permitted or not. I agree that it is the baby steps which lead a country to their fully development along the other improvements.

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Today more and more people want things instantly (e.g goods, service, news ). Why is this? Is it positive or negative development?

Recently, human prefer the fast-paced lifestyle that their desires can be adapted immediately. This writer holds a belief that this way of living appears because of the development of modern technology, bringing some positive sides to humans' lives.

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the chart below showa the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city cetre from 2003-2012.

The given line graph illustrates the statistics for three types of crime in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.

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Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In the modern era,there have a high amount of people who want to attain necessary things immediately such as goods and news.The writer argues that this is a positive development due to bringing about innovation not only in the community but also in the country and the necessary resources to supply to people.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary era, there is an ongoing debate whether students should enhance their co-operativeness by participating in any competition or win-at-all-cost. This essay will explain both statements with reasons and examples.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think is a positive or negative development?

More countries are getting the same as soon as possible so people can buy everything in everywhere. This ability has some benefits although has a lot of disadvantages, I believe that it`s more negative and I will explain some deal for my opinion of viow.

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In yhe modern world people no longer need to use food or products from animals such as medicine and clothing. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Since ancient times, humans have used numerous products in their daily life made of animal skins and bones. As people evolve and technology gets more advanced, a variety of things are developed in the laboratory, using other modes to manufacture clothes, medicines. However, many companies are still dependent on wild animals for their manufacturing goods. I slightly agree with this statement.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, many people think that children should become competitive or they should be taught to co-operate. All people think that diverse. Moreover, many children are willing to be competitive or together and choose themselves.

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More and more people are leaving countryside to live in cities. Do more advantages or disadvantages of this development for environment

In today's modernized era and as we live in a captilist world, a huge number of individuals are deciding to move to the big cities. consequently, this leads us to pose a question, does the benefits of this phenomenon outweigh the drawbacks? From my perspective, this trend could have a noticeable detrimental impact on the environment which we need to be aware of it.

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News media is more influential nowadays. Some people think it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, news channels are influencing more than before, while some individuals argue that, they creating negative impact on people. In my opinion, I agree that news platforms are becoming more toxic rather than informative.

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The table with the percentage of students in six different departments in 2011.

The given table illustrates data on different aspects of student who took six different big time at an Australian University in 2011.

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In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is worsening. What possibly can cause this problem? What measures can be taken to resolve it?

In numerous nation, the standard of living is falling in large towns, which is making residents life inferior. There are several reason for this but mainly because of pollution, and junk food, to more extend there was few ways to eliminate these problem, government should restricted industrial factories of usage out dated machine and supply chain of junk food should be scarcity.

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nowadays it seems that different that different generations within the family spend less time doing activities together. why is that? is this a positive or negative development.

The day it seems that family members of different ages have less time to do together this essay will discuss the advantages of this trend

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few people have a opinion that teenagers should be required to have their studies until they reach the age of 18 years. I agree as well as disagree with the given statement and would like to mention the reasons below.

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The two floor plans show the renovation of AAA Accountancy's main office. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given floor plans illustrate how AAA Accountancy’s primary office changed after the renovation.

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some people belive that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. otheres, however, argue that the circumstances of an indivudual crime and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when diciding on the bunishment. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The topic of whether each type of crime should be punished equally or individual circumstances should be considered is definitely a controversial one. This essay may examine both views, and I personally believe that punishment should be brought out under discreet consideration.

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