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in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It is argued by many people that having a house is an important part of their life, especially for the people of Indonesia since it will be the higher achievement of their entire life. However, others argue that renting a house is preferable since the price of residents is unaffordable.
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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a positive or negative situation? A

In some places , it is important have a private home rather than renting it. Human wants financial stability in their lifes, so they think if you have your own property, everything will be all right.People who are trying to have their own property, might have lots of problem with health on the way of achieving it. I believe it is negative situation because our health is at first.
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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. why might this be the case? wHAT COULD BE THE DISADVANTAGES OF BEING SELF-EMPLOYED?

Today a lot of people want to work for themeselves instead of working for anybodyelse, companies or organisations because of people like to be free and try for themselfe for making more many but being in this way have some hardness like worke harder and more time and managing a lot of things that it would be much more harder.
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Somepeopleprefertolivewitharoommate.Othersprefer to live alone. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two options do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer

Live merely or with a fridens that depends on economical situtaion and people's notions. I strongly prefer to live alone and this essay going to explain to their advantages and disadvantages.
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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are bet or that they find the most interesting. Discuss both these views and give your own opinio

Majority of people think that students should focus on all school lessons, otherwise some others consider that teenagers are beetr to concentrate on the subject that they are finer with or they figure the most absorbing. I personally agree with latter group however, the reasons for both groups will discussed below.
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Handwriting today is less formal than it was in the past. What are the causes of this change? Is it a positive or negative development?

The two graphs illustrate the developments made from 1995 to till date in the village of Tynemouth
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The flowchart shows how furniture is made. Summarise the information in the flowchart by selecting and reporting the main features

The flowchart depicts the making of furniture in the manufacturer production line.
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Topic: digital communication technology such as email, instant messaging and social media has improved communication and connection between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In this fast-growing word technology is a major asset which helped us in many ways. Communication technology helped us a in improving our communications and helped us to connect with people all over the world. I am completely agree with this statement. In the later coming paragraphs I will explain reasons to justify my opinion.
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Nowadays many people wear western clothes rather than their traditional clothes. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?

In this rapidly developing world people now preffered to wear modern clothes as compared to their regional wearings. Because they tend to match with this new world and this rapidly growing fashion. According to me, it is a positive development as long as you maintain you decency. In this upcoming paragraphs, I will describe some points to justify my opinion.
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Mrs Barret an English speaking woman who live in youtown has advertised for somone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer

This is to inquire regarding the advetisement published recently for searching a helper. I am a full time student at University of British Columbia and would lke too come and help you with certain household activities.
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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the positive and negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

It has been argued by many about positive and negative impacts of playing computer games.I can say that the good thing of playing computer games are, it makes younger generation mind more active,alert and creative, for some games. example, in some countries they make a compitition out of computer games like Tekken,Counter strike and many more of games, and they make a lot of profit when winning.
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The impact that growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people traveling by air is to increase taxes on flights. To what extent do you think this could solve the problem?

there is an ongoing debate, Between people in regard to cutting down the number of travellers through air some believe in the increasing taxes on the flights ,while other disagree with this notion, this essay will disuss the reasons why I disagree with riseing taxes on flights .
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some people prefer to live in a house, while others fel that there are more advantages to living in an appartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

In different countries in the world, it have two formes of local for the people. First forme is the house. The second forme is an appartment. some people prefer to live in a house, while others fel that there are more advantages to living in an appartment.
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Forests are the lungs of the Earth. Destruction of the world's forests amount to death of the world, we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Yes, I do believe that without forests all the living species will go extinct. There are numerous important roles played by forests which include but are not limited to, oxygen, water cycle regulation, biodiversity, carbon sequestration, homeland for indigenous communities and so on. In my essay below you will find how all these factors are crucial in order to maintain balance of the world.
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The best way that a government can reduce the traffic congestion in cities is to provide public transport free of cost to people 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays traffic congestion in city is the highest problem in the world. Modern life represents us more comfortable life and saving time that is couse people try to avoid public transport. Once prefer to use their private car. That is the cause of traffic congestion.
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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

One of the key challenges that an education institute faces nowadays is to decide the evaluation process of students' performance. Some people cite that the clasic and traditional method of formal examination is the only best method for evaluation. Whereas I firmly stand with those who believe that modern and more continuous assessment methods such as assignments, classes, and projects are also fairly effective and satisfactory.
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The world’s air pollution levels are rising year on year. What are the most pressing causes and effects of this disturbing trend?

It is not a sectret, toxic smog in the air is the most challinging issue for the globe. There are many causes and effects. However, fuel burning and construction materials production are leaders in the race, so in the rest of this essay both of them will be discussed.
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Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans.

-Today technology of human has developed by means of machines however the machines was created by people because of that I do not agree with that and I will explain why I disagree?
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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones nowadays has unwanted effects on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, using of computers and mobile phones increased by young people, according to unwanted effects on reading and writing skills. I partly agree with this statement.
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Question: Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Many young children are spending their time practicing sports. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages.
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