IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 56

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The given illustration displays various sources which emitted greenhouse gas in the UK between 1990 and 2010.

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Many people drive personal vehicles to school and work. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of transportation? Discuss both and give your own opinion.

Big amount of people use their own vehicles to go to school and work. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this kind of transportation ?

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It is a natural process that animal species such as dinosaurs become extinct. There is no reason for people to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

The lost of animals variety like dinosaurs is a natural phenomenon. We as a human no chance to stop this incident. While, it is true that extinction can be natural part of evolution, many modern extiction caused by human actions rather than natural processes. This essay agrees that extinction of animal species is a natural process.

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The governments investment in art such as music and theatre is a waste of money, government must invest money on public service instead. Do you agree or disagree?

there is no doubt that these days governments are putting money in art like music and theatre is a waste of resources, the question is that government should spent more money on public services? In this essay I'm going to discuss my view and draw my personal conclusion.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution.

Nowadays, obesity is one of the biggest problems especially in western society. According to some researchers, the percentage of overweight children in western society has reached by almost 20% in the last ten years. This case threatens children’s lives, and it should be solved. This essay will discuss the causes and consequences of this case, and it will also try to find solutions.

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Some people believe that individuals have no power to improve the environment, and only governments and large companies can make a real difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

there is no denying the fact that, some believe that individuals have no power to improve the environment, and only goverment and large companies can make difference, i strongly disagree with this opinion and i will discuss both view.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people argue that the sence of competione in childern should be encouraged, while others believes that chaildren who cooperate are more more useful. In my prespective I believe that chaildren who rised in diffrent envairoment will effect their behavier and the family or the school play a massive part in the child personality, I supose that it will be more powerfl to let the child dissied what is the better and what the satuation debends on.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

yes im agree for people must have schools to teach every childs or every young person to be a good parent in the future because the young person like a empty glass we can teach anything the true and wrong for them. and them will grow with the what lession they have from chilldern, they must have kind of personality becuse its make a good person in the future. the school teach many lessons for everyone and in the school we learn to try to be the best and be good student. the teacher in the school can give a young person many example for to be a good people in their life. the teacher have character kind,smart and deligent for their student because it make the student thinks they can do like that. but childern without school or knowledge they grow with people in low mindset for their life, because every child or young person they learn and reapet what they see as they grow. so if they seeing or living with peolpe have bad attitude and without knowledge they must grow with bad person to...

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Societies would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?

Since the early 2000s, advertisements have become significantly widespread. It is widely believed that advertisements do not have any impactsome of them effect indviduals badly. Moreover, societies contend that strict regulation should be implemented to eliminate its impact. I totally disagree with this opinion, some kinds of adverts are even beneficial for people.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that the main aim of science development is to enhance the human quality of life. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement, which is most valuable to benefit society and the living standards of individuals.

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The cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decade. This has made oversea travel much more accessible. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Over the past decades, oversea travel has become much more accessible due to the decreased cost of flying. In this essay, I want to illustrate why this comes with advantages as well as disadvantages.

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In some countries people who visit art galleries are reducing. What are the reasons for this? How can this problem be solved?

There has been a drastic drop in the abundence of individuals that visit art galleries in a number of countries. Art galleries are a sactonary for artists to voice out their stories in the form of swipe of a brush, molding of a piece and so on. This essay will examine the root of this conflict and how to counter it.

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Many young people leave school with negative attitudes towards learning. What are the causes？How to encourage young people to study？

The most of the individuals ignore school with negative attitude towards learning. There are varied reasons associated with this trend. Those required certain steps to crub it. I will enunciate in upcoming paragarphs.

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Some people believe that planing for the future is a waste of time because they think that focusing on the present is more important. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Planning plays very crucial role in humens life. Few individuals think that thinking about upcoming time is useless ,because they opine that, they should focus on the present time is very crucial. I am partilly agree with this statement. I believe that people should work on there present days for acheveing their future goals. I will discuss my view points in upcoming paragharphs.

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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The given diagram illustrates 2 floorplans, providing information on the changes that are likely to take place at a university sports centre.

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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

in may opinion i realy disaggre when the abortion will be lgal because of why, because a woman who get vregnen is the given from our god best of beleavenes, and besaid theat there is a life is a good, others way the abortion will bring bet habitual specialy for young boy and girl, and the bet thing also can be apiare bicause of that, and also will make any sicknes for they who are doing this.

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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.

There are many countries today leak of the economy and education., whihc is creat poperty among of the society. There is an Idea appeared nowday that develop country has responsible to help poor country, in order to ensure all human has better life and education

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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowdays, young genaration has less interest in reading and wacth news on TV. As we know reading and wacthing New is one of the way to share infromation to our young genaration. They do not have any interest to this becouse of several thing. Interm of, parent, sociaty, and Mobile Phone.

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Some people feel that children should be able to choose the subjects they are interested in while others feel they should study the basic require subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is nogoing debate regrading wether some student should taking subject what is enjoyable to study whereas, some puplis believe that they just studied the basic curriculum . In this essay i will examine both perspective before presenting my own viwepoint>

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In recent year, space exploration has witnessed a significant argument across the globe, with more flights being operated for different purpose such as tourism, exploration, sicence discovery

In recent year, space exploration has witnessed a significant argument across the globe, with more flights being operated for different purpose such as tourism, exploration, sicence discovery. While this tend can contributed to enhacne disruptive technology and also environment benefits, there is a belief that it significantly wasted money. This essay will agree with the notions of encouraging exploration to space.

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